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4B Chapter 4 Writing about my opinion on snacks Introduction Examples Writing Task Introduction Examples Writing Task I am writing an article about my opinion on snacks. I am writing about a good snack and a bad snack. I love cheese sandwiches and chocolate. Are they healthy or unhealthy snacks? Introduction Examples Writing Task Introduction Examples Writing Task I use a chart to organise my ideas. Here is why cheese sandwiches are a good snack. Here is why chocolate is a bad snack. This is my opinion on cheese sandwiches and chocolate Introduction Examples Writing Task Cheese sandwiches are better snacks than chocolate Cheese sandwiches are better snacks than chocolate because they are healthier. Help me finish my article using my notes from the chart. This is the introduction. It tells the readers my opinion. This is the title of the article. Introduction Examples Writing Task Cheese sandwiches are good because they contain dairy products and grain products. The second paragraph is about the good snack. Introduction Examples Writing Task Cheese sandwiches are good because they contain dairy products and grain products. Dairy products such as cheese and milk are good for us. They make our teeth and bones strong. Introduction Examples Writing Task Cheese sandwiches are good because they contain dairy products and grain products. Dairy products such as cheese and milk are good for us. They make our teeth and bones strong. Grain products such as bread and noodles are also good for us because they give us energy to run and jump. Introduction Examples Writing Task Cheese sandwiches are good because they contain dairy products and grain products. Dairy products such as cheese and milk are good for us. They make our teeth and bones strong. Grain products such as bread and noodles are also good for us because they give us energy to run and jump. It is important to eat some dairy products and plenty of grain products every day so cheese sandwiches are very good snacks. Introduction Examples Writing Task Chocolate is sugary food. The third paragraph is about the bad snack. Introduction Examples Writing Task Chocolate is sugary food. chocolate and sweets can give us energy but too much sugary food is bad for our teeth. It makes us fat too. Sugary food such as Introduction Examples Writing Task Chocolate is sugary food. chocolate and sweets can give us energy but too much sugary food is bad for our teeth. It makes us fat too. to eat less sugary food so we need to eat less chocolate and fewer sweets. Sugary food such as It is better Introduction Examples Writing Task Chocolate is sugary food. chocolate and sweets can give us energy but too much sugary food is bad for our teeth. It makes us fat too. It is better to eat less sugary food so we need to eat less chocolate and fewer sweets. Sugary food such as Cheese sandwiches are healthier so they are better snacks than chocolate. We should be careful when we choose our snacks. The last paragraph is the conclusion. Introduction Examples Writing Task Introduction Examples Writing Task You and your classmate’s families are going out together this Sunday. Discuss where you want to go and what to do there. Now it’s your turn to write an article about snacks. Use the charts to organise your ideas and opinions. First think of a good snack and complete the chart below. Think of a good snack. What food group(s) does it contain / belong to? How much should we eat every day? Now it’s your turn to write an article about snacks. Use the charts to organise your ideas and opinions. Think of a bad snack. How much should we eat every day? Then think of a bad snack and complete the chart below. What food group(s) does it contain / belong to? Introduction Examples Writing Task Now it’s your turn to write an article about snacks. Use the charts to organise your ideas and opinions. Finally write your opinion. What is your opinion about the good snack and bad snack? Which is better for us? Why? e.g. Carrots are healthier so they are better snacks than sausages. Carrots are better snacks than sausages because they are healthier. Introduction Examples Writing Task Here are some ideas for healthy and unhealthy snacks. soup salad bananas apples nuts sandwiches vegetables yoghurt cereal cheese Introduction Examples Writing Task French fries fried chicken wings potato chips sausages chocolate ice cream cupcakes cakes sour plums sweets Here are some ideas for healthy and unhealthy snacks. Extra words pizza grape jelly hot dog fruit tart sweets ham and egg sandwich banana chips low-fat yoghurt mushroom soup fried chicken leg fruit cereal dried mango egg salad fruit salad green salad low-fat Back Introduction Examples Writing Task Which food groups are good / bad for us? Here are some ideas. GOOD FOR US BAD FOR US . ● sugary food gives us energy ● sugary food is bad for our teeth ● fried food can make us fat ● salty food is bad for our heart GOOD FOR US BAD FOR US . ● help our bodies grow strong ● too much meat can make us fat JUNK FOOD MEAT AND FISH Introduction Examples Writing Task Which food groups are good / bad for us? Here are some ideas. GOOD FOR US BAD FOR US . ● give us healthy teeth / bones ● too many can make us fat DAIRY PRODUCTS GOOD FOR US . ● have lots of vitamins / minerals ● keep us healthy / protect our bodies from illness FRUIT AND VEGETABLES GOOD FOR US . ● give us energy / vitamin B GRAIN PRODUCTS Introduction Examples Writing Task Write in paragraphs. Each paragraph should have a topic. Paragraph 1: introduction – your opinion Paragraph 2: good snack Paragraph 3: bad snack Paragraph 4: conclusion – your opinion in different words Use linking words to link your ideas, e.g. Dairy products such as cheese and milk are good for us. Vegetables are healthy because they contain vitamins. Apples are healthier so they are better snacks than sausages. Here are some tips for writing an article about your opinion on snacks. Introduction Examples Writing Task Use some of these sentence patterns to give opinions, e.g. It is important / necessary to eat lots of fruit and vegetables. It is a good / bad idea to eat more meat. Eating lots of fruit is recommended / encouraged. Use some of these phrases to offer advice , e.g. We need to eat less / more / fewer … Vegetables are good for us. Cookies are bad for us. Here are some tips for writing an article about your opinion on snacks. Introduction Examples Writing Task Now write an article using your ideas from the charts. Introduction Examples Writing Task Write the title. Tell the readers your opinion. Write about the good snack. Give reasons and examples to support your opinion. Write your suggestion. Introduction Examples Writing Task Write about the bad snack. Give reasons and examples to support your opinion. Use different words to tell the readers your opinion again. Introduction Examples Writing Task Check your writing using the checklist below. Tick ( ) or cross ( ).   Introduction Examples Writing Task 27 Then swap with your partner and check each other’s writing. Correct your mistakes. Introduction Examples Writing Task 28 $$