Unit6 A Day in the Life单元作文讲解与训练 2024-2025学年人教版（2024）七年级英语上册

Unit6 A Day in the Life 如何写介绍日常生活作息的文章 写作维度分析 本单元的主题是“生活中的一天”,要求学生会正确表达时间，并会用一般现在时描述自己或他人一天的生活。与此相关的写作常涉及： ①描述自己一天的生活并表达感受； ②描述他人一天的生活并做出评价。 写作典例指导 (北京市房山区期中改编)假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter发来邮件询问你的日常生活。请用英语写一封不少于80词的电子邮件，告诉他你的日常生活是如何安排的以及你的感受。 审体裁：新媒体语篇(电子邮件) 审主题：介绍日常生活 提示词语：get up,have lessons,go to school clubs,do homework 提示问题：·What's your day like? ● How do you feel every day? 审人称：第一人称 审时态：一般现在时 审要点：日常生活安排、感受 Dear Peter, I'm glad to receive your email._______________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 思路导图： 词句积累 词汇 时间 in the morning在早上after breakfast/lunch/dinner早餐/午餐/晚餐后after school放学后at about 6:00在大约6点on Sunday morning在周日上午 活动 get up起床 go to school去上学 have lessons上课 go to bed上床睡觉go to school clubs去学校俱乐部play football踢足球listen to music听音乐go to the park去公园do one's homework做家庭作业 感受 tired累的 busy忙碌的 happy/glad快乐的 have fun玩得高兴 relaxed放松的 句子 开头句 I am glad to share my daily routine with you.我很高兴与你分享我的日常生活。 Let me introduce my daily routine.我来介绍一下我的日常生活吧。 Here is my day.这是我的一天。 中间句 1.上学前 I usually get up at 7:00 in the morning.我通常早上7点钟起床。 I brush my teeth and eat a good breakfast.我刷牙，然后吃一顿丰盛的早餐。 2.上学中 School starts at eight o'clock in the morning.学校早上8点开始上课。 I have six lessons every day.我每天有六节课。 At noon,I eat some rice,meat,vegetables and fruit for lunch at school.中午，我在学校吃一些米饭、肉、蔬菜和水果作为午餐。 3.放学后 After school,I often go to the football club to practice playing football.放学后，我经常去足球俱乐部练习踢足球。 When I get home,I do my homework first.当我回到家时，我先做家庭作业。 After dinner,I sometimes take a walk with my parents in the park.晚饭后，我有时和父母在公园里散步。 At 9:30,it's time for me to go to bed.九点半，我该上床睡觉了。 结尾句 I am very busy,but I am very happy.我很忙，但我很开心。 谚Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy,wealthy and wise.早睡早起使人健康、富有和聪明。 ·佳作展示 Dear Peter, I'm glad to receive your email.Here is my day. ①I usually get up at seven in the morning.My school starts at 8 o'clock.I have six lessons every day.②After school,I often go to the football club because I enjoy playing football very much.③When I get home,I usually do my homework first.After dinner,I sometimes takea walk with my parents in the park.④At nine thirty,it's time for me to go to bed. ⑤I am very busy every day,but I have a lot of fun. Yours, Li Hua Every Tuesday,I usually get up at 7:40.(教材P64 1b) At 9:30,it's time for me to go to bed.(教材P64 1b) 名师点评 本篇习作介绍了“我”一天的活动，要点齐全，用词准确、条理清晰。 ①使用频度副词usually点明自己通常情况下的起床时间。 ②使用because引导的原因状语从句表明自己经常去足球俱乐部的原因。 ③使用when引导时间状语从句，提升了文章的档次。 ④使用it's time for sb.to do sth.句式，表明了自己的睡觉时间。 ⑤表达了自己的感受，起到了总结全文的作用。 写作迁移训练 李明是向阳中学一名七年级的学生，请根据下图信息，用英语写一篇短文，描述他一天的学校生活。   __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit6 A Day in the Life 如何写介绍日常生活作息的文章 写作维度分析 本单元的主题是“生活中的一天”,要求学生会正确表达时间，并会用一般现在时描述自己或他人一天的生活。与此相关的写作常涉及： ①描述自己一天的生活并表达感受； ②描述他人一天的生活并做出评价。 写作典例指导 (北京市房山区期中改编)假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter发来邮件询问你的日常生活。请用英语写一封不少于80词的电子邮件，告诉他你的日常生活是如何安排的以及你的感受。 审体裁：新媒体语篇(电子邮件) 审主题：介绍日常生活 提示词语：get up,have lessons,go to school clubs,do homework 提示问题：·What's your day like? ● How do you feel every day? 审人称：第一人称 审时态：一般现在时 审要点：日常生活安排、感受 Dear Peter, I'm glad to receive your email._______________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 思路导图： 词句积累 词汇 时间 in the morning在早上after breakfast/lunch/dinner早餐/午餐/晚餐后after school放学后at about 6:00在大约6点on Sunday morning在周日上午 活动 get up起床 go to school去上学 have lessons上课 go to bed上床睡觉go to school clubs去学校俱乐部play football踢足球listen to music听音乐go to the park去公园do one's homework做家庭作业 感受 tired累的 busy忙碌的 happy/glad快乐的 have fun玩得高兴 relaxed放松的 句子 开头句 I am glad to share my daily routine with you.我很高兴与你分享我的日常生活。 Let me introduce my daily routine.我来介绍一下我的日常生活吧。 Here is my day.这是我的一天。 中间句 1.上学前 I usually get up at 7:00 in the morning.我通常早上7点钟起床。 I brush my teeth and eat a good breakfast.我刷牙，然后吃一顿丰盛的早餐。 2.上学中 School starts at eight o'clock in the morning.学校早上8点开始上课。 I have six lessons every day.我每天有六节课。 At noon,I eat some rice,meat,vegetables and fruit for lunch at school.中午，我在学校吃一些米饭、肉、蔬菜和水果作为午餐。 3.放学后 After school,I often go to the football club to practice playing football.放学后，我经常去足球俱乐部练习踢足球。 When I get home,I do my homework first.当我回到家时，我先做家庭作业。 After dinner,I sometimes take a walk with my parents in the park.晚饭后，我有时和父母在公园里散步。 At 9:30,it's time for me to go to bed.九点半，我该上床睡觉了。 结尾句 I am very busy,but I am very happy.我很忙，但我很开心。 谚Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy,wealthy and wise.早睡早起使人健康、富有和聪明。 ·佳作展示 Dear Peter, I'm glad to receive your email.Here is my day. ①I usually get up at seven in the morning.My school starts at 8 o'clock.I have six lessons every day.②After school,I often go to the football club because I enjoy playing football very much.③When I get home,I usually do my homework first.After dinner,I sometimes takea walk with my parents in the park.④At nine thirty,it's time for me to go to bed. ⑤I am very busy every day,but I have a lot of fun. Yours, Li Hua Every Tuesday,I usually get up at 7:40.(教材P64 1b) At 9:30,it's time for me to go to bed.(教材P64 1b) 名师点评 本篇习作介绍了“我”一天的活动，要点齐全，用词准确、条理清晰。 ①使用频度副词usually点明自己通常情况下的起床时间。 ②使用because引导的原因状语从句表明自己经常去足球俱乐部的原因。 ③使用when引导时间状语从句，提升了文章的档次。 ④使用it's time for sb.to do sth.句式，表明了自己的睡觉时间。 ⑤表达了自己的感受，起到了总结全文的作用。 写作迁移训练 李明是向阳中学一名七年级的学生，请根据下图信息，用英语写一篇短文，描述他一天的学校生活。   __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作提示】 1.主题：介绍一天的生活 2.人称：第三人称 3.时态：一般现在时（注意主语为第三人称时动词的变化）。 4.要点：按照图示，先起床，然后上课，接着是课外活动、晚饭和课后服务安排，最后就寝。 5.写作思路：可按照“总—分—总”结构展开，先总述李明一天的生活，然后按照时间顺序具体展开一天的活动安排，最后再总体评价他一天的生活。   【范文赏读】 Li Ming is a student in Grade 7 in Xiangyang Middle School. He has a good school life.  He usually gets up at 7:00 every morning. Classes begin at 8:00 a.m. and end at 4:00 p.m.He has four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. After class, he often does sports like running and jumping in the playground between 4:00 p.m. and 5:00 p.m.He has a good time. From 5:00 p.m. to 6:00 p.m., he often eats dinner at school. During the after-school service time, he can finish his homework or join the club. He can also read books. When he gets home, he usually does what he likes to relax. Then he goes to bed at about 10:00 p.m. His school life is quite relaxing and colourful. （文中加粗部分为亮点词汇或句式）   学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$