Unit4 My Favourite Subject单元作文讲解与训练 2024-2025学年人教版七年级英语上册

Unit4 My Favourite Subject 如何写有关自己和他人最喜欢的科目的文章 写作维度分析 本单元的主题是“最喜欢的科目”,写作时，首先要点明最喜欢的科目是什么,然后从不同的角度阐述喜欢该科目的原因，最后可以陈述自己未来的理想职业。在阐述喜欢某一科目的原因时，可以使用描述性形容词fun、interesting和relaxing等，使对原因的阐述更清晰、具体；文章中也可使用连词and、but和because,使文章衔接更紧密，逻辑更清晰。 写作典例指导 假如你是李红，请根据表格中的信息，发帖向网友介绍自己最喜欢的科目及原因。 Li Hong 13 From Dalian Favourite subject science Reason The subject:relaxing... The teacher:humorous(幽默的)... The class:do experiments(实验)... Future job scientist 审主题：最喜欢的科目及原因 审人称：第一人称和第三人称 审时态：一般现在时 审体裁：应用文(帖子) 审要点：姓名、年龄、家乡、最喜欢的科目、原因、未来的理想职业 要求： 1.须包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.词数不少于80,帖子的格式已给出，不计入总词数； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Li Hong @sciencewhiz 9:15 PM 19 October ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 思路导图： 词句积累 词汇 学科 favourite subject最喜欢的科目 science科学 学科特征 relaxing令人放松的 exciting令人激动的 interesting有趣的fun有趣的 difficult难的 useful有用的 个人感受 excited激动的 relaxed放松的 happy开心的 special特别的 be good at擅长 老师特点 humorous幽默的 excellent优秀的 strict严格的 nice和蔼的；友好的 friendly友好的 tell jokes讲笑话be good with灵巧的；善于应付……的 连词 because因为but但是and和so因此 句子 开头句 My name is Li Hong,13 years old.I'm from Dalian.我叫李红，13岁。我来自大连。 中间句 1.与科目相关 My favourite subject is science.我最喜欢的科目是科学。 I like science best.我最喜欢科学。 The subject I like best is science.我最喜欢的科目是科学。 2.与老师相关 He is good with students.他善于与学生打交道。 He is humorous and often tells jokes in class.他很幽默，经常在课堂上讲笑话。 He is strict but nice.他很严厉，但是很友好。 He is an excellent teacher because he always helps us with...他是一位优秀的老师，因为他总是帮助我们(做)…… He is never angry with students and always explains questions patiently.他从不生学生的气，总是耐心地解释问题。 3.与课程相关 We often do experiments in class to understand the lessons well.我们经常在课堂上做实验以便更好地理解课程。 The class is relaxing/exciting/interesting/useful.这门课很令人放松/令人激动/有趣/有用。It makes me feel happy/excited/relaxed.它使我感到开心/激动/放松。 4.与未来职业相关 I want to be a scientist in the future,so I study very hard.我将来想成为一名科学家，所以我学习很努力。 结尾句 What's your favourite subject and why?你最喜欢的科目是什么?为什么? 佳作展示 Li Hong @sciencewhiz 9:15 PM 19 October My name is Li Hong,13 years old.I'm from Dalian.①My favourite subject is science because the class is relaxing and interesting.②My science teacher,Mr Qu,is good with students.He is humorous and often tells jokes in class.He is strict but nice.We all like him.We often do experiments in class to understand the lessons well.③It makes me happy.④I want to be a scientist in the future,so I study very hard.What's your favourite subject and why? 教材原句 My favourite subject is music because the class is fun and we learn a lot of new songs.(教材P48 1b) ...I'm good with numbers.(教材P48 1b) Music always makes me happy.(教材P48 1b) ...I want to be a scientist in the future.(教材P48 1b) 名师点评 该文章先介绍了作者的个人情况，然后点明了最喜欢的科目并从科目特点、老师及上课内容三个方面阐述了最喜欢该科目的原因，接着表明自己未来的理想职业，最后以问句结尾，拉近了与读者之间的距离。 ①句使用了because引导的原因状语从句，点明了最喜欢的科目及喜欢它的第一个原因。 ②句使用了be good with短语，点明了任课老师的特点。 ③句使用了“make sb.+adj.”结构，点明了科学课给自己带来的感受。 ④句使用了“Sb.+want(s)to be...”句型点明了自己未来的理想职业。 写作迁移训练 （2024大同市期末）校园承载着我们的梦想，刻录着我们的成长，见证着我们的蜕变。校园生活或多彩有趣、或忙碌充实、或刻骨铭心……假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tony想通过邮件了解你的校园生活，请你给他回一封邮件。 提示内容： 1. How is your school life? 2. What subjects do you have? 3. What is your favourite subject? 要求： 1.须包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.词数不少于60(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Dear Tony, I am very happy to hear from you. Let me tell you something about my school life. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【写作提示】 1. 主题：校园生活 2. 人称：第一人称和第三人称 3. 时态：一般现在时，注意主语为第三人称时动词的变化 4. 要点：对校园生活的整体评价、所学科目、最喜欢的科目及原因 5. 写作思路：首先寒暄并引出话题；主体部分介绍校园生活的具体情况；结尾询问对方的校园生活情况并表达期待。 【范文赏读】 Dear Tony, I am very happy to hear from you. Let me tell you something about my school life. I have a very busy but interesting school life.From Monday to Friday, we have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. We learn many subjects, like maths, English, Chinese, history and so on. Of all the subjects, I like history best. I always go to the museums first when I go to some big cities. My history teacher also tells us some funny stories in class. My favourite school day is Monday because I have history that day. I think it is interesting and useful. What about your school life? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua (文中加粗部分为亮点词汇或句式) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit4 My Favourite Subject 如何写有关自己和他人最喜欢的科目的文章 写作维度分析 本单元的主题是“最喜欢的科目”,写作时，首先要点明最喜欢的科目是什么,然后从不同的角度阐述喜欢该科目的原因，最后可以陈述自己未来的理想职业。在阐述喜欢某一科目的原因时，可以使用描述性形容词fun、interesting和relaxing等，使对原因的阐述更清晰、具体；文章中也可使用连词and、but和because,使文章衔接更紧密，逻辑更清晰。 写作典例指导 假如你是李红，请根据表格中的信息，发帖向网友介绍自己最喜欢的科目及原因。 Li Hong 13 From Dalian Favourite subject science Reason The subject:relaxing... The teacher:humorous(幽默的)... The class:do experiments(实验)... Future job scientist 审主题：最喜欢的科目及原因 审人称：第一人称和第三人称 审时态：一般现在时 审体裁：应用文(帖子) 审要点：姓名、年龄、家乡、最喜欢的科目、原因、未来的理想职业 要求： 1.须包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.词数不少于80,帖子的格式已给出，不计入总词数； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Li Hong @sciencewhiz 9:15 PM 19 October ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 思路导图： 词句积累 词汇 学科 favourite subject最喜欢的科目 science科学 学科特征 relaxing令人放松的 exciting令人激动的 interesting有趣的fun有趣的 difficult难的 useful有用的 个人感受 excited激动的 relaxed放松的 happy开心的 special特别的 be good at擅长 老师特点 humorous幽默的 excellent优秀的 strict严格的 nice和蔼的；友好的 friendly友好的 tell jokes讲笑话be good with灵巧的；善于应付……的 连词 because因为but但是and和so因此 句子 开头句 My name is Li Hong,13 years old.I'm from Dalian.我叫李红，13岁。我来自大连。 中间句 1.与科目相关 My favourite subject is science.我最喜欢的科目是科学。 I like science best.我最喜欢科学。 The subject I like best is science.我最喜欢的科目是科学。 2.与老师相关 He is good with students.他善于与学生打交道。 He is humorous and often tells jokes in class.他很幽默，经常在课堂上讲笑话。 He is strict but nice.他很严厉，但是很友好。 He is an excellent teacher because he always helps us with...他是一位优秀的老师，因为他总是帮助我们(做)…… He is never angry with students and always explains questions patiently.他从不生学生的气，总是耐心地解释问题。 3.与课程相关 We often do experiments in class to understand the lessons well.我们经常在课堂上做实验以便更好地理解课程。 The class is relaxing/exciting/interesting/useful.这门课很令人放松/令人激动/有趣/有用。It makes me feel happy/excited/relaxed.它使我感到开心/激动/放松。 4.与未来职业相关 I want to be a scientist in the future,so I study very hard.我将来想成为一名科学家，所以我学习很努力。 结尾句 What's your favourite subject and why?你最喜欢的科目是什么?为什么? 佳作展示 Li Hong @sciencewhiz 9:15 PM 19 October My name is Li Hong,13 years old.I'm from Dalian.①My favourite subject is science because the class is relaxing and interesting.②My science teacher,Mr Qu,is good with students.He is humorous and often tells jokes in class.He is strict but nice.We all like him.We often do experiments in class to understand the lessons well.③It makes me happy.④I want to be a scientist in the future,so I study very hard.What's your favourite subject and why? 教材原句 My favourite subject is music because the class is fun and we learn a lot of new songs.(教材P48 1b) ...I'm good with numbers.(教材P48 1b) Music always makes me happy.(教材P48 1b) ...I want to be a scientist in the future.(教材P48 1b) 名师点评 该文章先介绍了作者的个人情况，然后点明了最喜欢的科目并从科目特点、老师及上课内容三个方面阐述了最喜欢该科目的原因，接着表明自己未来的理想职业，最后以问句结尾，拉近了与读者之间的距离。 ①句使用了because引导的原因状语从句，点明了最喜欢的科目及喜欢它的第一个原因。 ②句使用了be good with短语，点明了任课老师的特点。 ③句使用了“make sb.+adj.”结构，点明了科学课给自己带来的感受。 ④句使用了“Sb.+want(s)to be...”句型点明了自己未来的理想职业。 写作迁移训练 （2024大同市期末）校园承载着我们的梦想，刻录着我们的成长，见证着我们的蜕变。校园生活或多彩有趣、或忙碌充实、或刻骨铭心……假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tony想通过邮件了解你的校园生活，请你给他回一封邮件。 提示内容： 1. How is your school life? 2. What subjects do you have? 3. What is your favourite subject? 要求： 1.须包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.词数不少于60(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Dear Tony, I am very happy to hear from you. Let me tell you something about my school life. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【写作提示】 1. 主题：校园生活 2. 人称：第一人称和第三人称 3. 时态：一般现在时，注意主语为第三人称时动词的变化 4. 要点：对校园生活的整体评价、所学科目、最喜欢的科目及原因 5. 写作思路：首先寒暄并引出话题；主体部分介绍校园生活的具体情况；结尾询问对方的校园生活情况并表达期待。 【范文赏读】 Dear Tony, I am very happy to hear from you. Let me tell you something about my school life. I have a very busy but interesting school life.From Monday to Friday, we have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. We learn many subjects, like maths, English, Chinese, history and so on. Of all the subjects, I like history best. I always go to the museums first when I go to some big cities. My history teacher also tells us some funny stories in class. My favourite school day is Monday because I have history that day. I think it is interesting and useful. What about your school life? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua (文中加粗部分为亮点词汇或句式) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$