Unit 4 Section B (3a－3b) 写作指导（作业课件）-【原创新课堂】2023-2024学年九年级英语上册（人教版 广东专用）

Section B (3a－3b)　写作指导 英语 九年级全册 人教版 原创新课堂 话题剖析 本单元以“谈论过去和现在”为话题，通过对比来描述人或事物从过去到现在所发生的变化。具体到书面表达中，要求同学们能运用本单元的目标语言“used to结构”来描述自己生活中的一些变化。 目标展示 阅读有关文章并能将目标语言、短语及语法运用到写作中，描述自己以往和现在在性格和习惯等方面的变化。写作时要理清写作的逻辑顺序，注意过去与现在的对比。 请根据下列提示，以“Some Changes in My Life”为题写一篇短文，介绍你进入初中后的一些变化。 提示：1.介绍你与同学们相处方面的变化，并说说你是如何改变的； 2．介绍你在学习方面的进步，并说说你是如何取得这些进步的。 要求：1.时态正确、层次分明； 2．80词左右(短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Some Changes in My Life Time flies！It's been two years since I became a junior middle school student. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【思路点拨】 这是一篇描述自己变化的说明文，故写作时要兼顾过去和现在。文章时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称为第一人称。两个内容要点都是学生生活中的主要内容，故笔墨可以均匀铺开。在写作过程中要注意文中的时态转换频繁，故要细心理清，以免混淆。在陈述变化的同时，还要说明是如何取得这些改变的。提纲如下： 【佳作欣赏】 Some Changes in My Life Time flies！It's been two years since I became a junior middle school student.Over the last two years，I have mainly changed in two ways. On the one hand，I get better at dealing with relationships.It used to be hard for me to get on well with my classmates.So I made more effort about this.Now，I try to be more active and friendly，and I've more friends than before.On the other hand，I used to be so worried about my lessons because I kept getting bad grades.However，with the help of my teachers and friends，now I do much better than used to through hard work.In fact，I'm sure I'm good at all my subjects now. People change，and I'm changing for better. 一、回答问题。 I was born with a problem in my leg and mobility (行走能力) was a big challenge for me.Thanks to my teachers and friends，my school life was excellent. My friends and I used to sit together and have lots of fun.Whenever we were free，we played games.I took part in most student activities as long as I could，such as art festivals，English corners and birthday parties.My friends also helped me with my study.When I was absent from class，they took notes for me. My English teacher was a beautiful lady.The moment she entered the class，we would all sit quietly and open the books.She would encourage me by giving me important assignments (功课).She would come down and listen to my English debate (辩论)，which encouraged me to take part in all debate competitions.The same was true of my biology and science teacher.She was very nice and sweet.She would always give me extra instructions on the biology project.I could not go to the lab for experiments，so she would bring the lab down and help me with the biology and science experiments and would give me excellent marks. I was never shouted at or made fun of or scolded (批评) by any of my friends and teachers.I really want to express my love and thanks to all my wonderful teachers and friends.Without them my school life would not have been so excellent and unforgettable. 1．What activities did the writer take part in? The writer took part in art festivals，English corners and birthday parties. 2．What would the writer's friends do when he was absent from class? They would take notes for him (when he was absent from class). 3．How did the English teacher encourage the writer? The English teacher encouraged the writer/him by giving him important assignments. 4．How many teachers are mentioned (被提到) in the passage? Two/2 teachers are mentioned (in the passage). 5．Who did the writer want to give thanks to? The writer wanted to give thanks to his teachers and friends. 二、书面表达。 新学年，九年级二班来了新英语教师，她的课很有特色。王磊和班里其他一些原本不太喜欢英语的同学，现在对英语产生了极大的兴趣，他们的英语水平也明显提高了。假如你是校英语报的小记者，请你根据下面的提示内容，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍王磊及班里其他同学的变化。作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 One possible version： Great changes have taken place in Class Two，Grade Nine since the new English teacher，Miss Yang came.Wang Lei and some of his classmates have changed a lot.They didn't like English，but they show great interest in it now.They used to listen to teachers and take notes in class.But now they discuss with others，raise and solve problems by themselves.That's much more interesting.They used to have lots of homework to do，but now they have less homework.Instead，they have more time to read English magazines and novels.Most of them have also joined the Happy English Club at school.In a word，they practice better than before and they are having fun learning English now. $$