内容正文:
Section B (3a-3b) 写作指导
英语 九年级全册 人教版
原创新课堂
话题剖析 本单元的话题是“有效地获取信息”,与之相关的话题作文有询问信息、请求帮助或给予帮助,最常见的就是问路与指路。写作时,要注意能正确运用所学的短语句型。询问信息要礼貌得体;给予帮助时,语言要简洁明了。
目标展示 阅读有关文章并能将目标语言、短语及语法运用到写作中;能运用地道英语礼貌地询问信息或请求帮助等。
假如你是李明,下个月你要去伦敦旅游,请你根据下面的问题提示给你的英国笔友George写一封80词左右的信件,询问一些相关的信息。
提示:1.What places of interest should I visit?
2.How can I travel around the city?
3.What shall I eat?
4.Where should I stay?
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【思路点拨】
这篇习作要求写一封信询问旅游的相关信息,属应用文范畴。文章人称为第一人称,时态为一般现在时,讲述自己的打算时可用一般将来时。在写作时,注意使用祈使句和宾语从句,使文章语气委婉,表意清楚。提纲如下:
【佳作欣赏】
Dear George,
How is everything going?I'm going to London on vacation next month.I have got some information about the city,but I still have something to ask.Could you please tell me what places of interest I should visit?Do you know the best way to travel around the city?I'd also like to know something about the food,for example,what I should eat and where I can enjoy delicious local food.Besides,I wonder where I should stay during my visit there.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
一、回答问题。
Dear Tony,
I am very glad to hear that you are interested in my hometown Xi'an. It is an old city with a long history. It's a good place to take a holiday.There are many places of interest,for example,the Terracotta Army (兵马俑) and the Dayan Pagoda (大雁塔). When you come,I will show you around.Besides,Xi'an is also a good place to try all kinds of food.You can choose any food you like.
I am really excited that you'll stay at my house when you come to Xi'an this summer holiday. Now I'd like to tell you how to get to my house.I live at No. 68 Xiling Avenue,Xi'an. When you arrive in Xi'an by train,you can take the No. 10 bus and get off at the History Museum. Anyway, you can also take the No. 15 bus to the same museum if you get off a plane or take a taxi to reach my home directly.Call me as soon as you get to our city so that I'll meet you at the museum if you take a bus.
Hope you will have a pleasant journey.
Wang Hong
1.Where will Tony go this summer holiday?
He will go to Xi'an.
2.What are examples of places of interest in Xi'an?
They are the Terracotta Army and the Dayan Pagoda.
3.Where does Wang Hong live?
He lives at No. 68 Xiling Avenue,Xi'an.
4.Which bus can Tony take if he arrives by train?
He can take the No. 10 bus.
5.Where may Wang Hong meet Tony?
At the History Museum.
二、书面表达。
假如你是李军,你打算和父母去北京旅游,红星(Red Star)旅行社将为你们提供全程服务。请你根据以下提示给红星旅行社的主管张先生(Mr. Zhang)写一封电子邮件,咨询一下有关情况。
提示:1.旅游大巴上游客的数量;
2.宾馆是否有带大窗户的三人间;
3.宾馆附近是否有游泳池;
4.饭菜是否可口,种类多样。
要求:1.根据提示内容进行写作,可适当发挥;
2.词数:80左右(电子邮件的开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Mr. Zhang,
As a visitor,I'd like to ask you some questions.
Could you please tell me how many visitors there will be on the bus?Will it be crowded?Then I wonder if we can stay in a room with a big window for three people,because we want to enjoy the scenery through the window.And is there a swimming pool near the hotel where we can swim to keep cool?Finally,could you please tell me if the hotel will serve many kinds of delicious food?
I would like to thank you for telling me.Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Jun
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