Unit 12 Section B (3a－3b) 写作指导（作业课件）-【原创新课堂】2023-2024学年九年级英语下册（人教版 广东专用）

英语 九年级全册 人教版 原创新课堂 Section B (3a－3b)　写作指导 生活中你一定经历过许许多多的事情，这些事情有的让你激动，有的让你开心，有的让你烦恼，也有的让你尴尬。还记得你经历过的最尴尬的时刻吗？请你以“My Most Embarrassing Moment”为题写一篇英语小短文，让大家开心一笑。 要求：80词左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 My Most Embarrassing Moment As time passes，I will forget many things.But I will never forget my most embarrassing moment! ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ You can imagine how embarrassed I was at that time! 【思路点拨】 这是一篇记叙文，要求记录“我”所经历的最尴尬的时刻，所以文章应采用第一人称，时态为一般过去时。写作时应注意选材，即选取最能表达“尴尬”的事，注意细节描述，烘托气氛。可根据具体事件选择合理的描述顺序。在文章的最后可以渗透自己的情感，表达自己的感受。提纲如下： 【佳作欣赏】 My Most Embarrassing Moment As time passes，I will forget many things.But I will never forget my most embarrassing moment! When I was a student in Class Three，one day I got up late，so I ran to school as quickly as possible.When I arrived at school，the final bell was ringing.I had no time to think and rushed into class.The students had strange looks on their faces.At that moment，I realized that I was in the wrong class.When I was ready to leave after saying sorry，a boy said loudly，“Look！She's wearing different shoes！” I looked at my shoes and ran away with the students' laughing. You can imagine how embarrassed I was at that time! 一、回答问题。 Life is full of the unexpected! To follow the airline's (航空的) rules for passengers weighing more than 20 stone，37 stone (about 235 KG) Les Price had to buy two seats for himself. Mr. Price，43，had booked his tickets in advance of (提前) the flight.“When I finally got on the plane，I was surprised to find that one was an aisle (过道) seat and the other was by the window.On the way back from Ireland one seat was in Row 17 and the other in Row 19.” Mr. Price said the incident was one of many everyday difficulties he had faced since he became too overweight.Les Price often sleeps on the ground floor because he cannot manage stairs.When his wife Zeruiah died from cancer in 2009，he turned to comfort eating.He said，“I couldn't be fond of cooking，I would eat takeaways (外卖).” Now Mr. Price is cutting down on his calories.He was the same as everyone else，working，playing rugby (橄榄球)，training，so he wasn't inactive.He'd exercise 70 or 80 hours a week and play rugby on Saturday.And he wants to be out working one day. 1．Why did Les Price have to buy two seats when he took a flight? Because he was overweight/weighed more than 20 stone. 2．What made Les Price surprised when he got on the plane? The fact that his two seats were separate/weren't together made him surprised. 3．Where does Les Price often sleep? He often sleeps on the ground floor. 4．When did Les Price turn to comfort eating? When/After his wife Zeruiah died (from cancer) in 2009. 5．How long does Les Price exercise a week? He exercises 70 or 80 hours a week. 二、书面表达。 2023年初中升学体育考试已经过去，但却给你留下了深刻的印象。你决定向你校英文广播站投稿，分享你的备考经历与收获。 写作提示：1.测试前准备(例如：项目选择，练习过程等等)； 2．测试结果； 3．收获及感受。 参考词汇：the solid ball 实心球　jump rope 跳绳　long jump 跳远 写作要求：1.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2．文章中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 One possible version： Though the physical test entrance examination for senior middle school was over，it left me a deep impression.In this physical examination，I mainly chose the solid ball，jump rope and long jump.Every morning I got up early and used some free time to practice these sports.In P.E. class，I also had a competition with some students.Finally，we got full marks in the examination.Through this examination，I understand that as long as we work hard，there will be harvest.So I will continue to work hard and never give up in my future life and study. $$