Unit 7 Section B(3a－4) 写作指导（作业课件）-【原创新课堂】2023-2024学年八年级英语上册（人教版 广东专用）

Section B(3a－4)　写作指导 英语 八年级上册 人教版 原创新课堂 本单元的话题是“预测未来的生活”，针对该话题，常见的考查角度是要求学生预测未来的科技发展、环境变化、工作和生活方式的改变等。在写此类文章时，多用一般将来时对未来生活做出合理想象；也可运用比较句型，增强与现在的对比效果。 单元话题 【重点短语】 1．live to be _______　　 2．in the future ________ 3．fly up into ______ 4．反复地 _________________ 5．太空站 ____________ 6．参与 ____________ 素材积累 活到 在将来 飞向 over and over again space station play a part 【万能句型】 开头句： 1.In... years，I will... ……年后，我将…… 2．I think my life will be different from now. 我认为我的生活将会不同于现在。 3．If I．..，I will/won't... 如果我……，我将会/不会…… 中间句： 1.There will be... in the near future. 在不久的将来将有…… 2．When I feel...，it will... 当我感到……，它将…… 3．...will be able to... as we can in... years. 在……年之后，……将像我们一样能…… 结尾句： 1.I think my life in... is not a dream. 我认为……年后的生活不是梦。 2．I'm sure I will have a/an... life. 我确信我将会有……的生活。 【正能量金句】 1．Hope is a glorious expectation for the future. 希望是对未来的美好期待。 2．I'm sure I will have an even more wonderful life in the future. 我确信在未来我将会有一个更精彩的生活。 3．The best way to predict the future is to create it. 预测未来最好的办法就是创造未来。 假如你是李华，请你根据表格信息，写一篇约70词的英语短文，介绍自己十年之后的变化。 典例在线 Name Age Job Workplace Things to do Li Hua 24 teacher Beijing have an apartment have a housework robot travel around the world 【审题立意】 该写作任务为“介绍自己十年之后的变化”，属于记叙文。写作时应注意： 1．文章应用第一人称，描述未来的生活时用一般将来时，与现在的生活对比时可用比较句型。 2．可使用本单元所学的“will＋do”表将来的各种句型。 【结构提纲】 【升格作文】 In ten years，I will be 24 years old.I will be a teacher.I will work in Beijing because it's a big and beautiful city.And I really love it.I will have my own apartment.There will be have a robot in my house.③And it will be able to help with all the housework for me.So I will have lots of free time.I will travel around the world because I like traveling very much. I'm sure I will have an even more wonderful life in the future.　　 In ten years, my life will be different from now.① I will be 24 years old. I will be a teacher in Beijing. Beijing is a big and beautiful city, and I really love it.②I will have my own apartment. There will be a robot in my house. ③And it will even be able to help with all the housework for me. So I will have lots of free time. I will travel around the world because I like traveling very much. I'm sure I will have an even more wonderful life in ten years. 【综合点评】 ①处增加一句话“my life will be different from now”，开头开篇点题，总揽全文。 ②处把原文中的两句话合并成一句，这样更有逻辑性。 ③处错误在于“There will be have”，there be不能与have连用，应改为There will be。 在这个日新月异、瞬息万变的年代，我们几乎每天都能见证新事物的诞生。在中国，支付宝、无人超市这些新生事物，虽然存在时间并不长，但已经彻底改变了人们的生活，那么你能想象一百年后我们的生活会变成什么样子吗？请你根据表格内容用英语写一篇短文，畅想一下未来的生活。 要求：1.重点谈谈未来生活的变化及你的感受； 2．文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 3．语句连贯，词数70左右。 实战演练 教育 (Education) 机器人将取代人类教师 交通运输(Transportation) 每个人都将有一艘宇宙飞船飞向他想去的任何地方 人口 (Population) 将有更少人住在地球上 It is really hard to imagine what the life will be like in 100 years. But I'm sure it will be greatly different from now. Students will study at home on computers. There will be robot teachers and they can help with the schoolwork. Also, cities will never be crowded because everyone will have a spaceship. People can go anywhere they want to anytime. So more people like to go to other planets. And there will be fewer people living on the earth. I think the life in 100 years is not a dream. $$