Unit 6 Section B(3a－4) 写作指导（作业课件）-【原创新课堂】2023-2024学年八年级英语上册（人教版 广东专用）

Section B(3a－4)　写作指导 英语 八年级上册 人教版 原创新课堂 本单元的话题是“生活目标”，围绕该话题，用“be going to”结构谈论自己的计划、决心和理想，以及为此所采取的方法和措施。具体到书面表达中，要求同学们谈论一下未来的理想和打算。在写作时注意正确运用时态，叙述要有条理，且主次分明。 【重点短语】 1．be able to ___________________　　　　　　 2.take up _____________ 　　　　　　　 3.keep on __________ 4．身体健康 ___________________ 5.做决定 ___________________ 6.关于 ___________________ 继续 能够做某事 开始做 physical health make resolutions have to do with 【万能句型】 开头句：1.At the beginning of...，it's time for... 在……的开始，是时候…… 2．... am/is going to be a(n)... when... grow(s) up. 当……长大后……打算成为一名…… 中间句：1.First... Then... Finally... 首先……然后……最后…… 2．My first/second/last resolution is about... 我的第一个/第二个/最后一个决心是关于…… 3．It has to do with... 它与……有关。 结尾句：1.I'm sure I can make my resolutions come true if I try my best. 如果我尽最大努力，我相信我能实现我的决心。 2．I promise to keep my resolutions although it's not easy to make them come true. 我承诺我将实现我的决心，尽管很难实现。 【正能量金句】 1．Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者，事竟成。 2．Living without a goal is like sailing without a compass. 没有目标而生活恰如没有罗盘而航行。 新年即将到来，你有什么打算呢？假如你是育才中学的李华同学，你们学校正在进行征文比赛，请你以“My New Year's Resolutions”为题，写一篇约70词的征文参加比赛。 _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ 【审题立意】 本次写作任务要求写一写自己的新年决心，在写作过程中要注意： 1．文章应用第一人称，讲述现在的状况时用一般现在时，讲述将来的打算时用一般将来时。 2．文章可分为三部分，先点明主题，再分述自己的决心及实行方案，最后表明自己的决心。 【升格作文】 My New Year's Resolutions The New Year is coming and it's a time for making resolutions. My first resolution is about my physical health.I'm going to get more exercise.This year，I will take up swimming.My second resolution is about study.I am going to be more hard­working than before because I want to get better grades.My third resolution is about hobbies.I will keep on write and plan to finish a novel.④ I'm sure I can make my resolutions come true if I try my best. My New Year's Resolutions The New Year is coming and it is a time for making resolutions. My first resolution is about my physical health.I'm going to get more exercise.Swimming is a good way to exercise.①This year，I am going to take up swimming. Next，I promise myself that I am going to be more hard­working at school than before because I want to get better grades.② Then, my third resolution has to do with my hobby.③I will keep on writing and plan to finish a novel. I'm sure I can make my resolutions come true if I try my best. 【综合点评】 ①处扩写，使上下文衔接更为自然。 ②③处开头与原文相比变换了句型，且正确地运用了本单元新词promise及短语have to do with。 ④处错误在于keep on write，应改为keep on writing。 梦想是推动我们前进的力量。有了梦想，努力便有了方向。每个人都有梦想，那你的梦想是什么呢？假设你是Amy，请以“My Dream Job”为题写一篇短文，畅想一下你的未来。 要求： 1.短文须包含思维导图中所有信息； 2．文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 3．语句连贯，词数70左右。 My Dream Job Hello，everyone.Every person has his own ideal job.I wish to be an English teacher when I grow up.Firstly，I like English.I want to use it often in my daily life.Secondly，I like working with students and enjoy being asked questions and answering them.Thirdly，I'm good at English. Now what I should do is to study hard and get high marks in English tests，and try to practice speaking English as much as possible. Only in this way can I realize my dream of being an English teacher one day. I believe my dream will come true. 【结构提纲】 eq \x(开篇点题) ―→ eq \x(It's a time for making resolutions.) eq \x(展开叙述) ―→ exercise...，take up swimming　　be more hard­working，get better grades love writing，finish a novel eq \x(表明决心) ―→ eq \x(I'm sure I can...) $$