Unit 2 Section B(3a－4) 写作指导（作业课件）-【原创新课堂】2023-2024学年八年级英语上册（人教版 广东专用）

Section B(3a－4)　写作指导 英语 八年级上册 人教版 原创新课堂 本单元以“谈论做某事的频率”为中心，进而描述学生的学习、生活方式、饮食习惯、课外活动等，要求同学们学会用what对这些活动进行提问，同时学会描述这些活动的频率。具体到书面表达中，要求同学们会恰当地使用频度副词来描述关于自己或他人的生活习惯。 【重点短语】 1．几乎从不 ________________　　　　　　　　　　　 2．一周一次/两次 _____________________ 3．上网 ____________________________ 4．more/less than ________ 5．be good/bad for _________________ 6．such as ________ hardly ever 多/少于 go online/use the Internet 对……有好/坏处 once/twice a week 例如 【万能句型】 开头句：1.It's... for us to develop a habit of... 对于我们来说养成……的习惯是…… 2．As we all know，... is very important to us. 众所周知，……对我们很重要。 中间句：1.I usually... at least... 我通常……至少…… 2．It's a good way to relax by... 通过……是一种放松的好方法。 3．Exercise such as... is fun. 锻炼比如说……是很有趣的。 结尾句：1.So start... before it's too late! 所以开始……，不要等到来不及了！ 2．All in all，... is the most important thing to us. 总的来说，……对我们来说最重要。 3．So it's really good for both our mind and body. 因此它真的有益于我们的身心。 【正能量金句】 1．Health is better than wealth. 健康比财富更重要。 2．Exercise is the source of health and the secret to longevity.运动是健康的源泉，也是长寿的秘诀。 3．It's important to study hard，but we must also learn to relax.努力学习很重要，但我们也必须学会放松。 某英语网站正在开展关于良好生活习惯的征文大赛，请你以“Good Living Habits Make Me________”为题，写一篇英语短文参加此次大赛。 要求：1.补全标题； 2．文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 3．语句连贯，词数70左右。 ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ 【审题立意】 本文是以“Good Living Habits Make Me ________”为题的话题作文。文章时态用现在时或过去时，人称用第一人称。注意正确使用一些表示频率的副词或短语；写作时注意分段叙述，第一段开门见山，介绍主题；第二段展开陈述，介绍自己的饮食、运动、娱乐习惯；第三段描述健康的生活习惯给自己带来的积极影响，同时表达自己的决心。 【升格作文】 Good Living Habits Make Me Healthier Good living habits are important to us.I think good living habits make me healthier. I have a good eating habit.I like drinking milk.I like sports，and I exercise for at least 30 minutes every day.I have eight to ten hours' sleep at night.In my free time，I'd like to do some reading.It makes me feel relax.① I think my living habits are pretty healthy.I look much stronger than before.My good living habits make me healthier and healthier. Good Living Habits Make Me Healthier Good living habits are important to us.I think good living habits make me healthier. I have a healthy eating habit. I like drinking milk and hardly ever eat junk food.Because junk food is bad for health.②I like sports，and I exercise for at least 30 minutes every day.Usually I go to bed early and get up early.③I have eight to ten hours' sleep at night.In my free time，I'd like to do some reading.It makes me feel relaxed. I think my living habits are pretty healthy.I look much stronger than before.I think it is good living habits that make me healthier and healthier.④ 【综合点评】 ①处错误在于feel relax，形容人，应改为feel relaxed。 ②③处扩写运用了本单元的频率副词，让文章更显丰富。 ④处换成强调句型“it is... that...”，强调表达了自己的看法，给出了结论。 当前，为实现“减负不减质、提质更增效”的目标，各地正在积极落实“双减”政策(Double­reduction Policy)，作为中学生的你可以做些什么呢？(比如：锻炼身体、欣赏音乐、了解美食、参加劳动、志愿服务等。)请你以“What I Can Do under the Double­reduction Policy”为题，写一篇约70词的英语短文，谈谈“双减”后你怎样安排课余时间及你的感受。 What I Can Do under the Double­reduction Policy My life changes a lot after the Double­reduction Policy. In the past, I had to do so much homework and take different kinds of after­class activities.But now I have more free time than before. So what can I do under the Double­reduction Policy? In the evening, I can listen to some soft music because it makes me feel relaxed. On weekends, I can play sports with my friends to keep healthy. I also plan to learn to play the guitar. During holidays, I'd like to do some volunteering.Helping others and doing something meaningful can make me happy. All in all, I think the Double­reduction Policy is good for my body and mind. It makes my life colorful. $$