Unit 4 第五课时 Section B(3a～3b)——单元同步作文指导（作业课件）-【四清导航】2023-2024学年九年级英语上册（人教版 河南专用）

英语 九年级上册 人教版 四清导航 第五课时　Section B(3a～3b)——单元同步作文指导 本单元话题为“我们是怎样变化的”，主要围绕人或事物从过去到现在所发生的变化展开描述。写作时首先要理清写作的逻辑顺序，注意过去与现在的对比。在句式的使用上，可用used to do/be…，but now…，在时态上直接用一般过去时描述过去的情况，用一般现在时描写现在的情况，各种句式交替使用，以免文章显得呆板。 1．过去常常是/做 2．时常；有时 3．克服羞怯 4．学着做；开始做 5．担心，担忧 6．公开地；在别人面前 7．通过考试 8．养成健康的生活习惯 9．下定决心做某事 used to be/do from time to time deal with shyness take up worry about in public pass the exam form a healthy living habit make the decision to do sth. 10．为……骄傲；为……感到自豪 11．对某人有很大影响 12．很难相信他过去在学校有困难。 13．他在过去几年里已经变化了很多。 14．她在英语上取得了很大的进步。 be proud of/take pride in have a great influence on sb. It is hard to believe that he used to have difficulties in school. He has changed a lot in the past few years. She has made great progress in English. 科学技术是第一生产力。处于一个飞速发展的时代，我们的生活无时无刻不受到科技的影响。哪个科技的产物对你的生活影响最大？请结合以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇文章。 要点：1.哪个科技产物影响了你的生活； 2．它是如何影响你的生活的； 3．从中你有何感悟。 要求：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3．词数100左右。 ________ has influenced my life ________________________________________________________________________ 佳作示范： The Internet has influenced my life With the development of the computer technology, the Internet has become a necessary part in my life. It's true that the Internet has greatly changed my life. First of all, by surfing the Internet, I can get information I need more easily and learn a lot. Besides, the Internet provides me with a very convenient way of communication, so I can chat with my friends and relatives who stay far away from me. In the past, if I live far from my friends or relatives, we could only write letters to each other, but now the Internet can solve this problem. What's more, I can watch the latest movies and play games on the Internet, which can help me relax. All in all, the Internet makes my life more colorful. I can't live without it. (恩施州中考)为庆祝党的生日，某英文报刊环保专栏近期正在举办英语征文竞赛，其主题是赞美家乡。假设你是李明，请你根据下面的图片及要点提示，写一篇以“My Beautiful Hometown”为题的英语短文投稿。 要点提示：1.过去的家乡：山、河流、垃圾……； 2．现在的家乡：青山、绿水、空气、花鸟……； 3．你的感想。 写作要求：1.文中必须包含所有提示要点，并适当发挥； 2．条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80； 3．文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。 My Beautiful Hometown My Beautiful Hometown My hometown is a beautiful place.It stands 15.beside/by a wide river (在一条很宽的河流旁边) and is rich in fish and rice.16.Science and technology have influenced my hometown (科学技术影响了我的家乡) in recent years. 17．There used to be (过去常有) several barren mountains and a dirty river in my hometown.There was much rubbish and 18.people lived a hard life (人们过着艰苦的生活).It was a poor and backward little town.People 19.seldom enjoyed their life (很少享受他们的生活). But now，there are green mountains，clean water，fresh air and lots of birds and flowers.The streets have been widened.Factories，schools，hospitals，cinemas and theaters have sprung up one after another.20.The life of the people/People's life has greatly improved (人们的生活改善了很多). 21．I am proud of/take pride in my hometown(我为我的家乡感到自豪).The people are working hard so as to make it richer and more beautiful. (郑州市中原区锦江中学九上第一次月考)时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝，跟三年前的自己相比，你会有很多变化，请以“I have changed a lot”为题，并根据要点和要求用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你各方面(学习、生活习惯、爱好……)和最重要的变化，以及变化后你的感受。 要点：1.What did you use to be like? 2．What is the most important change? Why? 3．How do you feel now? 要求：文中不得出现真实的校名和人名，词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I have changed a lot Time goes by.Three years has passed.Of course I have changed a lot. Let me show you my changes. I used to be really short and thin. I used to be shy and quiet. I was always silent in class.Now I have changed a lot. One of my most important changes is that I become more outgoing. What made me change a lot? I remember when I was in Grade Eight, there was an English speech contest in our school. I wanted to take part in it, but I was afraid. Our English teacher, Mr. Wang, encouraged me to take part in it. He guided me a lot, and I practiced a lot. Finally, I won the first prize in the speech contest. I felt very proud and happy. Since then, I have become more outgoing. eq \x(话题概述) eq \x(表达储备) eq \x(典题呈现) 写作指导： eq \x(\a\al(开篇点明,——网络,影响了我)) ―→It's true that the Internet has greatly changed my life. eq \x(如何影响) ―→Get information more easily Provide a very convenient way of communication Watch the latest movies and play games eq \x(表达感受) ―→The Internet makes my life more colorful. I can't live without it. eq \x(必刷真题) eq \x(实战演练) $$