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专题10 书面表达（满分范文，20篇） 1．（23-24九年级上·上海金山·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 滴水穿石，铁杵成针，都向我们展示了坚持的力量。坚持，定会给我们带来收获。请回忆在过去一年里你坚持做的一件事，以“One thing I persisted in doing”为题，简单描述，并谈谈收获和感受。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24九年级上·上海静安·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A person who ________ me before” （以“曾经________过我的人”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 很多人曾经出现在你的成长旅程中，他们或帮助你，或鼓励你，或爱护你，…… 请你描述他（她）是怎样的人，以及发生在你和他（她）之间的故事，并谈谈他（她）对你的影响。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息、否则不予评分） __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（23-24九年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A/An ________ moment in my life”. (以“我生命中的________一刻”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) (注意：1、在答题纸上将题目补充完整。 2、短文中不得出现任何人名，校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（23-24九年级上·上海闵行·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Spend time _____________”（以“花时间去……”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） 如果你把时间花在阅读上，你就会收获知识；如果你把时间花在运动上，你就会收获强健…… 你曾经把时间花在哪里？或者愿意把时间花在哪里？请分享你的经历或计划吧！ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（23-24九年级上·上海崇明·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的信件，标点符号不占格) 假设你是 Frank，你的好朋友 Tim 由于爸爸工作调动，来到了一所新的学校学习。身处陌生的环境，缺少朋友，他感到寂寞，学习成绩也不如从前，为此他感到很苦恼。 请给他写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给予建议。 注意：1. 文章中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（23-24九年级上·上海长宁·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假如你是李华，你的寒假社会实践活动(winter vacation social practice)有以下四项可供选择： 做志愿者工作(do voluntary work) 做调查(make a survey) 游学(take a study tour) 参加社区活动(take part in the community events) 你的美国朋友Thomas向你询问寒假社会实践的活动安排，请选择一项活动，写一封邮件向他介绍你的计划。 注意： 1. 邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（23-24九年级上·上海青浦·期中）Some of the Grade Nine students are too busy to take part in after-school clubs. Some parents also want them to give up their hobbies. Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic. “Is it time to give up everything except study? ”（以“是否要放弃除了学习以外的一切”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） Use the following questions as a reference.  (以下问题仅供参考) 1. What is your opinion on taking part in after-school clubs? 2. Why? (Please give two reasons to support your ideas. ) 3. Give one or two suggestions to solve the problems? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（22-23九年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test”. (以”复习准备期间有没有必要减少体育活动时间”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 期中检测即将来临，同学们都在认真复习准备，有些同学认为复习时间紧张，可以减少一部分体育活动时间，有些同学认为没有必要。请你谈谈你的看法。 注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test”. (以“复习准备期间有没有必要减少体育活动时间”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 期中检测即将来临，同学们都在认真复习准备，有些同学认为复习时间紧张，可以减少一部分体育活动时间，有些同学认为没有必要，请你谈谈你的看法。 注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（22-23九年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “His/Her/Their ________ Warmed My Heart.”(以“他/她/他们的 ________ 温暖了我”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个字的短文，标点符号不占格) 困难时期，志愿者们的帮助；孤独时，朋友的陪伴；沮丧时，师长的鼓励…… 我们总是被很多善意围绕着, 让我们感到温暖。请先补全题目，然后结合自己的经历，谈谈你的感悟。    （注意：短文中不得出现姓名、班级等个人信息，否则不予评分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “At that moment, I felt______”. ( 以“那一刻，我感到......”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 在你的生活中，曾经有过哪一刻让你记忆深刻？那一刻发生了什么？带你给怎样的感受？请结合自己的真实经历，谈谈你的真实感想。 （ 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．（23-24九年级上·上海黄浦·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假设你是中华中学初三学生李华。校学生会将代表全体初三学生在毕业典礼上送一份小礼物给本年级的每位老师，现正在征集礼物创意。请你给学生会主席王明同学写一封邮件，谈谈你的想法。 要点： 1.推荐一份你认为合适的礼物； 2.说明你推荐该礼物的原因。 请注意短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（23-24九年级上·上海杨浦·期中）Write a paragraph in at least 80 words to give your opinion according to the given information. (根据以下内容，写一段不少于80个单词的文字发表你的观点) 第2单元的主阅读Fishing with birds介绍了一种中国的传统技艺——鸬鹚捕鱼。文章结尾写道：In 50 years, perhaps there will be no more cormorant fishermen in the world. 你觉得鸬鹚捕鱼这项传统技艺会消失吗？给出你的观点，提供至少两个理由，并进行适当的论证。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（23-24九年级上·上海普陀·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “Should school breaks be longer?” according to the given situation.（根据所给情境，以“课间休息是否应该被延长？”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 目前大多数学校的课间休息时间为10分钟，可以让学生进行适当放松，为下节课做必要准备，有些学生认为十分钟课间休息过短，建议延长，还有些学生认为10分钟课间休息对他们来说是足够的。你认为课间休息时间是否应该延长？为什么？ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．（23-24九年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “The best ________ I know”. （以“我所知的 / 我所认识的最好的________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。） The following are for reference only. 1. Who / What / Which place is the best you know? 2. Why is he / she / it the best? 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．（23-24九年级上·上海静安·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “I Want to Do Something for My Parents” Use the following points as a reference. What do you want to do for your parents? Why do you want to do it? How are you going to do it? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 17．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write a passage in at least 60 words to explain your choice according to the given situation: Will you choose to ride a bike or take a bus if you live only 2 kilometers away from your school? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 18．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 某英文报纸发起主题为“How to get on well with classmates”的讨论，呼吁大家关注同学之间的和谐关系，友好相处，建设和谐校园。假如你是李华，请你就这一主题发表自己的看法，包括你觉得为什么要与同学友好相处以及如何与同学建立和谐关系的方法，写一篇不少于60词的短文。标点符号不占格。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 19．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Please write a letter of at least 60 words to the school principal according to the given situation. (根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信，标点符号不占格） 美丽的环境，丰富的活动，让我们在学校的生活充满了欢笑与收获。然而，学校里还是不可避免地存在一些不文明现象。作为一名初三年级学生，你深感忧虑，并打算给校长写一封信。 在这封信中，请你列举在学校里见到的一些不文明现象并选择一个谈谈你对此的看法并提出一个（些）可行的建议。 （注意：文中不得出现考生姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） The following expressions are for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考） ·inappropriate behaviors ·What worries me the most is that. . . ·It might be a good idea for. . . to. . . ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 20．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）以“我最喜欢的中国传统技能”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评价。 The following is for reference only.（以下内容仅供参考） 1. What is your favourite Chinese traditional skills?(Paper Cutting; Clay Sculpture泥塑; Shadow Play皮影戏; Lion Dance舞狮) 2. Why do you like it?(introduce it) 3. What will you do to carry on and develop it? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题10 书面表达（满分范文，20篇） 1．（23-24九年级上·上海金山·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 滴水穿石，铁杵成针，都向我们展示了坚持的力量。坚持，定会给我们带来收获。请回忆在过去一年里你坚持做的一件事，以“One thing I persisted in doing”为题，简单描述，并谈谈收获和感受。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： One thing I persisted in doing Over the past year, I persisted in running every morning. Initially, it was challenging to wake up early and push myself to run, especially on cold or rainy days. However, as time went by, I noticed significant improvements in my physical health and mental well-being. I felt more energetic throughout the day and my stress levels decreased. This experience taught me the importance of perseverance and the positive impact it can have on my life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，介绍自己坚持做的事情是什么； 第二步，描述坚持过程中遇到的挑战和收获； 第三步，表达自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①initially 起初 ②significant improvements 显著的改善 ③manage stress 管理压力 ④perseverance 坚持不懈 [高分句型] Initially, it was challenging to wake up early and push myself to run. (动词不定式作主语) 2．（23-24九年级上·上海静安·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A person who ________ me before” （以“曾经________过我的人”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 很多人曾经出现在你的成长旅程中，他们或帮助你，或鼓励你，或爱护你，…… 请你描述他（她）是怎样的人，以及发生在你和他（她）之间的故事，并谈谈他（她）对你的影响。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息、否则不予评分） __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A person who helped me before A person who helped me before is Mr. Johnson. He is my math teacher. He is a kind and thoughtful person. Once, when I failed my math test, he offered to help me after class. With his help, I passed the exam. He taught me that it’s important to persevere in the face of difficulties. His kindness and encouragement have inspired me to work harder. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补全题目，指明需要感谢的人； 第二步，描述这个人是怎样的人； 第三步，讲述发生在你们之间的故事； 第四步，谈谈这个人对你的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①offer to do sth.提出要做某事 ②with his help在他的帮助下 ③inspire sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事 [高分句型] ①Once, when I failed my math test, he offered to help me after class.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②He taught me that it’s important to persevere in the face of difficulties.（that引导的宾语从句；it作形式主语） 3．（23-24九年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A/An ________ moment in my life”. (以“我生命中的________一刻”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) (注意：1、在答题纸上将题目补充完整。 2、短文中不得出现任何人名，校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文                                                                                                                       An important moment in my life    An important moment in my life was when I won first place in the school science fair. I had spent weeks working on my project, and when the judges announced my name, I felt a rush of pride and accomplishment. It showed me that hard work and dedication really do pay off. This moment changed the way I saw myself and gave me the confidence to pursue my interests in science. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍了我生命中最重要的一刻； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”。 ③ 提示：本篇作文为话题作文，写作时需围绕话题进行展开描写，准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语等，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总结我生命中最重要的一刻是什么时刻。 第二步，描述这一刻的发生的事和感想。 第三步，总结生命中最重要的一刻对自己产生的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①spend time doing sth花费时间做某事 ②work on致力于 ③a rush of一阵 ④pay off回报 [高分句型] ①An important moment in my life was when I won first place in the school science fair.（表语从句） ②It showed me that hard work and dedication really do pay off. （宾语从句） 4．（23-24九年级上·上海闵行·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Spend time _____________”（以“花时间去……”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） 如果你把时间花在阅读上，你就会收获知识；如果你把时间花在运动上，你就会收获强健…… 你曾经把时间花在哪里？或者愿意把时间花在哪里？请分享你的经历或计划吧！ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Spend Time on Reading Nowadays, the pace of everyday life is faster than before. Most modern people are anxious living. However, I have entertainments to relax myself. One of them is reading. To my great joy, I was soon able to read books by myself. As soon as I finished my homework, I always chose a book and sat in front of my desk to enjoy it. I’m fond of reading novels, and my favorite is “Harry Potter”. In addition to Harry Potter book, I enjoy reading magazines, newspapers and so on in my free time. Reading not only makes me happy but also gives me plenty of information and knowledge as well. Never do I feel bored or tired when reading. In a word, it’s worthwhile to take time to read. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，引出话题。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“介绍自己喜欢阅读的书”、以及“阅读的好处”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。 第三步，书写结语，总结观点。 [亮点词汇] ①modern现代的 ②relax oneself 放松自己 ③one of………其中之一 ④to one’s great joy令某人非常高兴的是 ⑤be able to do sth能够做某事 ⑥by oneself通过某人自己 ⑦as soon as一……就…… ⑧in front of在……前面 ⑨be fond of doing sth喜欢做某事 ⑩in addition to除……之外 [高分句型] ①As soon as I finished my homework, I always chose a book and sat in front of my desk to enjoy it. (as soon as 引导的时间状语从句) ②Never do I feel bored or tired when reading.  (倒装句) 5．（23-24九年级上·上海崇明·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的信件，标点符号不占格) 假设你是 Frank，你的好朋友 Tim 由于爸爸工作调动，来到了一所新的学校学习。身处陌生的环境，缺少朋友，他感到寂寞，学习成绩也不如从前，为此他感到很苦恼。 请给他写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给予建议。 注意：1. 文章中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Tim, I’m sorry to hear that you are feeling lonely and having trouble with your studies in the new school. I understand how you feel because it can be really challenging to start in a new place. I think it’s important to remember that it takes time to adjust to a new environment. Don’t be too hard on yourself. Try to be more active and make friends with your classmates. You can join some clubs or activities to meet new people who have similar interests. Also, don’t be afraid to talk to your teachers. They can give you some useful advice and support. As for your studies, maybe you need to find a better way to study. You can make a study plan and stick to it. Ask your teachers or classmates for help if you have any questions. I believe that you will gradually adapt to the new school and make progress. Just keep trying and stay positive. Best wishes, Frank 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是一封书信作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点明确，根据情境要求，对朋友在新学校遇到的问题表示理解，并给出了相应的建议，不要遗漏题目要求的内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开头表达对朋友的关心，说明写信的原因。 第二步，具体阐述对朋友处境的看法，认为适应新环境需要时间，不要过于苛责自己。 第三步，给出建议，包括积极主动结交朋友、参加俱乐部或活动、与老师交流、制定学习计划、向他人寻求帮助等。 [亮点词汇] ①be sorry to hear 很遗憾听到 ②adjust to 适应 ③be hard on oneself 对自己苛刻 ④make friends 交朋友 ⑤stick to 坚持 [高分句型] ①I’m sorry to hear that you are feeling lonely and having trouble with your studies in the new school.（宾语从句） ②You can join some clubs or activities to meet new people who have similar interests.（who引导的定语从句） 6．（23-24九年级上·上海长宁·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假如你是李华，你的寒假社会实践活动(winter vacation social practice)有以下四项可供选择： 做志愿者工作(do voluntary work) 做调查(make a survey) 游学(take a study tour) 参加社区活动(take part in the community events) 你的美国朋友Thomas向你询问寒假社会实践的活动安排，请选择一项活动，写一封邮件向他介绍你的计划。 注意： 1. 邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Thomas, Glad to share my social practice plans with you. I want to be a volunteer to help the old people in the nursing home clean. I think we should be helpful to others. I also plan to make a survey about English learning ways because I want to learn more about how students learn English. I plan to take a graduation trip to Shanghai with my classmates. We want to go to the biggest city in China to open our eyes. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”或“一般将来时”； ③提示：考生注意根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先表达很高兴和对方分享寒假社会实践活动计划； 第二步，具体介绍计划内容和原因，例如做志愿者、做有关英语学习方法的调查、旅行等； 第三步，书写结束语，表达期待收到对方的回复。 [亮点词汇] ①plan to do 计划做某事 ②take a graduation trip 毕业旅行 ③open our eyes 开阔我们的眼界 ④look forward to 期待 [高分句型] ①I think we should be helpful to others.（省略that的宾语从句） ②I also plan to make a survey about English learning ways because I want to learn more about how students learn English.（because引导的原因状语从句） 7．（23-24九年级上·上海青浦·期中）Some of the Grade Nine students are too busy to take part in after-school clubs. Some parents also want them to give up their hobbies. Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic. “Is it time to give up everything except study? ”（以“是否要放弃除了学习以外的一切”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） Use the following questions as a reference.  (以下问题仅供参考) 1. What is your opinion on taking part in after-school clubs? 2. Why? (Please give two reasons to support your ideas. ) 3. Give one or two suggestions to solve the problems? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Is it time to give up everything except study?     It is a difficult task for Grade Nine students to balance their study and hobbies. Some people may say that we have already had a lot of homework and we have little time to do what we like. But I think it is very necessary for students to join the after-school clubs.     First, I think joining the after-school clubs can help us learn more knowledge and enter a better university in the future. If we go to a good university, we may get a good job in the future. Second, we can do what we like which makes us relax and study better.     In my opinion, we should learn to solve this problem. For example, maybe we can discuss with our club members when we have problems in study and help each other.     I don’t think it is just a waste of time to take part in after-clubs. Instead, it is good for our study and growth. 【详解】［总体分析］ ① 题材：本题是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：本文用一般现在时； ③ 提示：阐述自己对于初三学生是否要为了学习放弃俱乐部活动的观点，需要遵照所给要求写作，适当补充细节，理由充分合理，三观正确。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，阐述自己对于初三学生是否要为了学习放弃俱乐部活动观的点，为文章确定基调； 第二步，分条列举自己的观点，要注意理由充分合理，价值观正确； 第三步，提出解决方法； 第四步，总结观点，得出结论。 ［亮点词汇］ ① balance 平衡 ② in the future 在未来 ③ for example 比如 ［高分句型］ ① If we go to a good university, we may get a good job in the future. （条件状语从句） ② For example, maybe we can discuss with our club members when we have problems in study and help each other. （时间状语从句） 8．（22-23九年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test”. (以”复习准备期间有没有必要减少体育活动时间”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 期中检测即将来临，同学们都在认真复习准备，有些同学认为复习时间紧张，可以减少一部分体育活动时间，有些同学认为没有必要。请你谈谈你的看法。 注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test? Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test? Different students have different ideas. Some students think that the mid-term test is coming, which can reduce part of the time for sports activities. But I think it is very necessary for students to play sports. We shouldn’t reduce sports time. Playing sports can help us have a strong body and learn more knowledge and enter a better university in the future. So we must exercise more. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文，属于议论文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，要写出自己的意见。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体引出“在准备考试的时候有必要减少运动时间吗”这个话题； 第二步，具体阐述不同人的意见以及自己的意见； 第三步，写出自己持有此意见的原因。 [亮点词汇] ① play sports做运动 ② help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ③ in the future在将来 [高分句型] ① Some students think that the mid-term test is coming, which can reduce part of the time for sports activities.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ② But I think it is very necessary for students to play sports.（省略that的宾语从句，不定式作主语的句子） 9．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test”. (以“复习准备期间有没有必要减少体育活动时间”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 期中检测即将来临，同学们都在认真复习准备，有些同学认为复习时间紧张，可以减少一部分体育活动时间，有些同学认为没有必要，请你谈谈你的看法。 注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test?  Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test? Different students have different ideas.   Some students think that the mid-term test is coming, which can reduce part of the time for sports activities. But I think it is very necessary for students to play sports. We shouldn’t reduce sports time. Playing sports can help us have a strong body and learn more knowledge and enter a better university in the future. So we must exercise more. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，要写出自己的意见。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体引出“在准备考试的时候有必要减少运动时间吗”这个话题； 第二步，具体阐述不同人的意见以及自己的意见； 第三步，写出自己持有此意见的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①play sports做运动 ②help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事 ③in the future在将来 [高分句型] ①Some students think that the mid-term test is coming, which can reduce part of the time for sports activities. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②But I think it is very necessary for students to play sports. (it作形式宾语) 10．（22-23九年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “His/Her/Their ________ Warmed My Heart.”(以“他/她/他们的 ________ 温暖了我”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个字的短文，标点符号不占格) 困难时期，志愿者们的帮助；孤独时，朋友的陪伴；沮丧时，师长的鼓励…… 我们总是被很多善意围绕着, 让我们感到温暖。请先补全题目，然后结合自己的经历，谈谈你的感悟。    （注意：短文中不得出现姓名、班级等个人信息，否则不予评分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Her Actions Warmed My Heart Today, I want to say thanks to my best friend Tina. She is a lovely girl with big eyes. She’s always friendly to everyone. Also, she enjoys reading in her free time. One day, I cried sadly because I found it difficult to learn English well. When Tina saw that, she started to help me with my English after class. With her help, I am good at English now. Thank you, my dear friend. Her actions warmed my heart. 【详解】[总体分析] ①本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括基本信息、具体的事例和对自己的影响，注意不得出现个人真实信息。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍温暖自己的这个人是谁； 第二步，具体介绍这个人的基本信息以及温暖自己的事情； 第三步，书写结语，表达对朋友的感谢，呼应标题。 [亮点词汇] ①say thanks to sb向某人说谢谢 ②be friendly to sb对某人友好 ③help sb with sth帮助某人做某事 [高分句型] ①One day, I cried sadly because I found it difficult to learn English well.(find it +adj+to do结构) ②When Tina saw that, she started to help me with my English after class.(when引导时间状语从句) 11．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “At that moment, I felt______”. ( 以“那一刻，我感到......”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 在你的生活中，曾经有过哪一刻让你记忆深刻？那一刻发生了什么？带你给怎样的感受？请结合自己的真实经历，谈谈你的真实感想。 （ 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 At that moment, I felt moved In my life, there are many important moments, but I was moved by an incident which happened in my daily life. One day, when I was on my way home, it was raining heavily. An old lady with no umbrella was walking across the street slowly. Suddenly, a little girl came up to her and shared her umbrella with the old lady. The lady put a bigger part of the umbrella over the girl which made her leave shoulder and arm wet. Later, the little girl realized it and pushed the umbrella towards the lady. However, the lady pushed back. They kept doing this again and again. Finally, the umbrella was put in the middle of them. As a passer-by walking behind them, I felt pretty moved by their kindness for each other. 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所有要点，不要遗漏。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，介绍生活中存在很多重要的时刻，引入主题； 第二步，介绍我在回家路上看到的感人一幕； 第三步，介绍我对这一幕的感受。 ［亮点词汇］ ① share sth with sb 和某人分享某物 ② in the middle of 在……中间 ③ passer-by 路人 ［高分句型］ ① The lady put a bigger part of the umbrella over the girl which made her left shoulder and arm wet.（定语从句） ② One day, when I was on my way home, it was raining heavily.（when引导的时间状语从句） 12．（23-24九年级上·上海黄浦·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假设你是中华中学初三学生李华。校学生会将代表全体初三学生在毕业典礼上送一份小礼物给本年级的每位老师，现正在征集礼物创意。请你给学生会主席王明同学写一封邮件，谈谈你的想法。 要点： 1.推荐一份你认为合适的礼物； 2.说明你推荐该礼物的原因。 请注意短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Wang Ming, Knowing that you intend to give some presents to all teachers of Junior 3 on behalf of us at the graduation ceremony, I’m writing with utmost pleasure to offer my recommendation to you. What I strongly recommend is the vacuum cup that can keep the water heated. As we all know, teachers need to talk a lot in class, so there is no doubt that drinking hot water is good for their throat. What’s more, if a name or a sentence can be inscribed on the cup to show our sincerity, it will be better. I sincerely hope that you take my recommendation into account. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，根据所给提示完成写作，人称为第一人称。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简要表达自己想要推荐礼物的意图； 第二步，介绍自己想要推荐的礼物并说明推荐原因； 第三步，期望对方采纳自己的建议，表达自己的期待。 [亮点词汇] ① intend to do sth. 打算做某事 ② As we all know 众所周知 ③ there is no doubt 毋庸置疑 [高分句型] ① What I strongly recommend is the vacuum cup that can keep the water heated.（what引导的主语从句） ② What’s more, if a name or a sentence can be inscribed on the cup to show our sincerity, it will be better.（if引导的条件状语从句） 13．（23-24九年级上·上海杨浦·期中）Write a paragraph in at least 80 words to give your opinion according to the given information. (根据以下内容，写一段不少于80个单词的文字发表你的观点) 第2单元的主阅读Fishing with birds介绍了一种中国的传统技艺——鸬鹚捕鱼。文章结尾写道：In 50 years, perhaps there will be no more cormorant fishermen in the world. 你觉得鸬鹚捕鱼这项传统技艺会消失吗？给出你的观点，提供至少两个理由，并进行适当的论证。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Cormorant fishing is a traditional skill in China. I don’t think the traditional skill of cormorant fishing will disappear. Cormorant fishing, a unique historical heritage, requires courage, skills, and close cooperation between man and eagle, which is a symbol of wildness, strength and tradition. The technique of cormorant fishing is common in some rivers and scenic lakes. It is not only a way for fishermen to make money, but also promotes the development of tourism. It also protects, inherits and develops the achievements of intangible cultural heritage, making the characteristics of water towns a beautiful landscape that has been followed for thousands of years. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，点出鸬鹚捕鱼这项传统技艺不应消失的观点； 第二步，具体阐述论点，并加以论证； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①traditional传统的 ②a symbol of……的象征 ③thousands of成千上万的 [高分句型] ①I don’t think the traditional skill of cormorant fishing will disappear.（省略that的宾语从句） ②Cormorant fishing, a unique historical heritage, requires courage, skills, and close cooperation between man and eagle, which is a symbol of wildness, strength and tradition.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） 14．（23-24九年级上·上海普陀·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “Should school breaks be longer?” according to the given situation.（根据所给情境，以“课间休息是否应该被延长？”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 目前大多数学校的课间休息时间为10分钟，可以让学生进行适当放松，为下节课做必要准备，有些学生认为十分钟课间休息过短，建议延长，还有些学生认为10分钟课间休息对他们来说是足够的。你认为课间休息时间是否应该延长？为什么？ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Should school breaks be longer? Some students think 10 minutes seems to be so limited for us middle school students. In my opinion, taking a ten-minute break between classes is enough. During the ten-minute break, we should do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us. My ten-minute break is always pleasing. Sometimes I do some simple exercises. Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. When the next class begins, I feel fresh again. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文； ②时态：时态是“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作角度已给出，考生应注意适当添加细节，表达自己的观点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作目的。给出自己的观点； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“自己观点、课间活动”等角度具体论证。 [亮点词汇] ①be limited for对于某人很少 ②instead of而不是 [高分句型] ①During the ten-minute break, we should do something to get rid of tiredness. （动词不定式表示目的） ②When the next class begins, I feel fresh again.（时间状语从句） 15．（23-24九年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “The best ________ I know”. （以“我所知的 / 我所认识的最好的________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。） The following are for reference only. 1. Who / What / Which place is the best you know? 2. Why is he / she / it the best? 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The best film I know Alice in Wonderland is a film that influences me a lot. The film contains a lot of cartoon characters which always do some interesting movements. I think it is the best film because I have learned much from it. For example, I should be brave like the main character Alice who has to fight with a big monster. Although she is afraid of it, she doesn’t give up. With her great efforts, she wins the war at last. So if you meet difficulties, you must face them bravely, some day you will succeed. That’s why I think it the best. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材: 本文是一篇记叙文； ② 时态: 时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示: 写作话题已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给要点，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍你所知道的最好的事物或人物； 第二步，具体阐述他或她或它是最好的原因。 [亮点词汇] ① influence 影响 ② be afraid of 害怕…… [高分句型] ① Alice in Wonderland is a film that influences me a lot.（定语从句） ② The film contains a lot of cartoon characters which always do some interesting movements.（定语从句） ③ For example, I should be brave like the main character Alice who has to fight with a big monster.（定语从句） ④ So if you meet difficulties, you must face them bravely, some day you will succeed.（if引导的条件状语从句） 16．（23-24九年级上·上海静安·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “I Want to Do Something for My Parents” Use the following points as a reference. What do you want to do for your parents? Why do you want to do it? How are you going to do it? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: My parents work hard every day and they take good care of me. I want to do something for them. I will help do some housework. After a day’s work, they are usually very tired. I will try to clean the house to make it tidy. Usually they cook meals for me, so when I’m free, I will cook a meal for them, especially on weekends. When Mother’s Day and Father’s Day come, I will make a card for them by myself to give thanks to them. Parents bring us up. We should learn to look after them. I want them to feel proud of me. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：题目要求根据提示谈谈想为父母做的事情，并说明为什么，以及如何去做。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。 [写作步聚] 第一步，开篇切入主题； 第二步，根据所给要点，依次想为父母做的事情、原因以及如何去完成； 第三步，最后总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①take good care of 好好照顾 ②try to do 努力做 ③make...for...为……做…… [高分句型] ①After a day’s work, they are usually very tired.（名词所有格） ②When Mother’s Day and Father’s Day come, I will make a card for them by myself to give thanks to them.（when引导的时间状语从句） 17．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write a passage in at least 60 words to explain your choice according to the given situation: Will you choose to ride a bike or take a bus if you live only 2 kilometers away from your school? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 If I live only 2 kilometers away from my school, I will choose to ride a bike. Now let me share my ideas with you. First, it’s a green way to ride a bike to school. Riding to school can save the resources and hardly pollute the air. Second, riding a bike is also a good way to exercise. I’m busy studying and have little time to do sports, so riding to school is a perfect chance to take exercise. Third, riding a bike saves me a lot of time and money than going to school by bus. Sometimes buses are late and often crowded. It usually takes me 10 minutes to get to school by bike. That’s very fast, isn’t it? Finally, it’s fun to ride with my friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. Safety must come first! When I ride a bike to school, I usually obey the traffic rules. I hope more and more students will enjoy going to school by bike. 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该针对情景作出选择，然后给出己的观点；行文时多用第一和三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，介绍自己的选择，从而引出话题； 第二步，阐述自己所作选择的理由； 第三步，表达愿望。 ［亮点词汇］ ① obey the traffic rules  遵守交通规则 ② take exercise 做运动 ［高分句型］ ① First, it’s a green way to ride a bike to school. (it作形式主语) ② Second, riding a bike is also a good way to exercise. (动名词作主语) ③ I hope more and more students will enjoy going to school by bike. (宾语从句) 18．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 某英文报纸发起主题为“How to get on well with classmates”的讨论，呼吁大家关注同学之间的和谐关系，友好相处，建设和谐校园。假如你是李华，请你就这一主题发表自己的看法，包括你觉得为什么要与同学友好相处以及如何与同学建立和谐关系的方法，写一篇不少于60词的短文。标点符号不占格。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 In my opinion, it’s very important for us to get on well with our classmates. It can give us a better studying environment and it can also help us to improve our social skills. First we must be friendly to our classmates, try to help them when they are in trouble. Second, if we have different opinions, we should discuss and try to find out ways instead of quarreling. Third, we can take part in after-school activities together, it can help us understand each other better and improve the relationship. In a word, getting on well with others make us study and live better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你认为同学之间的关系怎么样； 第二步，介绍你怎样才能和别人相处得好； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①try to do sth.尽力做某事 ②be in trouble陷入困境 ③find out找出 ④take part in参加 ⑤get on well with相处得很好 [高分句型] ①In my opinion, it’s very important for us to get on well with our classmates.（这是it is+形容词+for sb.to do sth.句型，对于……来说……是……的。） ②First we must be friendly to our classmates, try to help them when they are in trouble.（when引导的时间状语从句） ③Second, if we have different opinions, we should discuss and try to find out ways instead of quarreling.（if引导的条件状语从句） ④In a word, getting on well with others make us study and live better.（getting on well with others 是动名词作主语，注意后面的谓语动词应该用单数） 19．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Please write a letter of at least 60 words to the school principal according to the given situation. (根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信，标点符号不占格） 美丽的环境，丰富的活动，让我们在学校的生活充满了欢笑与收获。然而，学校里还是不可避免地存在一些不文明现象。作为一名初三年级学生，你深感忧虑，并打算给校长写一封信。 在这封信中，请你列举在学校里见到的一些不文明现象并选择一个谈谈你对此的看法并提出一个（些）可行的建议。 （注意：文中不得出现考生姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） The following expressions are for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考） ·inappropriate behaviors ·What worries me the most is that. . . ·It might be a good idea for. . . to. . . ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear president,     I am writing this letter to you very carefully. We all know that the beautiful environment and rich activities make our school life full of laughter and harvest. However, there are still some inappropriate behaviors in schools.     For example, some students throw away rubbish everywhere. And some people destroy public property. I think we should take some measures to stop them from doing these. We can put some signs to tell the students to take care of flowers and trees. At the same time, we can also hold some speeches to let the students know the importance of protecting the environment.     I think the school environment will become more and more beautiful under everyone’s effort. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，陈述校园中的一些不文明现象； 第二步，针对这些问题提出合理的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①full of充满 ②for example例如 ③stop sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事 [高分句型] ①We all know that the beautiful environment and rich activities make our school life full of laughter and harvest.（that引导宾语从句） ②However, there are still some inappropriate behaviors in schools.（there be句型） 20．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）以“我最喜欢的中国传统技能”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评价。 The following is for reference only.（以下内容仅供参考） 1. What is your favourite Chinese traditional skills?(Paper Cutting; Clay Sculpture泥塑; Shadow Play皮影戏; Lion Dance舞狮) 2. Why do you like it?(introduce it) 3. What will you do to carry on and develop it? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favourite Chinese traditional skill is lion dance. Lion dance is a traditional performance. It is a form of performance that combines Kung Fu, dance and music. Lion Dance is to celebrate a festive day or moment. I like it because I think the lion dance can bring me happiness and drive away bad luck. But this traditional performance is less and less now. I think I should protect the traditional skill. I will learn more about it through books and TV. And I will spread it all over the world to let people know about Chinese culture. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你最喜欢的中国传统技能； 第二步，介绍你喜欢的原因； 第三步，最后介绍你将如何继承和发展它。 [亮点词汇] ①combine...and...把……联合起来 ②drive away驱走 ③all over the world全世界 [高分句型] ①It is a form of performance that combines Kung Fu, dance and music.（that引导的定语从句） ②I like it because I think the lion dance can bring me happiness and drive away bad luck.（because引导的原因状语从句） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$