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专题10 书面表达（满分范文，20篇） 1．（23-24八年级上·上海松江·期中）Write a composition in at least 60 words according to the situation given.（根据所给情景写一篇短文，字数不少于60词。） Situation: Suppose your class are having a discussion about what kind of pen friend you would like to have. Please write about your opinions and give reasons.（假设你们班里正在进行一项讨论，主题是关于希望拥有怎样的笔友，请谈谈你的想法和理由。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24八年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A helping hand I gave”（以“我伸出的一次援助之手”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格） 帮助别人自己也会快乐，即使一件微不足道的小事也会令自己感到快乐。你在生活中一定也有向需要帮助的人伸出援助之手的经历。请你选取其中一件，谈一谈你是如何提供帮助的及你的感受。 （注意：短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（23-24八年级上·上海杨浦·期中）According to the subject, write an e-mail to your teacher to explain a problem or trouble you have (60-100 words)，请根据邮件的主题(subject)， 写一篇60-100个词的邮件给你的老师Kim Hart，标点符号不占格。 From: Mary Lee To: Professor Kim Hart Subject: Absence from school for two weeks Dear Kim Hart, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Regards, Mary 4．（23-24八年级上·上海闵行·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A challenge in my life” （请以“我生活中的一次挑战“为题，写一篇不少于60个字的短文，标点符号不占格。） 生活中充满了各种各样的挑战，请结合你自己的生活实际和经历，谈谈在你的生活中所经历的一次挑战，以及这次挑战带给你的成长。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（23-24八年级上·上海松江·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “One of my great moments”. （请以“我的精彩一刻”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Use the following points as reference. （以下问题仅供参考） ●When was your great moment? ●How did you make it? ●What can you get from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（23-24八年级上·上海静安·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “When I have trouble with my best friend” 【以“我与好朋友闹矛盾后”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格】 提示：生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何处理此类问题呢？请就此话题谈谈你的做法以及这样做的理由，可结合自身经历进行阐述。 (注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（23-24八年级上·上海宝山·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格） 假设你是Anna，给你的笔友Mandy写一封信，告诉她：你一次不同寻常的经历或最近的困惑。 （注意：1. 信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。         2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。） Use the following points as reference. (以下问题仅供参考） 1. What happened? 2. Why did you think it was unusual/trouble? 3. How did you feel that day? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（23-24八年级上·上海嘉定·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about one of your family members’, your friends’ or your teachers’ daily life on the topic “A day in the life of _______” ( 根据下列问题的提示，以“______ 生活中的一天”为题，写一篇关于某人的日常生活的作文，如：你的一个家庭成员或是你的一个朋友等。要求意思明确，内容连贯，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)    注意：文中不得出现真实人名或校名等信息 Suggested questions: What does he or she do in his or her daily life? What do you think of him or her according to（根据）his or her daily life? What can you learn from him or her?/Do you have any suggestions for him or her? A day in the life of _________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（23-24八年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Everyone has some challenges in his life. How can you deal with challenges when you face them? Think about one of the challenges you have faced and write at least 60 words about the topic “facing challenges”.（每个人的生活中会遇到各种挑战，想一想当你面对挑战时，你是如何应对的。联系一次你的相关经历，以“面对挑战”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文。以下问题可供参考。） 1. What was your challenge? 2. How did you feel when you faced the challenge? 3. How did you deal with the challenge? 4. What did you learn from the experience? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（23-24八年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My daily life” (以“我的日常生活”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) Suggested questions: What do you do in your daily life? What do you think of your daily life? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．（23-24八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “An/A __________ (unusual, interesting, special...) experience in my life” (以《一次……的经历》为题写一篇不少于60词的短文。要求内容贴切，意思连贯，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)    Use the following points as a reference.（以下问题仅供参考） 1.    When and where did it happen? 2.    What happened? 3.    How did you feel about it? 4.    Why did you think so? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．（23-24八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据所给情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文） 我校正在征集模范学生，下图是其中的四条标准，你最认同哪一条？为什么？请结合自身经历或见闻说明 注意：1. 文中不得出现个人信息，否则不予评分 2. 照抄语篇不得分 3. 请选择一条填在横线上 Be _______________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（23-24八年级上·上海青浦·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “My proudest moment” (以“我最自豪的瞬间”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（23-24八年级上·上海静安·期中）Write a short passage of at least 60 words about the topic “An interesting story in my family” (请以“一件家庭趣事”为题写不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．（23-24八年级上·上海徐汇·期中）请以“That Day, I solved a Trouble”（《那天，我解决了一个麻烦》）为题，写一篇不少于 60 词的短文，标点符号不计入词数。 The following questions are for your reference: *What trouble did you meet with? * How did you solve the trouble? *What did you learn from this experience? 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．（22-23八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A busy Day at School”.（以”学校里忙碌的一天”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 Use the following points as a guide.（短文须包含下列要点） 1. What do you do at school every day? 2. Why do you think it is a busy day? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 17．（22-23八年级上·上海杨浦·期中）Based on your own experience, write at least 80 words on the given situation “This time I was brave”. 以“这次我很勇敢”为题，根据自身的经历写一篇不少于80词的短文，标点符号不占格。 (注意： 1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、学校等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 18．（22-23八年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about “An unforgettable experience”(以“一次难忘的经历”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文). Suggested points: 1. When and where did the story happen? 2. What happened and how did you deal with it? 3. What have you learned from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 19．（22-23八年级上·上海普陀·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “The hero in my heart” (以“我心中的英雄”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 提示：每个人在成长的过程中总会遇见一些对你产生深远影响的人，他/她是“你心中的英雄”。请你用一件具体事例来讲述你心中的英雄激励你的故事。 （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 20．（22-23八年级上·上海黄浦·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My weekends” for your school Official Account.（自“双减”政策实施以来，学生的课余生活发生了很大的变化。请以“我的周末”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，参与学校的公众号征文活动） （注意：短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题10 书面表达（满分范文，20篇） 1．（23-24八年级上·上海松江·期中）Write a composition in at least 60 words according to the situation given.（根据所给情景写一篇短文，字数不少于60词。） Situation: Suppose your class are having a discussion about what kind of pen friend you would like to have. Please write about your opinions and give reasons.（假设你们班里正在进行一项讨论，主题是关于希望拥有怎样的笔友，请谈谈你的想法和理由。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： All kinds of friends play an important role in our life. I am willing to have such a pen friend who shares the same interests with me and has a kind personality so that we can encourage each other when facing difficulties. Although we can’t meet frequently, we still can exchange our ideas happily if we have the same interests and can talk about something we both like, which makes our friendship stronger. A friend in need is a friend indeed. There is no doubt that when I am in trouble, my pen friend’s comfort and advice will help me cheer up again. I wish I will have such a pen friend in the near future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：围绕主题进行发挥，适当拓展，注意语言流畅，逻辑清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，讲述朋友的重要性； 第二步，讲述自己想要拥有的笔友是怎么样的； 第三步，表达希望能拥有这样的笔友。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important role in在……中起重要作用 ②be willing to do sth.愿意做某事 ③cheer up振作起来 [高分句型] ①I am willing to have such a pen friend who shares the same interests with me and has a kind personality so that we can encourage each other when facing difficulties.（who引导的限制性定语从句；so that引导的目的状语从句） ②Although we can’t meet frequently, we still can exchange our ideas happily if we have the same interests and can talk about something we both like, which makes our friendship stronger.（although引导的让步状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句；which引导的非限制性定语从句） ③There is no doubt that when I am in trouble, my pen friend’s comfort and advice will help me cheer up again.（that引导的同位语从句；when引导的时间状语从句） 2．（23-24八年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A helping hand I gave”（以“我伸出的一次援助之手”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格） 帮助别人自己也会快乐，即使一件微不足道的小事也会令自己感到快乐。你在生活中一定也有向需要帮助的人伸出援助之手的经历。请你选取其中一件，谈一谈你是如何提供帮助的及你的感受。 （注意：短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A helping hand I gave Helping others brings me happiness and makes my life meaningful. I grow up a lot by helping others. I am good at English and can always get good grades in English exams. Then one day, my best friend Tina asked me to help her with her English. So I shared some useful ways to learn English. Each time she has trouble with her homework, I’ll try my best to explain as clearly as possible. I’m glad that Tina has made great progress in English. I feel a strong feeling of satisfaction when helping others. It makes me realize that the more you give, the happier you will be. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏相关要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，帮助别人能够带给我快乐，让我的生活更有意义； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，详细说明如何提供帮助； 第三步，书写结语，帮助别人能够给我带来满足感。 [亮点词汇] ①get good grades in English exams 英语考试取得好成绩 ②try one’s best to do 尽最大努力去…… [高分句型] It makes me realize that the more you give, the happier you will be.(宾语从句) 3．（23-24八年级上·上海杨浦·期中）According to the subject, write an e-mail to your teacher to explain a problem or trouble you have (60-100 words)，请根据邮件的主题(subject)， 写一篇60-100个词的邮件给你的老师Kim Hart，标点符号不占格。 From: Mary Lee To: Professor Kim Hart Subject: Absence from school for two weeks Dear Kim Hart, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Regards, Mary 【答案】范文： From: Mary Lee To: Professor Kim Hart Subject: Absence from school for two weeks Dear Kim Hart, I’m sorry to tell you that I will be absent from school for two weeks. My parents are out of town on business now. They won’t be back for a while. My grandmother is ill in hospital and needs someone to look after her. So I have to take two weeks off to look after my grandma. I will take the initiative to learn in the hospital. If I have a problem I don’t understand, I will ask you or my classmates for help in time. I ask for your approval. Regards, Mary 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是邮件； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我很遗憾地告诉您，我将缺课两周。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——向老师解释遇到的问题要阐述清楚。 第三步：书写结语。陈述“我请求您的批准。”的想法。 [亮点词汇] ①on business出差 ②look after照顾 ③be absent from缺席 [高分句型] ①If I have a problem I don’t understand, I will ask you or my classmates for help in time. (If引导的条件状语从句） ②I’m sorry to tell you that I will absent from school for two weeks. (宾语从句) 4．（23-24八年级上·上海闵行·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A challenge in my life” （请以“我生活中的一次挑战“为题，写一篇不少于60个字的短文，标点符号不占格。） 生活中充满了各种各样的挑战，请结合你自己的生活实际和经历，谈谈在你的生活中所经历的一次挑战，以及这次挑战带给你的成长。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A challenge in my life In my life, one of the most significant challenges I faced was when I decided to move to a new city for further studies. As an introvert, I found it difficult to adjust to the new environment and make new friends. However, I knew that I had to overcome this challenge if I wanted to succeed in my studies and personal life. I started by joining some clubs and taking part in social events, which helped me meet new people and make friends. I also forced myself to step out of my comfort zone and try new things. Although the process was filled with difficulties, I overcame this challenge. This experience taught me how to adapt to new environments, communicate and interact with others, and conquer fear and self-doubt. 【详解】[总体分析]       ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；       ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；       ③提示：以“我生活中的一次挑战”为题，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。       [写作步骤]       第一步，具体介绍自己生活中所经历的一次挑战；       第二步，书写自己的收获。     [亮点词汇]     ①make friends交朋友 ②succeed in成功 ③take part in参加 ④fill with充满 ⑤adapt to适应 [高分句型]       ①In my life, one of the most significant challenges I faced was when I decided to move to a new city for further studies.(表语从句)    ②However, I knew that I had to overcome this challenge if I wanted to succeed in my studies and personal life.(宾语从句；条件状语从句) ③I started by joining some clubs and taking part in social events, which helped me meet new people and make friends.(非限制性定语从句) 5．（23-24八年级上·上海松江·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “One of my great moments”. （请以“我的精彩一刻”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Use the following points as reference. （以下问题仅供参考） ●When was your great moment? ●How did you make it? ●What can you get from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 One of my great moments When I was in seventh grade, I once participated in the 1000 meter race at the school sports meet. When I ran to 500 meters, I was so tired that I didn’t want to continue running. At this moment, I saw my classmates and teachers cheering me on. I kept on running again. I chased the athletes in front little by little. Finally, I achieved a good score of second place. Through this incident, I understand that no matter what we do, as long as we persist, we can definitely achieve success. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍“精彩一刻”是何时； 第二步，具体阐述如何成功实现的“精彩一刻”； 第三步，此次经历的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①participate in参加 ②cheer sb. on为某人加油 ③keep on doing继续做某事 [高分句型] ①When I ran to 500 meters, I was so tired that I didn’t want to continue running.（when引导时间状语从句） ②I understand that no matter what we do, as long as we persist, we can definitely achieve success.（that引导宾语从句） 6．（23-24八年级上·上海静安·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “When I have trouble with my best friend” 【以“我与好朋友闹矛盾后”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格】 提示：生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何处理此类问题呢？请就此话题谈谈你的做法以及这样做的理由，可结合自身经历进行阐述。 (注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Friends in life also have some minor conflicts for various reasons. So it’s normal for good friends to quarrel. How do you deal with problems like this when you’re having trouble with your friends? I quarreled with my good friend last week. We had a cold war at first. After several days. We had a long talk and we both recognized our mistakes and apologized to each other. Now I can share with you how to deal with these problems. First, you should have a good talk and find out why you quarreled with each other. Second, Find out what’s wrong with you and say sorry to her or him. Third, try to do something meaningful for your best friend. I think you will be good friends again. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，要写出自己的意见。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体引出“生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述你与朋友间产生的矛盾； 第三步，谈谈你的做法。 [亮点词汇] ①have trouble with有困难、有矛盾 ②quarrel with sb与某人争吵 ③apologized to sb向某人道歉 [高分句型] ①How do you deal with problems like this when you’re having trouble with your friends? (when引导的时间状语从句) ②I think you will be good friends again. (宾语从句) 7．（23-24八年级上·上海宝山·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格） 假设你是Anna，给你的笔友Mandy写一封信，告诉她：你一次不同寻常的经历或最近的困惑。 （注意：1. 信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。         2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。） Use the following points as reference. (以下问题仅供参考） 1. What happened? 2. Why did you think it was unusual/trouble? 3. How did you feel that day? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Mandy,     How are you doing? On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down on the school playground and hurt my leg. I had to stay in hospital for a month. I felt upset and was worried about my study. Luckily, my classmate Li Hua came to see me in hospital as soon as she heard I was injured. She decided to help me with my study. From then on, she came to teach me every weekend. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind other classmates with Li Hua’s help. I thanked her a lot. Now I know that true friends will always be friends. When friends are in trouble, we should help them. Yours, Anna 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是书信； ②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“一个下雨天，我在学校操场上突然摔倒，伤了腿”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——发生的事、为什么这件事不同寻常、感受等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“当朋友有困难时，我们应该帮助他们。”的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①fell down摔倒 ②as soon as一……就…… ③fall behind落后 [高分句型] ①Luckily, my classmate Li Hua came to see me in hospital as soon as she heard I was injured. (as soon as引导的时间状语从句） ②When friends are in trouble, we should help them. (When引导的时间状语从句) 8．（23-24八年级上·上海嘉定·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about one of your family members’, your friends’ or your teachers’ daily life on the topic “A day in the life of _______” ( 根据下列问题的提示，以“______ 生活中的一天”为题，写一篇关于某人的日常生活的作文，如：你的一个家庭成员或是你的一个朋友等。要求意思明确，内容连贯，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)    注意：文中不得出现真实人名或校名等信息 Suggested questions: What does he or she do in his or her daily life? What do you think of him or her according to（根据）his or her daily life? What can you learn from him or her?/Do you have any suggestions for him or her? A day in the life of _________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A day in the life of my good friend Mary is my good friend. She usually gets up at 6 o’clock. At 6:30 she eats breakfast. Then she goes to school by bus at 7:00 a.m. She has classes from 8:00 a.m. to 3:00 p.m. In the afternoon, she plays basketball with her friends at 3:30. She goes home at 4:30. And she does her homework at 5:15 p.m. At 6: 30, she eats dinner with her family. She usually goes to bed at 9:30 p.m. I think she is a hardworking and active girl. I realized that I should make full use of my time. I think she should do more after-school activities. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：先补充完整题目，再根据所给的问题提示介绍某人生活的一天，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出要介绍的人物，按照时间的先后顺序介绍他/她一天的生活安排； 第二步，对他/她的生活做出评价，并谈谈自己从中学到了什么，有什么建议； [亮点词汇] ①from...to...从……到…… ②play basketball打篮球 ③do her homework做作业 [高分句型] I realized that I should make full use of my time.（宾语从句） 9．（23-24八年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Everyone has some challenges in his life. How can you deal with challenges when you face them? Think about one of the challenges you have faced and write at least 60 words about the topic “facing challenges”.（每个人的生活中会遇到各种挑战，想一想当你面对挑战时，你是如何应对的。联系一次你的相关经历，以“面对挑战”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文。以下问题可供参考。） 1. What was your challenge? 2. How did you feel when you faced the challenge? 3. How did you deal with the challenge? 4. What did you learn from the experience? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例： Facing challenges Life is filled with challenges. In my study, I always meet with new challenges. When I was in grade eight, I used to fail my final math exams. This was a serious problem because math is a very important subject. However, I did not quit. I listened to the teacher carefully in class. I also did as many exercises as I could. Besides, I turned to my teacher and classmates for help. In the end, after several months’ hard work, I passed the final exam. Looking back on this, I realize that whatever challenges I am faced with, if I can spare no efforts and never give up, I will get them over. What’s more, those challenges make me who I am. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点以问题的方式给出，考生应注意不要遗漏；适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明写作主题“生活充满挑战”； 第二步，阐述具体写作内容。从挑战的内容、面对挑战的感受、解决措施三方面阐述面对挑战的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，总结面对挑战学习到的经验。 [亮点词汇] ①be filled with 充满 ②as…as sb. could 尽可能…… ③turn to sb. for help 向某人求助 ④spare no efforts 不遗余力 [高分句型] ①When I was in grade eight, I used to fail my final math exams.(used to) ②Looking back on this, I realize that whatever challenges I am faced with, if I can spare no efforts and never give up, I will get them over.(动名词作主语；if引导的条件状语从句) 10．（23-24八年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My daily life” (以“我的日常生活”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) Suggested questions: What do you do in your daily life? What do you think of your daily life? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文      I am a student. I get up at six o’clock. I read English for half an hour. At seven ten I have breakfast. After that, I walk to school because it is not far from my home to school. I have five lessons in the morning. I do morning exercises with my classmates after the second lesson. At 11:30, I go home for lunch. In the afternoon, I have three lessons. After class, we often do sports on the playground. After supper, I read newspapers or go out for a walk, then I do my homework for one and a half hours. At half past ten, I go to bed.      What a busy day I have every day! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文的时态为一般现在时； ③提示：本文以时间为顺序，注意衔接自然。 [写作步骤] 第一步，详细的以时间顺序介绍日常生活； 第二步，结束语，对自己的日常生活的评价； [亮点词汇] at half past ten在10点半 [高分句型] What a busy day I have every day!（感叹句） 11．（23-24八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “An/A __________ (unusual, interesting, special...) experience in my life” (以《一次……的经历》为题写一篇不少于60词的短文。要求内容贴切，意思连贯，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)    Use the following points as a reference.（以下问题仅供参考） 1.    When and where did it happen? 2.    What happened? 3.    How did you feel about it? 4.    Why did you think so? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A successful experience in my life In my memory, there are full of successful experiences. The most unforgettable one happened at school last term. I was not good at subjects at school and I couldn’t get good marks in exams. I felt worried about my study so I decided to work much harder. I listened to the teachers more carefully in class and did more exercises after class. What’s more, I often asked my teachers for help. Although I met a lot of difficulties, I didn’t give up. Now I have done better in my study. I believe that nothing is too difficult if I put my heart into it. If I meet with difficulties in my life, I should try my best to overcome them. In a word, only the person who overcomes difficulties will be successful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；描述经历用“一般过去时” ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要描述什么样的经历及发生的时间和地点； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了这次经历的过程； 第三步，描述自己的感受和启发。 [亮点词汇] ①are full of充满 ②the most unforgettable one最难以忘怀的 ③difficulty困难 ④overcome克服 [高分句型] ①I listened to the teachers more carefully in class and did more exercises after class. （比较级） ②Although I met a lot of difficulties, I didn’t give up. （让步状语从句） 12．（23-24八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据所给情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文） 我校正在征集模范学生，下图是其中的四条标准，你最认同哪一条？为什么？请结合自身经历或见闻说明 注意：1. 文中不得出现个人信息，否则不予评分 2. 照抄语篇不得分 3. 请选择一条填在横线上 Be _______________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Be honest      I think being honest is the most important for a model student. As we know, honesty is one of people’s good qualities. Everyone needs honesty and I hope everyone is honest. Last Friday, my best friend Li Ming wanted to copy my homework because he played computer games until midnight and had no time to do his homework. But I thought it was not good, so I told him not to copy my homework and I would help him next time. Finally he understood me and agreed with me.     Honesty is quite an important quality to a person. So I think as a model student, he must be honest. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏方框中“提示信息”的四个方面选一个模范学生的标准进行阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我认为诚实是模范学生最重要的一个品质”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示问题的三个方面——哪一条标准、原因、自身经历或见闻均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“作为一个模范学生，他必须诚实”的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①the most important最重要的 ②good qualities好品质 ③copy my homework抄我的作业 [高分句型] ① Last Friday, my best friend Li Ming wanted to copy my homework because he played computer games until midnight and had no time to do his homework.(because引导的原因状语从句） ② I think being honest is the most important for a model student. (宾语从句) 13．（23-24八年级上·上海青浦·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “My proudest moment” (以“我最自豪的瞬间”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My proudest moment Last month, I won the school’s English speech contest. I think it was my proudest moment of my junior high. To prepare for the contest, I chose a topic I was interested in: the importance of learning English. I spent hours organizing my ideas. I also practiced my pronunciation to make sure I could speak clearly and confidently. On the big day, I felt nervous. When it was my turn to speak, I took a deep breath and began. As I spoke, I noticed the audience nodding and smiling, which encouraged me to keep going. Finally, my hard work paid off and I felt excited when I got the first prize. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己认为最骄傲的时刻； 第二步，描述自己具体的努力过程； 第三步，最后表达当时的心情。 [亮点词汇] ①take a deep breath深呼吸 ②pay off取得回报 ③the first prize 一等奖 [高分句型] ①I also practiced my pronunciation to make sure I could speak clearly and confidently.（宾语从句） ②When it was my turn to speak, I took a deep breath and began. (when引导的时间状语从句) 14．（23-24八年级上·上海静安·期中）Write a short passage of at least 60 words about the topic “An interesting story in my family” (请以“一件家庭趣事”为题写不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 An interesting story in my family My father is a doctor. Sometimes he works so hard that he can’t remember the date. One day, my father wanted to get up early as usual, but he wasn’t able to do that, because he hadn’t set the alarm clock the night before. So when he got up, he did everything in a hurry. After my father left, my mother said to me mysteriously, “He will come back soon.” “Why?” I was greatly surprised. “Because today is Sunday, his holiday!” Just as mother said, my father came back home soon, and went to bed again, because he was too tired. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据An interesting story in my family为题，可围绕家庭生活展开。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍作者的家庭成员、职业及性格等； 第二步，简述一件家庭趣事发生的背景、起因和过程等，需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。 [亮点词汇] ①so…that如此……以至于 ②set the alarm定闹铃 ③in a hurry匆忙 [高分句型] ①One day, my father wanted to get up early as usual, but he wasn’t able to do that, because he hadn’t set the alarm clock the night before.（because引导原因状语从句） ②So when he got up, he did everything in a hurry.（when引导时间状语从句） 15．（23-24八年级上·上海徐汇·期中）请以“That Day, I solved a Trouble”（《那天，我解决了一个麻烦》）为题，写一篇不少于 60 词的短文，标点符号不计入词数。 The following questions are for your reference: *What trouble did you meet with? * How did you solve the trouble? *What did you learn from this experience? 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： That day, I solved a trouble Since I became a Grade 9 student, I have had a colourful school life. However, I still meet with some troubles. One day, it was my grandma’s eightieth birthday. It was really a meaningful day for my family. Since my parents were occupied with the decoration of the house, they asked me to order a cake. However, I was so careless that I left the matter behind my mind when my friends invited me to play basketball that day. I felt sorry for that, but I didn’t lose myself in self-blame. I made a handmade cake with cookies and colourful candies. Grandma was very happy when she saw the special cake. When terrible things happen, what we should do is not to find fault with others, but to use our intelligent brain to solve them. In our daily life, there are occasions when we are faced with something unpleasant. And self-blame, which is always the first choice of some people, is really of little use in solving the problems. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给的问题提示，讲述你解决一个麻烦的经历，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，交代事情发生的时间，地点和经过，以及是如何解决的； 第二步，讲述自己从这次经历中获得了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①be occupied with sth忙于做某事 ②leave...behind把……遗留在 ③play basketball打篮球 ④not...but不是……而是…… [高分句型] ①Since I became a Grade 9 student, I have had a colourful school life.  (since引导的时间状语从句) ②I was so careless that I left the matter behind my mind when my friends invited me to play basketball that day.(so...that引导的结果状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句) ③And self-blame, which is always the first choice of some people, is really of little use in solving the problems.(定语从句) 16．（22-23八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A busy Day at School”.（以”学校里忙碌的一天”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 Use the following points as a guide.（短文须包含下列要点） 1. What do you do at school every day? 2. Why do you think it is a busy day? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I am a middle school student. I am very busy every day. Let me tell you about my busy day at school. I often go to school at 6:30, and get to school at 6:45. We often begin our classes at 7:00. We have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. After class we often have sports on the playground. Sometimes, I do some cleaning at 5:00 in the classroom in the afternoon. I often go home at 5:55 after school. After supper, I must go to school. At school, I have to finish so much homework that I get home at 8:30 in the evening. I am very tired, but I must go over my lessons. It is really a busy day for me because I put my heart and soul into study. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中你认为这是忙碌的一天的原因，注意要点要齐全。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题。表明自己每天都很忙碌； 第二步，具体介绍自己白天做的事情； 第三步，介绍自己晚饭后要做的事情，并阐明这是忙碌的一天的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①have sports进行体育锻炼 ②do cleaning做清洁，打扫卫生 ③so...that...太……以致于…… ④go over复习 [高分句型] ①At school, I have to finish so much homework that I get home at 8:30 in the evening.（that引导的结果状语从句） ②It is really a busy day for me because I put my heart and soul into study.（because引导的原因状语从句） 17．（22-23八年级上·上海杨浦·期中）Based on your own experience, write at least 80 words on the given situation “This time I was brave”. 以“这次我很勇敢”为题，根据自身的经历写一篇不少于80词的短文，标点符号不占格。 (注意： 1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、学校等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 This time I was brave In our daily life, we have various fears preventing us from moving forward. And overcoming the fears helps us become more confident. I used to be afraid of speaking in public. I never dared to step up and speak in front of a crowd. Then, in Grade 9, a speech contest was held in my school. With my teacher’s encouragement, I entered for it and made full preparations for it. Luckily, I finished it smoothly. To my surprise, I won the second prize. This time I was brave. Now I have become more and more confident in expressing myself in public. Don’t let the fear take you. Just step forward and you will find you can do it! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应介绍自身的一段经历，注意细节的描写。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体点名克服困难，会让我们更自信，作为开头； 第二步，介绍具体的事情； 第三步，以鼓励作为结尾。 [亮点词汇] ①more and more confident 越来越自信 ②be afraid of 害怕 [高分句型] ①Don’t let the fear take you.（祈使句） ②Now I have become more and more confident in expressing myself in public.（现在完成时） 18．（22-23八年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about “An unforgettable experience”(以“一次难忘的经历”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文). Suggested points: 1. When and where did the story happen? 2. What happened and how did you deal with it? 3. What have you learned from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     Last summer I had an unforgettable experience that I climbed Mount Huang with my dad. I felt excited because it was the first time for me to climb a mountain.     At first, I hiked so quicky that my dad couldn’t follow me up. But after a while, I was too tired to go on. I wanted to give up because it seemed impossible for me to reach the top of the mountain. Just then, my dad said, “No pain, no gain. You should not give up, or you’ll never succeed.” He encouraged me a lot. I stood up and rush towards my goal. Finally, I made it! I was really amazed!     The unforgettable experience taught me a lesson that I would never succeed if I give up easily. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的难忘经历是去了哪里，引出下文的介绍； 第二步，讲述自己的难忘经历； 第三步，介绍从这次经历收获了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①too…to 太……而不能…… ②give up 放弃 [高分句型] ① Last summer I had an unforgettable experience that I climbed Mount Huang with my dad（that引导定语从句） ②I felt excited because it was the first time for me to climb a mountain.（because引导原因状语从句） 19．（22-23八年级上·上海普陀·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “The hero in my heart” (以“我心中的英雄”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 提示：每个人在成长的过程中总会遇见一些对你产生深远影响的人，他/她是“你心中的英雄”。请你用一件具体事例来讲述你心中的英雄激励你的故事。 （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The Hero in My Heart Yuan Longping is a hero in my heart. He was born in 1930 and died at the age of 91. Mr. Yuan spent nearly 60 years doing research on better rice in order to make people in the world have enough food. And he was successful! He was honored as Father of Hybrid Rice. I think Mr. Yuan was a great man. He was so selfless and hard-working that I respect him very much. I will never forget him. As a student, I have decided not to waste any food from now on. Also, I’ll study harder than before so that I can master more knowledge and skills. When I grow up, I’ll work hard for our country like him. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：本文话题已给出，介绍心目中的英雄，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题引出自己心目中的英雄； 第二步，详细介绍其基本情况并介绍他都做了什么事； 第三步，写你为什么崇拜他； 第四步，写你从他身上学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①at the age of在……岁 ②in order to为了 ③be honored as被授予 ④study harder更努力地学习 [高分句型] ①I think Mr.Yuan was a great man.（宾语从句） ②He was so selfless and hard-working that I respect him very much.（so...that引导的结果状语从句） ③I’ll study harder than before so that I can master more knowledge and skills. （so that引导的目的状语从句） 20．（22-23八年级上·上海黄浦·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My weekends” for your school Official Account.（自“双减”政策实施以来，学生的课余生活发生了很大的变化。请以“我的周末”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，参与学校的公众号征文活动） （注意：短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） 【答案】例文 My weekends It’s really wonderful news that the policy of “double−lightening the burden” has been carried out. My school life has changed a lot. My weekend life becomes colorful. I used to have a lot of homework on weekends. I don’t have time to do what I want to do. Now the study pressure is reduced and the homework is reduced. I sleep more and exercise more. I have more time to do what I like. I can read books to learn more knowledge. I can also go on a trip. More importantly, I have more time to stay with my parents and live a happier life. These changes have given me more time to develop their hobbies. I have more time to take part in outdoor activities on weekends. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为一般现在时； ③提示：以“我的周末”为题，结合“双减”政策以来，学生的课余生活发生的变化进行写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出重点要介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍“双减”后的周末生活； 第三步，书写结语，表达“双减”带来的好处。 [亮点词汇] ①a lot许多 ②a lot of许多 ③on weekends在周末 ④go on a trip去旅行 ⑤take part in参加 [高分句型] ①More importantly, I have more time to stay with my parents and live a happier life.（不定式作目的状语） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$