Unit 4 单元写作指导与演练-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年八年级英语上册单元写作深度指导（人教版）

Unit 4 What's the best movie theater 单元写作指导与演练 【单元话题解读】  本单元写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群，涉及子主题“公共服务”。常见的写作任务是使用最高级的语法结构并就个人喜好表达自己的观点和说明理由，体裁多为说明文或书信等应用文。写作此类话题作文时常用一般现在时，体裁通常为说明文并且写作时要求我们正确运用形容词或副词的原级、比较级和最高级对比不同的事物，并表明自己的观点。学会用形容词、副词比较级和最高级写作文能在考试中占很大优势，属于加分句型。 【写作目标】 重点考查学生以下能力： 1. 形容词或者副词的最高级用法及常用句型； 1. 发表看法及评价； 1. 做出比较。 【写作步骤】 .总分总结构。短文通常分为三个部分: 第一部分：开篇点题； 第二部分：做出比较并且谈论原因. 第三部分：看法及评价 【单元素材积累】 1. movie theater/radio station/stores/clothes shop/bookshop/supermarket/park/library常去的地点 1. comfortable seats/big screens/best sound/cheapest/closest to home/buy tickets quickly优势条件 1. popular受欢迎/be popular with/among在.......中受欢迎 1. the most expensive最贵的 1. the worst shop最差的店 1. the most boring songs最无聊的歌曲 1. so far 到 目前为止 1. enjoy spending time喜欢度过时光 1. tidy and clean整洁干净 1. freshest food最新鲜的食物 1. the worst service最差的服务 1. not... at all一点也不 1. all kinds of各种各样的 1. such as比如/for example例如 1. not as ....as 不如 1. in fact实际上 1. in a word总之 1. 句型积累： 1. Of all the shops,I like...best.在所有店里，我最喜欢....... 2. As for me,the ....is my favorite place to relax.对于我来说，......是我最喜欢去放松的地方。 3. It is the closest to home.离家最近。 4. ..is.the most popular in my neighborhood........是我们社区最受欢迎的。 5. It has the most comfortable seats.它有最舒适的椅子。 6. It's the most expensive.它是最贵的。 7. But I don’t like at all.但是我一点都不喜欢它。 8. I think it’s much better than any other supermarket in the city.我觉得它比任何一家市里的超市都好。 9. There are...in my town.我们镇子上有....... 10. Although it has the cheapest,it has the worst.....尽管它最便宜，但是它有着最差的....... 11. The.....is not as good/cheap as the....它不如......好/便宜...... 12. I like it best because I think it.....我最喜欢她是因为......... 13. It’s one of the oldest and most beautiful towns in China.它是中国最古老并且最漂亮的城镇之一。 14. It's the best place to relax.它是放松的绝佳去处。 15. When I spend time there,time always goes quickly.当我在那里度过时光的时候，时间总是过得飞快。 ◆开头句 ①Let me introduce my city to you. ②There's no doubt that Mount Tai is my favorite place in my hometown. ◆中间句 ①I never saw such a wonderful dance performance. ②In my eyes,Tim sang much more beautifully than any other singer. ③It's amazing that she can play the guitar upside down,so she won the funniest performer for sure. ◆结尾句 ①If you go there,you will fall in love with this place. ②It was such a great and successful school art festival that we enjoyed ourselves so much. ③In the successful school art festival,we not only enjoyed ourselves so much,but also learned a lot from it. 【名言积累】 ①A good book is the best of friends,the same today and forever.好书如挚 友，一生永相伴。 ②He knows most who speaks least.大智者寡于言。 【实例讲解1】 【写作任务】（Section B 3c） 假如你就读于一所国际学校，你们班新来的美国外教Mrs. White本周六下午打算出去，向你询问去哪里买衣服或看电影最好。请你向Mrs. White推荐当地最好的一家服装店或者电影院。 【审清题目】 内容：推荐一家服装店或电影院，要着重从几个方面介绍为什么它是最好的。 文体：介绍某个地方，属于说明文。 时态：用一般现在时。 人称：介绍某个地方，可用第三人称。 【头脑风暴】 【提供素材】 ◆常用语块 补全下列语块对应的英文表达。 The best place in the city Reasons (理由) ... Clothes Store •the closest to our school •the biggest / largest clothes store •(1)__________________(种类最多的衣服), the lowest (最低的) prices  / buy clothes the most cheaply / the cheapest clothes, clothes of the best quality (品质) •(2)__________________(最佳的服务), the nicest / friendliest salespersons •the most comfortable fitting rooms (试衣间), the most popular ... Cinema / Movie Theater •(3)__________________(从学校去那里花费的时间最少) •the biggest / largest cinema / movie theater •the biggest screens, the best sound, (4)__________________(最舒适的座椅) •the cheapest tickets, the shortest waiting time, (5)__________________(买票最快) •the most delicious popcorn (爆米花), the most comfortable waiting area (区) Key: 1. the most kinds of clothes   2. the best service   3. take the least time to get there from school 4. the most comfortable seats   5. buy tickets the most quickly ◆常用句型 • ... has the best ... • ... is the best because ... • I think ... is better than any other ... • I'd like you to go to ... because ... • It's the most ... near here / in the city. • It has an area of ... • The best place to shop / relax is ... • If you want to buy clothes / see a movie, you can go to ... 【谋篇布局】 将括号内的汉语翻译成英语，补全短文。 Key: 1. it's the best in the city 2. it takes the least time to walk there 3. It has the most kinds of clothes and the most comfortable fitting rooms 4. the salespersons there are much friendlier than those in other clothes stores 5. it's more popular than the other clothes stores in the city 【实例解析2】 假如你叫Mark，上周你们学校举办了一场艺术节，请你根据所给材料发挥想象，以“The School Art Festival”为题，用英语写一篇短文来介绍你校的艺术节。 Name Tim Dave Sophia and her classmates Show singing dancing play（戏剧） Award（获奖） the most creative the best dancer the funniest performer What do you think of it? beautifully … … … 要求： 1.80词左右，注意时态，并运用最高级； 2.文中不能出现同学的真实姓名和班级。 ►►审题指导 1.文体：记叙文 2.人称：第三人称和第一人称 3.时态：一般过去时 4.写作要点：明确写作要点，所给的要点要全，并加入自主发挥的部分。 ►►思路点拨 The School Art Festival My name is Mark. There was an art festival at my school last week. Many students got good prizes. In the singing competition,Tim sang in ①such a special way that he was the most creative singer.②In my eyes,Tim sang much more beautifully than any other singer. Dave ③did best in dancing at the school art festival,so he ④won the first prize as the best dancer. And ⑤I'd say it was the most wonderful dance.⑥As for Sophia,she performed in the play Days of the Past with her classmates. It was so funny that I ⑦couldn't stop laughing!⑧To my surprise,she won the funniest performer. In the successful school art festival,we ⑨not only enjoyed ourselves so much,but also learned a lot from it. 点评： ②In my eyes，③did best in，④won…as…，⑥As for，⑦couldn't stop laughing，⑧To my surprise和⑨not only…but also…等短语的使用使文章表达丰富多样，层次分明。 ①such…that…引导的结果状语从句及⑤I'd say引导的宾语从句的使用让文章句式更高级，表意更完整。 本篇范文语言精练，要点明确 突出，同时能够灵活运用本单 元所学的最高级的语法结构及 听力部分的句型I'd say…和短 语couldn't stop laughing等，为 文章增添了不少亮点。 写作练笔 每个人的记忆深处都有一份属于家乡的回忆。现代的高楼大厦，古香古色的老街老巷，难以忘怀的特色美食……每当别人问起我们的家乡时，我们总会面带微笑，侃侃而谈。在你的家乡，你认为最好的地方是哪里？为什么？请用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，讲述你在那里的一次美好经历。 ►►思路点拨 （温馨提示：请先完成下面的写作提纲） 【答案】例文 There's no doubt that Jiuzhai Valley is my favorite place in my hometown. It is surely the best place to go to on weekends. Last Sunday,my friends and I took the bus to Jiuzhai Valley. The air was the freshest in the morning. We were so excited when we got to the top of the mountain. We enjoyed the most beautiful scenery and we drew pictures together. At noon,we went to the best restaurant there. Because it had the most delicious food and the friendliest service. After lunch,we went to the guest center and took part in some interesting activities,such as touhu and trying on hanfu. What a meaningful and enjoyable day we had! There is something for everyone at Jiuzhai Valley. That's why I think it is the best place in Sichuan. If you go there,you will fall in love with this place. 【真题解析】 1．假如你是李明，你在美国的笔友Mike下学期要到你校做交换生。Mike非常喜欢吃中国的面条。请你根据如下提示给Mike写一封信，向他介绍你学校附近的三家面馆，并告诉他你常去的一家面馆并附上理由。 Miss Liu’s Noodle House Yummy Noodles Mr. Tang’s House of Noodles You Distance 2 kilometers 1 kilometer 500 meters Food ★★★ ★★★ ★★★ Service ★★★★★ ★★★ ★★★★ 要求： 1、表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等； 3、词数80左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。） Dear Mike, I am very happy to know that you are coming to be an exchange student in our school.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Li Ming 例文 Dear Mike, I am very happy to know that you are coming to be an exchange student in our school. I also know you like Chinese noodles very much. Let me introduce three noodle restaurants near my school to you. The first is Miss Liu’s Noodle House. It is 2 kilometers away from my school. The second is Yummy Noodles. It is 1 kilometer away from my school. The last one is Mr. Tang’s House of Noodles. It is 500 meters from my school. The noodles in these three noodle restaurants are delicious. In addition, Miss Liu’s Noodle House has the best service. That’s why I go to this place so often. Yummy Noodles has the worst service. The service at Mr. Tang’s House of Noodles is in the middle. Best wishes! Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给表格提示写一篇作文，介绍你学校附近的三家面馆。 第一步，介绍三家面馆到学校的距离； 第二步，介绍三家面馆的食物和服务； 第三步，介绍你常去的一家面馆并附上理由。 [亮点词汇] ①away from远离 ②in addition此外 [高分句型] That’s why I go to this place so often.（why引导的表语从句） 2．假如你的英语老师布置任务让你调查你所在社区的三家超市（Taihe Supermarket, Sunshine Supermarket, Happy Supermarket），请结合思维导图选出你最喜欢的一家超市，并说明理由。 写作要求： 1.写作的内容包含所有信息，重点谈谈你最喜欢的一家超市，可适当拓展； 2.词数80词左右。 例文： Supermarket Survey There are three supermarkets in my neighborhood. Of the three, Sunshine Supermarket is the biggest and has the best service. However, people don’t often go there because the goods are the most expensive. Happy Supermarket’s goods are cheaper than Sunshine Supermarket and its service is as good as Sunshine’s. But it’s not convenient to park the cars. As for Taihe Supermarket, it’s the smallest of the three, but its service is as good as Sunshine’s. Their goods are the best among the three. Lots of things are the cheapest, so I like it best. In a word, Taihe Supermarket is so far the best place for me to go shopping. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当拓展，以第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明社区有三家超市； 第二步，介绍各家超市的优劣势； 第三步，介绍三家超市中你最喜欢的一家。 [亮点词汇] ①in my neighborhood在我的社区 ②as good as像……一样好 ③in a word总之 ④so far到目前为止 [高分句型] ①There are three supermarkets in my neighborhood.(There be句型) ②However, people don’t often go there because the goods are the most expensive.(because引导的原因状语从句) 3．假如你是杨磊，你在某英文杂志上看到一则关于“我眼中最美的城市”的征文启事，你打算参加。请你以“The most beautiful city in my eyes”为题，写一篇英语短文参加比赛。 内容包括：1. 它是哪座城市，位于哪里？ 2. 这座城市有哪些特色？ 3. 你觉得哪里最值得参观？ 写作要求：1. 文中须包含提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数90左右。 The most beautiful city in my eyes ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 例文 The most beautiful city in my eyes Of all the cities in China, Nanjing is the most beautiful city in my eyes. Nanjing lies in the east of China. It’s famous for many places of interest such as the city walls of Nanjing, Fuzimiao and the Qinhuai River. You can walk along the city walls of Nanjing and feel the ancient history around you. Fuzimiao is such a magical place that you can’t miss. It feels like a different world which is full of beautiful buildings. You can also take a boat ride in the Qinhuai River. People there are friendly. If you need help, they’ll be there to give a helping hand. Nanjing is a wonderful city. I love it very much. Welcome to the city. I’m sure you will have a good time. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应对题干给出的“介绍自己认为最美的城市”进行描述并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己认为最美的城市是哪座城市； 第二步，根据题干中的要点，详细介绍这座城市的地理位置，特色以及值得参观的地方； 第三步，点评这座城市，欢迎人们来游玩，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for以……出名 ②such as例如 [高分句型] ①It feels like a different world which is full of beautiful buildings. （定语从句） ②If you need help, they’ll be there to give a helping hand.（if引导的条件状语从句） 4．假设你叫李华，你打算向某学生英文网站投稿，介绍你的居住的城市顺德。 注意： 1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 2. 不能照抄原文：不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。 3. 语句连贯，词数 80 左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数 Shunde, the place I live in. Dear readers, let me tell you something about Shunde, the place I live in. _________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Shunde, the place I live in. Dear readers, let me tell you something about Shunde, the place I live in. My name is Li Hua and I live Shunde, a city with a history of over 600 years and a population of about 4 million. Shunde is famous for its Cantonese cuisine and traditional arts. And there are many places worth visiting here. The best way to get around Shunde is by bus or subway, because they are convenient and affordable. If you plan to visit, I would suggest booking your hotel in advance, as Shunde is a popular tourist destination. Another tip is to check the weather forecast before your trip, so you can pack the right clothes. I hope you will love the city! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，简单介绍顺德； 第二步，介绍顺德的交通； 第三步，给出旅游建议并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for…以……而闻名 ②worth doing sth.值得做某事 ③get around出行 ④affordable负担得起的 ⑤in advance提前 [高分句型] If you plan to visit, I would suggest booking your hotel in advance, as Shunde is a popular tourist destination.(if引导条件状语从句；as引导原因状语从句) 5．为配合我市近年来开展的“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办了以“从我做起，让城市更美好”为主题的征文活动，并对学校100名学生进行了随机抽样调查。现在请你根据提示内容与图表，用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文积极参与活动。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Do you often do the volunteer work to help the city? 提示： 1. What does the chart (表格) tell us? 2. What do you think of the environment in our city? It is known that the environment is important to humans. The result of the school survey shows that ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ It is known that the environment is important to humans. The result of the school survey shows that fifty-two students always do the volunteer work to make the city cleaner. Thirty-six students sometimes work as volunteers. It’s a pity to find that twelve percent of the students seldom do volunteer work. The living environment is getting worse. So we should take part in the activities to protect the city we live in. To build a civilized city, we have so many things to do. First, we should plant more trees. As we know, trees can protect the environment and be good for our health. Next, we can save water and reuse it. Finally, we mustn’t drop rubbish everywhere. I believe our city will have a great environment in the future. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，描述完整图表信息并回答完整提示中的问题，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。   [写作步骤]   第一步，承接开头，描述图表内容；   第二步，表达自己对本市环境的看法；   第三步，介绍保护环境的一些方法。   [亮点词汇]   ①take part in参加 ②As we know众所周知 ③be good for对……有好处 [高分句型]   ①It’s a pity to find that twelve percent of the students seldom do volunteer work（that引导的宾语从句） ②So we should take part in the activities to protect the city we live in.（动词不定式表目的；定语从句） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$