Unit 3 单元写作指导与演练-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年八年级英语上册单元写作深度指导（人教版）

Unit 3 I’m more outgoing than my sister? 单元写作指导与演练 【单元话题解读】       本单元以“人物介绍”为话题，属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群，涉及子主题“良好的人际关系与人际交往”。此类话题要求学生抓住所描写人物的特点，从外貌特征、性格特点、兴趣爱好等方面进行描述,常用形容词或副词的比较级对不同人物的特征进行比较。通过对择友标准的讨论，形成正确的择友观。 常见的写作角度涉及：1、介绍自己的朋友； 2 、如何与朋友沟通； 3、提出一些交友建议。 直通中考 近三年考情分析 话题 考查热度 谈论人物的个性特征 ★★★ 人物的外貌和个性特征 ★★★   【写作目标】 重点考查学生以下能力: 1.掌握并熟练使用一般现在时: 2. 能使用一般现在时造句; 3. 能熟练运用形容词及形容词比 【写作步骤】 .总分总结构。短文通常分为三个部分: 总------第一部分:开篇点题，引出话题。 分-----第二部分:介绍相同之处与不同之处。 总------第三部分:发表看法， 【单元素材积累】 (一)相关词汇和短语积累  1. 外貌：tall, thin, heavy, strong, short straight hair, long curly hair, big eyes, wear glasses 2. 性格：outgoing, shy, quiet, funny, serious, smart, clever, friendly, kind (友好的), honest (诚实的), brave (勇敢的) 3. 爱好：playing basketball / football / tennis / volleyball ..., swimming, reading, writing, dancing, singing, playing chess, playing the piano / violin ..., be interested / talented in 4. 学习态度：hard-working, careful, careless (粗心的) (一)相关句型积累  1.描述他人外貌或性格的句型： ①He/She is taller/thinner/shorter than... ②He/She is friendlier/funnier/quieter/more careful/ more outgoing than...  2. 描述他人特长的句型： ①He/She is talented in... ② He/She is good at... 3.用于表示两人比较的句型： ①He/She is different from... ②He/She is the same as... 3 He/She is (not)as/so smart/friendly/hard-working/serious as... 4、 重点句型 (1)、We are similar to each other in many ways. (2)、Both of us like ... (3)、We are different from each other in ... (4)、She / He is more / less ... than me. (5)、She / He likes to do the same things as me. (6)、She / He is / likes ..., but I am not / don’t like ... (7)、 I’m as ... as ... (二）翻译句子 我并不十分在乎我的朋友是否跟我一样或与我不同。 I don't really care if my friends are the same as me or different. 事实上，他待我更像兄弟而不是朋友。 In fact, he treats me more like a brother than a friend. 朋友不在多而贵在好。 You don't need many friends as long as they are good. 作为朋友，我认为我们应该互相帮助，真正关心彼此。 As friends, I think we should help and truly care about each other. 5.Jenny比班里的其他学生都安静。 Jenny is quieter than the other students in her class. 6.那个男孩和你同龄。 The boy is the same age as you. 7.我们都擅长做运动。 We are both good at/talented in doing sports. 8.她的兴趣爱好与我的不一样。 Her interests are different from mine. ◆开头句 ①Everyone has friends in the world. ②I think true friendship is important for everyone. ③There are many role models around us. In my opinion,David is always the star in my heart. ◆中间句 ①At school,he cares about me and always makes me laugh when I feel sad. ②He is not as hard-working as me,but he is more popular than me because he is funnier than me. ③What's more,he is much more hard-working than any other student in my class. ④Whenever we have problems,he is always ready to give us a hand. ◆结尾句 ①In my eyes,a true friend is like a mirror to each other. ②I hope that she will have a bright future and we are good friends all the time. ③He is such a good role model that I learn to be more helpful and hard- working. 【名言积累】 ①A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。 ②A friend is easier lost than found.得朋友难,失朋友易。 • A friend is a second self. • Faithful (忠诚的) friends are hard to find. • No road is long with good company (陪伴). • A life without (没有) a friend is a life without a sun. • My best friend is the one who brings out the best in me. • A friend is someone who knows all about you and still loves you. • A friend is someone who can touch your heart from across the world or across the room. • Good friends are like quilts — they age with you yet never lose their warmth (失去温暖). • Walking with a friend in the dark is better than walking alone in the light. (和朋友在黑暗里同行，好过一人在光明中独步。) 【实例讲解1】 【写作任务】（Section B 3c） 假如你所在的英语沙龙将围绕My friends这一主题进行发言，要求每位同学介绍自己的两位朋友(一位与自己相似，一位与自己不同)。请你用英语写一篇短文，为交流活动做好准备。 【审清题目】 内容：介绍“我”的两位朋友及与“我”的异同。 文体：说明文。 时态：描写人物现在的情况，用一般现在时。 人称：第一、三人称。描述“我”与朋友的共同点时，用第一人称we；描述“我”与朋友的不同点时，用第一、三人称。 【头脑风暴】 【提供素材】 ◆常用单词和短语 在横线上填写单词或短语。 1. 年龄：... years old, old, young 2. 外貌：tall, short, of medium height, thin, heavy, (1) _______ (中等身材), strong (强壮的), handsome, beautiful, curly / straight hair, blonde / brown hair, a round / long face, (2) _______ (大眼睛), a big nose, a small mouth 3. 性格：friendly, nice, funny, interesting, (3) _______ (外向的), shy, quiet, strict, (4)_______(稳重的), brave (勇敢的), honest (诚实的), patient (有耐心的) 4. 爱好：cooking, fishing, running, swimming, writing, (5)_______(骑马), playing basketball / football / volleyball / ping-pong ..., playing chess, playing the guitar / drums ..., listening to music, singing, dancing, watching movies, (6)_______(绘画), reading books 5. 其他方面 （如学习）：(7)_______(有才能的), smart, excellent, (8)_______(勤奋的), lazy, careful, careless (粗心的) （如关爱他人）：caring, think about others, look after / care for Key: 1. of medium build   2. big eyes   3. outgoing   4. serious   5. riding a horse   6. painting / drawing   7. talented   8. hard-working ◆常用句型 • She / He is similar to me in ... • We are of the same age / height ... • She / He is as ... as me. • Both of us / We both like / enjoy ... • We are different from each other in ... • She / He is more / less ... than me. • She / He isn't so / as ... as me. • She / He likes ..., but I don't like / dislike ... • She / He is interested in / good at / talented in ..., but I'm not. ◆常用谚语和名言 • A friend is a second self. • Faithful (忠诚的) friends are hard to find. • No road is long with good company (陪伴). • A life without (没有) a friend is a life without a sun. • My best friend is the one who brings out the best in me. • A friend is someone who knows all about you and still loves you. • A friend is someone who can touch your heart from across the world or across the room. • Good friends are like quilts — they age with you yet never lose their warmth (失去温暖). • Walking with a friend in the dark is better than walking alone in the light. (和朋友在黑暗里同行，好过一人在光明中独步。) 【谋篇布局】 将括号内的汉语翻译成英语，补全短文。 Key: 1. We are of the same age and the same height 2. She is as quiet as I am / me 3. We both enjoy reading books and listening to music together 4. She is younger than I am / me 5. She isn't so / as careful as I am / me 6. the most important thing for good friends is to care about each other 【实例解析2】 朋友是我们生命中最美的相遇，温暖了我们的心灵。学校英语角即将 开展一次以“My Best Friend”为题的演讲活动。假如你是李华，Peter是你的 好朋友，请写一篇英文演讲稿来介绍他。 内容包括： 1.简单介绍你的好朋友（Introduce your best friend）； 2.你们的相同和不同之处（Similarities and differences）； 3.你的交友观（Your opinions about making friends）。 注意： 1.文中不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.词数：80左右。 ►►审题指导 1.文体：说明文 2.人称：第一人称和第三人称 3.时态：一般现在时 4.写作要点：明确写作要点,所给的要点要全，并加入自主发挥的部分。 思路点拨 My Best Friend Everyone has friends in the world.Peter,a 14-year-old tall boy ①with short black hair and a big smile on the face,is my best friend. We ②are both talented in music. He has ③the same hobbies as me. That's why we are friends and we can play basketball and sing together. He is more popular than me,but ④not as hard-working as me. He is good at math,but I ⑤do well in English. He is a helpful person ⑥who is always ready to help others. At school,he ⑦cares about me and always ⑧makes me laugh when I feel sad. I don't care if we are the same or different because friends are like books—you don't need a lot of them ⑨as long as they're good. Thanks for listening. 点评： ②be talented in,③the same…as,④not as…as,⑤do well in,⑦care about和⑧make me laugh等短语的使用让文章的语言更生动和多样化。 ①with作伴随状语，⑥who引导的定语从句和⑨as long as引导的让步状语从句让文章的 表达更丰富高级。 本篇范文语言丰富生动，同时能够灵活运用本单元所学知识，如比较级more popular than，not as hard-working as；短语be talented in,care about，as long as等。 还引用了课本句型“That's why…”和课本原句 “Friends are like books—you don't need a lot of them as long as they're good.”。 【真题解析】 1．朋友是我们为自己选择的亲人，虽然没有血缘关系，但是真正的朋友会像亲人一样，给我们带来诸多温暖与陪伴。你最好的朋友是谁呢？请根据以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 提示：1. 你最好的朋友是谁； 2. 你和他（她）有哪些相同和不同之处； 3. 你认为朋友之间应该怎样相处。 要求：1. 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2. 词数：70左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 It’s believed that everyone needs friends and friendship plays an important part in our lives. I have many friends and my best friend is a beautiful and kind girl called Linda. Linda and I have been friends for many years. We both like reading a lot and we often spend time reading together. However, we have quite a few differences. Linda is much more outgoing than me, and she brings me lots of happiness every day. I always get better grades than she does, so I often help with her study. I don’t think friends should be the same as long as they understand each other. I hope our friendship will last forever and both of us can become better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总述友谊的重要性，并介绍自己的好朋友是谁； 第二步，介绍自己和好朋友的相同和不同之处； 第三步，谈谈朋友之间应该怎样相处。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important part 起重要作用 ②as long as 只要 [高分句型] ①Linda is much more outgoing than me, and she brings me lots of happiness every day. (and连接的并列句) ②I don’t think friends should be the same as long as they understand each other. (as long as引导的条件状语从句) 2．假如你是孙强，根据以下提示写一篇短文，比较你和好友Jenny的特征。 提示： 1.你和Jenny在某些方面一样，在某些方面不一样。 2.相同之处：蓝色眼睛、 棕色卷发；学习努力；业余时间喜欢读书。 3.不同之处：你外向一点，比她风趣；她比你高，比你文静，更严肃，做事认真。 要求： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 短文要包括所有提示内容，语句通顺，可适当发挥。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文：   Jenny is my best friend. We are similar to each other in some ways. We both have blue eyes and curly brown hair. She studies as hard as me. In our free time, we like reading together.   In some other ways, Jenny is different from me. She is taller than me and she’s quieter and more serious. She does things very carefully. I am more outgoing, and I’m funnier.   As a saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. We always help each other when we meet problems. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示信息介绍自己和好朋友的异同，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，介绍自己有一个好朋友； 第二步，介绍两人的外貌和两人的异同点； 第三步，总结全文，用谚语指出朋友的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①in some ways在某些方面 ②be good at擅长 ③be different from 与……不同 [高分句型] ①In our free time, we like reading together. (动名词作宾语) ②As a saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed.（英文谚语） 3．友谊是冬天里的一杯热茶，是夏天里的一缕清风，是秋天里的一句问候。友谊是黑暗中的明灯，是快乐时的分享，是忧伤时的安慰。你校校刊英语专栏以“My Friend and I”为话题发起征文，请你从外貌、性格、生活习惯、爱好等方面描述你和你的朋友。 要求： 1. 80-120词； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息 My Friend and I ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Friend and I My name is Jane. I want to tell you something about my friend and me. My friend Linda has long straight hair. She is taller than me. She is quiet and hard-working. She gets better grades than me. She is a good listener. When I am in trouble, I always talk to her. And then she usually gives me some useful advice. Linda never stays up late and she likes reading. She thinks reading can make her happy. How about me? I am thinner than Linda. I am outgoing and funny. I am talented in music. I am good at playing the piano. I like sports and I exercise twice a week. I think doing sports is good for me. In the evening, I like watching TV. Linda and I are both friendly. We often help each other. We are really good friends. 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该从外貌、性格、生活习惯、爱好等方面描述你和朋友，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，介绍你的姓名，想与大家分享朋友与你的点点滴滴，从而引出话题； 第二步，按要点提示介绍你的朋友； 第三步，按要点提示介绍你自己； 第四步，描述两人的共同点，并总结：We are really good friends. ［亮点词汇］ ① be talented in 在某方面有天赋 ② stay up late 熬夜 ［高分句型］ ① When I am in trouble, I aways talk to her. (when引导时间状语从句) ② I think doing sports is good for me. (宾语从句) 4．假如你是Andy，请根据表格所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文介绍你和你的好朋友Tom的相同点和不同点。词数80左右。 不同点 相同点 Tom 1.更高，全班最高的学生 2.每天锻炼 3.喜欢看电影 1.学习很努力，成绩好 2.喜欢阅读，通常周末一起去图书馆 Andy 1.更开朗 2.每周锻炼三次 3.喜欢听音乐 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My name is Andy. Tom is my best friend. In some ways we are the same. Because we are both hard-working, we get good grades in our subjects. We both like reading and we usually go to the library together on weekends. But in some ways we are different. Tom is taller and he is the tallest in our class. He likes going to the movies, but I like listening to music at home. And I am more outgoing than Tom. I only exercise three times a week but he exercises every day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据表格中的要点，介绍你和好朋友之间的相同点和不同点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，引出自己和好朋友； 第二步，先介绍相同点再介绍不同点。 [亮点词汇] ①in some ways在某方面 ②going to the movies去看电影 ③listen to music听音乐 ④three times a week每周三次 [高分句型] ①Tom is taller and he is the tallest in our class.(比较级和最高级) ②I only exercise three times a week but he exercises every day. (but连接的并列句) 5．朋友是人生中的一大财富，也是生活中最温暖的感动。假设你是汤姆，请以“My best friend and I”为题写一篇短文。内容需包括： 1. 你的交友观； 2. 你和朋友的相同点； 3. 你和朋友的不同之处。 要求： 1. 语句通顺，逻辑连贯； 2. 不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My best friend and I I am Tom. _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My best friend and I I am Tom. I don’t really care if my friends are the same as me or different. My best friend is Jack. In some ways we are the same. We are both tall and we both like sports. We often play basketball together after school. He plays basketball as well as me. However, in some ways we are different. Jack is better at English and I am better at math. So we often help each other in study. I often eat hamburgers but Jack hardly ever eats them. He has healthier eating habits than me. As friends, we should care about each other and learn from each other, then both of us can be better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，介绍你的交友观； 第二步，介绍你与朋友的共同之处与不同之处，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，抒发对友谊的感悟并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①in some ways和在某些方面 ②care about each other互相关心 [高分句型] ①I don’t really care if my friends are the same as me or different.（if引导的宾语从句） 6．根据表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你和你的好朋友Tina的相同和不同之处。 要求： 1)文章内容应包含所有要点，并适当发挥； 2)开头已给，结尾自行补充； 3)条理清楚，语义连贯，字迹工整。词数80左右。 Differences Similarities (相似点) Tina 1. funny (***); serious (*) 2. do sports (every day) 3. like ... 1. tall and thin 2. be good at math and English 3. ... I 1. funny (*); serious (***) 2. do sports (hardly ever) 3. love … Tina is my best friend. We have many similarities. _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Tina is my best friend. We have many similarities. We are both tall and thin. We both like math so we are both good at it. We also like English and we usually get good grades, so some classmates say we are talented in them. However, we are truly different in many ways. Tina is funnier than me. She can make people laugh. I’m more serious than Tina. That’s why I study harder than she does. Tina does sports every day but I hardly ever do sports. So she is healthier than me. She likes music and sings well. And I am more interested in drawing. I hope to be an artist in the future. I think she’s a good friend, because she always helps to bring out the best in me. Do you have a good friend? Can you tell me about your friend? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的要点，写短文介绍自己和好朋友Tina之间的相同和不同之处。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍与好朋友Tina的相同之处； 第二步，介绍与好朋友Tina的不同之处，适当使用比较级作对比； 第三步，简单收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at 擅长 ②be talented in 在某方面有天赋 ③hardly ever 几乎从不 ④do sports 做运动 ⑤be interested in 对……感兴趣 [高分句型] ①We also like English and we usually get good grades, so some classmates say we are talented in them.（so连接表因果关系的并列句；省略that的宾语从句） ②I think she’s a good friend, because she always helps to bring out the best in me.（省略that的宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句） 7．假如你是李明，Tom是你的好朋友，请根据表格内容写一篇短文介绍他的情况。 姓名 Tom 年龄 12 特长及加入的俱乐部 Play basketball/the sports club 上学的交通方式 By bike 喜欢的动物及原因 Pandas/cute 描述他及父母正在干什么 Play basketball/read a book/clean the room 要求：1.不少于80词； 2.应包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. Tom is my good friend. Let me introduce him to all of you. He is twelve years old. He is good at playing basketball so he joins the sports club. He goes to school by bike every day. He likes pandas because they are very cute. Look, he is playing basketball with his classmate in the yard. His father is reading a book by the window and his mother is cleaning the room now. He has a happy family. 【详解】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍Tom的年龄、特长以及加入的俱乐部； 第二步，介绍他上学的交通方式以及喜欢的动物和原因； 第三步，最后描述他及父母正在干什么。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②by bike骑自行车 ③by the window在窗边 [高分句型] He likes pandas because they are very cute.（because引导的原因状语从句） 8．假如你叫刘星。你择友的标准是：性格外向；擅长打乒乓球，并可以教你打乒乓球。最近你就结交了这样一位新朋友——赵鹏。 请根据表格提示，介绍一下你自己、你的新朋友以及你的择友观。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My name is Liu Xing. I’m fifteen years old. I’m quiet and good at English. I like friends who are more outgoing than me and good at playing table tennis. So they can teach me to play table tennis. I’m very happy to have such a new friend now. His name is Zhao Peng. He is 14 years old. He is younger than me. He is more outgoing than me. He plays table tennis very well. 【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，要求根据内容提示介绍自己的择友标准和自己的新朋友。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态主要采用一般现在时。正文可分为三部分：第一部分介绍自己的信息；第二部分描述自己的择友标准，第三部分介绍自己的新朋友赵鹏。文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。 9．每个人都有自己的好朋友，或许两人相似，或许截然不同。结合自己实际和要点提示，写一篇小短文介绍一下你和你的朋友。 要点： 1.从外貌、性格、爱好等方面介绍你和你的朋友之间的异同之处； 2. 你认为什么样的人才能成为朋友？ 3. 词数90左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Sue is my friend. We study in the same school. She is taller than me. She is more outgoing than me. She likes sports but I like reading books. We both study harder and get good grades. Sue is always ready to help others. She always cares about me and is a good listener when I am in trouble. That’s why I think she is my best friend. In my opinion, a true friend should always be there when I need help. Of course, I will also care about my friends. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，介绍自己和好朋友之间的异同之处，并说明你认为什么样的人才能成为朋友。 2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，结合第一人称和第三人称为主；第一段就外貌、性格、爱好等方面介绍自己和好朋友的异同之处，第二段表明你认为什么的人才能成为朋友。可自由发挥，保证叙述完整。 10．假如你是张亮，请根据下面的表格信息，写一篇英语短文，介绍你和弟弟张翔的相同之处和不同之处，以便你们的美国朋友加深对你们的了解。 要求：1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑; 2. 包含表格信息的所有内容; 3. 70词左右，可适当发挥。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Zhang Xiang is my brother. He is younger than me, but he is as tall as me. His hair is long, but my hair is longer than his. He is much more outgoing than me, so he has many friends. He often goes out with them. However, I like to stay at home. He has cooler clothes than me. He is less hard-working. So he often gets worse grades than me. 【详解】1.题干解读：阅读题干可知，要求根据表格信息介绍你和弟弟张翔的相同之处和不同之处，主要从身高、头发、性格、衣服和学习成绩这几个方面进行介绍，写作时可以适当地添加内容，使文章内容更加丰富。 2.写作指导：这是一篇介绍型作文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，要注意谓语动词的三单形式。这里是对两个人进行对比描写，可知句型主要以比较级句型为主，要注意形容词的比较级形式的转换。 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$