Unit4 My Favourite Subject单元话题写作思路点拨 - 2024-2025学年七年级英语上学期单元话题写作思路点拨（人教版2024）

2024-2025学年七年级英语上学期单元话题写作思路点拨（人教版2024） Unit4 My Favourite Subject 单元话题 本单元的话题是“最喜欢的学校科目”，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中的“生活与学习”主题群，常从介绍自己最喜欢的科目并解释喜欢的原因以及学习感受等角度进行考查。 词汇积累 最喜欢的科目:biology, history, geography, science,Chinese,maths,IT,art... 原因:boring, useful, hard/difficult,excellent,magic, good with,good at,work out... 美文鉴赏学习 Mike is my best friend.He came to our class last term.He is good at English， so we often speak English in our free time.After school， we often play football together on the playground.His favourite sport is running.He runs so fast that I cannot catch up with (追上) him.He is an excellent student.He gets good grades in all the subjects.He loves pop songs and playing the piano. There are three people in his family and he is the only child.His father is a doctor and he likes reading newspapers in the evening.Sometimes he goes cycling with Mike at weekends.His mother likes traveling in her free time.Mike likes reading and his favourite subject is Chinese because he thinks it is very interesting.His dream is to be a writer. 1.Which subject is Mike good at？ ________________________________________________　 　 2.When do the writer and Mike often play football together？ __________________________________________________　 　 3.Who goes cycling with Mike at weekends？ __________________________________________________　 　 4.Why does Mike like Chinese？ __________________________________________________　 　 5.What does Mike want to be in the future？ __________________________________________________　 参考答案： 1. He is good at English./English.　 2. They often play football together after school./After school. 3. Mike’s father (goes cycling with him at weekends). 4. Because he thinks it is very interesting. 5. He wants to be a writer./A writer.　　 典例分析 在教育局组织的“手拉手”活动中，你作为第一中学(No.1 Middle School)的代表，请以“My Wonderful School Life”为题，写一篇文章向山区学校的小伙伴介绍自己的校园生活。 写作要求： 1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 2.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。 3.语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 第三步：列出主要的短语。 1.来自　come from/be from 2.第一中学No.1 Middle School 　 3.七年级一班Class 1，Grade 7　  4.最喜欢的科目favourite subject　  5.困难但有趣difficult but interesting 6.放学后after school　 7.打篮球play basketball　 8.去图书馆go to the library　 第四步：重点句子仿写。 1.…favourite subject is…because… ……最喜欢的科目是……，因为…… 2.　…think(s)…is… ……认为…… 第五步：用and、or、so、because、but等连接词将以上要点连成文章，并注意句型多样化。 My Wonderful School Life I’m Mike，a student from No.1 Middle School. ______________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： My Wonderful School Life I’m Mike，a student from No.1 Middle School. I am 13 years old.(年龄) I like my school.It’s not very big but clean.(对学校的评价)  I go to school from Monday to Friday.I have many subjects at school.And my favourite subject is English.I like it because I think it’s interesting.(喜欢的学科及原因)Our English teacher is Mr Zhao.He is great fun.He says English is very useful.If we learn English well， we can understand the differences between our country and other countries better.(学习英语的作用) In the afternoon， I usually play basketball with my friends in the playground.I like basketball very much.(课余生活)  I think my school life is really fun and interesting.(对校园生活的感受)  （2） 假设你是大明，你的美国笔友Jenny想要了解你的学校生活，请你给她写一封电子邮件，介绍你的学校生活。 内容包括: （1）自我介绍(班级、学校等）; （2）喜欢 / 不喜欢某些科目及原因； （3）你对自己学校生活的评价。 注意： (1)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。 (2)语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jenny, Let me tell you something about my school life.______________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Daming 参考范文： Dear Jenny, Let me tell you something about my school life.I study at No.3 Middle School. I'm in Class 2, Grade 7. My classes start at 8：00 a.m.and finish at 5：00 p.m. I have five classes in the morning and three in the afternoon.We have many different subjects to learn.My favourite subject is English.I like it because it is interesting and our English class is great fun.I have English lessons from Monday to Friday.I don't like maths. It's too difficult for me.After class,I often play sports with my classmates. In a word, I enjoy my school life a lot. Yours， Daming 实战演练 （1） 假如你是 Li Hua，要给在美国的笔友 Eric 写信，介绍你进入中学以后的生活 (school life) 。内容需包括你最喜欢的学科及原因，学校里的餐食，以及你的老师和同学等，且可适当发挥。 要求：1. 文中不能出现真实姓名和校名。语言流畅，书写美观。 2. 词数：60 词左右（信的格式已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Eric, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （2） 假如你是李华，你的笔友 Mike发来邮件介绍了他最喜欢的上学日。请你根据下面的提示内容，给Mike写一封邮件，向他介绍你最喜欢的上学日。 最喜欢的上学日：星期二 上午：数学（难，但是有趣）、生物（有用）、语文、地理 下午：美术（简单）、英语、体育（有趣） 最喜欢的学科和老师分别是……，因为…… 要求： 1.包含提示中所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 3.不少于60词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Mike, Thank you for your email. I’d like to tell you about my favourite school day. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ You see, Tuesday is really a good day for me. Yours, Li Hua （3） 假设你是Henry，是Tom的笔友。请根据以下提示，用英语给Tom写一封电子邮件，介绍你的学校生活，可适当发挥。不少于60词，已给出部分不计入总词数。 提示： 1. What’s your favourite subject? 2. Who is your favourite teacher? 3. What’s your favourite day? Dear Tom, Now let me tell you something about my school life.__________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Henry （4） 假设你是阳光中学(Sunshine Middle School)七年级一班的学生李华，下周学校将欢迎来自英国的留学生并举行联谊活动，请根据下面的表格写一篇短文，向你的联谊伙伴介绍你及你的学校生活。 Something about me (school, class, grade, subjects) Something about my school (buildings, teachers, classmates, activities) My feeling (...) 注意： 1.短文须包括以上所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.90词左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Welcome to our school. My name is Li Hua. ________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （5） Please write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite subject”. (以“我最喜欢的学科”为题，根据英文提示写一篇不少于60个单词的短文) Suggested questions: 1. What is your favourite subject? 2. Why do you like this subject? 3. What have you learned from this subject? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： 例文（1） Dear Eric, I want to tell you something about my school life. Now I’m a student in No. 1 Middle School. I’m very busy. I have many subjects, such as Chinese, English, math, history and so on. My favorite subject is English. Because my English teacher, Mr. Li, is great and I think English is interesting. I like my English teacher. He is kind to me. But I don’t like math because it’s difficult for me. Lucy is my good friend. She likes math very much because she thinks math is easy and fun. And she says she can help me. I have lunch at school. Our lunch is nice. We often have healthy food. I like vegetables and chicken very much. I think my school life is great. How about you? How is your school life? Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你学习的学科和最喜欢的学科及原因； 第二步，介绍学校的老师和同学以及学校里的餐食； 第三步，询问对方的情况。 [亮点词汇] ① be kind to对……和蔼 ② have lunch吃午餐 ③ healthy food健康食物 [高分句型] She likes math very much because she thinks math is easy and fun.（原因状语从句，宾语从句） 例文（2） Dear Mike, Thank you for your email. I’d like to tell you about my favourite school day. Tuesday is my favourite day because I like the lessons on that day. My school starts at 8:00 a. m. and the first lesson is maths. It’s difficult but interesting for me. The second lesson is biology. It’s a useful subject. Then I have Chinese and geography. After lunch and a one-hour break, I have three lessons in the afternoon. They are art, English and PE. My art teacher is my favourite teacher. She is good with us all and her lessons are really easy. PE is my favourite subject. It’s fun for me to play sport in PE class. And doing sport is good for my health. You see, Tuesday is really a good day for me. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：请勿遗漏材料所给内容，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，点题说明邮件内容； 第二步，详细介绍最喜欢上学日的课程安排，以及自己喜爱的学科、老师及原因； 第三步，首尾呼应，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①be good with sb.对某人好；和某人相处得好 ②play sport做运动 ③be good for有益于 [高分句型] ①She is good with us all and her lessons are really easy.（并列复合句） ②And doing sport is good for my health.（动名词短语作主语） 例文（3） Dear Tom, Now let me tell you something about my school life. I go to school from Monday to Friday. My favourite subjects are maths and English because they are useful and interesting. But I don’t like science because it’s too difficult. Miss Yang is my favourite teacher. She is fun and she always makes her English classes interesting. My favourite day is Friday because the next day is Saturday. The classes finish at five thirty in the afternoon. And then I can go home. I like my school life very much. Yours, Henry 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述自己喜欢的学科和老师； 第二步，描述自己最喜欢的一天和原因； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己对学校生活的喜欢。 [亮点词汇] ①from ... to ... 从……到…… ②very much非常 [高分句型] ①My favourite subjects are maths and English because they are useful and interesting.(because引导原因状语从句) ②She is fun and she always makes her English classes interesting.(and连接并列句) 例文（4） Welcome to our school. My name is Li Hua. I study at Sunshine Middle School. I am in Class 1, Grade 7. I study maths, music, history, English, Chinese, biology and IT. I don’t like maths because it is too difficult for me. Music is my favourite subject. I like singing because singing can make me happy. We can learn a lot of new songs in class. I want to be a singer in the future. There are two classroom buildings, a library and a dining hall in our school. The teachers are all good with us. My classmates are friendly, and I have many friends here. We often play volleyball in the gym. I love my school and always have fun here. I hope you can have a good time in our school. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏表格中信息提示，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的基本信息以及喜欢的学习科目和喜欢做的事情； 第二步，从学校建筑、老师、同学以及活动几个方面介绍学校的基本情况； 第三步，介绍自己的感受，希望大家能在学校过得开心。 [亮点词汇] ①in the future今后，将来 ②be good with善于和……相处 ③have fun= have a good time玩得开心 [高分句型] ①I like singing because singing can make me happy.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②There are two classroom buildings, a library and a dining hall in our school.（there be句型） 例文（5） My favourite subject My favorite subject is English. I like it very much because it is not only interesting but also useful. English is an international language spoken by people from all over the world. I can use English to communicate with the foreigners if I study it well. I think it is useful for me. By learning English, I know different culture and customs. I want to learn it well. I like English very much. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，包括对英语的喜爱，为什么喜欢，以及学习英语的目标。 [写作步骤] 第一步，明确主题——我最喜欢的学科是英语； 第二步，具体阐述为什么喜欢英语，包括它的有趣性和实用性，以及英语作为国际语言的重要性； 第三步，表达通过学习英语了解不同的文化和习俗，以及学习英语的决心。 [亮点词汇] ① international language 国际语言 ② communicate with 与……交流 ③ culture and customs 文化和习俗 [高分句型] ① I like it very much because it is not only interesting but also useful. (because引导原因状语从句) ② I can use English to communicate with foreigners if I study it well. (if引导的条件状语从句) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年七年级英语上学期单元话题写作思路点拨（人教版2024） Unit4 My Favourite Subject 单元话题 本单元的话题是“最喜欢的学校科目”，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中的“生活与学习”主题群，常从介绍自己最喜欢的科目并解释喜欢的原因以及学习感受等角度进行考查。 词汇积累 最喜欢的科目:biology, history, geography, science,Chinese,maths,IT,art... 原因:boring, useful, hard/difficult,excellent,magic, good with,good at,work out... 美文鉴赏学习 Mike is my best friend.He came to our class last term.He is good at English， so we often speak English in our free time.After school， we often play football together on the playground.His favourite sport is running.He runs so fast that I cannot catch up with (追上) him.He is an excellent student.He gets good grades in all the subjects.He loves pop songs and playing the piano. There are three people in his family and he is the only child.His father is a doctor and he likes reading newspapers in the evening.Sometimes he goes cycling with Mike at weekends.His mother likes traveling in her free time.Mike likes reading and his favourite subject is Chinese because he thinks it is very interesting.His dream is to be a writer. 1.Which subject is Mike good at？ ________________________________________________　 　 2.When do the writer and Mike often play football together？ __________________________________________________　 　 3.Who goes cycling with Mike at weekends？ __________________________________________________　 　 4.Why does Mike like Chinese？ __________________________________________________　 　 5.What does Mike want to be in the future？ __________________________________________________　 典例分析 在教育局组织的“手拉手”活动中，你作为第一中学(No.1 Middle School)的代表，请以“My Wonderful School Life”为题，写一篇文章向山区学校的小伙伴介绍自己的校园生活。 写作要求： 1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 2.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。 3.语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 第三步：列出主要的短语。 1.来自　come from/be from 2.第一中学No.1 Middle School 　 3.七年级一班Class 1，Grade 7　  4.最喜欢的科目favourite subject　  5.困难但有趣difficult but interesting 6.放学后after school　 7.打篮球play basketball　 8.去图书馆go to the library　 第四步：重点句子仿写。 1.…favourite subject is…because… ……最喜欢的科目是……，因为…… 2.　…think(s)…is… ……认为…… 第五步：用and、or、so、because、but等连接词将以上要点连成文章，并注意句型多样化。 My Wonderful School Life I’m Mike，a student from No.1 Middle School. ______________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2） 假设你是大明，你的美国笔友Jenny想要了解你的学校生活，请你给她写一封电子邮件，介绍你的学校生活。 内容包括: （1）自我介绍(班级、学校等）; （2）喜欢 / 不喜欢某些科目及原因； （3）你对自己学校生活的评价。 注意： (1)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。 (2)语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jenny, Let me tell you something about my school life.______________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Daming 实战演练 （1） 假如你是 Li Hua，要给在美国的笔友 Eric 写信，介绍你进入中学以后的生活 (school life) 。内容需包括你最喜欢的学科及原因，学校里的餐食，以及你的老师和同学等，且可适当发挥。 要求：1. 文中不能出现真实姓名和校名。语言流畅，书写美观。 2. 词数：60 词左右（信的格式已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Eric, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （2） 假如你是李华，你的笔友 Mike发来邮件介绍了他最喜欢的上学日。请你根据下面的提示内容，给Mike写一封邮件，向他介绍你最喜欢的上学日。 最喜欢的上学日：星期二 上午：数学（难，但是有趣）、生物（有用）、语文、地理 下午：美术（简单）、英语、体育（有趣） 最喜欢的学科和老师分别是……，因为…… 要求： 1.包含提示中所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 3.不少于60词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Mike, Thank you for your email. I’d like to tell you about my favourite school day. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ You see, Tuesday is really a good day for me. Yours, Li Hua （3） 假设你是Henry，是Tom的笔友。请根据以下提示，用英语给Tom写一封电子邮件，介绍你的学校生活，可适当发挥。不少于60词，已给出部分不计入总词数。 提示： 1. What’s your favourite subject? 2. Who is your favourite teacher? 3. What’s your favourite day? Dear Tom, Now let me tell you something about my school life.__________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Henry （4） 假设你是阳光中学(Sunshine Middle School)七年级一班的学生李华，下周学校将欢迎来自英国的留学生并举行联谊活动，请根据下面的表格写一篇短文，向你的联谊伙伴介绍你及你的学校生活。 Something about me (school, class, grade, subjects) Something about my school (buildings, teachers, classmates, activities) My feeling (...) 注意： 1.短文须包括以上所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.90词左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Welcome to our school. My name is Li Hua. ________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （5） Please write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite subject”. (以“我最喜欢的学科”为题，根据英文提示写一篇不少于60个单词的短文) Suggested questions: 1. What is your favourite subject? 2. Why do you like this subject? 3. What have you learned from this subject? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$