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新教材·英语 选择性必修·第二册[译林版]
Section Ⅴ Writing话题写作——写给未来的书信
写给未来的书信是一种创作型写作,属于开放式作文的一种。此类文章的写作要做好以下几点:
(1)观察生活,体现生活。作文内容要源于实际生活。只有仔细地观察生活,才能生动地描述现代社会中你所熟悉的科技。
(2)明确中心,展开描述。写此类作文之前要先明确中心对象。对现代科技产品的描述要精练、具体,尽可能选择恰当、高级的关键词加以描述。
(3)想象恰当,符合逻辑。对未来科技想象的空间虽然很大,但要做到符合逻辑、条理清晰,这一点对于写好此类文章尤其重要。
(4)语言规范,表达地道。选用自己熟悉的词汇和句型进行表达,如 will, probably, possibly, maybe, likely, may, might, could, would, it's possible/probable/likely that ..., I often dream about ..., perhaps we will be able to ...
1.开头常用句式
①With the development of science and technology, our lives will change a lot in the future.
随着科技的发展,我们的生活将发生很大的变化。
②It is really difficult for me to make predictions about the future.
对我来说,预测未来真的很难。
③In the future more and more ... will appear.
在未来,越来越多的……将会出现。
2.主体段落常用句式
①Artificial intelligence has developed rapidly and been used in various fields.
人工智能发展迅速并被应用于各个领域。
②You will often interview important people and stars face to face.
你会经常面对面地采访重要的人和明星。
③There will be little time to spend with your family.
几乎没有时间和你的家人在一起。
④Now we are living in a world full of advanced technology.
现在我们生活在一个充满先进技术的世界。
⑤People will lead a carefree life in the future.
将来人们会过着无忧无虑的生活。
⑥The new technology is still in its early stages.
这项技术还处于其早期开发状态。
3.结尾常用句式
①This is the life that I am looking forward to.
这就是我所期待的生活。
②Personally, I will always look on the positive side of the advances of new technology.
个人而言,我总是会看到新技术进步的积极面。
③I believe you will have a bright future.
我相信你会有一个光明的未来。
现代科技的快速发展正在改变着人们生活的方方面面,给人们的生活带来了极大的便利。假设你是李华,请以某一科技为例,充分发挥想象,给身处2050年的Tom写一封信,主要包括以下两个部分:
1.选择一种科技,并描述它对人们生活的影响;
2.对未来的期望。
注意:1.写作词数应为80 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[精彩范文]
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? I would like to share what my life is like with you. Undoubtedly, advanced science and technology has found its way into our daily life. For instance, in some fields, artificial intelligence helps humans to get work done. Not only can it reduce the burden of work, but also it tends to be more efficient. What's more, the development of artificial intelligence can create more related jobs and provide new chances for us.
As for my wishes, I hope in 2050 travel will become easier with environmental-friendly flying cars and we can even go back to the past by a time machine.
Yours,
Li Hua
总评 文章思路清晰,语言规范,语篇连贯,层次分明。文中使用了复杂句式,并恰当运用了过渡词语。
[亮点呈现]
(1)使用了find one's way into, for instance等短语,为文章增色不少。
(2)I would like to share what my life is like with you.使用了what引导的宾语从句;Not only can it reduce the burden of work, but also it tends to be more efficient.使用了“not only ... but also ...”结构,彰显了较强的语言表达能力。
假定你是李华,在国际科学与和平周到来之际,校刊英语栏目举行征文比赛,请你以“写给未来的朋友”为题写一篇征文稿。
内容包括:
1.写信的目的;
2.介绍科技发展现状;
3.你的愿望。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
Yours,
Li Hua
[精彩范文]
Dear friends,
With International Week of Science and Peace around the corner, I'm writing to tell you the current state of science and technology on earth.
Nowadays, we use machines or robots for almost everything. AI is going deep into all aspects, and it is helping us to complete lots of work that could not be done before. Our spacecraft can reach the moon and Venus. Our underwater vehicles can reach every place under the sea.
I hope that in your time, life will be more convenient and people can travel freely between many planets. How fascinating it will be!
Yours,
Li Hua
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