Unit 2 课时作业(6)读后续写专项(Word练习)-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第二册（人教版2019）

课时作业(六)　读后续写专项 (建议用时：50分钟) 情感细节描写之“悲伤”“沮丧”和“孤独”(一) 形容词/副词 sorrowful, depressed, frustrated, lonely, upset, depressing 名词 sorrow, loneliness, sadness, depression 短语 ①a sense/wave of loneliness/sadness一阵孤独/悲伤 ②be numb with sorrow/sadness难过得麻木 1．按要求用表“悲伤、沮丧和孤独”的表达补全下面各句 (1)教室里的每个人都在愉快地聊天，而简却一个人坐在那里不知所措。 Everyone in the classroom was chatting happily while Jane sat alone , at a loss．(利用对比的修辞手法凸显简的落寞) (2)悲伤和孤独的气氛笼罩着她。 An air of sorrow and loneliness settled over her． (无灵主语句) (3)简感到被冷落，孤独使她感到绝望。 Feeling left out, Jane got desperate with loneliness． (非谓语动词作状语) (4)她从学校慢慢地骑车回家，心难过得麻木了。 She rode home from school slowly, numb with sorrow ． (5)她把自己锁在房间里，沉浸在悲痛之中。 She locked herself in her room, abandoning herself to great sadness ．(非谓语动词作状语) (6)她很伤心，不知不觉哭了，眼泪止不住。 She felt so sad that she found herself weeping , unable to hold back her tears．(形容词) 2．将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文，注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇 One possible version： Everyone in the classroom was chatting happily while Jane sat alone, at a loss．An air of sorrow and loneliness settled over her．Feeling left out, Jane got desperate with loneliness．She rode home from school slowly, numb with sorrow．Then she locked herself in her room, abandoning herself to great sadness．She felt so sad that she found herself weeping, unable to hold back her tears． ★即使时间再紧，也要挤时间把范文抄写在这里，体会如何衔接语篇的同时练习书写。 阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 [1]I'd seen Kim around campus long before the winter of my sophomore(大二) year．I'd admired her from afar．She was pretty with smooth hair, always wearing a bright smile．I'd decided that if I were to choose one girl as my friend, she would be the one．Even though our paths crossed several times a day, I felt as if she lived in some remote corner of a distant universe, where I was sure she had no idea that I existed． [2]She was there the night when I was invited to a party．A favorite band was playing that night, and I welcomed the chance to get out of my stuffy dorm room and away from hard work．I arrived late and took a seat at a table alone in the back of the room．The others didn't notice me, but I didn't care．I made a decision to hang out for fifteen minutes and then left． [3]I heard a familiar laugh…．Then, I saw her sitting with her friends．She seemed to shine, making everything and everybody else in the room fade to insignificance．How I wished I were together with her! I looked around and wondered if anybody else saw her, but they all seemed too caught up in their corners of conversation to notice．How could they not? She was shining． [4]I imagined myself walking up to her and then saying hello．What would she say? Would she just laugh or simply ignore me? Maybe my voice would crack, and I'd turn and slink away as if it had all been a mistake．Then I could simply spend the rest of my college years going around corners and taking roundabout routes to avoid seeing her． [5]At that moment, she turned toward the back of the room．Her gaze rested on me．I saw her lean over and whisper something to one of her friends, and then she got up and weaved her way through the cluster of tables． 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 She was coming toward me．　 Many years later, my thoughts sometimes still go back to that night．　 1．文本分析 主要人物 I, Kim 事件主线 Kim帮助作者恢复自信，走出自卑，她们成了一生一世的朋友。 情感表达 (原文依据) [Para．1]I'd admired her from afar．→[Para．3]How I wished I were together with her！→[Para．4]I imagined myself walking up to her and then saying hello． 2．线索推测：两段首句定发展，始终不忘“3衔接1呼应” 标出两段首句关键词 续写第一段：She was coming toward me． 续写第二段：Many years later, my thoughts sometimes still go back to that night． 3衔接1呼应 第一段内容和第一段首句密切衔接；第一段结尾和第二段首句密切衔接 ❶根据第一段首句可知，Kim向“我”走来。第一段应描写：“我”的心情—— 兴奋和紧张 以及“我”和Kim的交谈。 ❷根据第二段首句可知，“我”经常回忆过去，第二段应描写：从 那天晚上 之后，“我”的改变——由 内向 变得 自信开朗 。 ❸由此可推测第一段的结尾：“我们”成了 好朋友 。第二段的结尾：“我”实现了个人成长，感到非常 幸运 。 第二段内容和第二段首句密切衔接；第二段结尾和文章主旨相呼应 3．细节构思：每段三个微情节原则 第一段 情节 ①“我”的 紧张 和激动；②Kim和“我”打招呼；③Kim和“我”的对话 动作描写 force a friendly smile (挤出一个友好的笑容)→ greet (问候)→ joke (开玩笑) 心理描写 激动的adj． thrilled ；紧张的adj． nervous n． nervousness 第二段 情节 ①“我”的回忆；②“我”的改变；③“我”的 感悟 动作描写 communicate with (和……交流)→ attract (吸引)→ spread the warmth (传递温暖) 心理描写 难忘的adj． unforgettable ；自信的adj． confident n． confidence 外向的adj． outgoing ；幸运的adj． lucky/fortunate/blessed 4．遣词造句：连词成句，连句成篇 高级词汇、词块&熟词生义 ① try one's best 尽自己最大的努力　　　② force a friendly smile 挤出一个友好的笑容 ③ work out 想出(解决方法) ④ more than surprised 非常吃惊 ⑤ build up 建立；逐渐增长 ⑥ communicate with 和……交流 ⑦ out of place 格格不入 高分句型 (1)形容词作状语＋with复合结构 我激动但又紧张，我尽力挤出一个友好的微笑，心跳得很厉害。 Thrilled but nervous , I tried my best to force a friendly smile, with my heart beating wildly ． (2)as if引导方式状语从句 她微笑着，好像我们是老朋友似的。 She was smiling as if we had been old friends ． (3)主语用最高级，从句用现在完成时 我相信这是我度过的最难忘的一晚。 I am sure it's the most unforgettable night I have ever spent ． (4)虚拟语气 要不是Kim，我永远不会走出我的角落。 But for Kim , I would never have come out of my corner． (5)whenever引导时间状语从句＋who引导定语从句 最重要的是，每当我去参加聚会时，我都会积极地向那些可能感到有点格格不入的人打招呼。 Most importantly, whenever I went to a party , I would be positive to greet those who might feel a little out of place ． (6)升华主题：feel so blessed to do sth意为“做某事感到很幸运” 回首过去，有Kim作为我一生的朋友我感到很幸运。 Looking back, I feel so blessed to have Kim as my lifelong friend． 5．成文誊写 One possible version： She was coming toward me．Thrilled but nervous, I tried my best to force a friendly smile, with my heart beating wildly．What would I say? Before I could work out what to say, Kim had already stood before me, greeting, “Hello! It's good to see you here！” She was smiling as if we had been old friends．I was more than surprised, “You know me？” “We often walk on the same path, but you never talk to me．” She joked．At that time, I could feel the ice inside was melting．Then she invited me to join her．The following night witnessed how a friendship built up． Many years later, my thoughts sometimes still go back to that night．It all seemed to have happened just yesterday．I am sure it's the most unforgettable night I have ever spent．But for Kim, I would never have come out of my corner．Now, I am confident and outgoing，enjoying communicating with others．My shift in personality attracted many friends to me, making my life as brilliant as Kim's．Most importantly, whenever I went to a party, I would be positive to greet those who might feel a little out of place．I just wanted to spread the warmth that I had ever been offered．Looking back, I feel so blessed to have Kim as my lifelong friend． 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$