Unit 1 课时作业(3)读后续写专项(Word练习)-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第二册（人教版2019）

课时作业(三)　读后续写专项 (建议用时：50分钟) 情感细节描写之“紧张” 形容词/副词 nervous, uneasy, tense, anxious, nervously 名词/动词 nervousness/tension, anxiety, tremble, shake 短语 ①one's heart be/fly into one's mouth心提到嗓子眼　②a flood/wave of tension一阵紧张 ③feel/have/with butterflies in my/the stomach 忐忑不安　④tremble with anxiety 焦虑不安 1．按要求描写人物的“紧张”之情 (1)当我站在后台的时候，我紧张极了。 When I was standing backstage, nervousness/tension came flooding over me ．(无灵主语句) (2)当叫到我的名字时，我感到心里忐忑不安。 When my name was called, I could feel butterflies in my stomach ． (3)我颤抖着双腿来到了舞台上。我手心冒汗，心跳加速。 My trembling legs brought me onstage, and I could feel my palms sweating and heart racing ．(无灵主语句) (4)挤满观众的大厅让我更加紧张起来，我的心扑通扑通地好像要跳出来了。 The hall crowded with audience made me even more uneasy ．My heart was pounding/thumping hard, as if it were about to pop ．(夸张的修辞手法) (5)我紧张地站在那里，喉咙发紧，不知道下一步怎么办。 I stood there so nervously that I felt my throat tight , wondering what to do next．(so…that…) 2．将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文，注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇 One possible version： When I was standing backstage, nervousness/tension came flooding over me．When my name was called, I could feel butterflies in my stomach．My trembling legs brought me onstage, and I could feel my palms sweating and heart racing．However, the hall crowded with audience made me even more uneasy．My heart was pounding/thumping hard, as if it were about to pop．I stood there so nervously that I felt my throat tight, wondering what to do next． ★即使时间再紧，也要挤时间把范文抄写在这里，体会如何衔接语篇的同时练习书写。 阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 [1]It's hard to talk to dads sometimes．The roles we often expect our fathers to play—protector, provider—can make them seem impenetrable(不可理解的)．That's how it was with my dad．He came to Canada at the age of ten and settled in an immigrant community．He was never much of a talker．He rarely drank, so we didn't get to see him loosen up after a few beers．He didn't tell stories about himself at the dinner table or when we went for walks in the park．He was a private person and seemed to want to stay that way． [2]Bringing up the many questions I had about life before I was born—his early hopes and dreams, loves and heartbreaks—let alone sharing my own feelings, felt like too much for us to handle．I didn't want to threaten the integrity(完整) of his hard shell．I had gotten used to it, and it made me feel secure． [3]But when my relationship and career took a hit a year ago at the same time, things had to change．I was facing serious questions about my own nature, and I wanted to know that he had faced them, too．I needed to know how he had found his way, because I felt like I had lost mine． [4]In a severe moment of desperation, it occurred to me that sending an email might be the key．An email can be crafted(精心制作) slowly and carefully．I could speak at a comfortable distance and give him room to adjust．He'd be up in his office—a comfortable place filled with bookshelves, dusty CD-ROMs and piles of old newspapers．I'd be at my desk in an apartment 20 minutes away． [5]So I wrote to him．I told him about my regrets and fears, and I asked him to answer, if he felt like it, and to share something about himself, something that would give me much-needed perspective on my life, especially on relationship and career． 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 Two weeks later, his response showed up in my email box．　 I closed the email and started to cry．　 1．文本分析 主要人物 I, Dad 事件主线 以人物为线索展开：作者的父亲少言少语，作者也习惯这样的父亲，但当作者的人际关系和职业受到打击时，他/她决定通过写邮件向父亲求助…… 情感表达 (原文依据) [Para．1]It's hard to talk to dads sometimes． [Para．2]I had gotten used to it, and it made me feel secure ． [Para．4]In a severe moment of desperation , it occurred to me that sending an email might be the key． [Para．5]I asked him to answer, if he felt like it , and to share something about himself, something that would give me much-needed perspective on my life, especially on relationship and career． 2．线索推测：两段首句定发展，始终不忘“3衔接1呼应” 标出两段首句关键词 续写第一段：Two weeks later, his response showed up in my email box． 续写第二段：I closed the email and started to cry． 3衔接1呼应 第一段内容和第一段首句密切衔接；第一段结尾和第二段首句密切衔接 ❶根据第一段首句可知，“我”收到了父亲的回信。第一段应描写：父亲的回复及其 内容 。 ❷根据第二段首句可知，“我”哭了。第二段应描写：“我”读完信之后的心理活动，即“我”哭泣的原因。 ❸由此可推测第一段的结尾：父亲的经历让“我” 感动 或者 印象深刻 。第二段的结尾要升华：“我”找到了和父亲 沟通交流 的方式。 第二段内容和第二段首句密切衔接；第二段结尾和文章主旨相呼应 3．细节构思：每段三个微情节原则 第一段 情节 ①“我”收到回信；②父亲分享自己过去的 经历 ；③对父亲有了更多的了解，“我”的心情—— 感动 或者 印象深刻 动作描写 consider (考虑)→ compose (撰写)→ offer/provide (提供)→ impress (使留下深刻印象) 心理描写 害怕n． fear ；挣扎n． struggle ；毅力n． perseverance 第二段 情节 ①“我”哭泣的原因；②父亲的回复对“我”的 积极影响 ；③“我”找到了和父亲 沟通交流 的方式 动作描写 put…at ease(使……放松)→ solve/settle (解决)→ communicate with (和……沟通) 心理描写 感恩的adj． grateful/thankful ；可忍受的adj． bearable 4．遣词造句：连词成句，连句成篇 高级词汇、词块&熟词生义 ① compose v．撰写　　　　　　　　　　② perseverance n．毅力 ③ magically adv．奇迹般地 ④ show up 出现 ⑤ settle down 定居 ⑥ at an early age 早年 ⑦ in the face of difficulty 面对困难 ⑧　put…at ease　 使……放松 高分句型 (1)形容词作状语 这是一份三页纸的扫描文件，字迹清晰，写得很好。 It was a scanned three-page document, clear and well written ． (2)动词的联动 显然，父亲仔细考虑了我的信息，回忆了他过去的日子，并仔细地写了回复。 Apparently, my dad had carefully considered my message, recalled his days in the past and carefully composed a response． (3)“疑问词＋不定式”结构 他还就如何处理我的人际关系和职业生涯向我提出了一些切实可行的建议。 He also offered me some practical suggestions on how to handle my relationship and career ． (4)while引导时间状语从句的省略形式；must have done表示对过去的肯定推测 在读信的过程中，我感觉到，父亲很小就在一个新的国家安顿下来，一定很艰难。 While reading , I got the sense that it must have been really tough for my dad to settle down in a new country at an early age． (5)what引导主语从句 给我印象最深的是他在困难面前表现出的巨大毅力。 What impressed me most was the great perseverance he showed in the face of difficulty． (6)虚拟语气 我哭了，因为我希望我自己早点打开心扉，但我很庆幸还没有太晚。 I cried because I wished I had opened up earlier but was grateful it wasn't too late． (7)强调句型 正是他的信使我立刻感到安心。 It was his letter that instantly put me at ease． (8)升华主题：it turned/turns out that…结果证明是…… 事实证明，有时很难和父亲交谈，但当我找到一种与父亲交谈的方式时，感觉太棒了。 It turned out that it's hard to talk to dads sometimes, but it felt so great when I found a way to communicate with mine． 5．成文誊写 One possible version： Two weeks later, his response showed up in my email box．It was a scanned three-page document, clear and well written．Apparently, my dad had carefully considered my message, recalled his days in the past and carefully composed a response．In the letter, he shared his history of love, longing, self-doubt, fears and struggles in life．He also offered me some practical suggestions on how to handle my relationship and career．While reading, I got the sense that it must have been really tough for my dad to settle down in a new country at an early age．What impressed me most was the great perseverance he showed in the face of difficulty． I closed the email and started to cry．I cried because I wished I had opened up earlier but was grateful it wasn't too late．I cried because in the midst of my own struggles, it was his letter that instantly put me at ease．And I cried because in the end, it was so simple; I just had to hit “Send”．We've since had many exchanges．My problems haven't been magically solved, but getting to know my dad better and learning to love him more has made the tough situation more bearable and life sweeter．It turned out that it's hard to talk to dads sometimes, but it felt so great when I found a way to communicate with mine． 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$