内容正文:
MUSIC
UNIT 5
Section Ⅳ Listening and Talking & Reading for Writing
默写练习(十)
课文研读·发展思维品质
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Contents
要点自查(十)
语基输入·助力语言输出
以读促写·体现学以致用
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你是否曾经历过黯淡无光、万念俱灰的一段时光?
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听着这首歌,我感觉好多了;从那时起我
开始一直听音乐。
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在那时,音乐可以帮
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set aside
set down
set up
set off
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to rebuild
rebuilding
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equipment
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Equipped with good communication skills
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try out
tried to do
tried on
tried taking some medicine
apply for
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for
talented
in
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was Su Shi gifted/talented in poetry
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to be
is assumed
assumption
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Assuming that you are interested in it
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in addition to
in addition
buying
additional
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In addition, it can improve your focus and concentration
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treatment
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treat the College Entrance Examination as
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finished
set
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to have you
spend the weekend in my home
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from then on
from
now on
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设法完成
打通电话
通过
用光
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get through
get over
get down to
getting away with
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satisfied
satisfying
satisfaction
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80% of the students were
quite satisfied with it
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varieties
varying
various
are
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various/a variety of/varieties of
where you can have fun
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how you react to it
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It's my great honour to be here
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looks nice
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And it's true
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feel greatly honoured
The topic of my speech
rather depressed and even lost confidence in myself
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not only help me feel relaxed, but also make
me more determined
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制 作 者:状元桥
适用对象:高中学生
制作软件:Powerpoint2010、
Photoshop cs3
运行环境:WindowsXP以上操作系统
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Good morning! My name is Sarah Williams.[1]It's an honour to be here and to share with<1> you the story of [2]how music has had an impact on<2> my life.
[1]It's an honour to do sth做某事很荣幸。
[2]how引导的宾语从句,作介词of的宾语。
1. Have you ever faced a time [3]when things looked dark and you had no hope at all?Two years ago, [4]I was told I had a serious disease<3> which was difficult to cure.My body ached<4> all the time and thus I thought I didn't have much<5> longer to live.I was very afraid and I felt so alone and discouraged<6>.Then one day, I had to go through<7>a two-hour medical treatment<8>.The doctor wanted me to relax, so he had me listen to some music, and one of the songs was “Happy”.2.[5]The song made me feel so much better that from
then on<9> I began to listen to music all the time.John A.Logan said, “Music is the medicine of the mind.” And it's true.Music helped me recover.
[3]when things looked dark…是when引导的定语从句,修饰a time,when在从句中作时间状语。
[4]此句中的宾语从句作told的直接宾语;which引导定语从句,修饰a serious disease。
[5]so…that…如此……以至于……,引导结果状语从句。
Music gave me happiness.When I listened to music,it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.Music gave me strength and brought me relief<10>.It was the rock [6] I leant <11>on to become strong and to get through<12> those hard times. Moreover<13>, music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction<14>.It became my best friend.It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being<15>.
[6]I leant on是定语从句,修饰先行词the rock。关系代词that/which 因在从句中作宾语,被省略了。
Of course,I hope none of you have to go through the same kind of suffering [7]that I did.At the same time,we all go through various<16> periods [8]when we feel sad or alone. 3.During those times, music can help you in the same way [9]that it helped me.I hope all of you will somehow<17> begin to treasure<18> music and make it a part of your life.
Thank you!
[7]that I did是that 引导的定语从句,修饰suffering,that在从句中作did的宾语。
[8]when引导定语从句,修饰periods,when在从句中作时间状语。
[9]that it helped me是定语从句,修饰先行词the same way。
※the way作先行词,关系词在定语从句中作状语,关系词用that,in which或省略。
<1>share…with…与……分享……
<2>have an impact on/upon 对……有影响
※have an effect on/upon 对……有影响
<3>disease n.(疾)病
<4>ache vi.&n.疼痛
<5>much“非常,更加,很”,修饰形容词比较级
<6>discouraged adj.灰心的,丧气的
<7>go through经历;经受;完成
<8>treatment n.治疗;对待;处理
※treat vt.医疗;医治
<9>from then on从那时起
<10>relief(焦虑、痛苦的)减轻或消除;(不快过后的)宽慰、轻松或解脱
<11>lean vt.(leant/leaned,leant/leaned)依靠;倾斜
<12>get through(设法)处理;完成
<13>moreover adv.而且;此外
<14>satisfaction n.满足;满意;欣慰
<15>being n.身心;存在;生物
<16>various adj.各种不同的;各种各样的
<17>somehow adv.以某种方式(或方法);不知怎么地
※anyhow adv.尽管如此
<18>treasure vt.珍视;珍爱;珍重
上午好!我叫莎拉·威廉姆斯。非常荣幸来到这里与大家分享音乐是如何影响了我的人生的。
1.____________________________________________两年前,我被告知得了一种很难治愈的严重疾病,全身一直疼痛,觉得自己活不了多久了。我非常害怕,感到十分孤独、沮丧。后来有一天,我需要去做两个小时的治疗。医生想让我放松,就让我听一些音乐,其中一首
歌是《快乐》。2._____________________________________ _________________________约翰·A.洛根曾说过:“音乐是心灵的良药。”的确如此,音乐助我康复。
音乐给我带来了快乐。当我听音乐的时候,音乐让我的心情放飞,像风中的风筝。音乐给予我力量,也让我得到解脱。音乐是岩石,让我倚靠,变得坚强,度过那些艰难的日子。此外,音乐还给予我希望和满足感。它成了我最好的朋友。它向我内心深处诉说鼓励的话语。
当然,我希望你们不要经历和我一样的痛苦。同时,我们都会经历悲伤或孤独的时光。3.___________________ _____________________________________我希望大家都能以某种方式开始珍惜音乐,让它成为你生活的一部分。
谢谢!
Ⅰ.文本整体理解:快速浏览文章
Match the main idea of each paragraph.
Para.1 A.Sara's personal experience.
Para.2 B.Close the speech.
Para.3 C.Introduce herself and the topic of the speech.
Para.4 D.Sara's advice to others.
Para.5 E.How music helps her during her difficult time.
答案 Paras.1~5 CAEDB
Ⅱ.文本细节理解:关注特色表达
A.拟人 B.引述 C.明喻 D.暗喻
1.It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times.( )
2.John A.Logan said, “Music is the medicine of the mind.”( )
3.It(Music) became my best friend.It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being.( )
4.When I listened to music, it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.( )
Ⅲ.课文语法填空
Two years ago, Sarah Williams thought she didn't have much longer to live because she was diagnosed 1._________ a serious disease which was difficult 2.__________(cure).She was not only afraid, but she also felt 3. ________(discourage). The doctor wanted her to relax and advised her to listen to some music.One of the songs, 4.____________ name was “Happy”, made her feel much 5. ____________(good). From then 6.____________, she began to listen to music all the time and music helped her recover.
Music gave her 7.____________(happy).When listening to music, she felt like her spirits flying like a kite in the wind.Music gave her 8.____________(strong) and brought her 9.____________(relieve).Music also gave her hope and a sense of 10. _____________(satisfy).
3.答案 discouraged
解析 考查词性转换。此处应用形容词作表语。discouraged 灰心的;沮丧的。
1.答案 with
解析 考查介词。be diagnosed with被诊断为……。
2.答案 to cure
解析 考查非谓语动词。be difficult to do sth做某事是困难的。
6.答案 on
解析 考查介词。from (then) on从(那)时起。
4.答案 whose
解析 考查引导词。此处引导非限制性定语从句,并在从句中作定语,故填whose。
5.答案 better
解析 考查比较等级。根据前面的much和语境可知此处用形容词的比较级。
9.答案 relief
解析 考查词性转换。bring sb relief使某人放松。
10.答案 satisfaction
解析 考查词性转换。a sense of satisfaction满足感。
7.答案 happiness
解析 考查词性转换。此处用happy的名词形式作宾语。
8.答案 strength
解析 考查词性转换。此处用strong的名词形式作宾语。strength力量。
(教材P55)people to set up equipment
安装设备的人
set sth up 安装好(设备或机器)
set up 建立;创办;设立;搭起
set off 出发,动身;引爆
set down 写下,记下
set aside 留出;把……置于一旁
set about (doing sth) 着手,开始(做某事)
set out (to do sth) 开始(做);出发;动身
(2023·全国乙)Once we found the place, it was stressful getting lights and cameras set up in the limited time.
一旦我们找到了地方,在有限的时间内安装好灯和相机就很有压力。
[融会练通]——选用set相关短语填空
(1)I try to ____________ some time each day to do some exercise.
(2)Emerson would always ____________ new ideas that occurred to him.
(3)(2023·3月天津)Mik's job was to carry my equipment up the mountain, __________ the tent, and carry everything back down after reaching the peak.
(4)We teammates will ________ at six o'clock tomorrow morning.
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(5)After the terrible earthquake, the people set out ______________(rebuild) their homes.
=After the terrible earthquake, the people set about ______________(rebuild) their homes.
equipment n.设备;装备
equip v.装备;配备
equip…with 用……来装备
be equipped with 配备着;具有
be well/poorly equipped 装备精良的/较差的
[提示] equipment为不可数名词,表示“一件设备”用a piece of equipment。
The boys equipped themselves with torches and rope, and set off.
男孩们带上火把和绳索后出发了。
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(6)This is a useful piece of _____________(equip) for the kitchen.
(7)He is equipped ________ much experience in teaching, so he is well respected by all his students.
[习作练笔]——句式转换
(8)Because I am equipped with good communication skills, I am capable of communicating with different people.
→___________________________________________, I am capable of communicating with different people.(过去分词短语作状语)
(教材P55)Who can try out as a performer?
谁能试演一个演员?
try out 参加……选拔(或试演);测试;试验
try on 试穿;试戴
try for 谋求;争取;报名;申请
try one's best (to do sth) 竭尽所能(做某事)
①The government is trying out a new way to solve the air pollution.
政府正在尝试新的方法解决大气污染。
②Now that you have nothing to lose, why don't you try out the music competition?
既然你没有什么损失,为什么不试试音乐比赛呢?
[融会练通]——用try的相关短语完成片段
The young man planned to (1)___________(参加……选拔) for the leading character in a film.He (2)______________ (努力做) some training to lose weight.But every time he (3)__________(试穿) his new clothes, he felt disappointed.So he (4)____________________________(试着吃些药) to lose weight.
[习作练笔]——同义替换
(5)With a school record like yours, I'm puzzled why you didn't try for(→_____________) a university scholarship.
(教材P55)What can those who think they do not have musical talent do?
那些认为自己没有音乐天赋的人能做什么?
talent n.天才;天资;天赋
①have a talent/gift for有……的天资/天赋
show a talent for表现出……才能
②talented adj.有天赋的;有才华的
be talented/gifted in在……方面有才能
(2021·6月浙江)Even though he often felt he would be discovered to be a no-talent, he moved forward.
尽管他经常觉得自己会被发现是一个没有天赋的人,但他还是勇往直前。
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(1)He had a gift/talent _______ music when he was just 6 years old, so we all consider him to be a ____________(talent) musician.
(2)We will never know if we are interested or talented ______ a subject if we don't try it.
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(3)苏轼不仅在诗歌方面有天赋,而且在绘画、书法等其他领域也作出了巨大贡献。
Not only ______________________________________, but he also made great contributions to other fields such as painting and calligraphy.
(教材P55)So can I assume that the aim of the festival is to raise money?
所以,我能认为这个节日的目的是筹集资金吗?
assume vt.以为;假设
①assume…to be… 假定/假设……为……
It is assumed that… 一般认为……
②assuming conj.假设……
③assumption n.假定;假设
make an assumption 认为;假定……
Assuming that the plan is practical, how will you achieve it?
假设这个计划是可行的,你将如何实现它呢?
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(1)We assumed him _________(be) the best writer of our time.
(2)It ______________(assume) that global warming and climate change could cause even more disasters in the future.
(3)We all made the ______________(assume) that the company would close because of his wrong decision.
[习作练笔]——补全句子
(4)如果您对此感兴趣,请发邮件到12345@sina.com。
________________________________________, please send an email to 12345@sina.com.
(教材P55)How else could you help in addition to what has already been mentioned?
除了提及的以外,你还能怎样帮忙呢?
in addition (to sb/sth) 除……以外(还)
①in addition=besides/furthermore/what's more
另外;而且
in addition to=besides/apart from/as well as
除……以外(还)
②additional adj.额外的;附加的
[辨析] in addition, in addition to
in addition
“另外”,相当于副词
in addition to
“除……以外(还)”,用作介词短语
In addition to work, there are many meaningful things to do in life.
除了工作,生活中还有很多有意义的事情要做。
[融会练通]——选词填空(in addition/in addition to)
(1)She can speak French and German _______________ English.
(2)The products are of high quality;________________, the price is low.
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(3)I went to town to pay a visit to my teacher in addition to __________(buy) something.
(4)Working out in the morning provides _____________ (addition) benefits beyond being physically fit.
[习作练笔]——补全句子
(5)(2024·1月浙江)此外,它可以提高你的注意力和集中度,使你更容易在课堂上保持专注。
______________________________________________, making it easier to stay engaged in class.
(教材P56)Then one day, I had to go through a two-hour medical treatment.
后来有一天,我需要去做两个小时的治疗。
treatment n.治疗;对待;处理
①under medical treatment 正在接受治疗
②treat vt.&vi.治疗;处理;对待;款待n.请客;款待
treat sb for 治疗某人的……
treat sb as 把某人当……看待
treat sb/oneself to 用……款待某人/自己
①He was treated for frostbite on his hands.
他因手部冻伤接受了治疗。
②Let's go out for dinner! It's my treat this time.咱们出去吃饭吧!这次我请客。
[融会练通]——单句语法填空
(1)Her doctor needs to wait for the results of some tests before starting _____________(treat).
(2)It was very kind of you to treat us ______ good meals and show us around.
[习作练笔]——补全句子
(3)如果你把高考看成正常考试,就没必要太过担心。
If you _________________________________________ one of your normal examinations, there is no need to worry too much about it.
(教材P56)The doctor wanted me to relax, so he had me listen to some music, and one of the songs was “Happy”.
医生想让我放松,就让我听一些音乐,其中一首歌是《快乐》。
句型:have sb do sth让某人做某事
①本句是一个由三个并列分句组成的复合句,连接词是so和and。
②使役动词have的用法:
have sb do sth 让某人做某事
have sb/sth doing sth 让某人/某物处于做某事的状态
won't/can't have sb/sth doing sth 禁止某人/某物做某事
have sth done 使某事被做
have sth to do 有某事要做
①When leaving home on business, she always has the children look after themselves.
离家出差时,她总是让孩子们自己照顾自己。
②He was very funny and had us laughing all the way.他非常滑稽,一路上逗得我们笑个不停。
[融会练通]——单句语法填空
(1)I must have my homework __________(finish) before going to bed.
(2)The boss had me _______(set) down what people present at the meeting said.
(3)I'm terribly sorry that I can't join in the discussion, for I have an important thing ___________(deal) with.
[习作练笔]——补全句子
(4)我写信是想表达我非常高兴能让你在我家度过这个周末。
I am writing to express my great pleasure ____________ ______________________________.
(教材P56)The song made me feel so much better that from then on I began to listen to music all the time.听着这首歌,我感觉好多了;从那以后我开始一直听音乐。
from (then) on 从(那时)起
from now on 从今以后
from that day on 从那天起
From that day on, the ending of the missing Amber Room remains a mystery.
从那天起,丢失的琥珀屋的结局仍是一个谜。
[习作练笔]——补全句子
(1)1990年他们相识,从此两人一直保持联系。
They got to know each other in 1990 and _____________ they remained in touch with each other.
(2)从今以后你过马路要更加小心。
Please be more careful when you cross the street _______ ________.
(教材P56)It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times.音乐是岩石,让我倚靠,变得坚强,度过那些艰难的日子。
get through (设法)处理;完成;设法联系上(尤指打通电话);通过;用完
[语义感知]——写出句中get through的含义
(1)I tried to get through the hard work and the pain was worth it in the end.____________
(2)I couldn't get through to him because his telephone was out of order now and then.____________
(3)Luckily, he got through the exam and his efforts paid off._______
(4)The little boy got through all his money in just one week and had to ask his mom for some more._______
get away with 被放过;从轻发落
get down to 开始认真处理/对待
get over 克服;从(疾病或不快中)恢复
get along well with 和……相处得好
[融会练通]——用get相关短语填空
(5)Graduation is a good time to thank those who help you _______________ the tough years.
(6)I do believe you will ____________ the present difficulties.
(7)There being no time left, we have to _____________ marking the papers right away.
(8)We can't have those ___________________ damaging the environment.
(教材P56)Moreover, music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction.
此外,音乐还给予我希望和满足感。
satisfaction n.满足;满意;欣慰
①to one's satisfaction=to the satisfaction of sb 令某人满意的是……
with satisfaction 满意地
②satisfy vt.满足;使满意
③satisfied adj.感到满意的
be/feel satisfied with 对……感到满意
④satisfying adj.令人满意的
He is a modest man and never feels satisfied with his present achievements.
他是一个谦虚的人,对自己现在的成就从不感到满足。
[融会练通]——单句语法填空
(1)From the _____________ smile on her face, we can see the performance was ______________.(satisfy)
(2)If the course fails to provide complete _____________ (satisfy) for you, you can easily exchange it for any other course that we offer.
[习作练笔]——补全句子
(3)根据调查,有80%的同学表示很满意,15%不喜欢,还有5%没有发表看法。
According to the survey, _________________________ _________________________, while 15% disliked it and 5% had no opinion.
(教材P56)At the same time, we all go through various periods when we feel sad or alone.
同时,我们都会经历悲伤或孤独的时光。
various adj.各种不同的;各种各样的
①variety n.[U]变化;多样性;[C]种类;品种
a variety of=varieties of 各种各样的
②vary vt.& vi.使不同;变化
vary from…to 从……到……不等
[提示] a variety of/varieties of 既可修饰可数名词,也可修饰不可数名词。该短语修饰可数名词作主语时,谓语动词用复数;修饰不可数名词作主语时,谓语动词用单数。
The library provides us students with a wide variety of books.
图书馆为我们学生提供了各种各样的书籍。
[融会练通]——单句语法填空
(1)In the course of culture development throughout history, kite, as an art, has presented a spectacular display in _____________(vary) of forms in the blue sky.
(2)I have different hobbies, ___________(vary) from playing the piano to playing basketball.
(3)Learning signals of respect in ___________(vary) cultural backgrounds can help you avoid misunderstandings.
(4)There _______(be) a variety of goods in the night fair.
[习作练笔]——词汇升级/句式升级
(5)There are all kinds of theme parks in the world.You can have fun there.
→There are ____________________________________ theme parks in the world, __________________________.(升级加黑词汇,升级为定语从句)
(教材P58) Encouraged by this first performance and the positive reaction of the audience, I have continued to play the piano and enjoy it more every day.在第一次演出和观众积极反应的鼓舞下,我继续弹钢琴,并更加享受每一天。
reaction n.反应;回应
①the reaction to 对……的回应/反应
②react v.回应;发生反应
react to 对……作出回应
react against 反对;反抗
There has been an angry reaction to the government's proposal to reduce unemployment benefit.
政府削减失业救济金的计划遭到了强烈的反对。
[融会练通]——单句语法填空
(1)Scientists have known that in the reaction ______ stress, an important role is played by a kind of chemical released by the body.
(2)She reacted ___________ the mindlessness and luxury of their lives.
[习作练笔]——补全句子
(3)重要的不是发生了什么,而是你如何应对它。
It's not what happens to you, but ___________________ that matters.
写作任务——演讲稿
本单元的写作任务是“写一篇以音乐为主题的演讲稿”,写作时要鲜明完整地发表自己的见解和主张。演讲稿属于应用文的一种。写作时首先要点明演讲的主题和目的,以便抓住听众的注意力;主体部分要有步骤地展开对主题的介绍;结尾总结时,要对主题进行概括、强调。注意演讲要打动人心,有说服力,能让听众接受自己的观点。
跟课文学写作范式
(一)课文范式提炼
(二)写作要点指津
1.注意演讲的对象,选用合适的称呼语。最常用的是Ladies and gentlemen,也可根据不同情况,选用Fellow students, Distinguished guests, Mr Chairman, Honorable Judges等。
2.开头既可以采用开门见山式点明主题,也可以以设问引出主题。
3.主体部分可以通过事例、细节描述等有步骤地展开对主题的介绍,注意语言应简洁明了,富有激情和感召力。
4.结尾应简明扼要,可以呼应开头进行总结,也可以照应主题发出呼吁。
跟课文学亮点表达
阅读文章第一自然段,习得以下素养
★学亮点表达
本段第三句中使用了It's an honour to be here and to share with you…表达委婉,态度谦和,语言地道。
[微写作1]——补全句子
我很荣幸有这个机会在这里演讲。
___________________________________ and to have this opportunity to give a speech.
阅读文章第二自然段,习得以下素养
★学亮点表达
1.本段第一、四句分别使用了系动词looked, felt,使表达更加生动形象,突出了作者的心情变化。
2.本段第三、七句都使用了all the time,充分说明了作者的身体病痛的程度以及音乐的巨大力量。
3.本段倒数第二句And it's true简单明了,作者对音乐的喜爱溢于言表。
[微写作2]——补全句子
(1)那个蛋糕看起来不错。
That cake ______________.
(2)我一直考虑着那件事。
I've kept on thinking about that ________________.
(3)“失败是成功之母。”的确如此。
“Failure is the mother of success.”_________________.
★学逻辑衔接
本段作者在叙述事情时,先用问句开头,引起读者注意,然后按照时间顺序展开。Two years ago, Then one day, from then on时间状语的使用,使叙述清晰、有序。
阅读文章第三、四自然段,习得以下素养
★学亮点表达
第三段作者连续使用了三个music gave me…排比句,层层递进,语气强烈,富有感染力,突出了音乐对作者的极大影响。
第四段使用了两个I hope…排比句,表达了作者对于读者的美好祝福和真诚建议。本段第三句中help you in the same way that it helped me从个人经历出发,增强了说服力。
[微写作3]——翻译语段
If you were a tree, then cast a shade;
If you are a clear spring, nourish the land;
If you are a tall grass, add a green.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________
如果你是一棵大树,就撒下一片阴凉;如果你是一泓清泉,就滋润一方土地;如果你是一棵小草,就增添一分绿意。
★学逻辑衔接
第三段使用了Moreover,起到了承接上文的作用,使语意衔接紧密,更具内涵。
第四段开头使用了Of course,语气委婉,过渡自然;使用时间状语连接句子,语意顺承,表达地道,语气温和,和人的情绪变化更加契合。
[微写作4]——补全句子
当然,我们必须强调,合作是非常重要的。
_______________, we must highlight that teamwork is very important.
第一段:打招呼,说明演讲的话题
1.Good morning, everybody! My name is Li Hua.It is my honour to speak here.大家早上好! 我是李华。在这里发言是我的荣幸。
2.Today, I'd like to talk about how to express love to our parents.
今天,我想谈谈如何向父母表达爱。
3.I want to share with you how the Internet has had an impact/influence on our life.我想和你分享互联网是如何影响我们的生活的。
4.I am going to talk about something that is vitally important to all of us.
我将要谈的事情对我们大家至关重要。
第二段:抛出问题,吸引听众,结合自身经历引出演讲话题
5.Have you ever gone through a time when things didn't go well and you almost lost heart?你是否经历过事情不顺利,你几乎失去信心的时候?
6.Without music, our life will be colorless and tasteless.没有音乐,我们的生活将会是没有色彩的,索然无味的。
7.It was music that gave me encouragement and happiness.是音乐给了我鼓励和快乐。
8.Music is playing an important role in our life, which is an essential part of our life.
音乐在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色,它是我们生活中不可或缺的一部分。
9.Music is to us what sunshine is to the earth, which brings colour to our life.音乐之于我们就像阳光之于地球,音乐给我们的生活带来色彩。
第三段:总结演讲内容,提出希望,表示感谢
10.I hope all of you will begin to treasure music and make it a part of your life.
我希望你们所有人都能开始重视音乐,让它成为你们生活的一部分。
11.Thank you for your attention.I hope you will find what I said helpful/useful/ practical.
感谢倾听。希望我所说的对您有帮助/有用/实用。
12.I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us.
我真诚希望您和我们共度美好时光。
【写作要求】
假定你是李华,你将参加主题为“The power of music”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿,要点如下:
1.音乐对你的影响;
2.你对音乐的感觉;
3.音乐的重要性。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Good morning, everyone!________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That's all!Thank you for listening.
【四步成文】
第二步:由词扩句
1.我感到很荣幸在此发表演讲。
I _________________________ to deliver a speech here.
2.我的演讲主题是“音乐的力量”。
_________________________ is “The power of music” .
3.当我考试失败时,我感到很沮丧,甚至对自己失去了信心。
I felt __________________________________________ when I failed in the exam.
4.音乐不仅能帮助我放松,而且让我更坚定。
Music can _____________________________________ ______________________.
第三步:句式升级
1.用非限制性定语从句合并升级第二步中的句1和句2
__________________________________________________________________________________________
2.用倒装句升级第二步中的句4
_____________________________________________________________________________________
I feel greatly honoured to deliver a speech here, whose topic is “The power of music”.
Not only can music help me feel relaxed, but it can also make me more determined.
第四步:连句成篇
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone! I am Li Hua.I feel greatly honoured to deliver a speech here, whose topic is “The power of music”.
Two years ago, I felt rather depressed and even lost confidence in myself when I failed in the exam.Those days, I listened to some of my favourite songs, which brought great happiness to me.Since then I have made up my mind to study harder.
Not only can music help me feel relaxed,but it can also make me more determined.Have you ever heard a piece of music and remembered an important time in your life?
That's all!Thank you for listening.
假定你是李华,是学校合唱团的一员。请你根据下面提示写一篇演讲稿,谈谈参加合唱团带给你的变化,内容包括:
1.你曾患抑郁症,音乐老师鼓励你加入合唱团;
2.参加该合唱团带给你的好处(快乐、自信、交朋友、开朗);
3.呼吁人们加入合唱团。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:合唱团choir
One possible version:
Hello! My name is Li Hua and I'm here to talk about the changes that joining the choir has made.A year ago,I was depressed and in a bad mood, and my music teacher encouraged me to join the choir.
Music can relieve sorrow.Personally, joining the choir is the best choice and singing is a pleasure.Singing with everyone not only made me feel happy and confident, but also enabled me to communicate with a lot of people and make a lot of friends, so that I could talk to them and relieve my depression.Gradually, the more I felt the charm of music, the more cheerful I became.
What do you think of the choir? I hope that you should join the choir.
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