2020.7浙江省高考卷—读后续写：拍熊遇险—不速之客 备课包 -2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

Continuation writing 不速之客/险象环生 “Uninvited Guest”/ Incessant Occurrences Accuracy of vocabulary： Appropriateness of plot 北极熊优雅地吃面包 携妻爬树，俯视大熊 手持尖刀，人熊大战 面包诱熊，大熊不为所动 扔大鱼大肉，扔鸡蛋，铁锅，鞋子转移注意力。 将熊赶紧特制的笼子，然后放生 点燃火把，驱赶大熊，大熊不怕，近身肉搏 撒下大网困住大熊 麻醉剂，麻醉枪 Layout & structure of writing 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 1. One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”—the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. 2. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears—like all wild animals—should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. 3. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. 4. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells (散弹猎枪) into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though—he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子). 5. I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter(相遇), I took some pictures of the bear. 6. Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes. but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar(吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.______________  At that very moment, the helicopter arrived!___________________ Paragraph 1： A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. ① _________________________________________________________________ ② _________________________________________________________________ ③ _________________________________________________________________ ④ _________________________________________________________________ ⑤ __________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 1： A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. ① _________________________________________________________________ ② _________________________________________________________________ ③ _________________________________________________________________ ④ _________________________________________________________________ ⑤ __________________________________________________________________ 面包干完，继续拆“家”。（camp） 大熊归来，怒火中烧。 夫妻害怕，再生一计。 急中生智，扔出面包。 栅栏将塌，命悬一线。 Paragraph 2： At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. ① _________________________________________________________________ ② _________________________________________________________________ ③ _________________________________________________________________ ④ _________________________________________________________________ ⑤ __________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. ① _________________________________________________________________ ② _________________________________________________________________ ③ _________________________________________________________________ ④ _________________________________________________________________ ⑤ __________________________________________________________________ 珍贵照片，来之不易。 震耳欲聋，大熊怕怕。 吓退大熊，成功获救。 如释重负，感激涕零。 一切值得，富贵（照片）险中求。 Paragraph 1： A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. ① _________________________________________________________________ ② _________________________________________________________________ ③ _________________________________________________________________ ④ _________________________________________________________________ ⑤ __________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 1： A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. ① _________________________________________________________________ ② _________________________________________________________________ ③ _________________________________________________________________ ④ _________________________________________________________________ ⑤ __________________________________________________________________ Before long however, the starving bear finished eating and continued to tear down the fence again. The surge of rage dominated the furry creature with its roaring piercing the silence around. Panicked and helpless, I threw my arms around Elli with racing heart. Suddenly, the garlic bread caught my eyeballs. Without hesitation, I grabbed the bread and threw it faraway. 面包干完，继续拆“家”。（camp） 大熊归来，怒火中烧。 夫妻害怕，再生一计。 急中生智，扔出面包。 栅栏将塌，命悬一线。 The irritated bear gave another fierce blow to the fence which was about to fall down! Paragraph 2： At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. ① _________________________________________________________________ ② _________________________________________________________________ ③ _________________________________________________________________ ④ _________________________________________________________________ ⑤ __________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. ① _________________________________________________________________ ② _________________________________________________________________ ③ _________________________________________________________________ ④ _________________________________________________________________ ⑤ __________________________________________________________________ I gazed at the precious photographs in our camera, lost in thought. It hovered over the camp, making a deafening noise all around us which scared the bear off. As we were lifted into the air, we saw the clumsy bear heading in the direction of the lake. Safe and sound, Elli and I breathed a sigh of relief, extending our sincere appreciation to the rescuers. 珍贵照片，来之不易。 震耳欲聋，大熊怕怕。 吓退大熊，成功获救。 如释重负，感激涕零。 一切值得，富贵（照片）险中求。 Though risking our lives, I thought it’s all worth it. This unforgettable exploration would be engraved in mind. Lavf58.29.100 Bilibili VXCode Swarm Transcoder v0.7.6 $$ ____________________/____________________ 不速之客，险象环生 Name：____________ 1. Tackle the new vocabulary 2. Underline 5 key words at a minimum（文本伏笔＋续写铺垫） 3. Make it clear about relationships of the main characters 4. Analyse the 2 given sentences 5. Chinese version 6. English version Sample A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. 1. 怒火中烧，大熊的咆哮打破了周围的寂静。（无灵主语+with复合结构） _____________________ the furry c__________ with its r_______ p________ the s_____ around. 2. 惊恐又无助，我用双臂抱住了埃莉，心跳加速。突然，我看到了大蒜面包。（adj.作状语） P_______ and h______, I ______ ____ ___ ____ Elli with r_____ heart. Suddenly, the garlic bread c________ my e__________. 3. 我毫不犹豫地抓起面包扔到很远的地方（短语出彩） Without h__________, I g__________ the bread and t_________ it faraway. 4. 然而没过多久，饥饿的大熊就吃完了，又继续推栅栏。（短语出彩） B____ l_____ however, the s_____ bear finished eating and continued to t____ _____ the fence again. 5. 恼怒的大熊又狠狠地砸了一下栅栏，眼看快要倒下来!（短语出彩） The i_____ bear gave another f______ b_____ to the fence which ___ ___ ____ fall down! At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. 1. 直升机在营地上空盘旋，发出震耳欲聋的声音，把熊吓退了。（定语从句） It h_______ o____ the camp, making a d_______ noise all around us _____________________. 2. 当我们升到空中时，我们看到那只笨拙的大熊朝湖的方向走去了。（时间状从） As we were l______ into the air, we saw the c_______ bear a________ in the d________ of the lake. 3. 安然无恙，我和埃利松了一口气，向救援人员致以诚挚的感谢。（adj.作状+非谓ing） S_____ ____ ______, Elli and I b______ _____ ____ ____ ____, e_______ our s______ a________ to the r__________. 4. 我凝视着相机里珍贵的照片，陷入了沉思（非谓语ed作状） I g____ ___ the p_______ p_______ in our camera, l_____ ____ _______. 5. 虽然冒着生命危险，但我觉得一切都值得。这次难忘的探险一定会刻骨铭心。（让步状语） Though r_______ our l_____, I thought it’s all _______ it. This u_________ e__________ would be d_______ e__________ in mind. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ ____________________/____________________ 不速之客，险象环生 Name：____________ 1. Tackle the new vocabulary 2. Underline 5 key words at a minimum（文本伏笔＋续写铺垫） 3. Make it clear about relationships of the main characters 4. Analyse the 2 given sentences 5. Chinese version 6. English version Sample A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. 1. 怒火中烧，大熊的咆哮打破了周围的寂静。（无灵主语+with 复合结构） The surge of rage dominated the furry creature with its roaring piercing the silence around. 2. 惊恐又无助，我用双臂抱住了埃莉，心跳加速。突然，我看到了大蒜面包。（adj.作状语） Panicked and helpless, I threw my arms around Elli with racing heart. Suddenly, the garlic bread caught my eyeballs. 3. 我毫不犹豫地抓起面包扔到很远的地方（短语出彩） Without hesitation, I grabbed the bread and threw it faraway. 4. 然而没过多久，饥饿的大熊就吃完了，又继续推栅栏。（短语出彩） Before long however, the starving bear finished eating and continued to tear down the fence again. 5. 恼怒的大熊又狠狠地砸了一下栅栏，眼看快要倒下来!（短语出彩） The irritated bear gave another fierce blow to the fence which was about to fall down! At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. 1. 直升机在营地上空盘旋，发出震耳欲聋的声音，把熊吓退了。（定语从句） It hovered over the camp, making a deafening noise all around us which scared the bear off. 2. 当我们升到空中时，我们看到那只笨拙的大熊朝湖的方向走去了。（时间状从） As we were lifted into the air, we saw the clumsy bear approaching in the direction of the lake. 3. 安然无恙，我和埃利松了一口气，向救援人员致以诚挚的感谢。（adj.作状+非谓ing） Safe and sound, Elli and I breathed a sigh of relief, extending our sincere appreciation to the rescuers. 4. 我凝视着相机里珍贵的照片，陷入了沉思（非谓语ed作状） I gazed at the precious photographs in our camera, lost in thought. 5. 虽然冒着生命危险，但我觉得一切都值得。这次难忘的探险一定会刻骨铭心。（让步状语） Though risking our lives, I thought it’s all worth it. This unforgettable exploration would be definitely engraved in mind. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 读后续写练习------旅行冒险类 Name:______ 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”—the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears—like all wild animals—should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though—he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子). I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter(相遇), I took some pictures of the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes. but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar(吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. Main characters When/where General idea Conflict/problem Theme 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 至少对文章中5个关键词语进行划线； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp._________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.__________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ 作文量化自评项目：（三出彩+首尾段） 1. 书写： 饱满圆润 倾斜度一致 大小一致 间距适当 紧贴横线 零补丁 2. 语法句式： 定从 状从 主从 宾从 表从 同从 无灵主语 非谓语动词 with复合结构（独立主格） 强调句 倒装句 虚拟语气 3. 语言运用： 环境描写 行为描写 心理描写 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$