Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry. Period6 Section B 写作学案2024-2025学年英语人教版九年级全一册

姓名： 班级： Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry. Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry. Period6 Section B 写作 【Learning Objectives】 1. To think of and talk about some experiences that made you feel very happy or sad; 2. To know the structure of narration; 3. To learn how to write a narrative composition similar to the one in 2b. 【In class】 创作本单元主题作文。 学会描述一件事情经历的几个方面。 话题分析： 本单元的话题是“Emotions and feelings(情感与情绪)”，要求能根据文字提示或实际情况，简单描述某事物对人们的生活及情感所产生的影响。写作首先要把此事物介绍清楚，然后描述这件事对你情感或情绪的影响；最后也可得出结论，总结经验或表达自己的观点。 Sample writing 初中三年的校园生活精彩纷呈, 总有一些经历是令你难以忘怀的。学校英语报 English Learning 正在以 “My Unforgettable Experience” 为主题向应届毕业生征文。请写一篇80—100词的英语短文，叙述你的一次难忘的经历，并谈谈你在其中的感悟和收获。 Step 1---审 内容：谈论初中三年难忘的事情                    文体：记叙文(narration) 人称：以第一人称和第三人称(first/third person)为主  时态：以一般过去时(simple past tense)为主 逻辑顺序：事情的发展顺序 Step 2---列 What happened? When did it happen? Where did it happen? How did it make you feel? Why? What did you learn from the experience? Step 3 ---构 介绍经历-表达感受-经历对自己的影响 Writing outline My Unforgettable Experience： 开篇点题，交代过去某个难忘的经历。I will never forget the days when I… 然后具体描述事情发生的时间、地点、人物、经过、结果、感受等等。It was a Monday morning. On my way to school… I felt upset. I was worried about… 总结观点，谈论收获。I think I can succeed if I try my best to do everything....... Step 4 ---连 Step 5 ---添 添连词:记叙难忘经历发生的起因、经过及结果时，可以使用表示时间的词语from then on和two days before / on the day he left with his family/ two days later...来连接上下文，这样文章的脉络会更清晰。 添佳句:No one is perfect and everyone makes mistakes. (人无完人,每个人都会犯错) Who has experienced much, who knows much. (谁经历得多，谁知道得多) The best way to escape your problem is to solve it.(逃避你的问题最好的方法就是解决它。) possible versions: 1.My Unforgettable Experience My unforgettable experience was arguing with my best friend Li Hua. One Saturday last term, Li Hua and I were studying together at his home. We had different opinions about a math problem. The little thing caused an argument between us. From then on, we didn’t talk to each other. I knew that it was my fault, but I refused to say sorry to him because I didn’t want to lose face. I didn’t realize we wouldn’t see each other anymore until I heard that Li Hua would move to another city with his parents. Two days before he left with his family, I said sorry to Li Hua. We became friends again. This made me feel a sense of relief. No one is perfect. Everyone makes mistakes. We shouldn’t be afraid of making mistakes. When we realize our mistakes, we should correct them at once. What an unforgettable thing it is in my life! 2.My Unforgettable Experience After school this afternoon, on my way home I met two Americans who lost their way. They forgot the way to the hotel where they stayed. As I knew where the hotel was, I decided to take them there. On the road, we talked a lot. I told them about the great changes in the city. They told me something about the American youth as well. When they arrived, they thanked me a lot. That made me very happy, because I not only helped two foreigners, but also realized the importance of learning a foreign language well. I think we should try our best to help each other. Step 6 ---查 Content and frame: Rich content and complete frame(内容丰富结构完整)）Clean and neat （干净整洁） Correct grammar: Correct tense (时态）Spelling words （单词拼写）Punctuation（标点符号） 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$