Unit 12 Section B 3a～3b Writing 课件 2024-2025学年人教版英语九年级全册

Unit12 Life is full of the unexpected Section B 3a~3b Writing 学习目标 1.知识目标:复习本单元重点单词记词汇 2.能力目标:了解和掌握过去完成时及结构并能熟练使用。 3.情感目标:学会运用过去时态和过去完成时 描述自己或他人的经历。同时培养学生形成 正确的人生观。 Revison Mary had a terrible morning yesterday. She _.When she_, her brother_ in the shower. By the time she _,the bus _. So she had to_. Oh ,dear. When she_, she realized she_. overslept got up had already gotten got outside had already left run all the way got to school had left her backpack at home Let's retell Mary's story When Mary _(get )home, she _(realize) she _(leave) her keys in the backpack. By the time she_ (get) back to school, the bell _(ring) By the time she _(walk) into class, the teacher _ (start) teaching already. got realized had left got had rung walked had started Leading in Tell your partner about something that happened to you recently. And tell him / her your feelings about the things. 3a Can you remember a lucky or an unlucky day ? What happened? Make some notes about what you remember. What was the date? What happened first? Was this lucky or unlucky?Why? What happened next? How did the day end? How did you feel about this day? June 7th,2022 I woke up late. Unlucky. didn't eat breakfast; missed the bus;walked to school; left homework at home; failed the exam ran into an old man What an unlucky day it was! 生活当中总是充满意外,有各种形形色色的经历,有倒霉的、开心、尴尬的、幸运的、难过的......,请你根据下面提示以“An Unlucky Day”为题写一篇短文,描述自己的经历,并谈谈感受。 1.2022年6月7号早晨起来的时候意识到上学要迟到,空肚子跑去车站; 2.赶到车站前,班车已经开走了,因此走路去上学; 3.到学校后,发现把作业落在家里了; 4.英语课发卷子发现考试不及格,很沮丧; 5.回家路上撞到一个老人,所幸伤得不严重。 参考词汇: woke up ; rushed to ; left; failed the exam; ran into Writing practice 记叙文 第一人称和第三人称 一般过去时、过去完成时 Step 1 认真审题,确定体裁,时态和人称。 体裁: 时态: 人称: 审 Step 2. 抓住要点,单词,短语 ,列好提纲。 My unlucky day What an unlucky day it was! The life is full of the unexpected. I still remember the unlucky day I have experienced.. got up late; rushed to the bus stop; walked to school; left the homework at home; failed the exam; ran into an old man... 文章段 落结构 结尾: 表达感受 正文: 详细经历 引出话题 开头: 抓 列提纲 写句子 开篇点题 The life is full of the unexpected. I still remember the unlucky day I have experienced ... 阐 述 经 历 事 件 1 1. overslept ; breakfast; rushed to ; left; walk; _ _ (意识到睡过头,不想迟到,空肚子跑去车站)。 _ (赶到车站前,班车已经开走了,因此走路去上学) Step 3. 扩写句子 I realized I had overslept. I didn't want to be late for school. I rushed to the bus stop. without eating breakfast. By the time I got there,the bus had already left. I had to walk to school. 扩 列提纲 写句子 阐 述 经 历 事 件 2 2. homework; fail the chinese exam; upset; _ (到学校后,发现把作业落在家里了) _ _ (英语课发卷子发现考试不及格,很沮丧;) 事 件 3 3. run into an old man ; wasn't hurt badly _ _ (回家路上撞到一个老人) 总结 感慨 What an unlucky day it was! ! After I got to school,I realized I had left my homework at home. I got my English exam report ; I found I had failed the exam. That made me upset. I ran into an old man on my way home. He wasn't hurt badly. Step 4. 使用恰当的连词把句子连成一篇文章。 在连句成篇时, 前后句之间有因果关系,可能用because 或so 来连接。 此外,在阐述经历时,本文使用了表示时间的表达(如when I woke up that morning…, Later that day…, After that…,和 That night…)将几件事情串联起来,这样做使得上下文之间联系更紧密,文章的脉络更清晰。 连 I will always remember the date… This was the luckiest/unluckiest day of my life… When I woke up that morning… Later that day,… I couldn’t believe… Then/After that,… Finally,… I think… What a lucky/ an unlucky day! Useful Expressions in 3b Step5. 通读检查,找出语法,拼写等细节方面的错误, 并进行修改。(重点关注过去完成时的句子结构) When I get up,I realized that I had overslept. got By the time I got to the bus stop, the bus have left. had Example 1: Example 2: 改 Step 6. 把修改后的文章抄到作业本或答题卡上, 尽量做到卷面整洁,书写清楚,字体优美。 抄 Life is full of the unexpected. I still remember the unlucky day I experienced. It happened on June 7th,2022. When I woke up that morning, I realized I had overslept. I didn't want to be late for school, so I rushed out without breakfast. By the time I got to the bus stop, the bus had already left. I had to walk to school. After getting into the classroom, I found I had left my homework at home. Then,when I got my English exam report, I found that I had failed the exam,that made me upset. I was sad the whole day. Finally, I ran into an old man on my way home after school. Luckily, he was not hurt badly. What an unlucky day! 精美范文 Summary Good or bad,hard to say! 请你根据下面的内容提示,用英语写一篇日记,记述你倒霉的一天。 内容提示:昨晚因为.......早晨起床迟了 起床后发现...... 匆忙赶到车站时,公交车刚走 到学校时老师已经开始上课了 坐下后发现把......落在家了 吃晚饭时又发现忘记带...... 注意:1. 词数:70词左右; 2. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中应使用不少于三处过去完成时。 Homework Thank you! Lavf57.62.100 vid:v0d00fg10000c7n5u73c77ufconntk5g $$