专题04 书面表达20篇(深圳名校期中真题)-2024-2025学年八年级英语上学期期中复习查缺补漏冲刺满分（牛津深圳版）

期中复习之书面表达20篇 (深圳名校期中真题) 1．（23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）科学技术日新月异，新发明给人们的生活带来了很多便利。假如你家有一台智能家用电器——扫地机器人，你的外国朋友对此很感兴趣，请你用英语写一篇短文，向朋友介绍你的机器人。短文需要包括以下提示内容： 1. 外形：圆形的，底部有三个轮子； 2. 特点：自动清洁地板；使用电能，环保；可用手机控制； 3. 评价：……（请补充两点）。 注意： 1. 词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 参考词汇：smart appliance 智能家用电器；robot cleaner 扫地机器人 Many inventions have changed people’s life. My robot cleaner is one of them. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Many inventions have changed people’s life. My robot cleaner is one of them. It’s a round smart appliance, just like a big cake with three wheels at the bottom of it so that it can move freely. It’s as smart as a human being because it can clean the floor itself in a house. What’s more, it works with electricity, so it is better for the environment. Above all, it’s more convenient for us to use it because we can control it by using our mobile phones. In my opinion, the robot cleaner is a great invention and our good friend. It saves time and helps us live a better life. Why not have a try and buy one for yourself? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意要写出两点关于扫地机机器人的评价，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍扫地机器人的外形； 第二步，介绍扫地机器人的特点； 第三步，说说自己对于扫地机器人的评价。 [亮点词汇] ①what’s more而且 ②above all最重要的是 ③in my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] ①Above all, it’s more convenient for us to use it because we can control it by using our mobile phones.（because引导的原因状语从句） 2．（23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）校园是我们学习、成长的重要环境。请以“创建文明校园”为题，写一篇演讲稿。 要点提示： 1. 目的 给学生提供一个更好的学习环境 2. 不文明现象 1）乱丢垃圾 2）说脏话 3）…… 3. 如何创建 1）爱护环境 2）待人有礼 3）…… 4. 呼吁（愿望） …… 要求： 1. 语句通顺连贯，包含所有要点，适当发挥，意义连贯； 2. 词数：80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：文明的 civilized；校园 campus；环境 environment； 不文明的 uncivilized；垃圾 rubbish；说脏话 speak rudely Let’s build a civilized campus! Dear teachers and fellow students, Today I’d like to talk about an important topic—building a civilized campus. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】例文 Let’s build a civilized campus! Dear teachers and fellow students, Today I’d like to talk about an important topic—building a civilized campus. As we all know, school is our second home. It’s our duty to build a civilized campus so that we can have a better learning environment. Some bad habits and uncivilized phenomena do exist in our school. For example, some students often throw rubbish everywhere or spit in public. Some students often speak rudely. Some don’t turn off the tap after washing hands. What should we do? First of all, we ought to protect the environment. We are supposed to use both sides of paper. Don’t waste water or spit in public. We shouldn’t pick flowers or step on grass. Second, we should be polite to others and behave ourselves. We should respect our teachers and help our classmates in need. Finally, we should obey the school rules, such as wearing school uniforms, keeping our classrooms tidy, and so on. Let’s join hands together to build a civilized and harmonious campus. As long as everybody makes a contribution, we can make it. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括表格所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，开门见山：介绍演讲主题； 第二步，陈述创建文明校园的目的； 第三步，列举校园存在的不文明现象； 第四步，就创建文明校园提供几点建议； 第五步，呼吁，表达愿望。 ［亮点词汇］ ①be polite to对……有礼貌 ②be supposed to do sth.应该做某事 ［高分句型］ ①As long as everybody makes a contribution, we can make it. (as long as引导条件状语从句) ②It’s our duty to build a civilized campus so that we can have a better learning environment. (it作形式主语、so that引导目的状语从句) 3．（23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）发明给我们的生活带来了诸多方便，使我们的生活更加的丰富多彩。请根据表格提示，以“My favorite invention — the mobile phone”为题用英语写一篇短文，对手机的发明做简单介绍并说明你喜爱它的理由，同时呼吁大家合理使用手机，不要做低头族(phubbers). 时间 1973 国家 美国 发明者 Martin Cooper 用途 打电话，聊天，查资料…… 对英语学习的帮助 查生词…… 呼吁 合理使用，不带进校园, 公共场合不要做低头族 写作要求： 1. 文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可作适当发挥； 2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书面规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 字数要求80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。参考词汇：phubber 低头族 My favorite invention — the mobile phone Many inventions have made our daily life more convenient and more colorful. Of all the inventions, the mobile phone is my favorite. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My favorite invention — the mobile phone Many inventions have made our daily life more convenient and more colorful. Of all the inventions, the mobile phone is my favorite. Mobile phones are one of the most useful inventions. It was invented by an American called Martin Cooper in 1973. I should say that the mobile phones have really changed our lives. First, it’s more convenient to communicate with others by using the mobile phones. Second, people are used to taking photos with mobile phones instead of cameras. And we can even go shopping, listen to music and watch movies on the phone. Third, we can easily learn something useful by surfing online. In this way, it helps us study. I often look up new words in it. In my opinion, we teenagers should be allowed to use mobile phones, but not on weekdays. We shouldn’t take them into campus. And it’s necessary to use them in the right way with the help of our teachers and parents. It is more important that we do not become phubbers in public places. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己认为最喜欢的发明是什么以及这个发明的简单介绍，包括发明时间，发明者以及国家等； 第二步，具体介绍这项发明的用途及自己对这项发明的使用情况； 第三步，最后呼吁学生合理使用手机，呼吁人们不做低头族。 [亮点词汇] ① communicate with与……交流 ② be used to doing sth习惯于做某事 ③ be allowed to do sth被允许做某事 [高分句型] ① Mobile phones are one of the most useful inventions.（“one of the+最高级+复数名词”的结构） ② I should say that the mobile phones have really changed our lives.（that引导的宾语从句） 4．（23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）你的发明“飞行单车”在学校科技节中获奖，被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展览。请用英语介绍你的发明，内容包括以下要点： 外观：两个轮子、两只翅膀 用途：行驶于地面和空中，可拍照、能通话 优点：速度快，使用太阳能，环保 意义：请补充1点 参考词汇：太阳能 solar power    交通堵塞 traffic jam    设计 design v. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数） 不得透露真实学校、姓名等任何个人信息。 My invention is a flying bike. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My invention is a flying bike. The flying bike has two wheels and a pair of wings. You can either ride the bike on the ground or fly it in the air. Besides, you can not only take pictures of the beautiful scenery, but also communicate with others when using the flying bike. The flying bike has its own advantages. Firstly, its high speed can help you reach the destination efficiently. Secondly, the flying bike uses solar power as energy, which can reduce the air pollution. Therefore, it is environmentally friendly to use the flying bike. What’s more, the flying bike will be made of a light material so that people can carry it conveniently. I believe it will be popular in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏已给出的关键信息，写短文介绍“飞行单车”这项发明。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍飞行单车外观及用途； 第二步，介绍飞行单车优点； 第三步，阐述这项发明的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且…… ②take pictures 照相 ③air pollution 空气污染 ④be made of 由……制成（能看出原材料） [高分句型] ①Secondly, the flying bike uses solar power as energy, which can reduce the air pollution.（which引导非限制性定语从句） ②Therefore, it is environmentally friendly to use the flying bike.（it固定句式） 5．（21-22八年级上·广东深圳·期中）科技创新是社会生产力发展的源泉。生活中你一定见过不少创新产品。你们学校的英语园地正在开展以“My favorite technological invention”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请写一篇短文投稿，介绍中国高铁以及你为什么喜爱它。 内容提示： 1.速度快，时速达250-350公里。从深圳到武汉只需4个多小时，节省时间； 2.舒适，平稳，沿途可以欣赏美丽的风景； 3.价格低，出行方便； 4.另外补充1-2点你对于高铁喜爱的理由。 参考词汇： technological invention 科技发明； high-speed train 高铁 要求： 1.词数80左右(文章开头已给出，不计入字数)； 2.要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贺，书写规范。 With the development of society, many great technological inventions appear around us. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： With the development of society, many great technological inventions appear around us. As for me, I like high-speed train best. In the past, it took us about 20 hours from Shenzhen to Wuhan. But now the speed of high-speed train is 250-350 per hour, so it only takes us about 4 hours to get to Wuhan. This saves us a lot of time. Moreover, it’s comfortable to take the high-speed train because it moves smoothly, and we can do some reading and watch movies without any problem. We can not only enjoy the view out of the windows but also have a relaxing time on the train. Many people choose to take the high-speed train because of the lower price than the plane, and it is very convenient. It’s also a green way to travel, which can save energy and do good to our environment. What a great creative invention! Technology plays an important role in our daily life. We benefit from them a lot and they are changing our lives greatly. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“我最喜欢的科技发明”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“速度、舒适度以及价格”等方面具体阐述； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①comfortable舒适的 ②not only…but also不但……而且…… ③plays an important role in 在……中扮演重要角色 [高分句型] ①It’s also a green way to travel, which can save energy and do good to our environment.（非限制性定语从句） ②What a great creative invention!（感叹句） 6．（21-22八年级上·广东深圳·期中）世界上各种各样的发明改变了我们的生活。随着1973年美国人Martin Cooper发明了第一部手机 (the mobile phone)，手机慢慢成为20世纪最重要的发明之一。手机给我们带来便利的同时，也带来了一些弊端。请根据提示的内容，以“The mobile phone and us”为题写一篇短文。字数：80—90。 内容要点： 简单介绍手机这个发明。 益处： 随时随地跟人沟通； 更快速地查阅资料以帮助我们更好的学习； 开阔我们的眼界。 弊端： 有些学生沉迷于玩手机游戏，玩微信 (Wechat) 聊天浪费时间，网上交友等； 影响身心健康和学习等。 你对这个发明的看法和建议： 1.这个发明对我们生活的影响； 2.我们应该如何使用手机。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The mobile phone and us Mobile phone is one of the greatest inventions in 20th century. The first mobile phone was invented by American Martin Cooper. It changes our daily life a lot. First, it makes us communicate with each other at anytime and anywhere. Second, we can look up the information faster so as to learn better. Third, it can broaden our horizons well. However, every coin has two sides. Some students are addicted to playing mobile games. What’s more, they spend too much time chatting on Wechat and making friends online. It is not only bad for our mental and body health but also learning. Mobile phone is very helpful, but we should use it in a right way. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完整作文的内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍手机这个发明； 第二步，介绍手机的益处和弊端； 第三步，发表自己对手机的看法和建议。 [亮点词汇] ①each other 相互 ②look up 查询 ③be addicted to 沉溺于 [高分句型] ① However, every coin has two sides.（谚语） ② It is not only bad for our mental and body health but also learning. （not only...but also句型） 7．（21-22八年级上·广东深圳·期中）假设你在一家科技公司工作，该公司即将推出一款针对中小学生的家教机器人。请你根据下面所给信息，用英文写一篇短文对这款机器人进行介绍，词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 名称 智能家教机器人(intelligent tutor robot) 对象 中小学生 外观 白色，像人一样的外形 功能 为学生批改作业并讲解作业里的难题； 为学生提供学习资料(learning materials)，帮助学生复习(review)； 头部的显示器可以播放在线课程； 可以当作闹钟(alarm)使用，提醒学生学习和休息的时间。 价格 $500 Intelligent tutor robot Let me make an introduction of the intelligent tutor robot we just developed. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Each intelligent tutor robot costs $500. You can visit our website for further information. 【答案】例文： Intelligent tutor robot Let me make an introduction of the intelligent tutor robot we just developed. We call it as Intelligent Tutor Robot and it is invented for students of primary and middle school. It is white with a humanoid appearance. It has a lot of functions. For example, it can correct homework for students and explain the difficulties in the homework. Also, it can provide students with learning materials to help them review. And the monitor on its head can play online courses. What’s more, it can be used as an alarm to remind students of their study and rest time. How interesting! Each intelligent tutor robot costs $500. You can visit our website for further information. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据开头提示，介绍智能家教机器人的对象、外观等信息； 第二步，介绍智能家教机器人的功能； 第三步，介绍智能家教机器人的价格，可登录网站查询更多信息。 [亮点词汇] ①a lot of许多 ②for example例如 ③what’s more另外 [高分句型] ①Also, it can provide students with learning materials to help them review.（不定式表目的） ②How interesting!（How引导的感叹句） 8．（21-22八年级上·广东深圳·期中）《中国汉字听写大会》的热播引起了人们对汉语书写的关注。假如你校将举办一次演讲比赛，请你以“传递书写文明，领略汉字之美”为主题写一篇演讲稿。内容必须包括： 1. 分析汉字书写存在的问题和原因：书写能力下降，键盘的使用； 2. 表达汉字的重要性：提高书写意识，感受汉字之美，传承中华文化； 3. 提出提高汉字书写能力的方法：端正书写态度，开展书写竞赛。 参考词汇：中国汉字Chinese characters；传递pass on；书写竞赛writing competition 注意： 1. 语言通顺，意思连续，条理清晰，书写规范，可适当发挥。 2. 词数80左右，开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Boys and girls, have you ever experienced this moment? You pick up a pen and start to write something down, but ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ By studying Chinese characters, a window to Chinese culture and history is open to you. 【答案】Possible version Boys and girls, have you ever experienced this moment? You pick up a pen and start to write something down, but you can’t remember what the characters look like. It seems that Chinese characters are in danger. Most people now write Chinese on keyboards. They now communicate with each other by e-mail or on QQ instead of writing letters. As a result, they forget what a Chinese character looks like. Chinese people must understand the importance of Chinese characters, and it’s our duty to pass on Chinese culture. What’s more, we can feel the beauty of them. When we do homework, we must try to write carefully. More writing competitions can be held to help us write correctly. By studying Chinese characters, a window to Chinese culture and history is open to you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，属于材料作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章开头、结尾以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题； 第二步，根据要点先分析汉字书写存在的问题和原因，再表达汉字的重要性，最后提出提高汉字书写能力的方法； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①in danger处于危险之中 ②communicate with each other互相交流 ③as a result结果，因此 [高分句型] ①You pick up a pen and start to write something down, but you can’t remember what the characters look like.（but连接两个并列分句，第二个并列分句中含有what引导的宾语从句） ②It seems that Chinese characters are in danger.（that引导的表语从句） ③Chinese people must understand the importance of Chinese characters, and it’s our duty to pass on Chinese culture.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语） 9．（20-21八年级上·广东深圳·期中） 假定你是李华，2020年罗湖区创客节将在你校举行。你作为学校创客社团的主要负责人，请你用英语向前来参观的外国学生介绍一下你校的人工智能教师机器人。 要点如下： （1）它看起来像狗，但是它有人的智力。 （2）它能教学生学习语文、英语、数学等功课；擅长编程和魔方；还能讲故事和跳舞。（发挥想象力，它还可以做什么，另外补充两条） （3）在它的帮助下，同学们对学习很感兴趣，并学到了更多的知识。（另外补充一条作用） 提示词：编程programming 魔方magic cube 知识knowledge 注意： （1）词数80左右； （2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）开头和结尾已为你写好。 Boys and girls, I’m Li Hua. 2020 Luohu Maker Faire is held in my school. I’m very honored to introduce our special AI robot teacher to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening! 【答案】例文 Boys and girls, I’m Li Hua. 2020 Luohu Maker Faire is held in my school. I’m very honored to introduce our special AI robot teacher to you. It looks like a cute dog, but it has human being’s intelligence. So students like it very much. It can do a lot of things for students. It can not only talk freely with students, but also teach them to learn Chinese, English, Maths and other subjects. It can even tell stories and dance with them. What’s more, it is good at programming and playing with magic cubes. When I make pronunciation mistakes, he will correct them for me. Surprisingly, it has a very special function. It knows whether I am happy or not. If I am sad, he will comfort me. With its help, students become interested in their study, so they can get more knowledge. The robot can help us know more about science and technology. That’s all. Thanks for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：文章为第一人称和第三人称，介绍人工智能教师机器人，要点介绍完整，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，自我介绍，引出主题； 第二步，具体介绍人工智能教师机器人的外貌及功能； 第三步，介绍人工智能教师机器人给同学们带来的好处； 第四步，感谢别人的倾听。 [亮点词汇] ① not only…but also不仅……而且 ② What’s more除此之外 ③ be good at擅长 ④ With its help在它的帮助下 ⑤ become interested in对……感兴趣 ⑥ know about了解 [高分句型] ①When I make pronunciation mistakes, he will correct them for me.（时间状语从句） ②It knows whether I am happy or not.（宾语从句） ③If I am sad, he will comfort me.（条件状语从句） 10．（22-23八年级上·广东深圳·期中）假设你是鹏城中学的李华，你校学生会最近在组织“关爱老人”的活动。你们计划在假期组织志愿者到社区帮助老年人学习如何使用智能手机和上网，请你代表学生会用英语给校英文报写一封倡议书。 要点： 1. 老人们遇到的困难； 2. 能提供的帮助和活动的意义； 3. 报名参与项目的方式：到办公室报名或发邮件报名。 要求： 1. 须包含以上所给要点，并可适当发挥； 2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 80词左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：数码产品（digital products），提高生活质量（raise their life quality），报名（sign up） Dear fellow students, On behalf of the Students’ Union, I am writing to call on everyone to take part in our summer programme named Care for the Aged. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Students’ Union 【答案】 Dear fellow students, On behalf of the Students’ Union, I am writing to call on everyone to take part in our summer programme named Care for the Aged. The modern society is developing rapidly, leaving aged people behind. They have little knowledge of the Internet and digital products. To help them enjoy the modern technological conveniences, in the coming summer holidays, we will organize volunteers to visit communities to teach them how to use smartphones and surf the Internet. It surely will raise their life quality and make a difference to the whole society. We need your help. Please sign up at the office of the Students’ Union or write an email to StudentsUnion@abc.com. Your participation will be highly appreciated. The Students’ Union 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”、“现在进行时”和“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中老人们遇到的困难、能提供的帮助和活动的意义和报名参与项目的方式的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，呼吁人们参与“关爱老人”的活动； 第二步，介绍老人们遇到的困难，阐述能提供的帮助和活动的意义； 第三步，介绍报名参与项目的方式：到办公室报名或发邮件报名。 [亮点词汇] ①have little knowledge of对……知之甚少 ②enjoy the modern technological conveniences享受现代科技的便利 ③raise their life quality提高他们的生活质量 ④make a difference to对……产生影响 [高分句型] ①The modern society is developing rapidly, leaving aged people behind.（现在分词表伴随） ②To help them enjoy the modern technological conveniences, in the coming summer holidays, we will organize volunteers to visit communities to teach them how to use smartphones and surf the Internet. （不定式表目的） ③Your participation will be highly appreciated.（被动语态） 11．（22-23八年级上·广东深圳·期中）假如你是李华，收到了笔友Josh 的电子邮件。请根据来信，给他回一封电子邮件。先说你的看法，再给出建议。 To: Lihua@help.com Subject: Ask for your help Dear Li Hua, I have some problems and I need your help. My parents are strict with me and they want to control everything I do! I am not allowed to go outside with my friends at night. And I can’t enjoy playing basketball. They ask me to spend all my spare time on my study instead. Also I feel lonely because they are busy going on business. What should I do? Yours, Josh 要求：1.词数80左右。回复信的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。2.回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Josh, Thanks for your e-mail. I have ever had the same experience. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Josh, Thanks for your e-mail. I have ever had the same experience. I even had a fight with my parents. But now, I understand them. We are growing up, but often, it’s hard for our parents to see this. To them, we are still children and they want to protect us. Sometimes, it’s hard for you to talk to your parents. Here’s an idea: Write your mother and father a letter. In the letter, tell your parents what you are thinking about. Then maybe they will understand you better. After your parents read the letter, try to talk to them. In your free time, you’d better do something you can to help your parents. For example, you can help your parents with some housework. What’s more, you can describe your friends to your parents and tell them more about you and your life. I hope this helps! I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中给Josh的建议的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，借用“简单介绍给Josh的建议”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容：对于Josh父母行为的看法和给Josh的建议； 第三步，书写结语，表达“希望建议有用的”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①grow up长大 ②talk to交流 ③think about考虑 [高分句型] Sometimes, it’s hard for you to talk to your parents.（“it’s+形容词+for sb. to do”句型） 12．（20-21八年级上·广东深圳·期中）发明创造给人类的生活带来了便利，如今科技更新迅速，各种新的发明更是层出不穷，比如数码产品、交通工具、生活用品等等。请以“My Favorite Invention”为题，描述你最喜欢的一种发明，并说明理由（至少2个）。 注意： 1. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，逻辑清晰； 2. 词数80左右，可适当拓展。 My Favorite Invention ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favorite Invention With the rapid development of the technology, many inventions have appeared. As a result, with the help of these inventions, our life has changed a lot. For example, television sets. TV is my “best friend”. Every time when I leave school and go back home, I will turn on the TV at once. I like the programme Outlook on CCTV 10 best. It’s an English programme and it helps me learn many English words and foreign culture. I also love the TV station called Phoenix. I can learn a lot form Phoenix. What’s more, I can know very well about what is going on at home and abroad. It’s hard to imagine life without TV. If there is no TV, we can’t enjoy the enjoyment with others and we won’t learn about what’s happening in the world. Thanks to TV, I have a more colourful life. So what’s your favourite invention? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于话题作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章标题以及写作要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍并描述自己最喜欢的一项发明； 第二步，举例说明你为什么喜欢这项发明，至少说明2个原因； 第三步，表达你对这项发明的看法并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①with the rapid development of the technology随着科技的迅猛发展 ②as a result结果 ③with the help of在……的帮助下 ④thanks to多亏了…… [高分句型] ①Every time when I leave school and go back home, I will turn on the TV at once.（when引导限制性定语从句） ②What’s more, I can know very well about what is going on at home and abroad.（what引导的宾语从句） ③It’s hard to imagine life without TV.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语） ④If there is no TV, we can’t enjoy the enjoyment with others and we won’t learn about what’s happening in the world.（if引导的条件状语从句，what引导的宾语从句） 13．（20-21八年级上·广东深圳·期中）发明创造改变我们的生活。你认为最重要的发明是什么？请根据以下提示写一篇文章，不少于80词。 1. What do you think is the most important invention in the world? 2. How does it change people’s life? 3. How does the invention help you? The Most Important Invention __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Most Important Invention In our daily life, there are many inventions around us. But I think the most important invention is the Internet. With the Internet, we can do many things. We can shop, get knowledge, listen to music and watch movies online. The Internet makes the world smaller. We can meet and talk with friends and relatives far away without spending a lot of money. We can also post our blogs online, so our friends can know what we are doing by visiting our web pages. The Internet makes our life more exciting and easier. I like it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：明确主题，根据提示内容可从三个角度进行介绍，即最重要的发明是什么，如何改变生活，如何帮助你，注意不同方面之间的衔接词使用，以使前后过渡自然，行文流畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直接指出自己认为最喜欢的发明是网络； 第二步，具体介绍网络如何改变人们的生活； 第三步，介绍网络对自己的帮助。 [亮点词汇] ①a lot of很多 ② listen to music听音乐 [亮点句型] ①We can also post our blogs online, so our friends can know what we are doing by visiting our web pages.（so引导的结果状语从句） ② But I think the most important invention is the Internet.（宾语从句） 14．（22-23八年级上·广东深圳·期中）科学技术日新月异，新发明给人们的生活带来了很多便利。假定你家就有一台智能家用电器 (smart appliance) — 扫地机器人 (robot cleaner)，请你根据以下表格提示，写一篇关于它的英语短文，给同学们介绍一下它。 扫地机器人 (robot cleaner) 外形 (What does it look like?) 圆形的，像个大蛋糕 有轮子，可自由移动 特点 (What is special about it?) 像人一样聪明，能自动清洁地板 可用手机控制，使用方便 你的看法 (Your opinion …) (自行补充一个推荐它的理由) 要求： 1.    80-100词 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2.    书写分2分； 3.    要点齐全，用词恰当，内容连贯，标点正确； 4.    文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文：      With the development of science, new inventions make our life more convenient. In my home, there is a smart appliance — a robot cleaner.     My robot cleaner’s name is Le Le. She is round like a big cake. She has four wheels, so she can move freely. She is very clever like a person. When somewhere is dirty, I say, “Come here, LeLe.” She moves right now and cleans the place which is dirty. Also, she can go back where she should be by herself. She can do many things. We can use the smart phone to operate her and it is easy and convenient. With her help, I have a lot of time to do more important things.    I like my robot cleaner very much. Do you want a robot cleaner like her? 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“自行补充一个推荐它的理由”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明新发明对我们的影响，引出自己有一个扫地机器人； 第二步，具体介绍扫地机器人的外形和特点； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①with the development of science随着科学的发展 ②right now立刻 ③by oneself独力地 ④with one’s help在某人的帮助下 [高分句型] ①She moves right now and cleans the place which is dirty. (which引导定语从句) ②she can go back where she should be by herself. (where引导宾语从句) 15．（22-23八年级上·广东深圳·期中）假如你们学校要开展一个科技节活动。你针对现在学生坐姿不正确、玩电脑、看电视时间过长等情况，发明了一个特殊的椅子。请根据以下提示给同学们介绍一下你的发明。 Name (名称) a special chair Material (材质) 看起来像普通椅子，由木材制成 Function (功能) （1）座位和靠背都有传感器。当学生没有坐直时，椅子会提醒他注意 （2）坐在椅子上超过1小时，椅子会发出噪音，迫使学生起来活动一下 Advantage (优点) （1）…… 词数：80词左右。 提示词：传感器：sensors  靠背：the back of the chair    坐直：sit up straight Dear classmates, I am so glad to introduce my invention to you.      __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening! 【答案】例文 Dear classmates, I am so glad to introduce my invention to you. As we all know, many great inventions have brought great changes to our life. I think we students can also invent something. Today I’m glad to be here to talk about what I’d like to invent a chair that’s good for students’ health. This kind of chair sits like an ordinary chair. It will be made of wood. There will be two sensors in it, one on the seat, and the other on the back of the chair. When the student doesn’t sit straight, the chair will remind him. If he sits on the chair for over one hour, it will make a noise. It won’t stop until the student stands up and leaves. It can help students develop good sitting posture. At the same time, it also reminds students not to sit for too long, but to exercise properly. Thanks for your listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”表中对于椅子名称，材质，功能和优点的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“发明改变生活”引出自己的发明； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“材质，功能和优点等”几个方面重点介绍所发明椅子的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达“对大家认真倾听介绍”的感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①introduce my invention to...向……介绍我的发明 ②be good for 对……有好处 ③be made of 由……制成 ④develop good sitting posture 养成良好的坐姿 [高分句型] ①There will be two sensors in it, one on the seat, and the other on the back of the chair.（There be句式） ②If he sits on the chair for over one hour, it will make a noise. （If引导的条件状语从句） 16．（22-23八年级上·广东深圳·期中）假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Peter一家刚来中国定居，最近他家想买车，想和你了解一下中国新能源汽车（new energy car）的情况，请你根据以下信息给他回信。 1）新能源汽车在中国销售的情况。 Year 2020 2021 2022（Jan.— Sept. ） Sales 1, 367 million 3, 521 million 4, 567 million 2）新能源汽车特征 外形：与传统汽车一样。 供能：有些用电，有些油电混合（可以用电，也可以用汽油）。 优点：至少说出两条。 3）你的看法。 Dear Peter, I’d like to tell you something about new energy car in China.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, I’d like to tell you something about the new energy car in China. The new energy car is becoming more and more popular in China. In 2020, the total number of sales of new energy cars was about 1,367 million. In 2021, about 3,521 million new energy cars were sold. In 2022, just from January to September, the number was about 4,567 million. The new energy car looks just like traditional cars. Some of them use electricity and some can run on either electricity or gasoline. The new energy car has many advantages. New energy cars don't pollute the environment. Besides, it can help people save a lot of money. I think a new energy car will take the place of the traditional car in the future. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中中国新能源汽车的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。承接信件的开头介绍新能源的销售情况以及新能源汽车的特征； 第二步，发表自己的看法； [亮点词汇] ①look like看起来像 ②either...or...要么……要么…… ③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ④take the place of 取代…… [高分句型] ①New energy car is becoming more and more popular in China.（比较级+and+比较级句型） ②I think new energy car will take the place of  the traditional car in the future.（think后是省略that的宾语从句） 17．（22-23八年级上·广东深圳·期中）当前，许多学生在课外沉溺于智能手机(smart phones)。针对这一现象，学校将组织开展一次“拒绝手机诱惑，健康学习生活”的征文活动。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇征文稿。 不利方面 1. 花大量时间玩游戏，上课睡觉，不按时完成作业。 2. 视力受损，不利健康。 建议 1. 远离智能手机，认真学习。 2. 多花时间与家人、朋友交流。 3. 你的建议 要求： 1. 字迹工整，书写规范，包含全部要点，适当发挥； 2. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 参考词汇： eyesight (视力)      disadvantage (不利) ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 With the development of the Internet, many students have smart phones. Some students often spend so much time in playing games with them that they feel very tired. Someone doesn’t finish their homework on time. Someone even sleeps in class. Besides, smart phones do harm to our health. Some students’ eyesight is becoming poorer and poorer. To avoid these disadvantages, I think we should make some changes. First, we should keep away from smart phones and work hard. Second, stay with our family or friends if we are free and talk with them about our daily life, feelings and so on. Third, we can take an active part in all kinds of activities, such as playing basketball, singing songs. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据表格中的提示信息介绍手机的不利之处以及健康生活的建议，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍手机的不利方面； 第三步，介绍为了避免沉迷手机而提出的一些建议。 [亮点词汇] ①with the development of随着……的发展 ②on time准时 ③do harm to危害 ④keep away from远离 ⑤take an active part in积极参加 [高分句型] ①Some students often spend so much time in playing games with them that they feel very tired. (so…that引导的结果状语从句) ②To avoid these disadvantages, I think we should make some changes. (动词不定式作目的状语) ③Second, stay with our family or friends if we are free and talk with them about our daily life, feelings and so on.(if引导的条件状语从句) 18．（22-23八年级上·广东深圳·期中）据悉，我国青少年的近视率居全球第一，70%的学生有视力方面的问题。为引起全社会的重视，教育部于2021年春季已将近视防控纳入中小学日常行为规范，从控制读写时间、控制电子产品的使用、坚持户外运动、保证睡眠时间等方面做了明确规定。近日你校将举行一次“Saving Our Eyesight”为主题的演讲活动。请你根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿，分析造成青少年近视的原因并提出保护视力的合理建议。 Reasons Suggestions 1. read in wrong positions: read in bed, 2. spend much time on screens 3. ... 1. sit straight 2. take a rest and do eye exercises 3. ... 要求： 1. 需包含提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 2. 语句通畅，意思连贯，语法正确； 3. 词数：80—100左右（演讲稿的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。 Hello, boys and girls. As the saying goes, “Eyes are the window to the soul.” However, 70% of us have poor eyesight. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ These are my opinions! Do you agree with me? 【答案】例文 Hello, boys and girls. As the saying goes, “Eyes are the window to the soul.” However, 70% of us have poor eyesight. What has caused this problem? The main reason is the bad habits of using eyes. For example, many of us read in wrong positions, such as reading in bed or keeping our eyes too close to the book. Besides, taking less exercise can also cause poor eyesight. What’s more, some of us spend too much time playing computer games or watching TV. It’s bad for our eyes. So how can we protect our eyes? Here is some advice on how to protect our eyes. First, we should be cautious about the use of our eyes. We should not keep our eyes working for a long time. While reading, we should sit straight and keep the book about a foot away from us. After reading for an hour or two, we had better have a rest by looking at the plants in the distance. Second, using less electronic products is a good way to protect our eyes. Besides, we should see green plants as often as possible. Finally, remember to do eye-protecting exercises or do more outdoor sports, which will help us keep good eyesight. These are my opinions! Do you agree with me? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，包括视力下降的“原因”和保护视力的“建议”，注意适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接所给开头，阐述青少年近视的原因； 第二步，分点提出保护视力的建议，至少写三点。 [亮点词汇] ①have poor eyesight视力不好 ②such as例如 ③be cautious about对……谨慎小心 ④as often as possible尽可能经常地 [高分句型] ①Besides, taking less exercise can also cause poor eyesight.（动名词作主语） ②Finally, remember to do eye-protecting exercises or do more outdoor sports, which will help us keep good eyesight.（定语从句） 19．（21-22八年级上·广东深圳·期中）上周五，你们学校举办了一年一度的科技节，全校学生都参与其中。假设你是李华，请根据以下表格内容给校报投稿，介绍你校科技节的情况，并谈谈自己的感受。 活动内容 活动1：三分之二的学生看电影 观看一部有关发明家爱迪生的电影 活动2：其余学生参加机器人比赛 外观：一些机器人像汽车一样大，一些像杯子一样小。 功能：①回答学生的问题，减少电脑和手机的使用。 ②……（自行补充一点） 感受 有意义。 ……（自行补充一点） 写作要求： 1. 包含所有提示信息； 2. 80 词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名。 参考词汇：机器人 robot  比赛competition   爱迪生Edison   知识knowledge The Science Festival in Our School Last Friday, our school held a science festival. All the students had a really good time in it. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I can’t wait to see the science festival next year. 【答案】例文 The Science Festival in Our School Last Friday, our school held a science festival. All the students had a really good time in it. Two thirds of the students went to the cinema. They watched a film about the inventor Edison. The rest of the students attended the robot competition. These robots have different shapes. Some robots are as big as cars. Some are as small as cups. Some robots can answer the students’ questions. This reduces the use of computers and mobile phones. Some robots are like snakes. The buildings fall down, the robots can help look for people under the buildings. I’m amazed at how fast technology is developing in China. I am proud of China. I can’t wait to see the science festival next year. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示信息，介绍关于科技节的相关内容，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍科技节的两项活动内容和自己的感受；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 20．（21-22八年级上·广东深圳·期中）假设你发明了一种会飞的房子（a flying house）。请你根据下面的提示内容，以“My invention”为题写一篇作文，介绍你的发明。 外观 ①两个翅膀 ②…… 特点 ①飞行速度快 ②…… 功能 ①节省大量空间 ②…… 要求：1）要点齐全，第二项②适当发挥； 2）字数80字左右； 3）条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 4）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：翅膀wing；节省save _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My invention Today I’m glad to show you my invention. It looks like a house, so I call it “a flying house”. It has two big wings. It is the same size as a normal bike. You can use it as a house. It can fly, and it can fly fast. If there is too much traffic, you can use it as a plane. What’s more, it causes no pollution, so it is good for the environment. It saves a lot of space. With a house like this, you can go wherever you want. You don’t have to worry about traffic jams any more. 【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据表格中的提示以“My invention”为题介绍自己的发明，按照表格提示，分别从外观、特点和功能三个方面来描述自己的发明，表格包含的要点要齐全，学生们在此基础上再进行合理地拓展，适当发挥，把文章写得更具体、更充实。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时，注意主谓一致原则；可采用一段式写作，要将发明的外观、特点和功能都描述出来，做到层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$