08 Unit3书面表达10篇 -2024-2025学年英语九年级全册单元冲刺满分题型训练

08 Unit3书面表达10篇 1．假如你叫李丹，你想邀请朋友们来参加你的生日派对。请写一封90词左右的邮件给你的朋友们，介绍一下具体情况。开头及格式已给出，不计入总词数。 要点： 1. 生日派对于下周六下午3：00在友谊公园举行。乘坐地铁5号线到广场站，沿着广场路走，直到经过兴业街，公园在左边； 2. 能否有朋友准备音乐播放器； 3. 你的照相机坏了，能否有朋友带照相机为大家拍照； 4. 能否告诉哪里可以买到气球； 5. 那天天气会很好，大家是否想要露营。 Dear friends, Next Saturday, I will have my birthday party in Friendship Park. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Dan 1．例文 Dear friends, Next Saturday, I will have my birthday party in Friendship Park. It will start at 3:00 p.m. I would like everyone to come. Now let me tell you how to get there. First, you can take Subway Line 5 to Square Station. Then, go along Square Road until you pass Xingye Street. The park is on your left. Some preparations for the party need to be made, so I need your help. Could you please lend me your music player? And there is something wrong with my camera. Please bring a camera to take photos. I’m not sure where I can get balloons, so please tell me, too. The weather will be fine that day. Would you like to go camping there? I am looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! Li Dan 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括5个方面的提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，介绍生日派对的时间和地点，邀请大家参加； 第二步，介绍如何到达派对地点，陈述交通路线； 第三步，介绍需要朋友帮忙做的准备工作，请求朋友提供帮助； 第四步，表达期待。 ［亮点词汇］ ① go camping 去露营 ② look forward to 期待 ［高分句型］ ① Then, go along Square Road until you pass Xingye Street.  (until引导时间状语从句) ② Now let me tell you how to get there. (疑问词+不定式) 2．假如你叫Tom，和Jack是同学。请用英语写一则邀请函，邀请他于本周五晚上7点来你家参加你的生日聚会，并告诉他你家的地址（参看下图）。 提示：1.聚会内容——唱歌、吃生日蛋糕、玩游戏、看电影； 2．内容要涵盖提示中的信息，词数80左右。 （开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Jack, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I think we will have a good time. Yours, Tom 2．One possible version: Dear Jack, I’ll have a birthday party at 7 p.m. this Friday. I’d like to invite you to my home. Your house is not far from mine. You can walk here. Let me tell you the way to my home. Walk along Green Street and take the second turning on the left/turn left at the second crossing. And my home is on your right. At the party, we can sing, eat a birthday cake and play games. What’s more, we can watch a wonderful movie together. I think we will have a good time. Yours, Tom 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，指明生日聚会的时间，并邀请对方来参加生日聚会； 第二步，提供清晰的到你家的路线； 第三步，介绍聚会的活动有哪些； 第四步，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①not far from离……不远 ②walk along沿着……走 ③take the second turning on the left/turn left at the second crossing在第二个路口向左拐 ④what’s more而且 [高分句型] ①Walk along Green Street and take the second turning on the left/turn left at the second crossing.（祈使句；含and的并列句） 3．假如你是张宏，你的一位外国朋友Peter想到你的学校参观，但是他不知道该怎么去。请你根据所给地图，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他去你学校的路。 要求：语言准确，80词左右 (邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。 (roundabout 环形交叉路口) Dear Peter, I am excited to hear that you’re coming to our school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Zhang Hong 3．例文 Dear Peter, I am excited to hear that you’re coming to our school. Let me tell you how to get here. When you get off the train, please walk out of the railway station and go along North Street until you see the roundabout ahead. Go around the roundabout and turn into South Street. Walk straight down the street and soon you will see a hospital on your right. Then walk on till you reach the end of the street, and you’ll find our school on your left. Welcome to our school! Yours, Zhang Hong 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，按照地图，写出具体怎么到学校。 第二步，最后表示对Peter的欢迎。 [亮点词汇] ①get off 下车 ②walk out of 走出 ③go along 沿着……走 [高分句型] ①I am excited to hear that you’re coming to our school.（宾语从句） ②When you get off the train, please walk out of the railway station and go along North Street until you see the roundabout ahead.（when引导时间状语从句） 4．行为举止是否文明礼貌体现的不仅仅是个人形象和城市形象，也在一定程度上反映了社会的文明程度。为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校号召同学们做一个文明的中学生，特举办以“How to Behave Well”为题的英文征文比赛。请根据以下要点提示，写一篇90词左右的短文。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 要点： 1. 在学校我们应该怎么做； 2. 在校外我们应该怎么做； 3. 号召大家为此次活动共同努力。 How to Behave Well To be a civilized student is very important for a student. Here are what we should do and shouldn’t do. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．例文 How to Behave Well To be a civilized student is very important for a student. Here are what we should do and shouldn’t do. As a middle school student, it’s very important to keep our environment clean and tidy and take care of flowers and trees. Don’t throw litter everywhere. And we should respect our parents and teachers and help our parents do housework. We are supposed to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. We should be polite to others and ready to help others in need. And remember to obey the traffic rules, family rules and school rules. We’d better not talk or laugh loudly in public. If everyone behaves well, our city and school will become more and more beautiful. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文。 ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③ 提示：文章应围绕题目，根据要点提示进行写作，准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语等，注意语句通顺，表述连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接文章开头。 第二步，表述在学校应该怎么举止文明。 第三步，表述在校外我们应该怎么举止文明。 第四步，号召大家为此次活动共同努力。 [亮点词汇] ①be very important to do sth做某事非常重要 ②take care of照顾 ③respect尊重 ④help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ⑤be supposed to do sth应该做某事 ⑥keep promises遵守承诺 ⑦remember to do sth记得做某事 [高分句型] If everyone behaves well, our city and school will become more and more beautiful.（If引导的条件状语从句） 5．假如你们班级新来了一位同学，她打算周末步行去中央公园（Central Park），请你为她指路。 提示：出校园沿着Main Street一直走，到第一个路口右转，沿着Oak Street 走大概10分钟，看到一家银行向左转，再经过一家大超市，中央公园就在超市的对面。 要求：字迹工整，信息齐全，40词左右；开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Central Park is not far from here. It is easy to get there. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．例文： Central Park is not far from here. It is easy to get there. When you get out of school, you just go straight. And then turn right at the first crossing. After that walk along Oak Street for about 10 minutes and turn left when you see a bank. Then pass a big supermarket. Central Park is across from the supermarket. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已部分给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的地点和方位等。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍中央公园的大概位置； 第二步，具体描述如何到中央公园的路线； [亮点词汇] ①far from远离 ②at the first crossing在第一个转角 ③aross from在……对面 [高分句型] ①When you get out of school, you just go straight.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②It is easy to get there.（“it is+adj+to do sth”句型） 6．John和你（张斌）是同班同学，他住在你们学校（一中）。请你用英语给他写封邮件，邀请他参加明天下午你的生日聚会，并告诉他去你家的路线。 注意：1. 地点：图中阴影处是你（张斌）家；2. 聚会内容：唱歌、跳舞、吃蛋糕。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．例文 Dear John, Tomorrow is my birthday. We will have a birthday party at my home tomorrow afternoon. We will dance, sing and share a big birthday cake. It will be great if you can join us. My home is not far from our school. If you come, you may go straight along People's Road, then turn right at Guangming Road, and then go across Xiangyang Road. And you will find a cinema on the left. My home is just beside it. Hope to see you tomorrow at the party. Yours, Zhang Bin 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容，邀请John参加明天下午你的生日聚会，并告诉他去你家的路线。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要综合使用三个人称来行文，时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。作文可分为三段，第一段邀请John参加明天下午你的生日聚会；第二段介绍去你家的路线；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 7．根据中文提示和英文提示，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。词数：60~70左右。 提示：1. 昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步； 2. 在路上我们遇见了一个外国人； 3. 他向我询问如何去温泉酒店（the Hot Spring Hotel）； 4. 我告诉他沿路往前走，在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见酒店； 5. 他非常感谢我，我也为能帮他而高兴。 提示词语：go out for a walk, on the road, the way to, walk along, on the left, thank sb. for sth., be happy that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．例文      Last night, my mother and I went out for a walk. On the way back we met a foreigner who asked us the way to the Hot Spring Hotel. I told him that he should walk along the street and then turn left at the third corner, and then he will see the hotel. He thanked me a lot. And my mother also praised me that I was a good boy. For me, I felt very happy for helping him. Besides, I realized that helping others was a really good thing. It can not only help others out of emergencies but also make ourselves feel happy. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为一般过去时； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。表明昨晚外出遇到外国人问路一事； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、如何指路、感受”几个方面重点介绍此次经历的细节； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己从中收到的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ① went out for a walk 散步 ② on the way 在路上 ③ walk along 沿着 [高分句型] ① I told him that he should walk along the street and then turn left at the third corner, and then he will see the hotel.（that引导的宾语从句） ② On the way back we met a foreigner who asked us the way to the Hot Spring Hotel.（who引导的定语从句） 8．假如你校有几位来自美国的交换生，他们打算周末步行去翠湖公园。请根据提示为他们写出前往翠湖公园的路线，并简单介绍一下公园的情况。 要点提示：1.路线（见上图）； 2.公园环境优美、凉爽，还可以游泳、野餐等； 3.…… 要求：1.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Cuihu Park is not far from here. It’s easy to get there. Just go straight______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．例文 Cuihu Park is not far from here. It’s easy to get there. Just go straight and turn right at the first corner. Walk along the road and turn left when you find a hospital. Cuihu Park is down the street on your right. Across from the park is a restaurant. The park is really a good place to have fun. It’s beautiful and cool with the trees and flowers. You can swim and play games or have a picnic there. It’s very relaxing. You can also get a good chance to practice Chinese. I hope you will enjoy yourselves. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇给材料作文，要求根据所给出的材料内容，指出去翠湖公园的路以及介绍翠湖公园情况。短文的开头已经给出，写作时考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文；其次考生可从三方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：1．路线；2．公园介绍公园环境优美、凉爽，还可游泳、野餐等；3．其他。 2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第三人称和第二人称。文章紧扣主题，连句成篇，层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。而且语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。 3.高分亮点： 短语：go straight直走，turn right右转，at the first corner在第一个路口，have fun玩的开心。 句型：Walk along the road and turn left when you find a hospital．本句是用来指路的祈使句，其中含有when引导的时间状语的应用。       The park is really a good place to have fun. 公园真的是个好玩的好地方。本句中的动词不定式to have fun．作为后置定语，修饰place。 9．     假设你是Linda，暑假期间准备参加澳大利亚的游学活动，请你写一封邮件给该项目的负责人，礼貌地咨询如下相关细节，咨询时可以加上自己的观点。100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 1. The course you will study and the time of the course. 2. Which university will you visit？ 3. What club can you join？ Dear Sir， I'm planning to take part in your "overseas study tour to Australia". _________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your time. I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours， Linda 9．Dear Sir， I'm planning to take part in your "overseas study tour to Australia". While as for some details, I'm still confused. Could you please tell me which courses I will study and how long I will study. I know there are some famous universities in Australia. I just wonder which university I will visit during the study. I'm interested in the history of the university and I believe I can learn a lot from it. And the last but the most important one, can I join the club? You see, I'm good at dancing and swimming. During the study, I also want to join the clubs because they're not only good for my study but also for my health. Thanks for your time. I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours， Linda 【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求写一封咨询信，题干中用问题的形式对文章的内容给出了提示，审题可知，短文中应包括以下内容：首先介绍自己的写信目的；然后对该项目的具体细节进行询问，主要有三个方面；最后表达自己的期望。第二部分是文章的主体，学生们应对该内容进行适当拓展，补充更多的细节信息，使文章内容更加充实、完整。短文应以一般现在时、第一人称和第二人称为主来叙述。 2. 例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文按照题目要求给该项目的负责人写了一封咨询信，符合英语书信体格式的要求。短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点，对具体问题进行了拓展，丰富了细节。文章结构清晰，层次清楚，叙述有条理。语言准确、得体，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中使用了一些高级词汇和句型，展现了作者良好的语言运用能力。 3. 高分亮点： 短语：take part in；as for；be interested in；learn from；be good at；not only…but also。 句型：Could you please tell me which courses I will study and how long I will study；I'm interested in the history of the university and I believe I can learn a lot from it.；During the study, I also want to join the clubs because they're not only good for my study but also for my health. 【点睛】这篇作文题目要求写的是咨询信，这是书信体作文中较常见的一种。咨询信的文章一般包括三个部分：首先是对自己身份以及写信目的的介绍，一般两到三句话即可；主体部分应对想咨询的问题进行具体的叙述，这部分内容应占篇幅最大，学生们应该补充更多的细节信息，充实文章内容，可以联系自己的实际进行询问；最后应表达自己的期望，如希望对方给予回信等，一到两句话即可。这种类型的文章一般以第一人称和第二人称为主、一般现在时来叙述。这个题目中是利用三个问题表明了具体的咨询信息，这也是学生们组织文章内容的一个重要依据和提纲。例文是一篇比较优秀的文章，短文结构安排合理、清晰，语言准确、得体，文中使用了较多好的短语和句型，尤其是宾语从句、状语从句等几个长句的使用，表现了作者良好的语言驾驭能力。 10．假如你是Mike，国庆节期间你将和父母去北京旅游。你从网上获得了Summer Hotel的部分信息。请你写一封电子邮件给该宾馆的经理，介绍你的行程并咨询如下相关细节： 1.How far is the hotel from the airport? 2.How can you get to the hotel? 3.Do they offer free breakfast? 4.Is there a discount（折扣）for a long stay? 注意： 1.覆盖要点，请补充合理的细节； 2.词数80-100； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear sir, My family is planning a holiday to your city. I have got some information about your hotel, but I still have some questions to ask you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Mike 10．例文： Dear sir, My family is planning a holiday to your city. I have got some information about your hotel, but I still have some questions to ask you. Would you be kind enough to reply to my e-mail? We are arriving in your city on October 1st. And we plan to stay in your hotel for 5 days. Could you tell me how far your hotel is from the airport? And we’d like to know how we can get to your hotel. Also, we wonder whether you offer free breakfast. Last not but least, would you mind telling us whether there is a discount for a long stay? Thanks for your time. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Mike 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是书信类书面表达，根据题目中所给的提示信息完成书面表达，开头和短文已经给出，补充剩余内容即可。 2.写作指导：该文应主要使用第一人称来完成，时态以一般现在时为主，要覆盖文中所提及的所有要点，保证内容完整，结构清晰条理。 ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$