Unit12 Innovation Writing Workshop 写作课件-2023-2024学年高中英语北师大版（2019）选择性必修第四册

新北师大版高中英语选择性必修四Unit12 writing 1. Student should master the basic structure of the passage. 2. Students are able to use phrases and sentences that describe the brief introduction, the main achievements and influences of a person. 3.Students' writing skills can be improved. learning objectives lead in 3 Einstein Alexander Fleming Stephen Hawking pre-writing 5 brainstorming family identity birthday achievement character 我校英文报新开设的栏目正面向全校学生征稿。请你用英语写一篇介绍一位名人的短文。 What aspects can we write in our composition? ...... How can we organize our essay? Stephen Hawking, one of the world’s most influential scientists, was born in 1942. He was famous, not just for his brilliant work , but also for overcoming the challenges of disease. When he was 21, Stephen got a serious illness. He couldn’t walk or speak. He had to sit in a wheelchair and speak through a computer. But he didn’t give up. He became a great scientist through his hard work. He enjoyed writing. One of his most famous books is A Brief History of Time.  He had a positive attitude towards life and he never got disappointed or discouraged from his illness. He was a bright star in the world of science. Stephen Hawking Answer the fellowing questions Q1:Who is this article mainly about? Q2: what did he do or discover? Q3：What contribution did he make to human society? Stephen Hawking He wrote A Brief History of Time He was a bright star in the world of science Stephen Hawking, one of the world’s most influential scientists, was born in 1942. He was famous, not just for his brilliant work , but also for overcoming the challenges of disease. When he was 21, Stephen got a serious illness. He couldn’t walk or speak. He had to sit in a wheelchair and speak through a computer. But he didn’t give up. He became a great scientist through his hard work. He enjoyed writing. One of his most famous books is A Brief History of Time.  He had a positive attitude towards life and he never got disappointed or discouraged from his illness. He was a bright star in the world of science. Stephen Hawking Analyze the structure the passage. para1. (the beginnning) para2. (the main body) para3. (conclusion) brief introduction experience/main achievements comment/ influence Stephen Hawking underline beautiful sentences and expressions that we can use in our own compositions. 1. brief introduction ① one of the world’s most influential scientists influential: famous/well-known/excellent/brilliant/premier/gifted/... ②be famous for... be famous, not just for..., but also for... be famous for: be known for 2. experience/main achievements didn’t give up/hard work one of his most famous...is... When he was 21: at the age of 21 3. comment/ influence positive/never got disappointed or disappointed humble/outspoken/optimistic/generous determined/humorous/grateful He was a bright star in the world of.... Stephen Hawking, one of the world’s most influential scientists, was born in 1942. He was famous, not just for his brilliant work , but also for overcoming the challenges of disease. When he was 21, Stephen got a serious illness. He couldn’t walk or speak. He had to sit in a wheelchair and speak through a computer. But he didn’t give up. He became a great scientist through his hard work. He enjoyed writing. One of his most famous books is A Brief History of Time.  He had a positive attitude towards life and he never got disappointed or discouraged from his illness. He was a bright star in the world of science. scientists: biologist/musician/engineer/inventor/composer... Stephen Hawking underline beautiful sentences and expressions that we can use in our own compositions. ① one of the world’s most influential scientists influential: famous/excellent/gifted/well-known/brilliant/premier... scientists: biologist/musician/engineer/inventor/composer... ②be famous for... be famous, not just for..., but also for... be famous for: be known for 2.experience/main achievements didn’t give up/hard work one of his most famous...is... When he was 21: at the age of 21 3.comment/ influence positive/never got disappointed or disappointed humble/outspoken/optimistic/generous determined/humorous/grateful He was a bright star in the world . Stephen Hawking, one of the world’s most influential scientists, was born in 1942. He was famous, not just for his brilliant work , but also for overcoming the challenges of disease. When he was 21, Stephen got a serious illness. He couldn’t walk or speak. He had to sit in a wheelchair and speak through a computer. But he didn’t give up. He became a great scientist through his hard work. He enjoyed writing. One of his most famous books is A Brief History of Time.  He had a positive attitude towards life and he never got disappointed or discouraged from his illness. He was a bright star in the world of science. 1. brief introduction while-writing 11 你校英文报新开设的栏目正面向全校学生征稿。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇介绍著名音乐家弗里德里克·肖邦(Frederic Chopin)的短文。 注意：1.词数80左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 提示词：巴黎Paris 钢琴诗人the poet of the piano make your essay well-structured and include brief introduction, experience/main achievements, comment/ influence use the past tense to write your composition. use a variety of time expressions to introduce tips 12 post-writing 13 Editing. Edit your essay in pairs. Then share what you have written in class. Editing Sheet Does the writer clearly introduce the person? Is the essay well-structured, including brief introduction, experience/main achievements, comment/ influence? Does the writer use time expressions to introduce the person? Does the writer use past tense to describe the person? Mark any spelling, punctuation or grammar errors. Mark any unclear expressions. Give suggestions if you can. Underline the expressions you like. Comments: ____________________________________ 范文展示 The Great Composer—Chopin Frederic Chopin, one of the world’s most influential composers, was born in 1810. He was famous, not just for his brilliant work, but also for his talent for music. He learned music at six, composed music at seven and even gave public concerts at eight. when he was 20, the young musician had become a well-known composer. At the age of 21, Chopin moved to Paris, where he spent the rest of his life, earning/making a living as a composer and teacher. Chopin,who has been called "the poet of the piano",composed about 200 pieces of music throughout his life. He was a bright star in the world of music./As a great composer, he will be remembered by people forever. 15 homework Revise and refine your own composition！ 16 thank you! 17 $$