Unit 2 Great people 单元卷- 2023-2024学年牛津译林版九年级英语下册

Unit 2 Great people 单元卷- 2023-2024学年牛津译林版九年级英语下册 一、听力选择 1．What was Stephen Hawking interested in? A．Science. B．Medicine. C．Literature. 2．Why do people remember Florence Nightingale? A．Because she became a national hero. B．Because she opened the world’s first nurse school. C．Because she was a famous British nurse. 3．What was Armstrong famous for? A．He was born a rich family. B．He was a great American astronaut. C．He was the first person to walk on the Moon. 4．Which one is right about Nick Vujicic? A．He was born in Australia. B．He was born with arms or legs. C．He couldn’t swim or use the computer. 5． What does Henry’s father do now? A．A doctor. B．A pilot. C．A teacher. 听对话，回答下列各小题。 6．With whom did Jane watch a movie last night? A．Her friend. B．Her cousin. C．Her brother. 7．What will the speakers probably do this Sunday? A．Watch a movie. B．Go to a village. C．Read books. 听材料,回答下列五个小题 8．Why was Amelia famous in America? A．She never felt tired while flying B．She was the first woman pilot in America. C．She was the first woman to fly alone across the Atlantic Ocea 9．When was Amelia born? A．In1897 B．In1932 C．In 1937 10．What made Amelia enjoy flying? A．Books about flying B．Her flying lessons C．An air show 11．Who bought Amelia a plane? A．Her father B．She herself C．Her teacher of flying lessons 12．What happened to her plane when Amelia was flying over the Pacific Ocean? A．It burned B．It disappeared C．It fell down 听材料，完成下面小题。 13．How old was J.K. Rowling when she wrote her first story? A．Six. B．Seven. C．Eight. 14．Where did J.K. Rowling have the idea for Harry Potter? A．At a bus station. B．At a coffee shop. C．On a train. 15．What did J.K. Rowling do in the evening when she lived in Portugal? A．Wrote her book. B．Taught English. C．Studied French. 二、阅读理解 阅读下面短文，从短文后所给的选项中选出能填入短文空白处的最佳选项，使短文通顺连贯，其中有两项是多余选项。 Thirteen-year-old Kesz Valdez smiled as he received his prize. Today is a “big day” as he just won the International Children’s Peace Prize for helping street children in Philippines. However, life was not always kind to Kesz. When he was just two years old, his father forced him to work in the Cavite City Dump. 16 He wanted to change his life. Therefore, when he was four, he ran away from home and began living on the streets. From then on, he had to live on his own. It was too hard for a little kid to experience this. 17 While he was looking for food in a rubbish dump one night, he fell into a pile of burning rubbish. As a result, his arm was seriously hurt. Things couldn’t get any worse for Kesz. 18 A community worker called Harnin Manalaysay took him in, looked after him and treated him for his wounds. Kesz had never known such kindness before, so this experience changed his life. 19 So, with Harnin’s help, Kesz built up an organization called Championing Community Children. Kesz and his friends have been visiting poor communities and talking to children about their rights for eight years now. 20 Since 2006, Kesz has become a new voice for the voiceless. “I want children in the streets to have the chance to change their life,” he says. My motto is: we can change the world one heart at a time. A．Kesz lived a happy life. B．Harnin offered great help to Kesz. C．But luckily, his luck started to change. D．He couldn’t refuse because he was too young. E．Then, a few years later, an accident happened. F．He wanted to help other street children in the same way. G．They gave out “Hope Gifts” to more than 5, 000 children. A 77-year-old grandma, Xu Xiuzhen, became famous for videos of her talking with foreigners on the Internet. In these videos, she speaks different languages with them. Grandma Xu has worked as a tour guide and vendor (摊贩) in Yangshuo, a county in Guangxi Zhuang autonomous region (自治区) since 1998. Grandma Xu dropped out of junior school in the third grade. To make a living, she began to learn different languages to encourage more foreigners to buy things. Over the past twenty years, Grandma Xu has taught herself 11 foreign languages, including English, Spanish, Japanese and Korean. It makes her popular, and her excellent language skills have also made it easier for her to communicate with foreign tourists. Grandma Xu said she learnt how to pronounce the words from different foreigners first and then she memorized them. She would repeat the words in her head before going to bed and after waking up. Gradually, her hard work made her talk with foreigners better and better. Grandma Xu has also become one of the busiest tour guides in Yangshuo. Her popularity draws a large crowd of tourists every day, especially foreign visitors who come to meet the special guide out of admiration. “More and more foreign tourists are coming to Yangshuo, and I hope they will feel at home here with my help,” she said. 根据语篇内容，选择最佳选项。 21．How long has Grandma Xu worked as a tour guide? A．Less than 20 years. B．More than 20 years. C．More than 30 years. 22．Why did Grandma Xu learn different languages? A．To support family. B．To become a teacher. C．To be friends with foreigners. 23．What makes Grandma Xu popular? A．Helping many foreigners. B．Teaching other tour guides English. C．Teaching herself 11 foreign languages. 24．Which of the following is TRUE? A．Grandma Xu is busier than any other tour guide in Yangshuo. B．Grandma Xu worked hard to learn foreign languages. C．Grandma Xu can’t speak Japanese. 25．What’s the best title for the passage? A．Live and Learn B．Easier Said than Done C．Knowledge Comes from Questioning Hua Weiguang was a teacher before. After he retired (退休), he took up taking photos. Ten years ago, Hua found some people planting trees in his hometown, Horqin, and then he started to take photos of them. Because of desertification (沙漠化), people could hardly find any plants in Horqin at that time. In Hua’s photos we can find many things such as sandstorms, young trees and the people who fight against desertification. It was difficult to plant trees at that time. The workers had to wear masks, hats and scarves all the time. In summer, it was so hot that the workers had to lie down next to their cars to cool off. They also had to eat their lunch with the blowing sand. What about sunstroke (中暑)? Well, they took some medicine, drank a little water and then continued working. Now there are all kinds of plants, and a lot of animals have made their homes here. Without Hua’s photos, no one would believe that these changes are possible. People planted trees one after another. And they built a green great wall there. 26．When did Hua Weiguang take up taking photos? A．After he retired. B．When he was a teacher. C．Before he planted trees. D．While he was at school. 27．What did workers wear when they worked according to the third paragraph? A．Masks, gloves and scarves. B．Hats, gloves and scarves. C．Masks, hats and scarves. D．Hats, glasses and scarves. 28．What does this article mainly talk about? A．Hua became much busier after his retirement. B．It was easy to plant trees in Horqin ten years ago. C．There were lots of plants and animals in Horqin before. D．Hua used photos to record people’s fighting against desertification. American Mark Levine wears many hats in China—educator, author, volunteer, musician, sociologist, cross-cultural（跨文化）communicator, and winner of the Chinese Government’s Friendship Award. The 73-year-old man is perhaps best known among the Chinese public for writing American country music-style songs about China. Levine often sings and plays the guitar. He has staged hundreds of performances in 15 provinces, including on TV and on the Great Wall. His performances were attended by over 40,000 people. His songs are about such themes as China’s trains, ethnic legends and the 2008 Beijing Olympics. Several focus on such disasters as the 2008 Wenchuan earthquake, floods and COVID-19. If people can listen to these songs, they will better understand China and be more willing to visit. His latest song, The Future Is Very Bright AheadLed by the CPC, celebrates the 100th anniversary of the founding of the Communist Party of China. It talks about the history and the progress in China that has been made under the leadership of the CPC． China helped Mark, and Mark also helped China. He tells stories with his songs and sings them with his heart. He hopes he can sing China’s stories to the world. And he hopes that China’s goal of building a community of shared future for man kind will become a common goal for the world. 根据材料内容选择最佳答案。 29．What is Mark probably famous for in China？ A．Singing Chinese songs. B．Writing songs about China. C．Playing the guitar on TV. D．Writing songs about American. 30．How many provinces has Mark Ievine staged hundreds of performances？ A．Sixteen. B．Fifteen. C．Fourteen. D．Thirteen. 31．What does the third paragraph mainly talk about？ A．The themes of Mark’s songs. B．The years of Mark’s songs. C．The big events of China. D．The interesting places of China. 32．What is Mark’s latest song about？ A．China’s trains and ethnic legends. B．The 2008 Beijing Olympics. C．The history and the progress in China. D．Building a community of shared future for mankind. 33．What might be the best title of the passage？ A．An American Who Sings Chinese Stories B．An Unforgettable Experience C．A Common Goal for the World D．A Popular Dancer in China 三、单项选择 34． Great changes __________ in our school in the past few years. A．have taken place B．took place C．take place D．will take place 35．—Shall we go swimming tomorrow afternoon? —I’d love to, but I’m afraid I can’t. I ________ my grandparents. A．was visiting B．will visit C．have visited 36．—Jenny, why don’t you take your own umbrella? Where is yours? —Someone else ________ my umbrella by mistake. I can’t find it now. A．will take B．is taking C．has taken 37．— Gilbert discovered electricity. Do you know who _______ the light bulb? — Thomas Alva Edison. A．created B．produced C．invented 38．Her old grandfather has been _________ for many years. He can’t hear anything at all. A．blind B．deaf C．lame D．dead 39．Laws should be made to keep people from cutting ________ trees in order to protect our environment. A．out B． short C． off D．down 40．Bob is the only person that has the ________ to complete the task. He is the bravest man I know. A．courage B．advantage C．chance D．point 41． When I hear the name of Taiwan, I can’t help _____ Mount Ali and Sun Moon. A．thinking over B．thinking of C．thinking about 42．—Do you like your P. E. teacher? —Yes, he gives us instructions ________ until we are perfect in every move. A．widely B．quickly C．patiently D．suddenly 43．—What’s the matter with Susan? —She hurt herself ________ while playing soccer. A．widely B．happily C．badly D．quietly 四、完形填空 阅读下面短文，理解大意，然后从各小题的四个选项中选出一个最佳答案，使短文连贯完整。 Every one should have the courage to dream big. And if you work hard, you can 44 your dream one day. When Walt was a small boy, he lives on a 45 . Little Walt was very close(亲近的) to animals. He liked to ride a pig or a horse, though he often 46 from them. He enjoyed watching sheep and cows eating grass. Farm life was great fun for him. At school, he always drew many kinds of 47 in his free time. His classmates loved his drawings. They all said Walt was 48 ! And he thought when he grew up he would like to be a cartoon maker. He began to read books about animated films(动画电影). He took art classes and drew the characters(人物) over and over again on pieces of paper. Later, he 49 to Hollywood. It’s home to many film makers. There, he created more and more cartoon characters. He was 50 serious about creating them. One character was a mouse named Mickey. Another character was a duck named Donald. Because of so much hard work, his 51 finally came true. The Mickey Mouse films became 52 . His wonderful films made people laugh and also won him quite a few prizes. 53 you can dream it, you can do it. This is something Walt Disney believed all his life. 44．A．get B．make C．realize D．take 45．A．farm B．city C．building D．company 46．A．put off B．fell off C．got off D．took off 47．A．gates B．villages C．places D．animals 48．A．creative B．honest C．fair D．crazy 49．A．hid B．escaped C．moved D．divided 50．A．always B．never C．hardly D．seldom 51．A．peace B．dream C．pride D．factory 52．A．gentle B．polite C．empty D．successful 53．A．Before B．Since C．Until D．If 五、改错 54．请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分； 3.将答案写在答题卷上，写在本卷上无效。 I live in the country and my father was a farmer. He is now forty-five year old. Because of hard work, he looks old than his age. When I was young, he is used to tell me the importance of study. Father knows few about English and other subjects, but he usually gives me some good advices on how to learn my lessons good. He is not only kind to me but also very strict in me. With his help, I’ve made great progress. I’ll never forgets what he taught me. I think my father is best father in the world. 六、书面表达 55．根据下列图片，用英语写一篇90词左右的短文。要求完整叙述图片内容。 （参考词汇：stick n. 拐杖）              参考答案： 1．A 【原文】W: Stephen Hawking made some great achievements in Science. He wrote many great books. M: Yes, that’s true. But when he was young, he showed great interest in science. 2．B 【原文】M: Have you heard of Florence Nightingale? W: Yes, I have. Florence Nightingale was born in a rich family on 12th May 1820 in England. People remember her because she opened the world’s first nurse school. 3．C 【原文】M:Armstrong was an American astronaut. What was he famous for? W:He was the first person to walk on the Moon. 4．A 【原文】W: Last night I read a book about a world-famous speaker with the name Nick Vujicic. Do you know more about him? M: Sure. He was born in Australia on December 4th, 1982. When he was born, he didn't have arms or legs. But he learned to swim, dress himself and use the computer. His experience inspires a lot of people in the world. 5．A 【原文】略 6．B 7．A 【原文】M: What did you do last night, Jane? W: I watched a movie with my cousin. It’s very funny. M: What’s the name of it? W: Detective Chinatown. M: Oh, I know it. The actor Wang Baoqiang in it is very famous in China. W: You are right. He is from a village. When he was 15, he left home with only 400 yuan. M: You know a lot about him. W: I like him very much. Most of his movies are funny. Maybe this Sunday we can watch one of them together. M: That sounds great. 8．C 9．A 10．C 11．B 12．B 【原文】略 13．A 14．C 15．B 【原文】Hello everyone! Today, I’d like to introduce my favorite author, J.K. Rowling to all of you. J.K. Rowling was born in England in 1965. She wrote her first story Rabbit when she was only 6 years old. She didn’t choose to be a writer after her graduation. She had the idea for Harry Portter when she was on a train. She started writing the story of Harry Portter the next day. In 1992, she went to live in Portugal for three years. She wrote Harry Potter in the morning and worked as an English teacher in the afternoon and evening. Then in 1995, her family returned to Britain and lived in Edinburgh, Scotland. She didn’t have a job at that time, and wrote in coffee houses because they were warmer than her small house. After five years, she finished the first book Harry Porter and the Philosopher’s Stone. The book sold millions of copies all over the world, and J.K. Rowling became very famous. She is now very rich, but still she writes her books in coffee houses. She thinks it has become a part of her life. 16．D 17．E 18．C 19．F 20．G 【导语】本文主要介绍了国际儿童和平奖的获得者凯斯·瓦尔德斯的故事。 16．根据上文“When he was just two years old, his father forced him to work in the Cavite City Dump.”可知，在他两岁的时候，父亲就他强迫他干活。由此推断，他只是一个幼儿，无法拒绝父亲的安排。选项D“他无法拒绝，因为他太小了。”符合语境。故选D。 17．根据下文“While he was looking for food in a rubbish dump one night, he fell into a pile of burning rubbish.”可知，发生了事故。选项E“然后，几年后，一场事故发生了。”符合语境。故选E。 18．根据下文“A community worker called Harnin Manalaysay took him in, looked after him and treated him for his wounds.”可知，一位社区工作者收留了他，照顾他，治疗他的伤口。由此说明他很幸运。选项C“但幸运的是，他的运气开始好转。”符合语境。故选C。 19．根据下文“So, with Harnin’s help, Kesz built up an organization called Championing Community Children.”可知，凯斯建立了一个名为“支持社区儿童”的组织，由此说明他想帮助像他一样的儿童。选项F“他想以同样的方式帮助其他街头儿童。”符合语境。故选F。 20．根据上文“Kesz and his friends have been visiting poor communities and talking to children...”可推断，凯斯和他的朋友们走访贫困社区，看望孩子们并送上礼物。选项G“他们向5000多名儿童分发了‘希望礼物’。”符合语境。故选G。 21．B 22．A 23．C 24．B 25．A 【导语】本文主要通过徐秀珍学外语的故事告诉我们一个道理：学无止境。 21．细节理解题。根据第二段“Grandma Xu has worked as a tour guide…since 1998.”可知徐奶奶已经做导游20多年了。故选B。 22．细节理解题。根据第二段“To make a living, she began to learn different languages to encourage more foreigners to buy things.”可知徐奶奶是为了卖出更多的东西给外国人，赚钱养家糊口才开始学习不同的语言。故选A。 23．细节理解题。根据第二段“Grandma Xu has taught herself 11 foreign languages, including English, Spanish, Japanese and Korean. It makes her popular”可知这里的“It”指代前文“徐奶奶自学了11门外语”。故选C。 24．细节理解题。根据第三段“Gradually, her hard work made her talk with foreigners better and better.”可知徐奶奶努力学习外语，B选项正确。故选B。 25．标题归纳题。通读全文可知，徐奶奶学外语的故事告诉我们：只要我们足够努力，任何事情都是可能的。学习永远不会结束，我们应该活到老，学到老。A项适合做标题，故选A。 26．A 27．C 28．D 【导语】本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍了华维光为在沙漠中种树的人拍照，从照片中可以了解人们和沙漠化斗争以及成果。 26．细节理解题。根据第一段中“After he retired (退休), he took up taking photos.”可知，华维光在退休后从事拍照活动。故选A。 27．细节理解题。根据第二段中“The workers had to wear masks, hats and scarves all the time.”可知，这些工人们一直戴着面罩，帽子和围巾。故选C。 28．主旨大意题。根据文中第二段里“In Hua’s photos we can find many things such as sandstorms, young trees and the people who fight against desertification.”及最后一段里“Without Hua’s photos, no one would believe that these changes are possible. People planted trees one after another. And they built a green great wall there.”可知华维光用照片记录人们与沙漠化作斗争的事迹。故选D。 29．B 30．B 31．A 32．C 33．A 【导语】本文主要讲述了美国人马克·莱文在中国的故事。 29．细节理解题。根据“The 73-year-old man is perhaps best known among the Chinese public for writing American country music-style songs about China.”可知这位73岁的老将在中国公众中也许最为出名的是他创作了有关中国的美国乡村音乐风格的歌曲。故选B。 30．细节理解题。根据“He has staged hundreds of performances in 15 provinces”可知，在15个省举办了数百场演出。故选B。 31．主旨大意题。根据“His songs are about such themes as China’s trains, ethnic legends and the 2008 Beijing Olympics”可知，主要介绍的是他歌曲的主题。故选A。 32．细节理解题。根据“His latest song, The Future Is Very Bright AheadLed by the CPC, celebrates the 100th anniversary of the founding of the Communist Party of China.”可知他最新的一首歌曲《The Future Is Very Bright AheadLed by the CPC》庆祝了中国共产党成立100周年，讲述了中国共产党领导下的历史和进步。故选C。 33．最佳标题。通读全文尤其是“He tells stories with his songs and sings them with his heart. He hopes he can sing China’s stories to the world”可知本文主要讲述了一位歌唱中国故事的美国人马克·莱文的故事。故选A。 34．A 【详解】句意：在过去的几年里，我们学校发生了巨大变化。 考查时态。take place发生；根据时间短语in the past few years，可知本句使用现在完成时态。所以选A。 35．B 【详解】句意：——我们明天下午去游泳好吗？——我很想去，但是恐怕不行。我将去看望我的祖父母。 考查时态。根据“I ... my grandparents.”可知，此处指明天下午将去看望祖父母；时态为一般将来时，结构用will+动词原形。故选B。 36．C 【详解】句意：——珍妮，你为什么不自己带伞呢？你的呢？——别人错拿了我的伞。我现在找不到了。 考查现在完成时。根据“I can’t find it now”可知，我现在找不到它，表示有人已经拿走了它，因此用现在完成时。故选C。 37．C 【详解】句意：——吉尔伯特发现了电。你知道是谁发明了电灯泡吗？——托马斯·阿尔瓦·爱迪生。 考查动词辨析。created创造；produced产生；invented发明。根据“the light bulb”可知，询问谁发明电灯泡，故选C。 38．B 【详解】句意：她年迈的爷爷已经失聪好多年了，他什么也听不见。考查形容词辨析。A. blind失明的；B. deaf聋的；C. lame跛足的；D. dead死去的。根据He can’t hear anything at all.“他什么也听不见。”可知应是失聪好多年了；结合选项可知B选项符合题意，故答案选B。 39．D 【详解】句意：为了保护我们的环境，应当制定法律来阻止人们砍伐树木。 考查动词短语。cut out裁剪；cut short缩短；cut off切断；cut down砍伐。根据“Laws should be made to keep people from cutting…tree in order to protect our environment.”可知，此处指的是“砍伐树木”，因此用“cut down”。故选D。 40．A 【详解】句意：鲍勃是唯一有勇气完成任务的人。他是我认识的最勇敢的人。 考查名词辨析。courage勇气；advantage优势；chance机会；point分数。根据“He is the bravest man I know.”可知，鲍勃是唯一有勇气完成任务的人。故选A。 41．B 【详解】试题分析：句意：当我听到台湾的名字的时候，我情不自禁的想起了阿里山和日月潭。thinking over反复思考；thinking of想起，思考；thinking about 考虑，思考。can’t help doing sth.情不自禁做某事，后面应用动名词形式，根据句意可知选B。 考点：考查动词短语。 42．C 【详解】句意：——你喜欢你们的体育老师吗？——是的，他耐心地指导我们，直到我们每个动作都完美。 考查副词辨析。widely广泛地；quickly快地；patiently耐心地；suddenly突然。根据题干“until we are perfect in every move.”可知直到我们每个动作都做到完美，说明他应是耐心地指导我们，故选C。 43．C 【详解】句意：——Susan怎么了？——她踢足球时受了重伤。 考查副词辨析。widely广泛地；happily高兴地；badly严重地；quietly安静地。根据“She hurt herself ... while playing soccer.”可知，她踢足球时受了严重的伤。故选C。 44．C 45．A 46．B 47．D 48．A 49．C 50．A 51．B 52．D 53．D 【导语】本文讲述了沃尔特·迪斯尼年幼时的农场生活，他对动画电影的热爱以及他的主要成就，由此告诉我们：只要努力去追求，梦想就能实现。 44．句意：如果你付出努力，总有一天你会实现你的梦想。 get 得到；make制作；realize实现；take带走。根据“And if you work hard”可知，努力就能实现梦想，realize one’s dream“实现梦想”。故选C。 45．句意：当沃尔特是个小男孩的时候，他生活在一个农场。 farm农场；city城市；building建筑；company公司。根据“Farm life was great fun for him.”可知，他小时候在农场生活。故选A。 46．句意：他喜欢骑猪或马，尽管他经常从猪或马上摔下来。 put off推迟；fell off摔下来；got off下来；took off脱下。根据“He liked to ride a pig or a horse, though …”可知，他喜欢骑在猪或者马身上，但会摔下来。故选B。 47．句意：在学校，他总是在空闲时间画各种各样的动物。 gates大门；villages村庄；places地方；animals动物。根据“He enjoyed watching sheep and cows eating grass.”可推知，他喜欢观察动物，所以在空闲时间会画动物。故选D。 48．句意：他们都说沃尔特有创意。 creative有创意的；honest诚实的；fair公平的；crazy疯狂的。根据“His classmates loved his drawings.”可知，同学们看了他的画，认为他很有创意。故选A。 49．句意：后来，他搬到了好莱坞。 hid躲藏；escaped逃跑；moved搬家；divided决定。根据“to Hollywood”可知，是搬到了好莱坞，用“move to+地点”。故选C。 50．句意：他在创作时总是很严肃认真。 always总是；never从不；hardly几乎不；seldom很少。根据“Because of so much hard work”可知，他创作时总是很认真。故选A。 51．句意：由于付出了那么多的努力，他的梦想终于实现了。 peace和平；dream梦想；pride骄傲；factory工厂。根据“finally came true”可知，他的梦想实现了。故选B。 52．句意：《米老鼠》系列电影很成功。 gentle温和的；polite礼貌的；empty空的；successful成功的。根据“His wonderful films made people laugh and also won him quite a few prizes.”可知，他的电影获得了很多奖，说明很成功。故选D。 53．句意：如果你能想到，你就能做到。 Before在……之前；Since自从；Until直到；If如果。前半句表条件，用if引导条件状语从句。故选D。 54．I live in the country and my father was a farmer. He is now forty-five year old.                                                       is                                                   years Because of hard work, he looks old than his age. When I was young, he is                                                    older                                                         is划掉 used to tell me the importance of study. Father knows few about English and other                                                                                        little subjects, but he usually gives me some good advices on how to learn my lessons                                                                         advice good. He is not only kind to me but also very strict in me. With his help, I’ve made well                                                                          with great progress. I’ll never forgets what he taught me. I think my father is ∧ best                                         forget                                                                  the      father in the world. 【分析】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要介绍了自己的父亲，作者认为自己的父亲是最好的父亲。 【详解】第一行“my father was a farmer”中我的爸爸是一个农民，是客观事实，用一般现在时，可知was错误，需改为is。 第一行由“forty-five”可知，后面接可数名词复数，所以year错误，需改为years。 第二行由后面的“than”可知，应该用old的比较级，所以old错误，需改为older。 第二行中的“he is used to tell me”以及前面的“When I was young”可知，应该是他过去常告诉我学习的重要性，used to意为“过去常常”，所以is used错误，需把is去掉。 第三行由后面的“English”可知，应该用little修饰不可数名词，所以few错误，需改为little。 第四行中的“good advices”中advice是不可数名词，所以advices错误，需改为advice。 第五行中的“learn my lessons good”，good是形容词，learn是动词，要用副词来修饰动词，所以good错误，需改为well。 第五行中的“very strict in me”以及固定搭配be strict with sb“对某人严格”可知，in错误，需改为with。 第六行中的“I’ll never forgets”以及一般将来时的构成：主语+will+动词原形可知，forgets错误，需改为forget。 第六行中“best father”以及形容词最高级前要加定冠词the可知，best前面需加the。 55．Sample writing One day Tom went to a park with his friends. They wanted to take a photo at the gate of the park. While they were taking a photo, Tom suddenly saw an old blind man with a stick standing by the street. It was clear that the man wanted to cross the street, but there was a lot of traffic on the street. When the traffic light was green, Tom ran to the blind man and helped him cross the street. The old blind man said “thanks” to Tom. They also took a photo together. Tom’s friends were proud of him. 【详解】这是一篇看图作文，要求我们完整地叙述图片中所发生的事情。首先我们应仔细观察图片，了解图片想要表达的意思，然后用正确的英语表达出来。通过观察图片我们可以知道，这里主要说的是一个男孩帮助一个盲人过马路的事情。叙述这件事情的时候，我们应使用一般过去时态，要将事情发生的时间、地点、人物及事件叙述清楚，这是记叙文的四个要素。同时我们还需要注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，要注意语法的规范、词和短语的使用要准确。另外，我们还应使用一些好的句型和短语，使文章意思连贯、表达流畅。 点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中完整地叙述了图片里发生的事情，内容完整，表达流畅。看图作文的一个难点是正确理解图片中所表达的内容，然后用正确的英语表达出来，所以难点有这两个。这篇短文的叙事很完整，描述了事情发生的时间、地点、出现的人物以及事情发生的经过。短文里使用了正确的时态，尤其注意了动词过去式形式的变化。短文里还使用了一些从句，如While they were taking a photo, Tom suddenly saw an old blind man with a stick standing by the street、It was clear that the man wanted to cross the street, but there was a lot of traffic on the street、When the traffic light was green, Tom ran to the blind man and helped him cross the street.等。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$null