Unit 3 Period Five Part Ⅱ Writing An Event Description（课件PPT）-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第一册（北师大版2019）

CELEBRATIONS UNIT 3　 Period Five　Writing Workshop & Other Parts of the Unit Part Ⅱ　Writing—An Event Description 目 录 Contents 课时作业(十五) 返回目录 　 英语　必修　第一册(BS) 返回目录 　 英语　必修　第一册(BS) 返回目录 　 英语　必修　第一册(BS) 返回目录 　 英语　必修　第一册(BS) 返回目录 　 英语　必修　第一册(BS) 返回目录 　 英语　必修　第一册(BS) have a merry day have a talk secretly pocket money be surprised at come back from work thank sb for sth 返回目录 　 英语　必修　第一册(BS) had a talk how to celebrate my mother's birthday we saw a table laid 返回目录 　 英语　必修　第一册(BS) There were many delicious foods on the table We all said “Happy Birthday！” to her what she had done for our family 返回目录 　 英语　必修　第一册(BS) discussing how to celebrate my mother's birthday with many delicious foods on it thanking her for what she had done for our family 返回目录 　 英语　必修　第一册(BS) 返回目录 　 英语　必修　第一册(BS) 返回目录 　 英语　必修　第一册(BS) 返回目录 　 英语　必修　第一册(BS) 返回目录 　 英语　必修　第一册(BS) 返回目录 　 英语　必修　第一册(BS) 返回目录 　 英语　必修　第一册(BS) 制 作 者：状元桥 适用对象：高中学生 制作软件：Powerpoint2010、 Photoshop cs3 运行环境：WindowsXP以上操作系统 本单元的写作任务是描述一个事件。应注意以下几点： 1．写明你为什么要描述这个事件； 2．写明事件发生的地点、时间、场合和人物； 3．用行为动词和描述性连词把这些要素按正确的顺序排列起来； 4．最后描述自己的感受。 [常用表达] 1．It was a fine day and I… 2．One day, I happened to do… 3．When I was walking in the street… 4．Last week, my friend and I… 5．On my way to school, I came across… 6．In the end, I succeeded in doing… 7．To my relief, it… 8．From this experience, I learned that… 9．This is how I… 10．I was deeply moved by his… 假如你是李华，上周日是你母亲的生日，你和父亲还有弟弟一起为母亲庆祝了生日。请根据下面的提示，用英语把这件事描述一下。 1．上周日是母亲的五十岁生日； 2．家人都为她准备了生日礼物； 3．父亲下厨做了好吃的饭菜； 4．大家一起祝母亲生日快乐，感谢她为家里所做的一切。 注意：1．词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [审题] 写作要求是描述为母亲庆祝生日的事情。写作时应注意以下几点： 1．确定文体：这是一篇记叙文，写作中应注意记叙文的常规格式； 2．主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主； 3．主体人称：由于是描写为母亲过生日的事情，所以人称应该以第一人称和第三人称为主。 [谋篇] 第一段：交代背景； 第二段：描述庆祝生日的过程； 第三段：表达自己的感受。 [核心词汇] 1．度过快乐的一天　____________________ 2．秘密地进行交谈 ________________________ 3．零花钱 ________________ 4．对……惊讶 ___________________ 5．下班回家 _______________________ 6．因……而感谢某人 ____________________ [连词成句] 1．我的父亲、弟弟和我进行了秘密地交谈。 My father, brother and I ______________ secretly. 2．我们讨论了怎样庆祝母亲的生日。(疑问词＋不定式) We discussed ________________________________. 3．我们到家时，看到一张桌子已经摆好了。(主语＋谓语＋宾语＋宾补) When we got home, _______________________. 4．桌子上有很多好吃的食物。(there be句型) ____________________________________________. 5．我们都对她说“生日快乐！” ________________________________________. 6．我们感谢母亲为家里所做的一切。(what宾语从句) We all thanked her for ___________________________. [句式升级] 1．请把句1和句2用现在分词作伴随状语合成一句话。 My father, brother and I had a talk secretly, ___________ _________________________________________. 2．请把句3和句4用with复合结构合成一句话。 When we got home, we saw a table laid _____________ ______________________. 3．请把句5和句6用现在分词短语作伴随状语合成一句话。 We all said “Happy Birthday！” to her, _____________ _______________________________________. 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。 One possible version： We had a merry day last Sunday, for it was my mother's fiftieth birthday. Several days before, my father, brother and I had a talk secretly, discussing how to celebrate my mother's birthday.On Sunday morning, my brother and I got up early and went to buy some flowers using our pocket money.When we got home, we saw a table laid with many delicious foods on it.My mother was so surprised at what she saw when she came back from work! We all said “Happy Birthday！” to her, thanking her for what she had done for our family. I love my family and I will remember the happy day forever! 假设你是红星中学高一的学生李华，你们学校举办了丰富多彩的元旦庆祝活动，请你根据图表中的相关信息写一篇短文，给校刊《英语角》投稿。内容包括： 活动名称 元旦联欢晚会 时间 12月30日晚上7：00～9：00 地点 学校礼堂 节目 唱歌、小游戏、京剧等 观众反应 鼓掌、欢呼等 你的感受 …… 注意：1．词数80左右； 2．可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：礼堂auditorium One Possible Version： To welcome the arrival of the New Year, our school held a New Year's Eve party in the school auditorium from 7：00 p.m.to 9：00 p.m.on Dec.30.We enjoyed ourselves a lot during the two hours. The party first began with a song, followed by various performances.There were also some interesting games which really lit up the atmosphere.Every one of us got really excited when some students performed Beijing Opera.They were so skillful that we couldn't stop clapping.When the party ended, all the audience stood up and applauded. The auditorium was full of applause and I did have a lot of fun that evening.This is really an unforgettable experience, which perfectly finished the old year and welcomed the new one. $$