01.选择性必修第一册Unit 5 Revealing nature(观察日记)-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高二英语单元写作深度指导(外研版2019)

Unit 5 Nurturing nature 单元写作深度指导 观察日记 单元话题 考题展示 观察日记 【新高考模拟试题】你校英语报开设了“Learning to Observe”栏目。请用英语写一篇黄豆芽（soybean sprouts)生长观察日记，并向该栏目投稿，内容包括： 1. 观察过程 2. 你的体会 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 本单元写作项目是描写植物生长过程的观察日记。观察日记多是亲身经历和耳闻目睹的事情，所以要用第一人称来写;日记多是记述发生过的事情，因此常使用一般过去时,但使用时必须灵活掌握。日记应条理清楚,写出真实感。此外,应注意日记的格式，包括日期、星期和天气的书写位置。 观察日记篇章结构一般采用三段式结构: 第一段:表明写作目的; 第二段:为主体部分,记录植物的成长过程; 第三段:记录作者的感受。 考向分析与应对策略 近几年高考对日记的考查较少，但日记也是应用文中比较实用的一种文体。日记书写的注意事项入局如下： (1)日期、星期一般顶格写在正文之前。可以先写星期，后写年月日，也可以先写年月日，后写星期几。 (2)天气情况应写在日期和星期的同一行稍靠右之处。表示天气情况常用fine, cloudy, rainy, snowy, windy, stormy, sunny等形容词来表示。 (3)正文的内容应该思想健康，积极向上。文章可长可短，开头语应简洁，结尾可适当发表感想。 （4）日记或周记的题材广泛，一般来说要求记录一次意义非凡的事件，例如：宣传节约用水活动、帮助父母做家务、现场或在电视上观看一场比赛、毕业前夕制作毕业纪念视频的过程、一次有意义的旅行、一次有意义的志愿者活动或助人为乐的事件等等。 (5)日记和周记的写作思路： 第一部分，交代事件及发生的时间和场所； 第二部分，描写事件的经过及具体细节； 第三部分，自己的感受及感想。 话题词汇 1. growth conditions of the plant植物的生长条件 2. a hole large enough足够大的洞 3. put the earth back in the hole把土放回洞里 4. up to 20 feet in length长达20英尺 5. select proper seeds选择合适的种子 6. a light application of fertilizer轻施肥料 7. species 物种 8. observation 观察 9. process 过程 10. growth 生长 11. conditions 条件，环境 12. environment 环境 13. suitable 适合的 14. container 容器 15. sprout 发芽 话题句式 1. On the first day,I put some seeds into a basin.第一天,我把一些种子放进一个花盆。 2. Then I poured some water into the basin, for this plant..y 然后我把一些水倒入花盆，因为这种植物…… 3. I placed the basin under the sun.我把花盆放在阳光下。 4. Several days later,the young plants begano grow out of the soft soil. 几天后,幼苗开始从松软的土壤中长出来。 5. I put the basin in the room to avoid the hot sun. 我把花盆放到房间里来避开烈日。 6. These young plants began to grow rapidly...这些幼苗开始快速地生长…… 7. Now they have grown into tall plants.现在它们已经长成了高高的植物。 8. I'm surprised at...我对……感到惊讶。 III.模版框架 观察日记篇章结构一般采用三段式结构: 第一段:表明写作目的; 第二段:为主体部分,记录植物的成长过程; 第三段:记录作者的感受。 假设你是李华,英语老师让你观察某种植物的生长过程。请根据你所拍摄的图片写一篇观察日记,记述苗的生长过程,以便在英语课上跟大家分享。内容包括: 1.播种方式; 2.生长过程; 3.生长结果。注意: 1.词数 80 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:蒜瓣garlic clove;嫩芽 tender shoot;蒜苗 garlic sprout ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作分析】 [总体布局] 观察日记 主题 观察植物生长 体裁 应用文 布局 第一段 播种方式 第二段 生长过程 第三段 生长结果 人称 以第一、三人称为主 时态 以一般现在和过去时态为主 I.用本单元所学单词或短语填空 1.________________________肩并肩地,并排地 2.________________________出来 3._________________________n.根 4.________________________n.厘米 ⅡI.本单元语块、语法运用 1.完成句子 第一部分:播种方式 (1) I carefully divided the garlic bulbs into cloves and planted them________________________ (并排地)in a round plastic bowl, and the pointed ends________________________(朝上). 第二部分:生长过程 (2) With the garlic_________________________(生长), the roots grow________________________(越来越 长). (3) The roots_________________________(看起来像) the white beard of Grandpa. 第三部分:生长结果 (4)The garlic sprouts are growing higher and higher day by day, and they________________________(已经长到20厘米左右了). 2.句式升级 (5)用with的复合结构改写句(1) 6)用定语从句合并句(2)和句(3) 连句成篇 January8 I carefully divided the garlic bulbs into cloves and planted them side by side in a round plastic bowl, with the pointed ends facing up. Then I poured enough water into the bowl and put it in a sunny place. Every day, I water them on time. January 16 Many light green tender shoots are getting out of the cloves. With the garlic growing, the roots grow longer and longer, which look like the white beard of Grandpa. January 24 The garlic sprouts are growing higher and higher day by day, and they have grown to about20 centimetres. All of them look very beautiful, and are not less beautiful than daffodils.写作积累 实战演练2 一、单句翻译 1. 让我告诉你如何种树。 2. 以下是我对它们生长的观察。 3. 给树挖一个足够大的坑，但坑不应该太深。 4. 在土壤中种植两周后，幼苗的叶子逐渐生长成较大的伞形叶子。 5. 这朵粉红色的花吸引了几只蜜蜂，它们围着花儿飞舞。 6.观看它们的生长过程就像欣赏花朵一样有趣。 7.通过观察， 我发现亲自观察草莓的生长过长很有趣。 二、语篇翻译 In order to learn how soybeans grow into soybean sprouts, I grew some by myself. And here is my observation. When high-quality soybeans have been kept in clean water for ten hours, they begin to become soft and their colour becomes lighter. Then, when they are put in a container and kept in a place where there is no sunlight for one day, soft small buds start to appear. During the following three days, the buds gradually become longer and longer. On the fourth day, the buds completely grow into mature soybean sprouts. Watching the growth of soybean sprouts is a pleasure · and I enjoy this process of observation. 3． 书面表达 假如你是李华,你想研究一下向日葵从种子到植株的生长过程,请根据下面的提示写一篇观察日记: 1.你把向日葵种子埋进一个花盆里,浇了些水; 2.几天后,盆中长出了幼苗;你把花盆放在屋里,避免阳光暴晒; 3.幼苗在茁壮地成长,几天后就长得很高了; 4.你对于它的生长很是惊讶。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【新高考模拟试题】你校英语报开设了“Learning to Observe”栏目。请用英语写一篇黄豆芽（soybean sprouts)生长观察日记，并向该栏目投稿，内容包括： 3. 观察过程 4. 你的体会 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 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_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 下午数学考试，你成绩不好，心情郁闷。晚上几个好朋友邀你去歌厅(KTV)唱歌，你们一晚上唱得很尽兴。你用日记的形式记录下你今天的活动及感受。 日记须包括以下几个要点： (1)你因数学成绩不佳，心情一直不好。 (2)晚上朋友们邀请你去KTV唱歌，这是你第一次去KTV。 (3)大家唱得很高兴，而你一直当听众，你觉得你的歌唱得不好，不敢去唱。 (4)在大家的鼓励下，你终于拿起麦克风(microphone), 唱了一首英文歌曲I Believe I Can Fly (5)现在你心情舒畅了，更重要的是你找回了自信。 (6)你在日记中对自己说了这样一句话：“……” 注意：1.词数：100左右。开头已写好，不计入总词数 日记必须包括所有要点，但可以用不同的句式表达。 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_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 5 Nurturing nature 单元写作深度指导 观察日记 单元话题 考题展示 观察日记 【新高考模拟试题】你校英语报开设了“Learning to Observe”栏目。请用英语写一篇黄豆芽（soybean sprouts)生长观察日记，并向该栏目投稿，内容包括： 1. 观察过程 2. 你的体会 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 本单元写作项目是描写植物生长过程的观察日记。观察日记多是亲身经历和耳闻目睹的事情，所以要用第一人称来写;日记多是记述发生过的事情，因此常使用一般过去时,但使用时必须灵活掌握。日记应条理清楚,写出真实感。此外,应注意日记的格式，包括日期、星期和天气的书写位置。 观察日记篇章结构一般采用三段式结构: 第一段:表明写作目的; 第二段:为主体部分,记录植物的成长过程; 第三段:记录作者的感受。 考向分析与应对策略 近几年高考对日记的考查较少，但日记也是应用文中比较实用的一种文体。日记书写的注意事项入局如下： (1)日期、星期一般顶格写在正文之前。可以先写星期，后写年月日，也可以先写年月日，后写星期几。 (2)天气情况应写在日期和星期的同一行稍靠右之处。表示天气情况常用fine, cloudy, rainy, snowy, windy, stormy, sunny等形容词来表示。 (3)正文的内容应该思想健康，积极向上。文章可长可短，开头语应简洁，结尾可适当发表感想。 （4）日记或周记的题材广泛，一般来说要求记录一次意义非凡的事件，例如：宣传节约用水活动、帮助父母做家务、现场或在电视上观看一场比赛、毕业前夕制作毕业纪念视频的过程、一次有意义的旅行、一次有意义的志愿者活动或助人为乐的事件等等。 (5)日记和周记的写作思路： 第一部分，交代事件及发生的时间和场所； 第二部分，描写事件的经过及具体细节； 第三部分，自己的感受及感想。 话题词汇 1. growth conditions of the plant植物的生长条件 2. a hole large enough足够大的洞 3. put the earth back in the hole把土放回洞里 4. up to 20 feet in length长达20英尺 5. select proper seeds选择合适的种子 6. a light application of fertilizer轻施肥料 7. species 物种 8. observation 观察 9. process 过程 10. growth 生长 11. conditions 条件，环境 12. environment 环境 13. suitable 适合的 14. container 容器 15. sprout 发芽 话题句式 1. On the first day,I put some seeds into a basin.第一天,我把一些种子放进一个花盆。 2. Then I poured some water into the basin, for this plant..y 然后我把一些水倒入花盆，因为这种植物…… 3. I placed the basin under the sun.我把花盆放在阳光下。 4. Several days later,the young plants begano grow out of the soft soil. 几天后,幼苗开始从松软的土壤中长出来。 5. I put the basin in the room to avoid the hot sun. 我把花盆放到房间里来避开烈日。 6. These young plants began to grow rapidly...这些幼苗开始快速地生长…… 7. Now they have grown into tall plants.现在它们已经长成了高高的植物。 8. I'm surprised at...我对……感到惊讶。 III.模版框架 观察日记篇章结构一般采用三段式结构: 第一段:表明写作目的; 第二段:为主体部分,记录植物的成长过程; 第三段:记录作者的感受。 假设你是李华,英语老师让你观察某种植物的生长过程。请根据你所拍摄的图片写一篇观察日记,记述苗的生长过程,以便在英语课上跟大家分享。内容包括: 1.播种方式; 2.生长过程; 3.生长结果。注意: 1.词数 80 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:蒜瓣garlic clove;嫩芽 tender shoot;蒜苗 garlic sprout ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作分析】 [总体布局] 观察日记 主题 观察植物生长 体裁 应用文 布局 第一段 播种方式 第二段 生长过程 第三段 生长结果 人称 以第一、三人称为主 时态 以一般现在和过去时态为主 I.用本单元所学单词或短语填空 1.________________________肩并肩地,并排地 2.________________________出来 3._________________________n.根 4.________________________n.厘米 答案 1.side by side 2.get out of 3.root 4.centimetre ⅡI.本单元语块、语法运用 1.完成句子 第一部分:播种方式 (1) I carefully divided the garlic bulbs into cloves and planted them________________________ (并排地)in a round plastic bowl, and the pointed ends________________________(朝上). 第二部分:生长过程 (2) With the garlic_________________________(生长), the roots grow________________________(越来越 长). (3) The roots_________________________(看起来像) the white beard of Grandpa. 第三部分:生长结果 (4)The garlic sprouts are growing higher and higher day by day, and they________________________(已经长到20厘米左右了). 答案(1)side by side;faced up(2)growing;longer and longer(3) look like (4) have grown to about 20 centimetres 2.句式升级 (5)用with的复合结构改写句(1) 6)用定语从句合并句(2)和句(3) 答案 (4) I carefully divided the garlic bulbs into cloves and planted them side by side in a round plastic bowl,with the pointed ends facing up. (5) With the garlic growing,the roots grow longer and longer, which look like the white beard of Grandpa. 连句成篇 January8 I carefully divided the garlic bulbs into cloves and planted them side by side in a round plastic bowl, with the pointed ends facing up. Then I poured enough water into the bowl and put it in a sunny place. Every day, I water them on time. January 16 Many light green tender shoots are getting out of the cloves. With the garlic growing, the roots grow longer and longer, which look like the white beard of Grandpa. January 24 The garlic sprouts are growing higher and higher day by day, and they have grown to about20 centimetres. All of them look very beautiful, and are not less beautiful than daffodils.写作积累 实战演练2 一、单句翻译 1. 让我告诉你如何种树。 2. 以下是我对它们生长的观察。 3. 给树挖一个足够大的坑，但坑不应该太深。 4. 在土壤中种植两周后，幼苗的叶子逐渐生长成较大的伞形叶子。 5. 这朵粉红色的花吸引了几只蜜蜂，它们围着花儿飞舞。 6.观看它们的生长过程就像欣赏花朵一样有趣。 7.通过观察， 我发现亲自观察草莓的生长过长很有趣。 Let me tell you how to plant a tree. Here is my observation of their growth. Dig a hole large enough for the tree, but the hole should not be too deep. The leaves of the seedlings gradually grow into larger umbrella-shaped leaves after they have been planted in the soil for two weeks. The pink flower attracts several bees, which are dancing around it. Watching their growth process is as interesting as enjoying the flowers. Through the observation, I find it interesting to watch the growth process of strawberries in person. 二、语篇翻译 In order to learn how soybeans grow into soybean sprouts, I grew some by myself. And here is my observation. When high-quality soybeans have been kept in clean water for ten hours, they begin to become soft and their colour becomes lighter. Then, when they are put in a container and kept in a place where there is no sunlight for one day, soft small buds start to appear. During the following three days, the buds gradually become longer and longer. On the fourth day, the buds completely grow into mature soybean sprouts. Watching the growth of soybean sprouts is a pleasure · and I enjoy this process of observation. 3． 书面表达 假如你是李华,你想研究一下向日葵从种子到植株的生长过程,请根据下面的提示写一篇观察日记: 1.你把向日葵种子埋进一个花盆里,浇了些水; 2.几天后,盆中长出了幼苗;你把花盆放在屋里,避免阳光暴晒; 3.幼苗在茁壮地成长,几天后就长得很高了; 4.你对于它的生长很是惊讶。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One day I buried some seeds of sunflowers into a basin, where there was some rich soil. After pouring some water into the basin,I began to observe it with great patience. Several days later, some green shoots grew out of the soil,which were so lovely. Seeing that the soil was a little dry, I added some water to it again. After several days,these young plants grew into some tall plants,which were very strong. I was surprised at what I saw that day! How amazing it is to watch a seed become a tall plant! 【新高考模拟试题】你校英语报开设了“Learning to Observe”栏目。请用英语写一篇黄豆芽（soybean sprouts)生长观察日记，并向该栏目投稿，内容包括： 3. 观察过程 4. 你的体会 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In order to learn how soybeans grow into soybean sprouts, I grew some by myself. And here is my observation. When high-quality soybeans have been kept in clean water for ten hours, they begin to become soft and their colour becomes lighter. Then, when they are put in a container and kept in a place where there is no sunlight for one day, soft small buds start to appear. During the following three days, the buds gradually become longer and longer. On the fourth day, the buds completely grow into mature soybean sprouts. Watching the growth of soybean sprouts is a pleasure · and I enjoy this process of observation. 下午数学考试，你成绩不好，心情郁闷。晚上几个好朋友邀你去歌厅(KTV)唱歌，你们一晚上唱得很尽兴。你用日记的形式记录下你今天的活动及感受。 日记须包括以下几个要点： (1)你因数学成绩不佳，心情一直不好。 (2)晚上朋友们邀请你去KTV唱歌，这是你第一次去KTV。 (3)大家唱得很高兴，而你一直当听众，你觉得你的歌唱得不好，不敢去唱。 (4)在大家的鼓励下，你终于拿起麦克风(microphone), 唱了一首英文歌曲I Believe I Can Fly (5)现在你心情舒畅了，更重要的是你找回了自信。 (6)你在日记中对自己说了这样一句话：“……” 注意：1.词数：100左右。开头已写好，不计入总词数 日记必须包括所有要点，但可以用不同的句式表达。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Nov. 18, 2014 Friday Sunny This evening I went to a KTV with some of my good friends.This was the first time that I had been to a KTV and at first I didn't want to go. I was (had been) in a bad mood the whole afternoon because I didn't do well in the math exam. At the KTV, everybody sang his favorite songs very happily except me — I was only one of the audiences. I dare not have a try because I was afraid that I couldn't sing well. Encouraged by my classmates, I picked up the microphone and sang an English song entitled I Believe I Can Fly. I have become cheerful now and above all I've regained self-confidence. I believe that, the worst enemy in one's life is oneself. I shouldn't lose heart just because of one or two failures because I still have chances to try. ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$