Unit1 Life Choices Section Ⅶ Writing—A Personal Email(Word教参)-【精讲精练】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第一册（北师大版2019）

Section Ⅶ　Writing—A Personal Email [对应学生用书P40] 本单元的写作项目属于电子邮件。电子邮件包括收件人地址、寄件人地址、邮件的主题、开头、正文、结束语和签名。 课文展示 写作手法 From：Wang Ying〈wangying@***.com〉 To：Fang Lan〈fanglan@***.com〉(写给谁) Subject：Hello from an old friend(主题) Hi Fang Lan， How's your life in Canada？I hope you have adapted well to the new situation and are enjoying your new school(目的). I love my new senior secondary school.It's much bigger than my junior secondary school and there's a huge gym! Do you remember Xie Zijun? Guess what — we are in the same school! It's always good to have a friend，right？Life in senior secondary school is very different from junior secondary school! You know, we don't have a fixed classroom! We go to different classes for different subjects and also for different levels.I'm in the same class with Zijun for English and physics but in different classes for Chinese and maths.We also have many different clubs after class.You know, I like dancing，so I'm in the Dancing Club.At the moment，we meet twice a week and we're preparing to attend a competition.I think my new school gives me a chance to become a different person and I like the “new me”(介绍详情). Well, I must go now.I've got a presentation tomorrow and I need to finish my slides.I look forward to hearing all about what's happening with you soon(盼回复). All the best! Wang Ying [文章结构] 1．电子邮件是通过互联网传递的邮件，主要由主题、称谓、正文、结尾语和署名等要素构成。 2．与传统信件相比，电子邮件具有格式简约化、内容个性化、表达口语化等特点。 3．虽然电子邮件的表达要直接，但对重点部分仍要作详细介绍。像考试中就必须根据提示，将要点写全，并注意语言的运用。 [相关词句] 1．精彩开头 表示高兴：I was so glad/pleased/happy to receive your email dated May 1st. 表示感谢：Thank you for your wonderful gift/interesting email. 表示关心与询问：How are you these days? /How are you getting on these days? /How are you getting on with your work/studies? 表示抱歉：I am sorry that I did not reply soon but I have been very busy these days. 表示遗憾：I was sorry to learn that you did not do well in the examination./I am so upset to hear that you are ill these days. 2．余味结尾 I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Please give my regards to your family. Take good care of you and keep in touch. 注意事项： 1．各要点之间需要使用First...，Second...，Third...或First of all...，Next...，Third...，Then...，Finally...来表示顺序结构，不要使用阿拉伯数字。常用连接词还有： Firstly，I would like to... Secondly，could you...? Thirdly，I would be... Finally，I would like to... In addition to that，could you...? Another query I have is about... Something else I would like to ask about is... 2．要有过渡词句。由于平行的信息较多，所以除了上面的排序法以外，还应多使用一些衔接词或短语，表示递进关系：then，besides，moreover，in addition (to)，what's more，what's worse，similarly，in the same way...；表示转折关系：but，yet，however，still，though，otherwise，despite，regardless of，in spite of...。 3．句式要多样化。在文章中恰当地使用一些复合句、并列句、倒装句、虚拟语气、强调句型和非谓语等来调节文章的节奏。 4．一般要求在结尾对文章进行总结，可使用in a word，in short，briefly，generally speaking，finally，at last等总结性的词或短语。 5．写完后，一定要通读全文，并进行“四问”： (1)是否遗漏了要点？ (2)语句是否正确通顺？ (3)每段是否围绕中心展开？有没有中心句？结构安排是否合理？ (4)有没有过渡不太自然的地方？能否在此添加过渡词句？ 假设你是李华，在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信。他三年前参观过你们学校，听说现在变化很大，希望了解有关情况。请你根据下面的汉语提示，给他回一封电子邮件，介绍你们学校的变化。 三年前：一座教学楼，一个操场。 现状： 1．校园扩建，新建起了一座教学楼和一座图书馆，内有音乐室、美术室、微机房等，体育设备齐全； 2．学生人数：从1 000增加到2 000； 3．绿化了校园。 注意：词数80左右。 [审题谋篇] 1．本文要求写一封电子邮件，注意使用开头、结尾的常用句式和客套话语。 2．本文主要使用现在时态，在介绍三年前的情况时用过去时态。 3．本文可采用以下结构： (1)称呼语 (2)开头语 (3)介绍学校在这三年间的变化 (4)结束语 (5)落款(签名) [词汇热身] 1．hear from收到……的来信 2．take place发生 3．used to过去常常 4．in use使用中 5. be equipped with装备着 6．the number of...……的数目 [连词成句] 1．过去的三年间我们学校发生了很大的变化。 Great changes have taken place in my school in the past three years. 2．我们的学校不再是三年前只有一座教学楼和一个操场的学校。 Our school is no longer what it used to be three years ago，when there was only a teaching building and a playground. 3．其中一座楼是我们的教学楼，内有音乐室、美术室、微机房等。 One of the buildings is a new classroom building，in which/where there are rooms for music，art and computer teaching. 4．我相信我们的学校会变得越来越好，我希望你再来我们学校参观。 I believe my school will become better and better，and I hope you will visit my school again. [组句成篇] Mr.Smith， I was pleased to hear from you and I am writing to tell you something about my school. You are right.Great changes have taken place in my school in the past three years.It is no longer what it used to be three years ago，when there was only a teaching building and a playground.I'm happy to tell you that two new buildings have been built and are in use.One of them is a new classroom building，in which there are rooms for music，art and computer teaching.The other is the library，where there are all kinds of books，newspapers and magazines.Besides，my school is well equipped with sports facilities.The number of the students has also grown from 1，000 to 2，000.What's more，we have planted a lot of trees in and around the school. I believe my school will become better and better，and I hope you will visit my school again. Yours， Li Hua (2023—2024学年通州高一期末)假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim最近开始学习中文，感觉有些困难，所以给你写信，希望你能给他一些学习中文的建议。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．你的建议及理由； 2．你的祝愿。 注意：1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim， _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua One possible version： Dear Jim， I'm very happy to hear that you are learning Chinese.And I really understand that you are finding Chinese quite challenging to learn.It's okay for beginners to meet some troubles.Here are some advice I'd like to give you. First，I suggest you focus on mastering the basics，such as pinyin and commonly used phrases.This will help you build a strong foundation for further learning.Another suggestion is to immerse yourself in the language as much as possible.Watch Chinese movies or TV shows，listen to Chinese music，and try to communicate with native speakers.This will not only improve your listening and speaking skills but also give you a better understanding of Chinese culture. Remember，learning a new language takes time and effort.I wish you all the best in your Chinese learning journey. Yours， Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$