内容正文:
英 语
2025人教
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Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation?
单元写作提升
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本单元的话题是“度假”。要求学会记录和描述参观访问、假日旅行、
走亲访友的过程和感受。
1.能用一般过去时描述假期活动;
2.能用所学形容词描述景点、食物和感受。
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短语
1.feel like有……的感觉;感受到
2.go on vacation去度假
3.go to the mountains去爬山
4.go to the beach去海滩
5.visit museums参观博物馆
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6.go to summer camp参加夏令营
7.quite a few相当多
8.take photos照相
9.walk around四处走走
10.most of the time大部分时间
11.have a good time玩得高兴
12.try doing sth. 尝试做某事
try to do sth. 尽力去做某事
13.decide to do sth.决定去做某事
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句型
1.He who travels far knows much.
远行者见识广。
2.It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand
books. 读万卷书不如行万里路。
3.The world is a book, but people who do not travel read only
one page.世界是一本书,而不旅行的人只读了其中一页。
4.I am so excited to tell you something interesting about my
summer vacation. 我很高兴告诉你我暑假的一些有趣的事情。
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5.The sky is blue, the air is fresh and the people there are quite
friendly. 那里天很蓝,空气很新鲜,人们也很友好。
6.We went there by train/plane … We stayed there for five days.
We visited some places of interest. 我们坐火车/乘飞机去那里……我们
在那里待了五天。我们参观了一些名胜古迹。
7.We enjoyed the trip and ate lots of local snacks. What a
wonderful trip we had! 我们玩得很开心,吃了很多当地小吃。我们的
旅行多么美妙!
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8.I felt like I was a bird. It was so exciting! 我感觉自己就像一只小
鸟。太令人兴奋了!
9.Everyone in our class took a bag with some food and water. 我们
班上的每一个人都随身带了装有食物和水的袋子。
10.The only problem was that there was nothing much to do in the
evening but read. 唯一的问题是晚上除了看书没有什么可做的。
11.Everyone jumped up and down in excitement.大家都兴奋地跳来跳
去。
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12.I'm interested in the traditions of different places. I'm looking
forward to going there.
我对不同地方的传统感兴趣。我期待着去那里。
13.The trip is so exciting that I will never forget.这次的旅行太让人
兴奋了,我永远不会忘记。
14.We were tired but really happy. We had a great time. 我们很累
但是很开心。我们玩得很开心。
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请以“A happy day”为题,并根据写作要点和写作要求,用英语写
一篇短文。
1.写作要点:1)这一天你去了哪里;
2)你在那里做了什么;
3)你有什么样的感受。
2.写作要求:1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
2)词数80左右。
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A happy day
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【题干剖析】
1.主题:本文要求写一篇旅游日记。
2.人称:由题目“A happy day”和要点可知,描写自己一天的旅游经历
和感受,需要用第一人称。
3.时态:旅游结束后写旅游日记,时态为一般过去时。
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【提纲挈领】
第一段:开篇点题,说明自己旅
游的地方和心情 Today I had a good time on the
beach.
第二段:介绍在沙滩旅游的经历 ①Wearing my swimsuit, I swam in
the blue sea.
②I played volleyball with my
parents.
③I made a sand castle (城堡).
第三段:总结升华 I not only got close to nature but
also shared happiness…
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【抢分范文】
A happy day
Today I had a good time on the beach.
The weather was fine, so I could see the rising sun and flying
seabirds. How beautiful!Wearing my swimsuit, I swam in the blue
sea. Then, I played volleyball with my parents. Finally, I made a
sand castle. It looked so true to life that a crab wanted to live in
it.
What a happy day! I not only got close to nature but also
shared happiness with my family.
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【拓展范文】
It was cool in the morning, so I went to Qingdao with my
parents. We went there by train. I fell in love with it after I came
to the city.
The weather there was fine. We went to the beautiful beaches.
We picked a lot of shells and had great fun playing in the water.
For meals, we ate a lot of seafood. There are many big shops in
Qingdao. We went shopping after lunch. The people there were very
friendly to us.
I had a wonderful time in Qingdao.
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旅游可以让人放松身心,增长见识。假如你是李华,暑假期间你外
出旅游了。请你根据下面的写作要点和写作要求用英文写一篇短文,讲
述你的暑期之旅,然后在本周的英语角活动中和大家分享。
1.写作要点:1)Where did you go?
2)What did you do there?
3)How did you feel?
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2.写作要求:1)内容完整、层次清晰、表达清楚、书写规范;
2)不要出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3)词数80左右。
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One possible version:
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I'm Li Hua. I had a good time with my family last summer
holiday. I went on vacation to Shanghai with my family. We took
a plane there. We stayed there for two days. Everything was great.
We visited Shanghai Museum. I learned a lot about Chinese
history. We went to Shanghai Disneyland Park. We walked on the
street of the park. It was so hot that we ate some ice-cream. We
took many photos. We also ate lots of delicious food like dumplings.
My vacation there was really exciting. I hope to go there again.
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/一句多译/
①其他表达:I enjoyed myself with my family last summer holiday.
=I had fun with my family last summer vacation.
②其他表达:We went there by plane.
③其他表达:It was such a hot day that we ate some ice-cream.
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