Unit1单元话题作文满分范文2024-2025学年人教版英语九年级全册

2024-2025学年 人教版九年级 Unit 1 单元话题作文满分范文 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________ 1．书面表达。 最近，学校就空中俱乐部的英语学习内容设置做了意向调查(结果见下面图表)。请你帮俱乐部用英语写一篇报告，并谈谈你自己的想法或建议。   ◆51% practice spoken English ◆25% watch English movies ◆18% read more classics ◆6% learn foreign culture 注意：(1)文中应包含图表所提供的要点，可适当发挥；(2)想法和建议至少两条；文中不能出现真实姓名和校名；(3)词数：80～100(短文开头不计入总词数，考生可以选择使用)。 Recently we've made a survey of school sky English club. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 范文：Recently we’ve made a servey of sky English club. Here are the results. We find that fifty one percent of the students practice their spoken English by using Internet. Twenty five percent like watching English movies, which can make their holiday life better. Eighteen percent would like to read more English claasics because they’re interested in them. Six percent hope that they can learn more foreign culture, such as manners and westen festivals. As far as I know, it’s very helpful to improve engliah by singing English songs. Maybe we can invite foreigners to introduce good ways to learn songs. I’m sure all of us will have fun in the sky English club. 【详解】本文考查图表作文。1）弄清图表内容。（2）结合提示词，明确考查意图。根据提示，选择正确的时态，运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型，作适当展开。（3）注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯。（4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致，句子的语序和表达是否符合英文习惯等，尽量减少错误。注意：(1)文中应包含图表所提供的要点，可适当发挥；(2)想法和建议至少两条；文中不能出现真实姓名和校名；(3)词数：80～100 2．书面表达。 关于“说英语”问题，李华和他的英语老师Miss Wang持不同的观点。请你仔细阅读下图中的对话内容，从中选择一个角色，按照所给要求写一篇短文。 要求：①用“Li Hua”或“Miss Wang”补全短文首句； ②写出所选角色的观点，并续写理由； ③短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； ④词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：shy; make a mistake; believe in 范文：I am Li Hua. I don't speak English because my English is poor. I find it hard to speak English. I am a little shy and afraid of making a mistake. I always feel nervous when I stand up speaking English in class. I'm afraid that my classmates may laugh at me when I speak English. To tell you the truth, I don't believe in myself. The less I speak, the worse my English is. When my English improves, I will enjoy speaking it. 【详解】本文写作围绕的话题是：“说英语”，但是写作的关键是根据图片和要求，首先确定从谁的立场来阐述 (注意：横线上先填所选角色，再续写理由)；写作时，尽量从自己熟悉的人或事入手，以便展开叙述。同时注意写作时要结合图片中所给的对话提示，可适当发挥；选择的角色不同，人称的使用也不同。可在作文中使用如下单词短语或句型为文章增色：because；I'm afraid that…；To tell you the truth；the+比较级，the+比较级；It’s+ adj.+for sb. to do sth. 3．某班英语课上，就“争当中华好少年”进行小组交流活动，请你根据活动记录情况，以“How to be a good student?”为题，写一篇英语短文。 良好习惯 生活习惯：健康饮食，加强锻炼 诚实守信 学习习惯：上课认真听讲，按时完成作业，不撒谎，考试不作弊 遵守校规 严禁私自下河洗澡，禁止带手机进校园，不打架斗殴 …… …… 要求： 1．全文字数90词左右。文章开头已给出，不计入单词总数。 2．条理清楚，书写正整，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。 3．内容必须包含表格中的提示信息，并适当发挥；文中不能出现真实的人名、地名。 How to be a good student? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 范文： How to be a good student? It's very important to be a good student. As teenagers, how to be a good student? In my opinion, there are lots of things we should do. Firstly, it's necessary to develop good habits in life and study. For example, we should eat healthily and do much exercise every day. Besides, we should listen to the teachers carefully and finish homework on time. Secondly, be honest. Don't tell lies and never cheat in tests. Honesty is the best policy. Thirdly, we are supposed to obey the school rules. Don’t go swimming alone without permission, and don't take mobile phones to school and so on. Finally, we should get on well with our classmates. When someone is in trouble, we should give him a hand. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于材料作文，表格中给出信息都为写作要点，主要包括四部分：①良好习惯；②诚实守信；③遵守校规；④你的观点。注意文章字数限制在90词左右。 2.写作指导：本文用第一人称写作，时态用一般现在时；由于文章主要内容是“如何成为一名好学生”，写作时会用到大量情态动词，注意情态动词后接动词原形；篇章安排上，第一段可以写成为好学生的重要性，以此引出下文，然后第二段主要论述“怎么做”，注意要提出自己的观点，可以是“团结友爱”，也可以是“乐于助人”，由于字数限制，选写一点即可；作文完成后注意检查语法、单词拼写和标点。 4．随着中国的发展，世界各地掀起了“汉语热”。作为中国人，我们更应该学好汉语。请以“My Chinese Learning”为题，写一篇短文。 内容包括：1. 为什么要学汉语？ 2. 谈谈自己学习汉语的经历。 3.介绍1-2条学习汉语的方法。 写作要求：1. 词数80字左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。 My Chinese Learning With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 范文： My Chinese Learning With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. As native speakers, it’s our duty to learn Chinese well. It helps us to understand Chinese culture better. Chinese was one of the subjects when I was in a primary school. At first, I used to be weak in it, and I felt stressed out. My Chinese teacher advised me to read more books. From then on, reading played an important role in my life. I often went to the library which was near my home. I made much more progress in Chinese. I think reading books is a useful way of learning Chinese well. Also, it’s necessary to practice writing as often as we can. Only in this way can we become a good Chinese learner. 【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生以“My Chinese Learning”为题，根据内容提示写一篇短文，谈谈自己学习汉语的经历，属于话题作文。 2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一、三人称和一般现在时及一般过去时两种时态展开叙述。写作时承接开头先介绍对汉语重要性的认识，然后结合实际叙述自己学习汉语的经历，最后介绍学习汉语的方法和学习感受。行文注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。 5．你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少进步，比如生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握。良好习惯的养成。请选取其中一个方面，结合自身经历，谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的，以及毕业前你下一步的打算。请以My progress为题写一篇短文。 要求：（1）观点正确、条理清晰、表达流畅； （2）文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称； （3）卷面整洁，书写工整，词数80词左右。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文： My progress I used to be poor at English, especially in reading and writing which I consider very difficult. The biggest problem was that after reading a passage, I couldn’t fully understand it, which makes me feel very depressed and upset. But I kept on reading difficult English articles instead of just giving up. And I also practiced English writing whenever I had a chance. Little by little, I made much progress in English and gained a lot of confidence through my constant effort. As you can imagine, nothing makes me prouder than feeling my progress in English. I realize that as long as I bravely face my weaknesses and take effective ways to overcome them, I believe I will be successful in the future. I will fight for my dream in the following months! 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。要求从生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习惯的养成等三个方面，来选择其中的一个，以“My progress”为题写一篇作文，谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的，以及毕业前你下一步的打算。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来书写；时态采用一般过去时为主；首先要选择写什么内容，引出话题；然后根据你的话题来详细的陈述是如何取得进步的；最后要介绍毕业前的打算。书写要工整，语言要简练，句子前后要连贯、通顺、符合逻辑。 答案第1页，共2页 答案第1页，共2页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$