Unit 1书面表达-2024-2025初中英语九年级全册单元题型满分训练(人教版)

书面表达 (一) 小组活动和两两活动(group work & pair work)是中学英语课堂常见的学习方式,但是很多学生因为害羞而不愿用英语交谈.请你根据所给提示,给《学生英语报》写一封邮件,介绍英语合作学习的好处. 内容包括:1. 介绍英语合作学习中的问题; 2. 举例说明合作学习对我们的影响; 3. 谈谈你对合作学习的建议. 要求:100词以上,开头、结尾不计入总词数,不得涉及真实的人名和校名. Dear editor, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Ming 【答案】参考范文: Dear editor, In order to have more chances to practice and improve English, we are involved in many kinds of group work & pair work activities in English classes. However, some problems appear during the study. For example, some students think learning English in groups is wasting time. They can learn it all by themselves. Also, they don’t want to share their ideas about learning English. They don’t want others to win in the study competitions. But I think group work is a good way to learn English. Students involve themselves in group work and talk about what the teacher tells, so they can understand the knowledge deeply. Also, they can get on well with their group members. What’s more, if someone doesn’t want to exchange his or her ideas, he or she may lose the chance to know more new methods about learning English. Remember: Helping others is helping yourselves. I think we can learn better in groups, so there should be more group work activities or pair work activities in our English classes. Best wishes! Yours, Li Ming 【详解】1. 题干解读:本题要求根据提示的要点写一封邮件给《学生英语报》,内容是介绍英语合作学习的好处. 2. 写作指导:本文内容以陈述观点为主,所以时态主要采用一般现在时;问题、影响和建议可结合字数要求各简述两点内容;写作时可使用连接词(如Also,What’s more等),这样使得文章层次清晰,逻辑连贯;写作完成时应保证要点齐全,行文流畅,语言符合规范和英文表达习惯. (二) 假定你是李华,你在徐州的美籍朋友Ben来信跟你抱怨中文难学,他觉得学了很长时间,但进步缓慢,所以很沮丧.请你用英语给他回复一封电子邮件,内容包括: 1. 表示理解并给予安慰; 2. 提出你的建议(至少三点). 要求: 1. 邮件需包含所给要点,可适当发挥; 2. 邮件中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名; 3. 词数:90左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数). Dear Ben, Thank you very much for telling me about your problem__________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Ben, Thank you very much for telling me about your problem. I’m sorry that you’re having trouble learning Chinese. It is no easy job and I have heard a lot about the difficulties in Chinese learning, so you are not alone. Here are some tips you may find helpful. It would be a good idea if you could find as many chances as possible to talk with local people. It is a great way to push you to speak Chinese as well as practice your listening skills. Equally important is reading more. Go to the bookstore and find some Chinese story-books suitable for you and set a time to read every day. It takes time to learn a language. Be patient and you’ll make progress. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】1. 题干解读:这篇作文要求考生根据提示的内容要点,写一封电子邮件回复Ben提出的问题,属于电子邮件写作,需注意正确的格式. 2. 写作指导:审题可知,这篇邮件回复关于汉语学习的建议,应以第一、三人称和一般现在时为主,以第二人称为辅展开叙述.写作中要紧承开头,按照提示的要点,首先对对方的问题表示理解和安慰,然后针对汉语学习问题给出自己的建议,最后表达祝愿.行文时注意主谓一致和上下文的过渡,符合逻辑关系,保证无语法和单词拼写错误. (三) 假定你是李华,最近你收到笔友Jack的邮件.请根据以下邮件内容,用英文写一封回信. Dear Li Hua, How is everything going? I am happy to tell you that I get used to my study here. But sometimes I feel lonely and a little upset. Could you tell me what I should do? I am looking forward to your suggestions. Jack 要求: 1. 针对Jack邮件中提到的问题至少给出两条建议; 2. 文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名; 3. 词数为80左右,格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数. Dear Jack, I am very glad to receive your email. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Jack, I am very glad to receive your email. I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that you always felt lonely and a little upset. I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school. In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you. Besides, you’d better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. I hope my advice is helpful to you. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一封电子邮件; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”与“一般过去时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点. [写作步骤] 第一步,对Jack表示关心; 第二步,对Jack的问题给出具体的建议; 第三步,书写结语. [亮点词汇] ①have trouble doing做……有困难 ②get used to习惯于 ③make friends交朋友 ④look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. (that引导的宾语从句) ②In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you. (who引导的限制性定语从句) (四) 某中学对高一新生进行了英语口语能力问卷调查, 以下是其中两个问题的调查数据.假如你是该校高一新生, 请结合下图数据和自身口语情况, 给你的英语老师写一篇短文. 要求∶ 1. 80-120词, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称. 参考信息: 1. 描述问卷调查结果(频率、方法); 2. 介绍自身口语情况(水平、打算·…); 3. …. The results of the survey show that 17% of the students hardly ever practise speaking English. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 The results of the survey show that 17% of the students hardly ever practise speaking English. 45% of the students usually practice speaking English, and 38% of the students practise speaking English sometimes. How do you practise speaking English? Most students speak more only in class. Some of the students talk with friends in English. Some students practise speking English in other ways. In my opinion, we should talk with our partners in English as much as we can. Also, we should often listen to English stories in order to improve our understanding about English. Never be afraid of speaking English in front of others! This is quite important. Over and above, we should learn more English words. Only in this way, can we be good English speaker! 【详解】题干解读:这是一个看图作文,图中列出了某中学对学生进行的英语口语能力的调查问卷,包括两个问题,一个是“你多久练习说一次英语”;另一个是“你怎样练习说英语”.学生们应仔细观察图表中的信息,将这两个问题的调查结果表达出来.短文中还应包括另外一个内容,即介绍自己口语的情况,并对如何提高口语能力,提出自己的建议.短文应以一般现在时态为主,根据表达需要选择适当的人称. 例文点评:这是一篇优秀的作文.首先短文内容完整,叙述条理,结构清晰.文章采取两段式结构,第一段主要介绍该问卷调查的结果,包含了图表中的所有信息,没有遗漏要点,且各部分内容安排合理,有层次;第二段是自己的口语情况,以及对如何提高口语能力的建议.其次短文语法正确,用词准确,句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯.短文以简单句结构为基础,还使用了祈使句、宾语从句、非谓语动词等结构,表达流畅,意思连贯. 高分亮点: 短语:talk with;in other ways;in one’s opinion;be afraid of;in this way. 句型:45% of the students usually practice speaking English, and 38% of the students practise speaking English sometimes.;In my opinion, we should talk with our partners in English as much as we can.;Never be afraid of speaking English in front of others!;Only in this way, can we be good English speaker! (五) 今年春节晚会上,很多人加入了抢红包游戏活动,但也有人表示担忧.假如你叫李华,你班最近开展了一个有关抢红包游戏活动的调查.请你用英文给学校校刊《英语园地》写一封信,介绍此次调查的结果并谈谈你的观点. 参考词汇:抢红包grabbing red packets 要   求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;   2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥; 3)词数:100词左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数); 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等. Dear Editor, I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Editor, I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class. About 70% of the students took part in the game in my class. About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment and can bring them more fun. It can bring people closer so that they can make more friends. Grapping red packets had been part of people’s lives. However, about 25% of them are worried about the activity. They say some people spend too much time grapping red packets. As a result, they don’t have enough communication with their family members. As a result, they may feel a little lonely. Moreover, looking at the screen for too long is harmful to people’s eyes. Grapping red packets on the street might cause traffic accidents. I think this game is really exciting, but we should spend more time communicating with our family members. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】试题分析:本文根据所给信息可知,会使用到一般现在时.然后灵活采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当.语言力求准确、简洁.最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等. 写作亮点:本文内容符合题意,叙事条理清晰,描述自然流畅,发挥恰当,切合要求.文中使用了不少固定词组如:took part in  be worried about,  spend...doing..., feel lonely, be harmful to 等; 还使用了丰富的句型,如so that引导的目的状语从句,宾语从句等;同时使用了恰当的连词,如however,as a result等使文意更加连贯;为短文增色不少. (六) 阅读是同学们未来参与社会应具备的关键能力,无论你喜欢哪种阅读方式,它都能让你增长知识,开阔眼界.最近,某出版社在两万人中,针对人们喜欢的阅读方式做了一项调查,下图是相关的统计结果,其中包括电子阅读和纸质阅读的人数. 请你用两段话写一篇短文:第一段用百分比简要说明图表内容,第二段从图表中选出一项你喜欢的阅读方式,结合自己的经历,谈谈这种阅读方式的好处. 要求: 1. 词数不少于80; 2. 首句已给出,不计入总词数. 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名. Recently, a survey was done among 20,000 people about the ways of reading. Here is what we have learned from it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Recently, a survey was done among 20,000 people about the ways of reading. Here is what we have learned from it. 60% of the people like to read on mobile phones or e-readers, while only 38.4% choose to read paper books. So we can know that more and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books. However, whatever way of reading we choose, it can help increase our knowledge and open our eyes. As for me, I am still used to reading paper books. Whenever I open a paper book, the smell of paper reminds me of the stories in the books from my mom when I was a little kid. Just because of this, I got into the habit of reading. So when I read paper books now, they always bring me the old feelings. On the other hand, compared with the electronic devices, reading paper books is good for eyes. So you see, I believe e-books won’t take the place of paper books in my heart. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇说明文,为看图作文; ② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③ 提示:写作要点已经给出,考生要注意要点中的“从图表中选出一项你喜欢的阅读方式”来谈谈这种阅读方式的好处,这是本篇写作的重点. [写作步骤] 第一步,简要说明图表内容; 第二步,从图表中选出一项自己喜欢的阅读方式,结合自己的经历,谈谈这种阅读方式的好处. 第三步,书写结语. [亮点词汇] ① more and more 越来越多 ② increase 增长 ③ as for 关于,至于 ④ remind sb. of 使某人想起…… ⑤ compared with 与……相比较 [高分句型] ① So we can know that more and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books.(prefer to do sth. rather than do sth. 宁愿做某事而不愿做某事) ② whatever way of reading we choose, it can help increase our knowledge and open our eyes. (whatever引导的让步状语从句) (七) 在我们的学习和生活中,能够全身心地投入到一件事情中去,享受做事情的过程,是一种幸福！但求耕耘,不问收获！某英文网站正在以”全身心投入(Devotion)”为主题的征文活动.假如你是慧洁,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,包含下列问题: 1. What did you devote yourself to? 2. How did you do it? 3. What have you learnt from the experience? ... 注意:1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息; 2. 词数100词左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数. Devotion ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文: Five years ago, I started to devote myself to painting, which turned out to be one of the most important experiences in my life. One day, I saw some of my schoolmates painting in the art room. The colorful pictures caught my attention immediately. I was so drawn to the beauty in front of me that I joined the Painting Club. After that, no matter whatever happened, I still was on time to each art lesson and finished each painting carefully. By doing this, I developed my ability and decided that I wanted to completely devote myself to painting. Not only did I win countless awards but also my painting journey helped me grow into a better person. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主; ③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生要注意不要遗漏信息提示,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点. [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图.表明自己全心投入到画画中去的观点. 第二步,具体阐述写作内容.讲述自己是如何爱上绘画的以及自己的做法是怎样的. 第三步,书写结语.简单地阐述自己在这次经历中的收获. [亮点词汇] ①devote oneself to全身致力于 ②in front of在……之前 ③on time按时 ④not only…but also… 不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①Five years ago, I started to devote myself to painting, which turned out to be one of the most important experiences in my life. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②Not only did I win countless awards but also my painting journey helped me grow into a better person.(倒装句) (八) 水资源匮乏是世界难题之一,但我们的同学中仍然存在不少浪费水的情况.请根据这种现象写一篇英语短文. 要求:1. 字数:70-90字.开头已给出,不计入总词数. 2. 内容包括:(1)这种现象的危害是什么; (2)我们该如何节约水(至少两条建议) (3)号召同学们节约水资源. 3. 文中不得出现真实的班级与人名. Let’s save water The lack of water is one of the biggest problems in the world. _____________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Let’s save water The lack of water is one of the biggest problems in the world. As we all know, the water we use is the most important natural resource on the earth. We can’t live without water. But some people don’t care about it. They waste a lot of water in their daily lives. Something must be done to stop this action. For example, turn off the tap when we are brushing our teeth. And take a shower instead of taking a bath.   Only in this way, we can live happily. If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a teardrop of ours. 【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文.围绕“节约水资源”写一篇短文. 2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时.分为两段式:第一段介绍浪费水的这种现象以及如何节约用水;最后一段呼吁节约水资源.写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误. (九) “吾日三省吾身”是一句出自《礼记•大学》的名言,意思是每天反思自己的言行以完善自己.请你以“My Ways to Improve Myself”为题,结合自己的经历介绍一下你的自我完善方法以及这样做的成效或理由.可以从以下方面进行思考: *为人处世*生活技能*学习方法*身心健康 注意: 1. 词数100左右; 2. 字迹工整,书写规范,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息. My Ways to Improve Myself ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文: My Ways to Improve Myself I have to improve myself. Firstly, the only one who is responsible for what you’ve done is yourself, so let’s be responsible for our families and parents. Secondly, we’d better take up all kinds of living skills, such as cooking breakfast. Thirdly, when we meet with problems, we should ask for help in time. Besides, I will exercise one hour everyday to keep healthy. Once, both of my parents were on a business trip, so I had to take care of myself. Through this incident, I learned how to cook. And from then on, I will no longer worry about cooking. Only then we kill our bad habits and develop our good ones, will we improve ourselves. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇说明文写作; ②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般过去时; ③提示:写作主题已给出,写作时注意围绕所给四个方面展开,合理组织语言,可适当发挥. [写作步骤] 第一步,引出主题; 第二步,详细介绍提升自己的方法; 第三步,书写结语,表达决心. [亮点词汇] ①be responsible for为……负责 ②take up学习 ③take care of照顾 ④from then on从那以后 ⑤no longer不再 [高分句型] ①Firstly, the only one who is responsible for what you’ve done is yourself, so let’s be responsible for our families and parents. (定语从句) ②Only then we kill our bad habits and develop our good ones, will we improve ourselves.(倒装句) (十) 以”How to keep healthy”为题,写一篇短文. 要求:条理清楚,字迹工整,60—80词. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 How to Keep Healthy Health is very important for everybody. Then how can we do to keep healthy? You can try the following tips: First, you should have healthy eating habits. You should eat more vegetables and fruit. It’s good for you. Don’t eat too much meat. Don’t drink coffee too much. Second, you can play sports. Sports can make you stronger and healthier. You can play basketball with your friends when you are free. You can go to the mouuntains with your family. Third, be happy. A happy man lives longer than a sad man .So sing a song or watch a fun movie. You can do anything to make yourself happy. At last, stay away from smoking and drinking. Smoking and drinking are too bad for men .They can cause terrible illness. If you do these things, I believe you can be a healthy man. 【详解】试题分析:这篇短文要求我们以How to keep healthy为题写一篇作文.在题目中给了我们这篇短文的重点词汇,如healthy habits 健康的习惯,eating habits饮食习惯,be good for对……有好处,do exercise进行锻炼, keep fit保持健康.我们要围绕这些重点词汇组织短文的写作.其他很多内容都需要我们自己去充实,让它变得完整、合理,内容丰富,这就需要花费我们的想象力,以及我们平时积累的知识.另外,写作时,还需注意语句间的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅. 写作亮点:这是一篇比较不错的作文.作者从健康的习惯、锻炼等几个方面,告诉我们如何才能保持健康,层次非常的清晰.短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错.如Health is very important for everybody. Then how can we do to keep healthy?等.这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要,意思也很连贯.文章中还用了一些比较好的句型,如If you do these things ,I believe you can be a healthy man. At last,stay away from smoking and drinking.等. (十一) 下面是一篇未写完的短文,请认真阅读,为短文写一个不少于4个句子(30个词)的结尾,使短文连贯完整. English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions._______________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions. First, we should memorize as many words as possible. Using the pronunciation to remember new words is a good way. Second, we had better read the words or sentences loudly. Third, we can listen to the tape. Listening is the basic of English learning, so it’s important. These are some good ways to learn English. I hope they can be useful to us. 【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于话题作文写作,要求根据所给的短文开头,介绍学好英语的建议. 2.写作指导:本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述;时态采用一般现在时;文章开头已给出,写作时,注意承接上文,根据要点提示具体介绍如何学好英语的建议:多记单词;大声朗读单词或句子;听磁带;注意单词书写的准确度,语法运用的准确度,上下文注意连接的流畅度,以及逻辑合理. (十二) 随着中国的发展,世界各地掀起了“汉语热”.作为中国人,我们更应该学好汉语.请以“My Chinese Learning”为题,写一篇短文. 内容包括:1. 为什么要学汉语? 2. 谈谈自己学习汉语的经历. 3.介绍1-2条学习汉语的方法. 写作要求:1. 词数80字左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数. 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名. My Chinese Learning With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular.________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文: My Chinese Learning With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. As native speakers, it’s our duty to learn Chinese well. It helps us to understand Chinese culture better. Chinese was one of the subjects when I was in a primary school. At first, I used to be weak in it, and I felt stressed out. My Chinese teacher advised me to read more books. From then on, reading played an important role in my life. I often went to the library which was near my home. I made much more progress in Chinese. I think reading books is a useful way of learning Chinese well. Also, it’s necessary to practice writing as often as we can. Only in this way can we become a good Chinese learner. 【详解】1. 题干解读:这篇作文要求考生以“My Chinese Learning”为题,根据内容提示写一篇短文,谈谈自己学习汉语的经历,属于话题作文. 2. 写作指导:审题可知,这篇短文应以第一、三人称和一般现在时及一般过去时两种时态展开叙述.写作时承接开头先介绍对汉语重要性的认识,然后结合实际叙述自己学习汉语的经历,最后介绍学习汉语的方法和学习感受.行文注意主谓一致,保证无语法和单词拼写错误. (十三) 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文.请你根据下列要点写回信. 要点: 1.参加中文学习班; 2.看中文书刊、电视; 3.学唱中文歌曲; 4.交中国朋友. 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息. Dear Tom, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文: Dear Tom, I am glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you will be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you will learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try and write me in Chinese next time. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于说明文写作,但写作时要按书信格式写.所给要点即文章正文内容,要全部囊括在语篇中. 2.写作指导:本文应该用第三人称来陈述;时态采用一般现在时为主.第一段直奔主题,点出目的;第二段是建议,注意衔接词的使用,保证语篇的连贯性;第三段表达出对回信的期待和美好祝愿.要有理有据、叙述完整、保证条理清晰. (十四) 假如你是Cindy,你收到了朋友Mike的来信.针对信中谈到的问题,请给他写一封回信,提出一些建议,帮助他积极乐观地面对学习和生活. 要点: 1. 如何缓解学习压力; 2. 如何改善与父母的关系(如做家务,多沟通等); 3. 给他一些美好的祝愿. 要求: 1. 包含以上要点; 2. 语言流畅,表达正确,逻辑清晰,字迹工整; 3. 词数:80~100. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Dear Mike,      Are you OK? From your letter, I know you have some troubles, the following are some suggestions I gave you.      First, you should learn how to communicate with others and make as many friends as possible. Then when you are in trouble, you can ask your classmates or friends for help because they’re the same age as you and you can understand each other easily. As for your parents, I suggest you try your best to understand them. Although they may give you too much pressure, but it is because they really love you and want you to have a bright future. In order to keep a good relationship with your parents, it’s better for you to have a long talk with them and express your opinion. Furthermore, you can communicate with them from time to time and help them do more housework.      I hope my advice can help you and I hope you will get on well with your parents. I really hope that you can be happier in the following days and wish you a bright future!                                                                                                                                                                      Your friend,                                                                                                                                                                            Jeanne 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文; ② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏所给要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点. [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图,说明从Mike来信中知道的问题,引出信件内容; 第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从“缓解压力、改善与父母关系”等几个方面介绍给出的建议; 第三步,书写结语,表达对Mike“美好的祝愿”. [亮点词汇] ① communicate with 和……沟通 ② as for 至于 ③ furthermore 进一步 ④ in trouble 处于麻烦中 [高分句型] It’s better for you to have a long talk with them and express your opinion. (it固定句型) (十五) 给Tom写一封信,谈谈你的假期活动安排.可以适当发挥. 提示: 1. What are your plans for the coming winter vacation? 2. What are you going to do to improve your English? 3. What sports are you going to do to keep healthy? 4. What are you going to do to improve the relationship between you and your parents? 要求: 1. 条理清晰,要点齐全,逻辑严密,书写规范. 2. 文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分. 3. 不少于70词,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数. Dear Tom, How is it going? I’m glad to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about you? What are your plans for your winter vacation? Yours, Wei Ming 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, How is it going? I’m glad to hear from you. First, I like studying and playing on the computer very much. So I am going to learn some computer skills from my father during the vacation. I like reading. I am not good at English. So I am going to buy some interesting English books and finish reading them one by one. Second, I am going to play soccer for two hours with my friends every day to keep healthy. Third, I am going to help my parents with the housework, which can improve the relationship between I and my parents. I like cooking, and I am going to help my parents make a banana milk shake. I think it is easy but delicious. I am sure I will have a good time. What about you? What are your plans for your winter vacation? Yours, Wei Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇书信作文; ②时态:时态主要为“一般将来时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点. [写作步骤] 第一步,开篇点题,点出“我的寒假计划”的主题; 第二步,具体阐述写作内容.从“寒假计划、如何提高英语、保持身体健康、和父母相处”等方面进行介绍; 第三步,书写结语,期待对方来信. [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事 ③have a good time玩得开心 [高分句型] ①Third, I am going to help my parents with the housework, which can improve the relationship between I and my parents.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②I think it is easy but delicious.(省略that的宾语从句) ( 22 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$