2024年人教版江西省中考英语专题复习之书面表达课件

Writing 书面表达专题复习 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 1 Learning Goals 学习目标 1. 能理解、分析题目,正确审题并根据题目要求列出作文提纲。 2. 能了解过程性写作的各个环节及关注点。 5. 能描述自己对未来的规划,了解应该怎样自我提升,为祖国的发展贡献一份力量。 3. 能辨识语篇中的衔接手段,并能将合适的衔接词运用在语篇写作中。 4. 能按照评价表,评价自己或他人生成的语篇,并说明理由。 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 2 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 3 在课件中会闪出魔法棒,请数一数有多少个? 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 4 明确书面表达要求 新课标三级语言技能对九年级学生写的能力做了以下要求: 1.根据写作要求,收集、准备素材,独立起草、修改和完成语篇; 2.为所给图表或自己创作的图片写出简单的说明; 3.围绕相关主题,用所学语言,以书面语篇的形式描述和介绍身边的人和事物,表达情感、态度和观点; 4.在书面表达中使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系,连接信息,做到意义连贯; 5.在书面表达中进行适当的自我修正,用语得当,沟通与交流得体、有效。 审题 布局 生成 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 5 秘诀一 审题(examine the topic ) 审人称、审时态、审要点 2023年江西初中学业水平考试英语作文 学校决定开展向航天女英雄王亚平学习的英文演讲活动,请你按下面表格要求写一篇演讲稿。先简单介绍王亚平的个人信息,再谈谈你从本卷完形填空B篇中感受到的她的优秀品质(personality),最后说说你打算如何向她学习。 人称 时态 要点 she I 一般现在时 一般将来时 1.介绍王亚平的个人信息(年龄、出生地、爱好); 2.描述她的优秀品质; 3.谈论你的计划。 写作要点 具体内容 1. Personal information Age: 42 Birthplace: a small village in Shandong Province Hobby: sports 2. Personality 根据完形填空B篇概括(不得照搬原文) 3. Your plans ①_ ②_ … 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 6 1. 按点分段 内容包括: 1.介绍王亚平的个人信息; 2.描述她的优秀品质; 3.你的打算。 Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce an astronaut hero — Wang Yaping. Thank you. Personal information 第二段: 介绍个人信息 Personality 第三段: 描述优秀品质 Your plans 第四段: 谈论计划 秘诀二 布局 (decide the layout ) 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 7 How to introduce personal information? Questions about writing How to describe the personality? How to talk about the plan? 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 8 2. 词-句-段-篇 秘诀二 布局 How to write a good composition? vocabulary sentence paragraph passage 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 9 Wang Yaping Personal information Age Birthplace Hobby 42 be born in in a small village in Shandong Province sports (exercise) art ping-pong/ basketball... do kungfu draw go bike riding Personality Your plan vocabulary sing play the guitar/ piano... reading dance ... 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 10 丰富性 How to write a good composition? vocabulary sentence paragraph passage 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 11 语言的丰富性-句式多样性策略 She is 42. She is 42 years old. She is a 42-year-old astronaut. She is an astronaut of 42. She is at the age of 42. sentence 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 12 How to write a good composition? vocabulary sentence paragraph passage 丰富性 多样性 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 13 Wang Yaping is a 42-year-old astronaut. Her birthplace is in a small village in Shandong Province. Her hobby is doing sports such as playing ping-pong and going bike riding. 连词成句: 主语+谓语+其他 (一般现在时) sentence 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 14 第二段: 介绍个人信息 introduce personal information How to introduce personal information? Questions about writing How to describe the personality? 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 15 Wang Yaping is an astronaut. In 2013, she became the second Chinese woman to travel to space.She is also famous for a physics class televised for more than 60 million people. Wang trained very hard for many years to be an astronaut. The hardest part was desert training.Wearing a spacesuit and carrying special and heavy equipment (装备), she walked several kilometers through the hot and sandy desert. “Sometimes it was so windy and dusty(布满灰尘的),”she says, “that we couldn’t see each other even though we were just a few meters away.” Wang loves her job. She remembers watching the first Chinese astronaut go into space. “I was so proud and also very excited. But when I watched it, a thought came into my mind: We have men pilots and women pilots, and then a man astronaut. When will there be a woman astronaut? And today,it’s me becoming one of the first few.” Find out the personality according to the things she does. 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 16 love her job overcome the difficulties never give up face the problems be proud of China love our motherland train hard confident vocabulary 2. 词-句-段-篇 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 17 describe the personality 第三段: 描述优秀品质 • 连词成句: 主语+谓语+其他 (一般现在时) sentence 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 18 Watch your actions, they become your habits; 行为决定习惯 Watch your habits, they become your values; 习惯决定性格 Watch your values, they become your destiny. 性格决定命运 -美国哲学家、心理学家威廉 詹姆士《习惯论》 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 19 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 20 How to talk about the plan? 1. What do you want to do/be when you grow up? 2. How are you going to do that? Dreams/Jobs Actions vocabulary 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 21 2. 词-句-段-篇 How to talk about the plan? sentence 连词成句: 主语+谓语+其他 I want to do... I plan to do... I am going to do... I will do... 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 22 Wang Yaping is a 42-year-old astronaut. Her birthplace is in a small village in Shandong Province. Her hobby is doing sports such as playing ping-pong and going bike riding. Wang Yaping is very confident. She is proud of China and loves our motherland very much. She always faces the problems and overcomes the difficulties in training and never gives up. In the future, I am going to be confident and I want to be a doctor to make my contribution to our country. I will make a weekly plan and study hard. I will also eat healthily and do more exercise. I’ll stick to my dream and never give up. paragraph Wang Yaping is a 42-year-old astronaut who is born in a small village in Shandong Province. Her hobby is doing sports such as playing ping-pong and going bike riding. As we all know, Wang Yaping is quite confident. She is proud of China and loves our motherland very much. To achieve her astronaut dream, she always faces the problems and overcomes the difficulties in training and never gives up. In the future, I am going to be confident and I want to be a doctor like Zhong Nanshan to make my contribution to our country. I will make a weekly plan and study hard. I will also eat healthily and do more exercise. What’s more, no matter how hard it is, I’ll stick to my dream and never give up. Find out the differences Paragraph 1 Paragraph 2 Underline different sentences 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 23 0 9 0 0 0 1 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 5 0 0 0 4 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 3 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 2 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 0 Hours Minutes Seconds Writing Time 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com paragraph Paragraph 1 Paragraph 2 Wang Yaping is a 42-year-old astronaut. Her birthplace is in a small village in Shandong Province. Wang Yaping is very confident. Wang Yaping is a 42-year-old astronaut who is born in a small village in Shandong Province. As we all know, Wang Yaping is quite confident. She always faces the problems and overcomes the difficulties in training and never gives up. I want to be a doctor to make my contribution to our country. I’ll stick to my dream and never give up. To achieve her astronaut dream, she always faces the problems and overcomes the difficulties in training and never gives up. I want to be a doctor like Zhong Nanshan to make my contribution to our country. adverb example clause conjunction … Which one is better? What’s more, no matter how hard it is, I’ll stick to my dream and never give up. infinitive 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 25 表顺序 first, second, then, next, finally firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally on the one hand, on the other hand for one thing, for another thing 表转折 but, however, though 表列举 for example, such as 表递进 what’s more, besides, not only .. but also 表因果 so, therefore, as a result, thanks to, because 表观点 in my opinion, as far as I know 表总结 in a word, in short, in conclusion, all in all 常见的连接词: 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 26 练一练: Beautify the paragraph 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 27 How to write a good composition? vocabulary sentence paragraph passage 丰富性 多样性 连和美 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 28 Wang Yaping is a 42-year-old astronaut who is born in a small village in Shandong Province. Her hobby is doing sports such as playing ping-pong and going bike riding. As we all know, Wang Yaping is quite confident. She is proud of China and loves our motherland very much. To achieve her astronaut dream, she always faces the problems and overcomes the difficulties in training and never gives up. In the future, I am going to be confident and I want to be a doctor like Zhong Nanshan to make my contribution to our country. I will make a weekly plan and study hard. I will also eat healthily and do more exercise. What’s more, no matter how hard it is, I’ll stick to my dream and never give up. passage Head Body Tail 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 29 Wang Yaping is a 42-year-old astronaut who is born in a small village in Shandong Province. Wang Yaping is a 42-year-old astronaut who is born in a small village in Shandong Province. Her hobby is doing sports such as playing ping-pong and going bike riding. As we all know, Wang Yaping is quite confident. She is proud of China and loves our motherland very much. To achieve her astronaut dream, she always faces the problems and overcomes the difficulties in training and never gives up. In the future, I am going to be confident and I want to be a doctor like Zhong Nanshan to make my contribution to our country. I will make a weekly plan and study hard. I will also eat healthily and do more exercise. What’s more, no matter how hard it is, I’ll stick to my dream and never give up. Add a good beginning and a good ending to finish the composition passage 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 30 Beginning Ending 请结合内容主题连线导出句和结尾句 Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce an astronaut hero — Wang Yaping. I have learned a lot from Wang Yaping. I’m sure that I will achieve my dream and be a useful person like her. Wang Yaping is an example to us all. I believe I can bring out the best in me by learning from her. Do you know our astronaut hero Wang Yaping? Let me tell you something about her. 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 31 How to write a good composition? vocabulary sentence paragraph passage 丰富性 多样性 连和美 有始终 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 32 Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce an astronaut hero — Wang Yaping. Wang Yaping is a 42-year-old astronaut who is born in a small village in Shandong Province. Her hobby is doing sports such as playing ping-pong and going bike riding. As we all know, Wang Yaping is quite confident. She is proud of China and loves our motherland very much. To achieve her astronaut dream, she always faces the problems and overcomes the difficulties in training and never gives up. In the future, I am going to be confident and I want to be a doctor like Zhong Nanshan to make my contribution to our country. I will make a weekly plan and study hard. I will also eat healthily and do more exercise. What’s more, no matter how hard it is, I’ll stick to my dream and never give up. Wang Yaping is an example to us all. I believe I can bring out the best in me by learning from her. Thank you. 秘诀三 生成 introduce personal information describe the personality 查要点,查语言(拼写,时态,语句逻辑) was born talk about the plan (Generate the passage) 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 33 江西省中考作文评分标准 第一档(13-15分) 信息完整,表达流畅,无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档(10-12分) 信息基本完整,表达较流畅,有少量语言错误,但不影响意思表达。 第三档(7-9分) 能传达部分信息,表达不够流畅,语言错误较多,但句子基本可读。 第四档(4-6分) 只能传达少量信息,表达不流畅,语言错误多,只有少量句子可读。 第五档(1-3分) 只能传达个别信息,表达不清楚,只有个别句子可读。 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 34 Please exchange your writings and make them better. 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 35 Peer-assessment (同伴互评) yes no 1. 结构清晰 Did he/she have a clear structure? 2.分段写 Did he/she write 3 or 4 paragraphs? 3.情感丰富 Did he/she express rich feelings? 4.好词好句 Did he/she use good words and sentences? 5.行文连贯 Did he/she use linking words? 6.书写美观 Did he/she write beautifully? 7.80词以上 Did he/she write over 80 words? 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 秘诀一 审题 1.审人称 2.审时态 3.审要点 秘诀二 布局 1. 按点分段 2. 词-句-段-篇 秘诀三 生成 查要点,查语言 (拼写,时态,语句逻辑) 词-丰富性 句-多样性 段-连和美 篇-有始终 Summary 总结 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 37 审 认真审题,确认文体、人称、时态和要点。 列 确认文章结构,用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。 美 适当使用一些短语或通过改变句式来美化文章。 连 恰当运用关联词语,使其层次清晰,衔接自然。 加 加首尾,使结构完整。开头结尾句子要简洁。 查 查拼写、标点、语法、逻辑、完整度。 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 38 Great(20分) Good(10分) Try harder(5分) I can analyse the task and examine the topic. I can write the passage with four steps (vocabulary, sentence, paragragh, passage). I can use the linking words to make my passage more logical. I can make the structure of my passage more clear by paragraphing and adding the beginning and the ending. I can talk about my plans for the future and know how to improve myself. Self-assessment (自评) 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 39 Let's do it! 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 40 2024年11月29日,神州十五号成功发射。本次乘组航天员之一的江西籍航天员邓清明为了实现他的飞天梦,坚守了近25年从未放弃。宁可备而无用,不可用而无备,9000多个日夜坚持不懈的训练只愿为祖国的载人航天事业奋斗终身。假如你是李华,请给凯旋归来的邓清明写一封信,包括以下内容: 1.谈谈你对邓清明的了解; 2.说说你打算如何向他学习; 3.向他表达祝福,期待他的凯旋。 要求: 1.短文应包含以上所有写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,书写工整,可适当发挥; 2.词数:80-120。 参考词汇:Shenzhou XV 神州十五号 launch 发射 Homework 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 41 Dear Mr. Deng, I’m Li Hua, a student from Jiangxi. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Your sincerely, Li Hua Level A 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 42 Level B I know you are a great astronaut and you_ _. Dear Mr. Deng, I’m Li Hua, a student from Jiangxi.I’m writing to _ _. I want to be a useful person like you. First,_ In the end, I hope _. Para.2 Para.3 Para.4 _. Second,_ _.I’m sure my dream will come true as long as I try my best. _.What’s more,_ Para.1 Your sincerely, Li Hua 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 43 Homework You must (必做): write your own composition. If you can(选做): evaluate your partner’s composition and make it better. 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com 44 Thank you for your listening! 感谢您下载平台上提供的PPT作品,为了您和以及原创作者的利益,请勿复制、传播、销售,否则将承担法律责任!将对作品进行维权,按照传播下载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿! ibaotu.com $$