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Writing——如何写人物介绍类演讲稿[对应学生用书第80页]
演讲稿属于应用文的一种。写作时要首先点明演讲的主题和目的,以引起听众的注意;主体部分可以通过事例、细节描述等有步骤地展开对主题的介绍;结尾总结时,要对主题进行概括、强调。
本单元的写作部分要求写一篇人物介绍类的演讲稿,文章除了要符合一般演讲稿的特点和要求外,还要指明人物、时间、地点、事件及结果等要素。
[基本框架]
1.介绍人物的身份、职业、成就及其产生的影响;
2.描述该人物与众不同的方面;
3.阐述自己的感受:从人物事迹中学到的品质以及对人物的评价。
[常用词语]
1.focus on 把重点集中在……
2.help each other 互相帮助
3.for example 例如
4.the topic of my speech 演讲的主题
5.as far as I am concerned 就我而言
6.concentrate on 集中于
7.according to a report 据报道
8.last but not least 最后但同样重要的是
[常用语句]
1.My name is…Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation.I shall be speaking about…
我是……今天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的内容是……
2.Today, I'm going to introduce…
今天,我要介绍……
3.He/She made a contribution to…
他/她为……做出了贡献。
4.Although he/she was…, what set him/her apart from the others was that…
虽然他/她……,但让他/她与众不同的是……
5.I admire him/her for…and I'm determined to learn from him/her.
我钦佩他/她……我决心向他/她学习。
假定你校将在“五四”青年节举办以“My favourite friend”为主题的英文演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1.林洋,获得“最合格学生”称号;
2.勤奋,爱好多样,乐于助人;
3.实至名归。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[审题谋篇]
明确体裁话题:演讲稿,我最喜欢的朋友
确定人称时态:以第三人称及一般现在时为主
布局文章架构:首段:点出要介绍的人物
中段:介绍获此称号所付出的努力及品质
尾段:评价
列出核心要点
1.获得“最合格学生”称号
2.勤奋,爱好多样,乐于助人
3.评价
[词汇推敲]
1.honour 荣誉
2.diligent 勤奋的
3.behave well 举止得体
4.stand out 出类拔萃
5.diverse hobbies 爱好广泛
[遣词造句]
①It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends, Lin Yang.
我很荣幸向大家介绍我最好的一个朋友林洋。
②First of all, she, who is among the most diligent students in our school, studies hard and behaves well.
首先,她是我们学校最勤奋的学生之一,学习努力,举止得体。
③In addition, she stands out for her diverse hobbies, including painting and playing the violin.
此外,她以爱好广泛而出类拔萃,包括绘画和拉小提琴。
④Last but not least, she is warmhearted and willing to help others, for which she has won our respect.
最后,她热心而且乐于助人,这让她赢得了我们的尊重。
⑤Such is my best friend.
这就是我最好的朋友。
⑥In my view, she deserves to win the title of “The Most Qualified Student”.
我认为她应该获得“最合格学生”的称号。
[句式升级]
1.用not only…but also…改写句②
First of all, she, who is among the most diligent students in our school, not only studies hard, but also behaves well.
2.用定语从句升级句⑤与句⑥
Such is my best friend, who, in my view, deserves to win the title of “The Most Qualified Student”.
[妙笔成篇]
[参考范文]
Hello, everyone.It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends, Lin Yang.She has just won the title of “The Most Qualified Student”.
First of all, she, who is among the most diligent students in our school, not only studies hard, but also behaves well.In addition, she stands out for her diverse hobbies, including painting and playing the violin.Last but not least, she is warmhearted and willing to help others, for which she has won our respect.
Such is my best friend, who, in my view, deserves to win the title of “The Most Qualified Student”.Let's follow her example.
假若你是李华,将参加主题为“My Favourite Hero”的演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
人物
郑和
朝代
明朝
事迹
1.1371年出生,著名的航海家;
2.1405-1433年先后七次下西洋,进行物品贸易,如金、银、丝绸等;
3.促进了文化和技术的交流。
评价
……
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Hello, everyone.I would like to say Zheng He is my favourite hero in history.He was born in 1371, and became a famous voyager later.From 1405 to 1433, Zheng He went on seven trips to trade goods, such as gold, silver and silk.What's more, the voyages also encouraged the exchange of cultures and technologies and contributed to the development of those countries and regions.
Zheng He is really an international hero and his voyages are such a huge achievement that people still remember him as a pioneer in promoting cultural exchange between different countries around the world.
Thank you!
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