Unit 5 writing 课件2023-2024学年人教版八年级英语下册

Unit 5 Section B Period 3 (3a-Selfcheck) Events happen every day. Let’s look back the events happened in the past. Dr. Martin Luther King was killed. When did it happen? Where did it happen? What were people doing? How did people feel? On April 4, 1968. In America. Robert Allen were eating dinner with his family. Shocked. The World Trade Center was taken down by terrorists. When did it happen? Where did it happen? What were people doing? How did people feel? On September 11, 2001. In New York. Kate Smith were working in her office near the two towers. Unbelievable. The city was under the coronavirus lockdown. When did it happen? Where did it happen? What were people doing? How did people feel? On January 23, 2020. Wuhan, China. I was preparing for the Lunar New Year when I heard the news. Scared and helpless. Olympic Winter Games 2022 was opened. When did it happen? Where did it happen? What were people doing? How did people feel? On February 4, 2022. Beijing, China. I was watching the opening ceremony with my family on TV. Excited. Discussion If you want to learn something about the event happened in the past, what would you like to ask about? who what when where why how ______ was the event? ______ did it happen? ______ did it happen? ______ were you doing? ______ did you feel? ______ do you remember this event? What When Where What How Why event time place activities reasons Para. 1 facts and introduction Para. 2 details Para. 3 meaning and reasons was joined practiced came arrived was called went started was playing sat waited heard was beating won was help 一般过去时：强调一次性动作； 过去进行时：强调反复发生的动作 What can you learn from the writer’s experience? What: the happiest day of the writer's life/a piano competition When:in the sixth grade Where: in a piano competition Why:(the happiest day) won in the piano competition keep on doing sth.; full of preparation... An important thing that I remember well was ___________. It happened in/ on_____ at/in _____. When I heard the news of this event/ When this event happened, I was ______.My friends were________. This event is very important to me because_______./ I remember this event well because____________. Write a short article about the important event. Try to write three paragraphs. Para.1 Introduction First,write about the event（ when and where it happended）. Para.2 Details Next,write about what you and some of your friends were doing when this event happened. hap happened. Para.3 Reasons Then, write about why this event was important. 3b The important thing that I will never forget is that… An important event that I remember well was… It happened in/on… When…, I was… While I was doing…, … was/were doing… He / She was… when… It was an unforgettable day. I will never forget… because… The event has meaning to me because… beginning body end Good sentences What was the event ? When did it happen ? Where was the event ? What were you doing ? What were your friends doing ? Why was it important ? Why do you remember this event? on the school sports day last term broke my leg on the playground running cheering me on know the importance of friendship It’s your turn to write. Time Place Activities Activities Reasons Event Reasons 1.Students check their compositions by themselves. 2.Students check their compositions by their classmates. 3.Choose several students to appreciate several compositions in class. 4.Students finish the second draft in class. 评价标准 分值 得分（15分） 文章结构，逻辑清晰，内容完整 3分 语言表达正确，流畅 3分 正确运用不同的提建议句型。 2分 运用了连接词如： first, second, what’s more等使得文章连贯。 2分 正确运用1+n策略使得文章内容丰富 3分 书写工整 1分 情感价值观积极向上 1分 总分： ______________ 点评： Advantages： Disadvantages： Solutions： One example An important event that I remember well was that I broke my leg. It happened on the school sports day last year on the playground. When this event happened, I was running very fast to get the first prize. My friends were cheering me on. Although I was very tired, I was still keeping on running. With the last ten meters, suddenly, I fell down and broke my leg. It really hurt and I couldn’t stop crying. My friends ran towards me and took me to the hospital. After that, my friends cared about me with my schoolwork and my health. I recovered soon and I came back to school. This event is very important to me because I realize how important the friendship is！ $$