Unit1 Where did you go on vacation 单元话题作文专练--2024-2025学年八年级英语上学期单元重难点专题提优训练（人教版）

2024-2025学年八年级英语上学期单元重难点专题提优训练（人教版） Unit1 单元话题作文专练 作文主题 本单元的话题是：使用一般过去时写一篇游记，要求学生要正确使用动词的过去式，区分动词过去式的规则变化和不规则变化。 语言点拨 1.所做的事情： play the games 玩游戏 see the flower show 看花展 buy something nice 买些好东西 take photos 拍照 have a picnic 野餐 take a walk 散步 go boating 划船 When I …, I could … 当我……的时候，我可以……。 2.心情： have a good time / have fun / enjoy oneself 玩得开心 All in all, it was a / an … day / vacation / trip.总而言之，那是……的一天 / 一个假期 / 一次旅行。 范文赏析 读万卷书，行万里路。旅途中有别样的风景和感悟。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文。 注意： (1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 (2）不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。 (3）语句连贯，词数80 左右。 Last Saturday I went to Sunflower Garden for a vacation with my family.It was sunny that day.Everything seemed great.When I walked into the garden, I could see many people waiting for their turns to play the games.I waited in line and then played the games happily.After that I went to see the flower show.I could see lovely roses, yellow sunflowers and so on.How beautiful they were！ I had a great time that day. 提优训练 (1) 假期是我们生活中最快乐的时光。在假期里，你做过什么？有什么收获？请以“A Meaningful Holiday”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的一个有意义的假期。 要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。 A Meaningful Holiday _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (2) 暑假期间，你跟随父母一起去农村看望你爷爷奶奶了。你在那里做了什么有意义的事情？最让你难忘的是什么？你的感受是什么？你从中感悟到了什么？ 要求： 1、考生不必拘泥于所给提示，完全可以自由发挥，但文章结构要完整，表达要准确； 2、行文流畅，语言通顺、地道且有逻辑；适当用上比较级和最高级，以及并列句和主从复合句。 3、文中不得出现真实姓名与学校名称。 4、词数在80以上。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (3) 旅游是让生活更加精彩的调味品。某英文报正在以“An Enjoyable Trip”为题征文，请你根据以下提示与要求写一篇英语短文，描述一次愉快的旅行，并向该报社投稿。 提示： 1. Where did you go? 2. Who did you go with? 3. What did you do there? 4. How did you feel about the trip? 要求： 1.短文须包括提示中的四个要点， 可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右。 An Enjoyable Trip ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (4) 请根据表格信息写一篇短文，开头已给出。 Who Where Who/What Tina mountains family Xiang Hua New York City / Sally home / Bob / visit uncle, go fishing Tom summer camp friends Some students are talking about their vacation.______________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (5) 在刚刚过去的暑假中，你肯定做过不少有意义的事情，留下了很多难忘的记忆吧！请以“My Summer Vacation”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 要点： 1. 你去了什么地方？ 2. 你做了哪些事情？ 3. 你有什么感受。 要求： 1. 文中须包含以上要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80左右。 My Summer Vacation ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1．范文： A Meaningful Holiday I’m Jerry from No. 1 Middle School. I’d like to share my meaningful holiday with you. During the holiday, I developed a habit of reading, and I kept reading books every day. It not only opened my eyes, but also brought a lot of fun to me. Besides, I kept on doing sports, such as playing basketball or table tennis. Last but not least, I went to Beijing with my parents. We visited the Great Wall and Tian’anmen Square there. I took many photos and I was very excited. This was how I spent my holiday. It was meaningful, wasn’t it? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：要求以“A Meaningful Holiday”为题，谈谈自己的一个有意义的假期，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，表达想要分享自己的一个有意义的假期； 第二步，具体介绍在这个假期里做的事情； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①kept on doing sth坚持做某事 ②last but not least最后但同样重要 ③open one’s eyes打开眼界 [高分句型] ①It not only opened my eyes, but also brought a lot of fun to me. (not only ... but also“不仅……而且”) ②This was how I spent my holiday. (how引导表语从句) 2．例文： During the summer vacation, my parents and I went to the countryside to visit my grandparents. We stayed there for several days, and I had a good time. On the first day, I helped my grandparents feed the chickens, milked the cow and drank the fresh milk. What interested me in the afternoon was riding the horse. It was really exciting. The next day, my uncle took me to go swimming in the river. That was the most interesting thing I diđ there. Although I was tired after swimming. I felt happy and excited. I think it’s necessary to visit my grandparents because I can learn a lot from the people there and I can enjoy the love of my big family. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：题干中给了写作方向，考生可结合题干列出写作要点，注意文章结构完整，表达准确。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍暑期去农村看望爷爷奶奶，玩得很开心； 第二步，具体列举有意义的事、难忘的事等； 第三步，抒发自己的感受和感悟。 [亮点词汇] ① have a good time 玩得愉快 ② milk the cow 挤牛奶 ③ go swimming 去游泳 [高分句型] ① What interested me in the afternoon was riding the horse.（主语从句） ② That was the most interesting thing I diđ there. （形容词最高级；省略that的定语从句） ③ Although I was tired after swimming. I felt happy and excited.（although引导的让步状语从句） 3．例文 An Enjoyable Trip I took a trip to Yunnan on my last summer vacation. I had a wonderful trip there. I arrived there by plane with my parents and two cousins. The weather was sunny and cool, just right for the trip. We stayed in Yunnan for seven days. We visited some places of interest, such as Erhai Lake and the National Park. We saw birds and elephants. We took many photos and ate delicious food. It was very nice. I also bought some special gifts for my friends. I really felt excited and happy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍旅行的地点和同行的人； 第二步，具体阐述在旅行中的活动； 第三步，最后表达了对这次旅行的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②places of interest名胜古迹 ③buy sth for sb为某人买某物 [高分句型] We took many photos and ate delicious food.（and连接并列句） 4．例文 Some students are talking about their vacation. Tina went to the mountains with her family. Xiang Hua went to New York City. Sally stayed at home. Bob visited his uncle and went fishing. But they didn’t get any fish. Tom went to summer camp with his friends. They all had a good time. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，表明写作意图。开头指出一些学生正在谈论他们的假期； 第二步，具体阐述每个学生的假期活动； 第三步，书写结语，总结他们都玩得很开心。 ［亮点词汇］ ①went to the mountains 去山里 ②stayed at home 待在家里 ③went fishing 去钓鱼 ④had a good time 玩得开心 ［高分句型］ Bob visited his uncle and went fishing.（并列句） 5．例文 My Summer Vacation This summer vacation, I went on a trip to Mount Tai. It was my first time to go there. At first, I was a little afraid but excited. I went there by train. The weather was very great. And I made some friends on the way. We talked something interesting along the way and climbed the mountain together. I felt very happy. I learned a lot about the nature. At last, we reached the top of the mountain and took quite a few photos. What a wonderful day! I enjoyed myself in this trip. It was so fantastic. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头点题，介绍自己暑假去了什么地方； 第二步，具体阐述出行游玩做了哪些事； 第三步，书写结语。表达对此次游玩的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①At first最开始 ②on the way在途中 ③learn about了解 ④At last最终 [高分句型] What a wonderful day!（感叹句） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$