专题07 应用文之祝贺信 -【高频·热点】2025年高考英语话题写作通关必备攻略

专题07应用文--祝贺信 -----三段式满分作文速成 ( 近三年考情分析 ) 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2024 新高考I&II卷 分享公园美术课的感想 邮件 全国甲卷 看图作文中国交通运输业的发展 发言稿 浙江卷月 向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿 投稿 2023 新高考I&II卷 给外教写邮件，告诉学生随机分组练口语的建议 建议信 全国甲卷 “用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动 提纲类 全国乙卷 用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及中获得的体验和感受。 提纲类 浙江卷1月 为校报写上周校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动的报道 报道 北京卷 学校生活之社团活动给出建议 建议信 2022 新高考I&II卷 校广播站“Talk and Talk”节目的负责人给外写邮件邀请做访谈 邀请信 全国甲卷 世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛 提纲类 全国乙卷 英语学习方式的调查 提纲类 北京卷 邀请英国好友Jim参加关于英语写作的线上经验交流。 提纲类 天津卷 用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频 提纲类 浙江卷6月 校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，邀请外国留学生一同体验。 提纲类 浙江卷1月 给爱尔兰朋友Chris写一封邮件回忆活动经历并分享个人收获 提纲类 ( 写作方法指导 ) 首段：表示衷心的祝贺 段中：表扬肯定对方做出的努力 尾段：再次表达祝贺和欣赏之情 ( 万能写作模板 ) Dear_________(称呼)， I am writing to express my sincere congratulations to you on your__________________________(祝贺事由) It is your hard work that leads to your success. Not only are you diligent, but also you have a strong sense of responsibility. I know you keep __________________________(努力的肯定)for many years. And it is a real encouragement that your tireless effort finally paid off（付出有汇报）. May all yours wishes come true. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua ( 句式积累 ) 首段常用语 1.I am writing to express my congratulations on .... 我写信是为了祝贺你…… 2. Congratulations on your success in 祝贺你……成功。 3. Please accept my most sincere congratulations and best wishes for the future. 请接受我最诚挚的祝贺和最良好的祝愿。 4. I’m writing to convey my heartfelt congratulations on your receiving the offer from Peking University. 我写信是为了表达我对你收到北京大学录取通知书衷心的祝贺。 5. I am much delighted to learn that you have been elected the leader of your school basketball team. 得知你被推选为学校篮球队队长我很开心。 6. I would like to express my congratulations on… 我想表达我对……的祝贺 段中常用语 1. I know this is surely owing to… 我知道这肯定是因为…… 2. As far as I’m concerned, you’re intelligent. 在我看来，你很聪明. 3. I just want you to know how pleased I am to witness your success. 我只是想让你知道我是多么高兴见证你的成功。 4. As the saying goes, “ Everything comes to him who waits. “ Finally, you succeeded. 俗话说，“功夫不负有心人。”最后，你成功了！ 5. Without your effort, you couldn’t have succeeded. 如果没有你的努力，你就不可能成功了。 尾段常用语 Please accept my warmest regards. 2.祝你一切顺利!Wish you all the best! 3.祝你心想事成!May all your wishes come true! 4.祝你年年有今日，岁岁有今朝。I wish you many happy returns of the day. Congratulations again, and I wish your future success! 再次向你表示祝贺，希望你获得更大的成功。 Sincere congratulations to you again! 再次真诚地祝贺你！ ( 高考真题精讲 ) （2008·全国·高考真题） 假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信： 1、自我介绍；2、祝贺苏琳生日；3、感谢工作人员；4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。 注意：1、词数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、开头语已为你写好。 Dear Sir/Madam, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 名校模拟提升 ) 1． （24-25高三上·山西·开学考试） 假如你是李华，你的笔友李雷在2024年的高考中获得了优异的成绩，被自己的理想大学录取。请你用英语写一封信，向他表示祝贺。内容包括：1.祝贺高考成绩优异；2.肯定他的努力；3.期待交流。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80词左右； 2.适当添加细节。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2． （23-24高三下·云南·阶段练习） 假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Christ最近被北京大学录取了。请你给他写一封信，内容包括： 1. 表示祝贺； 2. 你的感想； 3. 表达祝愿。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Christ, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 3． （2024·山西运城·三模） 假定你是李华，交换生 Terry在你校成语闯关比赛(Idiom Challenge Competition)中荣获二等奖，请你给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括： 1.向他表示祝贺； 2.肯定他的付出。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4． （2024·重庆荣昌·模拟预测） 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Peter以优异的成绩通过考试，取得了到中国某大学留学的资格。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示祝贺； 2. 请教学习方法； 3. 期待在中国见面。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5． （2024·河南·模拟预测） 自“国球进校园”活动开展以来，你校举办了第一届乒乓球比赛，你校的交换生 James取得了第三名的好成绩。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示诚挚的祝贺； 2.回顾他的努力； 3.向他学习。 注意： 1.词数80左右，邮件开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear James, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 6． （2024·江西·三模） 假定你是李华，你的留学生好友 Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛（Chinese Traditional Culture Contest）”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信，内容包括： 1. 祝贺； 2. 回顾； 3. 期待。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7． （2024·云南昆明·模拟预测） 假定你是李华，你校留学生Ethan组织同学们为心脏病人筹款的义演获得了巨大成功，你观看时也深受感动，请给他写封邮件，要点如下： 1.表述祝贺； 2.你的感受： 3.其他。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Ethan, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours, Li Hua 8． （2024·重庆九龙坡·模拟预测） 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom对中国文化很感兴趣，你将送他一本《中国文化》英文版（The Outline of Chinese Culture）作为生日礼物。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.生日祝贺； 2.送书理由。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 9． （23-24高三下·云南·阶段练习） 假设你是李华，刚得知你校的新西兰交换生Tony在你市组织的相声比赛中获得了一等奖。请你给Tony写一封电子邮件，向他表示祝贺。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10． （2024·湖南·一模） 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Lucy的生日即将到来，你特意给她寄了一些具有中国特色的礼物。请你给她写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 你的祝福； 2. 简要介绍你的礼物； 3. 表达期望。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3, 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Lucy, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua ( 4 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ ( 3 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题07应用文--祝贺信 -----三段式满分作文速成 ( 近三年考情分析 ) 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2024 新高考I&II卷 分享公园美术课的感想 邮件 全国甲卷 看图作文中国交通运输业的发展 发言稿 浙江卷月 向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿 投稿 2023 新高考I&II卷 给外教写邮件，告诉学生随机分组练口语的建议 建议信 全国甲卷 “用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动 提纲类 全国乙卷 用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及中获得的体验和感受。 提纲类 浙江卷1月 为校报写上周校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动的报道 报道 北京卷 学校生活之社团活动给出建议 建议信 2022 新高考I&II卷 校广播站“Talk and Talk”节目的负责人给外写邮件邀请做访谈 邀请信 全国甲卷 世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛 提纲类 全国乙卷 英语学习方式的调查 提纲类 北京卷 邀请英国好友Jim参加关于英语写作的线上经验交流。 提纲类 天津卷 用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频 提纲类 浙江卷6月 校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，邀请外国留学生一同体验。 提纲类 浙江卷1月 给爱尔兰朋友Chris写一封邮件回忆活动经历并分享个人收获 提纲类 ( 写作方法指导 ) 首段：表示衷心的祝贺 段中：表扬肯定对方做出的努力 尾段：再次表达祝贺和欣赏之情 ( 万能写作模板 ) Dear_________(称呼)， I am writing to express my sincere congratulations to you on your__________________________(祝贺事由) It is your hard work that leads to your success. Not only are you diligent, but also you have a strong sense of responsibility. I know you keep __________________________(努力的肯定)for many years. And it is a real encouragement that your tireless effort finally paid off（付出有汇报）. May all yours wishes come true. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua ( 句式积累 ) 首段常用语 1.I am writing to express my congratulations on .... 我写信是为了祝贺你…… 2. Congratulations on your success in 祝贺你……成功。 3. Please accept my most sincere congratulations and best wishes for the future. 请接受我最诚挚的祝贺和最良好的祝愿。 4. I’m writing to convey my heartfelt congratulations on your receiving the offer from Peking University. 我写信是为了表达我对你收到北京大学录取通知书衷心的祝贺。 5. I am much delighted to learn that you have been elected the leader of your school basketball team. 得知你被推选为学校篮球队队长我很开心。 6. I would like to express my congratulations on… 我想表达我对……的祝贺 段中常用语 1. I know this is surely owing to… 我知道这肯定是因为…… 2. As far as I’m concerned, you’re intelligent. 在我看来，你很聪明. 3. I just want you to know how pleased I am to witness your success. 我只是想让你知道我是多么高兴见证你的成功。 4. As the saying goes, “ Everything comes to him who waits. “ Finally, you succeeded. 俗话说，“功夫不负有心人。”最后，你成功了！ 5. Without your effort, you couldn’t have succeeded. 如果没有你的努力，你就不可能成功了。 尾段常用语 Please accept my warmest regards. 2.祝你一切顺利!Wish you all the best! 3.祝你心想事成!May all your wishes come true! 4.祝你年年有今日，岁岁有今朝。I wish you many happy returns of the day. Congratulations again, and I wish your future success! 再次向你表示祝贺，希望你获得更大的成功。 Sincere congratulations to you again! 再次真诚地祝贺你！ ( 高考真题精讲 ) （2008·全国·高考真题） 假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信： 1、自我介绍；2、祝贺苏琳生日；3、感谢工作人员；4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。 注意：1、词数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、开头语已为你写好。 Dear Sir/Madam, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Greetings from China! I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US. By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance. Yours truly, Li Hua 【分析】这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信。 【详解】假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：1、自我介绍；2、祝贺苏琳生日；3、感谢工作人员；4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时和一般过去时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。 ( 名校模拟提升 ) 1． （24-25高三上·山西·开学考试） 假如你是李华，你的笔友李雷在2024年的高考中获得了优异的成绩，被自己的理想大学录取。请你用英语写一封信，向他表示祝贺。内容包括：1.祝贺高考成绩优异；2.肯定他的努力；3.期待交流。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80词左右； 2.适当添加细节。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Li Lei, Learning that you have been admitted to your dream university due to your excellent academic performance in Gao Kao, I am writing to convey my sincere congratulations to you. It came as no surprise that you stood out in the big exam. Not only have you devoted most of your time to your studies, but you have dived into various activities to build up all kinds of skills. Additionally, your selfless help wins you recognition and trust from both your teachers and classmates. You set me a good example. I am wondering if you could offer me some advice on time management in school. Congratulations again! Wait for you to share your experience. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的笔友李雷在2024年的高考中获得了优异的成绩，被自己的理想大学录取。要求考生用英语写一封信，向他表示祝贺。 【详解】1.词汇积累 出色的：excellent→outstanding 表达：convey→extend 因为：due to→because of 此外：additionally→besides 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：You set me a good example. I am wondering if you could offer me some advice on time management in school. 拓展句：Since you set me a good example, could you offer me some advice on time management in school? 【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that you have been admitted to your dream university due to your excellent academic performance in Gao Kao, I am writing to convey my sincere congratulations to you. (运用了that引导宾语从句和现在分词作状语) [高分句型2] Not only have you devoted most of your time to your studies, but you have dived into various activities to build up all kinds of skills. (运用了倒装句) 2． （23-24高三下·云南·阶段练习） 假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Christ最近被北京大学录取了。请你给他写一封信，内容包括： 1. 表示祝贺； 2. 你的感想； 3. 表达祝愿。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Christ, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Christ, Learning the good news that you have been admitted to Beijing University, I am offering my sincerest congratulations on your success. The past few years has witnessed your great enthusiasm for Chinese learning and the tireless efforts you have put in achieving your goal. From my perspective, this admission is a reward that you richly deserve and a testament to the saying “no pains, no gains”. Beijing University is the dream university for countless students, where not only can you learn from distinguished professors, but you will also be accompanied by the most brilliant peers. I wish you greater achievements in the future and I am looking forward to seeing you in China. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国笔友Christ写一封信，关于对方被北京大学录取表示祝贺，说明自己的感想，并表达祝愿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 提供：offer→provide 热情：enthusiasm→zest 观点：perspective→point of view 聪明的：brilliant→intelligent 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：I wish you greater achievements in the future and I am looking forward to seeing you in China. 拓展句：I wish you greater achievements in the future and what I am looking forward to is to see you in China. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning the good news that you have been admitted to Beijing University, I am offering my sincerest congratulations on your success. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的同位语从句) 【高分句型2】Beijing University is the dream university for countless students, where not only can you learn from distinguished professors, but you will also be accompanied by the most brilliant peers. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句) 3． （2024·山西运城·三模） 假定你是李华，交换生 Terry在你校成语闯关比赛(Idiom Challenge Competition)中荣获二等奖，请你给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括： 1.向他表示祝贺； 2.肯定他的付出。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Terry, I am thrilled to hear that you have achieved the second prize in our Idiom Challenge Competition! Congratulations on your remarkable accomplishment! Your dedication and hard work have paid off, and your success is a testament to your efforts. This achievement is not only a credit to you but also a proud moment for our school. Keep up the good work, and I am sure that many more successes await you in the future. Once again, congratulations! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Terry写一封祝贺信，祝贺他在校成语闯关比赛中获得二等奖，内容包括：向他表示祝贺，肯定他的付出。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 激动的：thrilled→excited 非凡的：remarkable→extraordinary 全身心投入：dedication→commitment 证明：testament→proof 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：This achievement is not only a credit to you but also a proud moment for our school. 拓展句：Not only is this achievement a credit to you but it also is a proud moment for our school. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I am thrilled to hear that you have achieved the second prize in our Idiom Challenge Competition!(使用了不定式作状语、that引导宾语从句) 【高分句型2】Keep up the good work, and I am sure that many more successes await you in the future. (使用了祈使句、that引导宾语从句) 4． （2024·重庆荣昌·模拟预测） 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Peter以优异的成绩通过考试，取得了到中国某大学留学的资格。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示祝贺； 2. 请教学习方法； 3. 期待在中国见面。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Peter, I’m rather glad to learn that you have passed the examination and obtained the qualification to study in China. I’d like to express my sincere congratulations on your success. I’m deeply encouraged by what you’ve achieved. Although I work hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory. Could you be kind enough to share your learning experience with me? Meanwhile, I’m so much inspired by what you have achieved and, you know, to study in a key university is a dream deep-rooted in my mind. How can I make a step forward from where I am? Looking forward to your coming to China. I hope we can meet in China during the summer vacation. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的英国笔友 Peter以优异的成绩通过考试，取得了到中国某大学留学的资格。请给他写封邮件。 【详解】1.词汇积累 快乐的：glad→pleased 获得：obtain→gain 鼓励：encourage→motivate 表达：express→extend 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Although I work hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory. 拓展句：Working hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m deeply encouraged by what you’ve achieved.（运用了what引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】I’m rather glad to learn that you have passed the examination and obtained the qualification to study in China.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） 5． （2024·河南·模拟预测） 自“国球进校园”活动开展以来，你校举办了第一届乒乓球比赛，你校的交换生 James取得了第三名的好成绩。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示诚挚的祝贺； 2.回顾他的努力； 3.向他学习。 注意： 1.词数80左右，邮件开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear James, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear James, I’m writing to express my sincere congratulations to you! Your performance in the table tennis match was so excellent that it impressed all of us. As you know, the table tennis can not only build up our body but also help relieve our stress. So we all attach great importance to it. But among so many excellent competitors, you really stood out. Of course, no pains, no gains. Thinking of the scenes where you practiced hard after school, we all agreed that you deserved the honor. You really set a good example for us and greatly inspired us. Recently, many of my classmates have made up their minds to take up playing table tennis. Best wishes! Congratulations again! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生 James写一封邮件，告诉他在学校举办的第一届乒乓球比赛中取得了第三名的好成绩。 【详解】1.词汇积累 诚挚的：sincere →genuine 比赛：match →competition 压力：stress →pressure 激励：inspire →encourage 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：As you know, the table tennis can not only build up our body but also help relieve our stress. 拓展句：As you know, not only can the table tennis build up our body but also it can help relieve our stress. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Your performance in the table tennis match was so excellent that it impressed all of us.（运用了“so…that…”句型，其中that引导的结果状语从句） 【高分句型2】Thinking of the scenes where you practiced hard after school, we all agreed that you deserved the honor.（运用了现在分词短语作状语，where引导的定语从句和that引导的宾语从句） 6． （2024·江西·三模） 假定你是李华，你的留学生好友 Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛（Chinese Traditional Culture Contest）”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信，内容包括： 1. 祝贺； 2. 回顾； 3. 期待。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Peter, Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you. It came as no surprise, for you are keenly interested in Chinese culture and have been continuously exploring it. Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but you also consulted many locals and professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture. Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛（Chinese Traditional Culture Contest）”中获得外国选手组一等奖这件事写一封信，表达祝愿，回顾过程并表示期待。 【详解】1.词汇积累 传达：extend→convey 对……感兴趣：be interested in→have an interest in 充裕的：abundant→sufficient 致力于：devote oneself to→commit oneself to 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you. 拓展句：Learning that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but you also consulted many locals and professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture. (运用了not only…but also句型、部分倒装句及which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句) 7． （2024·云南昆明·模拟预测） 假定你是李华，你校留学生Ethan组织同学们为心脏病人筹款的义演获得了巨大成功，你观看时也深受感动，请给他写封邮件，要点如下： 1.表述祝贺； 2.你的感受： 3.其他。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Ethan, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Ethan, Having witnessed your devotion to raising funds, I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your success of organizing the charity event. As I watched the performances, what impressed me most was how you attracted the audience through well-prepared shows and speeches. Not only did the event make a positive difference , but also brought our school community together. Undoubtedly, it was your efforts that inspired donors to jointly serve the greater good. Congratulations on your achievement again. May you continue to touch lives with your kindness and generosity. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的祝贺信。要求考生给留学生Ethan写封邮件，祝贺其组织同学们为心脏病人筹款的义演获得了巨大成功。 【详解】1.词汇积累 表达：extend→ express 积极的：positive → optimistic 无疑地：undoubtedly → without doubt 激励：inspire→ encourage 2.句式拓展 句型转换 原句：Having witnessed your devotion to raising funds, I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your success of organizing the charity event. 拓展句：After witnessing your devotion to raising funds, I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your success of organizing the charity event. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As I watched the performances, what impressed me most was how you attracted the audience through well-prepared shows and speeches.（运用了as引导的状语从句、what引导的主语从句和how引导的表语从句） 【高分句型2】Undoubtedly, it was your efforts that inspired donors to jointly serve the greater good.（运用了强调句型） 8． （2024·重庆九龙坡·模拟预测） 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom对中国文化很感兴趣，你将送他一本《中国文化》英文版（The Outline of Chinese Culture）作为生日礼物。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.生日祝贺； 2.送书理由。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Tom, Happy birthday to you! Many happy returns to you. Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I am just sending The Outline of Chinese Culture to you as the birthday gift. I hope you will like it. This book gives a brief introduction of Chinese culture, with a lot of excellent photos of typical Chinese architectures, and famous Chinese paintings. The writers paint a vivid picture of Chinese history, customs and art as well as life of the Chinese people, which will surely deepen your understanding of Chinese culture. Happy birthday again. Wish you another fruitful happy year! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定考生是李华，你的英国朋友Tom对中国文化很感兴趣，你将送他一本《中国文化》英文版（The Outline of Chinese Culture）作为生日礼物。请你给他写封邮件。 【详解】1.词汇积累 出名的：famous→well-known 理解：understanding→comprehension 喜欢：like→be fond of 对…感兴趣：be interested in→be keen on 2.句式拓展 同义句 原句：Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I am just sending The Outline of Chinese Culture to you as the birthday gift. 拓展句：Because I know that you are interested in Chinese culture, I am just sending The Outline of Chinese Culture to you as the birthday gift.. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I hope you will like it.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】The writers paint a vivid picture of Chinese history, customs and art as well as life of the Chinese people, which will surely deepen your understanding of Chinese culture.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 9． （23-24高三下·云南·阶段练习） 假设你是李华，刚得知你校的新西兰交换生Tony在你市组织的相声比赛中获得了一等奖。请你给Tony写一封电子邮件，向他表示祝贺。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Tony, Having received the news that you’ve won the first prize in the cross-talk competition organized by our city recently, I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you. It comes as no surprise to me that you have won first prize because you have a talent in this area and practice hard. It is your devotion, persistence and efforts that eventually allow you to gain rapid progress. Your success is also an encouragement for me to work hard. Congratulations again on your success. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给新西兰交换生Tony写一封电子邮件，祝贺他在你市组织的相声比赛中获得了一等奖。 【详解】1.词汇积累 得到：receive→get 消息：news→information 给予：offer→give 最终：eventually→finally 2.句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：Having received the news that you’ve won the first prize in the cross-talk competition organized by our city recently, I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you. 拓展句：Because I have received the news that you’ve won the first prize in the cross-talk competition organized by our city recently, I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It comes as no surprise to me that you have won first prize because you have a talent in this area and practice hard. (运用了that引导的主语从句和because引导的原因状语从句) 【高分句型2】It is your devotion, persistence and efforts that eventually allow you to gain rapid progress. (运用了强调句型) 10． （2024·湖南·一模） 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Lucy的生日即将到来，你特意给她寄了一些具有中国特色的礼物。请你给她写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 你的祝福； 2. 简要介绍你的礼物； 3. 表达期望。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3, 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Lucy, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Lucy, With your birthday approaching, I sincerely wish you a happy birthday! To convey my sincere wishes, I’ve made some paper cuttings for you. One piece is designed with four Chinese characters that mean “happy birthday”. Another piece is in the shape of sunflowers, which stand for good health and energy. There’s also one piece showing a monkey on a tree as the year in which you were born was the Year of the Monkey in the Chinese zodiac. The paper cuttings are expected to be delivered to you within seven days and I hope you’ll like them. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的英国笔友Lucy的生日即将到来，你特意给她寄了一些具有中国特色的礼物，要求你给她写一封邮件，表达你的祝福，简要介绍你的礼物以及表达期望。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 来临：approach→come near 真诚地：sincerely→heartfelt 代表：stand for→represent 展示：show→display 2. 句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：The paper cuttings are expected to be delivered to you within seven days and I hope you’ll like them. 拓展句：The paper cuttings, which I expect to be delivered to you within seven days, are crafted with the hope that they will bring you joy. 【点睛】[高分句型1]Another piece is in the shape of sunflowers, which stand for good health and energy.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]There’s also one piece showing a monkey on a tree as the year in which you were born was the Year of the Monkey in the Chinese zodiac.(运用了现在分词作定语，in which引导的定语从句) ( 4 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ ( 3 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$