Unit 2 Animals Moving Forward课件-2024-2025学年高中英语上外版必修第二册

教材封面图 待定 课型 《 高 中 英 语 》 ( 上 外 版 ) 必修第二册第二单元 主讲人 ： 第5课时 Moving Forward • 课题： Feeding Homeless Cats: Helping or Hurting? 课时学习目标： • clarify the general structure of an opinion paragraph by analyzing the model essay; • 分析有关动物园利弊的语篇，识别观点段落写作的基本结构； • be able to contribute ideas to the discussion and see things from a different perspective; • 针对是否喂养流浪猫这一问题开展讨论，辩证思考； • write an opinion paragraph by employing the writing strategy of using cohesive devices. • 运用写作策略，梳理观点，完成关于“喂养流浪猫的利与弊” 的观点段落写作。 Feeding Homeless Cats: Helping or Hurting? SPEAKING AND OPINION WRITING Animals 01 1BU2 Homeless Cats At Lan Shan school Animals 02 1BU2 Poor little Kitty! I love animals, Jenny, but I ’m concerned that it will bring a lot of problems. to see it out there with nowhere else togo. I’ll bring some food for it this afternoon. Sally, look at the cat. How cute! It’s really sad Jenny Sally Role play 03 1BU2 Students at Lan Shan School have recently found some homeless cats hanging around the campus. Some students feed the cats every day while others have begun to show their concerns. 1BU2 If you were a student of Lan Shan School, would you feed homeless cats on campus? Why or why not? 04 「02 03 01 04 n Keep to the point Always keep your opinions focused on the subject of your discussion. nAsk questions Ask questions when necessary. Will you feed Group discussion homeless cats? Why or why not? nBe clear Put forward your ideas in a clear way. nBe original Don’t repeat what others have said without adding something new. Helping Hurting • provide shelters/food • get hurt/infected if you are scratched by • protect them from being starving to them death • be a threat to human's health because • show our sympathy/kindness they bring different kinds of bacteria • gain some related experience • put some financial burden on the society • to appeal to more people to be • cause them to excessively reproduce concerned about these homeless cats because of their strong reproductive capability • break the balance of nature • lead to some species' extinction because they hunt for birds • letdown their guard when faced with humans Hurting The cons: 1. ... 2. ... 3. ... Supporting details: 1. ... 2. ... 3. ... Helping The pros: 1. ... 2. ... 3. ... Supporting details: 1. ... 2. ... 3. ... Classify the possible answers into two categories. 1. Underline the topic sentence of this paragraph. 2.The writer supports his opinion by ls. __________________________ 1.Underline the topic sentence of this paragraph. 2.The writer supports his opinion by giving examples/supporting details. __________________________ 1.Underline the topic sentence of this paragraph. 3.The supporting details are ______. 4. Circle the words and expressions that hold the text together and connect ideas. 2.The writer supports his opinion by giving examples/supporting details. __________________________ 1.Underline the topic sentence of this paragraph. 3.The supporting details are ______. 4. Circle the words and expressions that hold the text together and connect ideas. Linking words For example: this, that, he, she, they, him,her, them, these, those ... 4. Circle the words and expressions that hold the text together and connect ideas. Linking words Cohesive devices Checklist for Opinion Writing Is the topic sentence clear? Is the thesis statement supported by supporting details/examples? Are there any cohesive devices used to make the paragraph arranged in a logical order? debate v./n. 辩论，讨论 argue v. 论证；说理 adjust v. 适应；习惯 design v. 设计；构思 threat v./n. 威胁 approach n.方式、方法 attempt v./n.尝试；试图 concern v./n. 担心；忧虑 conservation n. 保护 Word bank cruel adj. 残酷的；残忍的 essential adj. 完全必要的； 必不可少的 illegal adj. 不合法的；违法 的 additionally adv. 另外；此外 moreover adv. 此外；而且 typically adv. 通常；一般 slightly adv. 略微；稍微 overall adv. 大致上；总体上 definitely adv. 当然；确实 Write an opinion paragraph on feeding homeless cats on campus in 70-90 words. 01 1BU2 The reason that/which I put forward could be ... Lan Shan School is a place where (in which) ... Relative clauses can be introduced by when, where, why and “ preposition + which”. Write an opinion paragraph on feeding homeless cats on campus in 70-90 words. The reason why (for which) Iam for the action is that ... 01 1BU2 Checklist for Opinion Writing Is the topic sentence clear? Is the thesis statement supported by supporting details/examples? Are there any cohesive devices used to make the paragraph arranged in a logical order? Underline the topic sentence and the supporting details; Circle the cohesive devices in your paragraph. Rubrics for Peer Review Carefully read your partner’s essay. Score each of the following aspects A - C. (A = excellent; B = good with some errors; C = not satisfactory) Structure 1. ________ The thesis statement is clear. 2. ________ The thesis statement is supported by examples. 3. ________ Cohesive devices are properly employed. Language 4. ________ A variety of sentence patterns are used. 5. ________ Grammar, spelling and punctuation are correct. Grade each member’s work on the basis of “Rubrics for Peer Review”. If you were the cats, …? 03 1BU2 per spec tiw veof the animal and make" n stor possible asei 2 . on pee arg umer tate i 谢 谢 ！ $$