Unit 4 What's the best movie theater 单元主题（你居住的城镇）写作满分范文15篇-2024-2025学年八年级英语上册重难点讲练全攻略（人教版）

Unit 4 What's the best movie theater 单元主题（你居住的城镇）写作满分范文15篇 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 一、写作话题 本单元以“你居住的城镇”为话题，与此相关的写作任务是描写周围的事物。 二、话题分析 写作此类话题作文时常用一般现在时，体裁通常为说明文并且写作时要求我们正确运用形容词或副词的原级、比较级和最高级对比不同的事物，并表明自己的观点。学会用形容词、副词比较级和最高级写作文能在考试中占很大优势，属于加分句型。 三、满分范文 1．假如你们镇上有三家较大的饭店，请根据表格内容，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，对它们进行介绍，并给出自己的观点。 Name Food Price Service Juyou Restaurant nicest expensive good Park Restaurant bad cheap not good Manyi Restaurant nice cheapest best ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你家附近有三家餐馆，它们在菜品、价格、口味和服务质量等方面有所不同。请你根据下面表格中的内容用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下这三家餐馆。 Restaurant Price Taste Service 7 Onion Restaurant House of Big Dumplings ★★ ★★ ★★ House of Long Noodles 要求： 1．参考表格内容，可适当发挥； 2．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3．文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4．词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。     There are three restaurants near my home.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你班在下周的英语口语课上要就你校附近的三家餐馆所提供的食物、服务及饭菜价格三个方面进行讨论。下表是你对此进行调查后的结果，请你据此写一篇英语短文，为此次讨论做准备。 注意:五角星数目与食物的美味程度、服务的好坏和饭菜价格的高低成正比。 餐馆 食物 服务 饭菜价格 芙蓉餐馆 ★★★ ★★★ ★★★ 幸福餐馆 ★ ★ ★★ 鸿兴餐馆 ★★ ★★★ ★ 要求:1.70词左右，可适当发挥。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2.作文中应有含原级、比较级和最高级的句子。     I did a survey of the three restaurants near our school. Here are the results. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假如你是Li Hua，下周将有一位来自美国的交换生Sam来到你家寄宿。作为东道主，你将请他外出就餐。请你观察并比较以下三家餐厅的全部信息，分析利弊，并确定其中一家作为你们就餐的目的地，并写一封邮件向Sam说明你的选择及原因。 Restaurant A Restaurant B Restaurant C Popularity （受欢迎程度） ★ ★★ ★★★ Price ¥150 ¥360 ¥80 Food ★ ★★★ ★★ Dining environment （就餐环境） ★★ ★★★ ★ Service ★★★ ★★ ★ Distance （距离）to home 2 km 8 km 5 km 要求： 1. 邮件必须包含你的选择及原因，并可适当增加，使行文通顺、连贯; 2. 邮件不得使用真实的人名、校名, 3. 词数不少于70，邮件开头和结尾已给出 (不计词数)。 Dear Sam, I’m so happy that you’re coming to Huzhou. As your host, I’ll take you to Restaurant for dinner. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to seeing you! Yours, Li Hua 5．我们县城有三家出名的服装店。根据表格提示内容，写一篇80词左右的短文介绍它们，并给出自己的观点。(开头已给出) Name Quality(质量) Prices(价格) Service Beiguo best high friendly Baidong good low not friendly Baolian worst lowest friendliest There are three famous clothes stores in our town. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你是李明，你在美国的笔友Mike下学期要到你校做交换生。Mike非常喜欢吃中国的面条。请你根据如下提示给Mike写一封信，向他介绍你学校附近的三家面馆，并告诉他你常去的一家面馆并附上理由。 Miss Liu’s Noodle House Yummy Noodles Mr. Tang’s House of Noodles You Distance 2 kilometers 1 kilometer 500 meters Food ★★★ ★★★ ★★★ Service ★★★★★ ★★★ ★★★★ 要求： 1、表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等； 3、词数80左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。） Dear Mike, I am very happy to know that you are coming to be an exchange student in our school.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Li Ming 7．假如你的英语老师布置任务让你调查你所在社区的三家超市（Taihe Supermarket, Sunshine Supermarket, Happy Supermarket），请结合思维导图选出你最喜欢的一家超市，并说明理由。 写作要求： 1.写作的内容包含所有信息，重点谈谈你最喜欢的一家超市，可适当拓展； 2.词数80词左右。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．俗话说，货比三家不吃亏。假如你准备和好朋友一起去买衣服，比较一下这三家服装店，说一说你会选择哪一家服装店。请根据表格所提示内容，适当发挥，写一篇70词左右的小短文。 Millers’ has the best clothes, buy the clothes the most cheaply Blue Moon is in a fun part of town, the most expensive Dream Clothes is worse than Blue Moon, has the worst service Today is Sunday. I want to buy a coat with my friend________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假如你是杨磊，你在某英文杂志上看到一则关于“我眼中最美的城市”的征文启事，你打算参加。请你以“The most beautiful city in my eyes”为题，写一篇英语短文参加比赛。 内容包括：1. 它是哪座城市，位于哪里？ 2. 这座城市有哪些特色？ 3. 你觉得哪里最值得参观？ 写作要求：1. 文中须包含提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数90左右。 The most beautiful city in my eyes ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假设你叫李华，你打算向某学生英文网站投稿，介绍你的居住的城市顺德。 注意： 1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 2. 不能照抄原文：不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。 3. 语句连贯，词数 80 左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数 Shunde, the place I live in. Dear readers, let me tell you something about Shunde, the place I live in. _________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．为配合我市近年来开展的“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办了以“从我做起，让城市更美好”为主题的征文活动，并对学校100名学生进行了随机抽样调查。现在请你根据提示内容与图表，用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文积极参与活动。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Do you often do the volunteer work to help the city? 提示： 1. What does the chart (表格) tell us? 2. What do you think of the environment in our city? It is known that the environment is important to humans. The result of the school survey shows that ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．书面表达。 假设你们学校附近有三家不同规模的超市。根据表格提示内容，写一篇70词左右的短文介绍它们，并给出自己的观点。 Name Quality Prices Service Meet You best high friendly Kaiji good low not friendly Morning better lowest friendlier ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．某媒体调查了本市三家电影院，下表内容为调查结果。请根据其中内容写一篇简短的调查报告，词数80左右。 Cinema Star Cinema Moon Theater Dreamland Cinema screens and sound biggest screen, good sound big screens, best sound smallest screens, worst sound tickets expensive most expensive cheapest service worst best good We did a survey about the cinema in our city. Here are the results._________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．假定你是Sandy，你调查了小区附近的三家饭店，请用英语写一份70词左右的短文，内容须包括：对下表中的全部信息进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一个餐馆举行你的生日派对。 Restaurants Blue Sky Bright Star Red Sun Price 50Yuan/ person 68Yuan/ person 45Yuan/ person Quality ★★★ ★★★★ ★★ Service ★★★ ★★★★★ ★★★ In my opinion, ________ is the best place to hold my birthday party. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．我们市里有三家出名的服装店。根据表格提示内容，写一篇80词左右的短文介绍它们，并给出自己的观点。在答题卡相应位置，写出一篇80-100词的短文。(开头已给出) Name Quality(质量) Prices(价格) Service Blue Moon best high friendly Dream Clothes good low not friendly Beautiful Women worst lowest friendliest There are three famous clothes stores in our town. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 9 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案： 1．例文： There are three big restaurants in our town. They’re Juyou Restaurant, Park Restaurant and Manyi Restaurant. Juyou Restaurant has the nicest food and good service. But its food is expensive. The food in Park Restaurant is cheap, but the food is bad and the service there is not good. Manyi Restaurant has nice food. Also, it has the best service. The most important thing is that its food is the cheapest. I like Manyi Restaurant best. I often eat there with my friends. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，从食物、服务和价格这三方面介绍3家饭店； 第二步，阐述自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①good service好的服务 ②the most important最重要的 [高分句型] The most important thing is that its food is the cheapest.（表语从句） 2．例文 There are three restaurants near my home. Of all the three, House of Long Noodles has the best taste and the friendliest service. Most of us like it although its food is the most expensive. The food in House of Big Dumplings is a little cheaper than that in House of Long Noodles, but it has the worst service, and its taste isn’t good enough. As for 7 Onion Restaurant, its food is the cheapest and it has better service than that of House of Big Dumplings. However, it has the worst taste of the three restaurants. I like House of Long Noodles best. I often eat there with my family. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己家附近有三家餐厅； 第二步，从价格、味道和服务三个方面评价这三家餐厅； 第三步，表明自己喜欢的餐厅。 [亮点词汇] of all the three三者中 although尽管 as for至于 better service than that of 比……服务更好 3．例文： I did a survey of the three restaurants near our school. Here are the results. Lotus Restaurant has the most delicious food and the friendliest service but the price is the highest. Happiness Restaurant is the worst restaurant. It has the worst food and service. The food is cheaper than that in Lotus Restaurant but more expensive than that in in Hong Xing Restaurant. The service in Hong Xing Restaurant is as good as that in Lotus Restaurant. But Hong Xing Restaurant has the cheapest food. The food in Hong Xing Restaurant is more delicious than that in Happiness Restaurant. I think Lotus Restaurant is the best restaurant. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于通过表格给出写作内容的材料作文。主要介绍三家餐馆在食物、服务及饭菜价格三方面的对比。注意五星数目越多，食物越美味，服务越好，价格越高。 2.写作指导：本文主要用第三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时。注意主语和谓语动词在数上的一致。在叙述时会用到含有形容词的原级、比较级、最高级的句式。同级比较用原形，两者比较用比较级，三者比较用最高级。在叙述时，要条理有序，符合逻辑。 4．例文1 Dear Sam, I’m so happy that you’re coming to Huzhou. As your host, I’ll take you to Restaurant A for dinner. It has the friendliest service and the dining environment is pretty good. It’s very quiet and we can sit the most comfortably. Besides, it’s the closest to my home, so we can get there easily and save a lot of time on the way. What’s more, it’s not very popular, which means there aren’t many people. So we don’t need to wait at all! The only problem is that the food may not taste so good. But that’s not a big deal. You can always enjoy my mom’s delicious home-cooking during your stay. Looking forward to seeing you! Yours, Li Hua 例文2 Dear Sam, I’m so happy that you’re coming to Huzhou. As your host, I’ll take you to Restaurant C for dinner. It’s the most popular among the three, and the food there is pretty good. Although its service is not as good as the other two restaurants’ and it’s a little noisy there, I don’t think those are important as long as the food is delicious. The only problem is that there will be a long waiting line because it’s too popular. So we’d better get there early. By the way, it’s not far from my home. So we can take a bus or ride bikes. Looking forward to seeing you! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的写作要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达对Sam要来寄宿的开心之情； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍A饭店比B和C饭店的好； 第三步，表达妈妈厨艺高超并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①take you to Restaurant A for dinner带你去饭店A吃晚饭 ②the friendliest service最周到的服务 ③the closest to my home离我家最近 ④on the way在路上 ⑤Looking forward to seeing you期待见到你 [高分句型] ① It’s the most popular among the three, and the food there is pretty good.(形容词最高级的用法) ②Although its service is not as good as the other two restaurants’ and it’s a little noisy there, I don’t think those are important as long as the food is delicious.(Although引导的让步状语从句) 5．例文 There are three famous clothes stores in our town. They are Beiguo, Baidong and Baolian. Beiguo has the best clothes and friendly service. But the prices are high. Baidong has good clothes and the clothes are cheap. But it doesn’t have friendly service. Baolian’s clothes are the worst, but it’s the cheapest of the three. Also, it has friendlier service than the other two clothes. I like Beiguo very much. I often go there to buy things. What do you think of them? 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据表格提示信息，写一篇作文，介绍三家出名的服装店，同时要给出自己的观点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体介绍有三家服装店； 第二步，具体阐述三家服装店的质量、价格以及服务； 第三步，最后给出自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①the other其他的 ②very much非常 ③think of思考 [高分句型] ①Beiguo has the best clothes and friendly service. （形容词最高级的使用） ②Also, it has friendlier service than the other two clothes.（形容词比较级的使用） 6．例文 Dear Mike, I am very happy to know that you are coming to be an exchange student in our school. I also know you like Chinese noodles very much. Let me introduce three noodle restaurants near my school to you. The first is Miss Liu’s Noodle House. It is 2 kilometers away from my school. The second is Yummy Noodles. It is 1 kilometer away from my school. The last one is Mr. Tang’s House of Noodles. It is 500 meters from my school. The noodles in these three noodle restaurants are delicious. In addition, Miss Liu’s Noodle House has the best service. That’s why I go to this place so often. Yummy Noodles has the worst service. The service at Mr. Tang’s House of Noodles is in the middle. Best wishes! Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给表格提示写一篇作文，介绍你学校附近的三家面馆。 第一步，介绍三家面馆到学校的距离； 第二步，介绍三家面馆的食物和服务； 第三步，介绍你常去的一家面馆并附上理由。 [亮点词汇] ①away from远离 ②in addition此外 [高分句型] That’s why I go to this place so often.（why引导的表语从句） 7．例文： Supermarket Survey There are three supermarkets in my neighborhood. Of the three, Sunshine Supermarket is the biggest and has the best service. However, people don’t often go there because the goods are the most expensive. Happy Supermarket’s goods are cheaper than Sunshine Supermarket and its service is as good as Sunshine’s. But it’s not convenient to park the cars. As for Taihe Supermarket, it’s the smallest of the three, but its service is as good as Sunshine’s. Their goods are the best among the three. Lots of things are the cheapest, so I like it best. In a word, Taihe Supermarket is so far the best place for me to go shopping. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当拓展，以第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明社区有三家超市； 第二步，介绍各家超市的优劣势； 第三步，介绍三家超市中你最喜欢的一家。 [亮点词汇] ①in my neighborhood在我的社区 ②as good as像……一样好 ③in a word总之 ④so far到目前为止 [高分句型] ①There are three supermarkets in my neighborhood.(There be句型) ②However, people don’t often go there because the goods are the most expensive.(because引导的原因状语从句) 8．例文： Today is Sunday. I want to buy a coat with my friend. There are three clothes stores. The first one is Millers’ Clothes Store. It has the best clothes, and the clothes in this shop are the cheapest. The second one is Blue Moon Store. The store is in a fun part of town, and the clothes in this shop are the most expensive. The last one is Dream Clothes Store. It is worse than Blue Moon, and it has the worst service. To sum up, I will choose the first store because its price and quality are better than the other two. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出三个服装店； 第二步，对三个服装店的特征进行描述； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①expensive昂贵的 ②quality质量 ③worse 更糟糕的 [高分句型] ①It is worse than Blue Moon, and it has the worst service.（and并列句） ②To sum up, I will choose the first store because its price and quality are better than the other two.（because引导的原因状语从句） 9．例文 The most beautiful city in my eyes Of all the cities in China, Nanjing is the most beautiful city in my eyes. Nanjing lies in the east of China. It’s famous for many places of interest such as the city walls of Nanjing, Fuzimiao and the Qinhuai River. You can walk along the city walls of Nanjing and feel the ancient history around you. Fuzimiao is such a magical place that you can’t miss. It feels like a different world which is full of beautiful buildings. You can also take a boat ride in the Qinhuai River. People there are friendly. If you need help, they’ll be there to give a helping hand. Nanjing is a wonderful city. I love it very much. Welcome to the city. I’m sure you will have a good time. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应对题干给出的“介绍自己认为最美的城市”进行描述并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己认为最美的城市是哪座城市； 第二步，根据题干中的要点，详细介绍这座城市的地理位置，特色以及值得参观的地方； 第三步，点评这座城市，欢迎人们来游玩，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for以……出名 ②such as例如 [高分句型] ①It feels like a different world which is full of beautiful buildings. （定语从句） ②If you need help, they’ll be there to give a helping hand.（if引导的条件状语从句） 10．例文 Shunde, the place I live in. Dear readers, let me tell you something about Shunde, the place I live in. My name is Li Hua and I live Shunde, a city with a history of over 600 years and a population of about 4 million. Shunde is famous for its Cantonese cuisine and traditional arts. And there are many places worth visiting here. The best way to get around Shunde is by bus or subway, because they are convenient and affordable. If you plan to visit, I would suggest booking your hotel in advance, as Shunde is a popular tourist destination. Another tip is to check the weather forecast before your trip, so you can pack the right clothes. I hope you will love the city! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，简单介绍顺德； 第二步，介绍顺德的交通； 第三步，给出旅游建议并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for…以……而闻名 ②worth doing sth.值得做某事 ③get around出行 ④affordable负担得起的 ⑤in advance提前 [高分句型] If you plan to visit, I would suggest booking your hotel in advance, as Shunde is a popular tourist destination.(if引导条件状语从句；as引导原因状语从句) 11．例文 It is known that the environment is important to humans. The result of the school survey shows that fifty-two students always do the volunteer work to make the city cleaner. Thirty-six students sometimes work as volunteers. It’s a pity to find that twelve percent of the students seldom do volunteer work. The living environment is getting worse. So we should take part in the activities to protect the city we live in. To build a civilized city, we have so many things to do. First, we should plant more trees. As we know, trees can protect the environment and be good for our health. Next, we can save water and reuse it. Finally, we mustn’t drop rubbish everywhere. I believe our city will have a great environment in the future. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，描述完整图表信息并回答完整提示中的问题，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。   [写作步骤]   第一步，承接开头，描述图表内容；   第二步，表达自己对本市环境的看法；   第三步，介绍保护环境的一些方法。   [亮点词汇]   ①take part in参加 ②As we know众所周知 ③be good for对……有好处 [高分句型]   ①It’s a pity to find that twelve percent of the students seldom do volunteer work（that引导的宾语从句） ②So we should take part in the activities to protect the city we live in.（动词不定式表目的；定语从句） 12．There are three supermarkets near our school. They are Meet You, Kaiji and Morning. Meet You has the best quality and friendly service. But it’s expensive. Kaiji has good quality. It’s cheap. But it doesn’t have friendly service. Morning has better quality than Kaiji. And it’s the cheapest of the three. Also, it has friendlier service than the other two. I like Morning very much. I often go there to buy things. 【分析】这是一般图表作文 【详解】假设你们学校附近有三家不同规模的超市。根据表格提示内容，写一篇70词左右的短文介绍它们，并给出自己的观点。。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态、搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连接词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】本文结构紧凑。这篇短文是三家不同规模的超市的介绍。 在本句中用到Morning has better quality than Kaiji. And it’s the cheapest of the three. Also, it has friendlier service than the other two.这些短语和句子的运用也让文章增色不少。 13．例文： We did a survey about the cinema in our city. Here are the results. Star Cinema is the best. It has the biggest screens, comfortable seats and new movies. But it has the worst service. As for Moon Theater, it has the best sound. But the price of ticket is the most expensive. Dreamland Cinema is the cheapest of all. But it has smallest screens and worst sound. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据表格中的三家电影院的调查结果写一份调查报告。调查报告需要体现出三家电影院的对比情况，各自的优劣势等，内容要全面。本文以第三人称进行叙述，时态为一般现在时。 2.例文点评：本文根据表格内容对三家电影院进行了总结对比，突出了各家的优劣性，使读者一目了然；短文使用了正确的时态和人称，符合表达的需要；文章语法规范，句式完整，叙述清晰有条理。 3.高分亮点： 短语：here are；as for；the price of；of all。 句型：Dreamland Cinema is the cheapest of all.（最高级句式） 14．例文： In my opinion, Blue Sky is the best place to hold my birthday party. I made a survey on the advantages and disadvantages of the three restaurants in the neighborhood. They are Blue Sky, Bright Star and Red Sun. Among the three restaurants, Bright Star offers the best service and quality, but the price is the highest. Blue Sky’s quality is better than Red Sun and they have the same level of service. But the price of Red Sun is cheaper than Blue Sky. I think Blue Sky is the best place to hold my birthday party. 【详解】题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。 例文点评：例文采用两段式；时态综合运用一般现在时和一般过去时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中。 高分亮点： 短语：make a survey on；better than；the same+ n；cheaper than等。 句型：I made a survey on the advantages and disadvantages of the three restaurants in the neighborhood. Among the three restaurants, Bright Star offers the best service and quality, but the price is the highest. 15．例文： There are three famous clothes stores in our town. They are Blue Moon, Dream Clothes and Beautiful Women. Blue Moon has the best clothes and friendly service. But the prices are high. Dream Clothes has good clothes and the clothes are cheap. But it doesn’t have friendly service. Beautiful Women’s clothes are the worst, but it’s the cheapest of the three. Also, it has friendlier service than the other two clothes stores. I like Blue Moon very much. I often go there to buy things. What do you think of them? 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体介绍城镇有三家著名的服装店； 第二步，具体介绍每家店的优缺点； 第三步，最后介绍自己喜欢去的店铺，并结束文章。 [亮点词汇] ① the other其他的 ② very much非常 ③ think of思考 [高分句型] ① Blue Moon has the best clothes and friendly service. （形容词最高级的使用） ② Also, it has friendlier service than the other two clothes stores.（形容词比较级的使用） 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 11 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$