12.高级表达+环境保护+演讲稿-2024-2025学年七年级英语上学期写作万能模板与题型通关(新教材通用版)

12.高级表达+环境保护+演讲稿 写作语言基础：高级表达 ▲初中英语写作‌运用高级表达的建议‌ ‌使用多样化的句型‌：‌尝试使用复合句、‌并列句等复杂句型，‌使句子结构更加丰富多变。‌例如，‌With the rapid development of economy, more and more foreign tourists travel to China.（‌伴随着经济的迅速发展，‌中国迎来越来越多的游客。‌）‌就是一个很好的复合句例子。‌‌ ‌运用高级词汇和短语‌：‌使用如remarkable improvement（‌显著提高）‌、‌advanced science and technology（‌先进的科学技术）‌等高级词汇和短语，‌可以使表达更加精准和生动。‌‌ ‌采用三段式结构‌：‌一篇好的英语作文，‌其结构必须清晰。‌可以采用三段式结构，‌即第一段开门见山，‌直接亮出主题；‌第二段详细论述第一段的主题；‌第三段总结全文。‌这种结构不仅适用于中考，‌对于日后的写作也是非常有帮助的。 ▲练习使用高级表达的方法‌ ‌细化描写，‌避免笼统表达‌：‌尽量使用具体、‌形象的词汇来替代笼统、‌概括性的词汇，‌以使表达更加出彩。‌例如，‌用instructive替代wonderful来描述一部电影。‌ ‌多用高级词汇和短语‌：‌在文章中恰当地使用贴切、‌地道的高级词汇和短语，‌可以充分展现自己的语言功底。‌比如使用enable sb. to do sth.来表达…‌…‌使…‌…‌能够…‌…‌。‌ ‌掌握并运用高级句型‌：‌学习和掌握一些高级句型，‌如the most + 形容词 + 名词 + that + 主词 + have ever + seen等，‌可以使句子结构更加丰富多变。‌ ‌模仿和练习‌：‌阅读并分析高分作文或经典文学作品中的高级表达，‌然后尝试模仿并在自己的写作中运用这些表达。‌通过不断的练习，‌可以逐渐提高自己的语言表达能力。 ▲英语写作常用高级表达举例‌ 1.‌表达重要性‌‌ It is imperative that we take immediate action to address climate change.（‌我们必须立即采取行动来应对气候变化。‌）‌ There is no doubt that exercise has its drawbacks as well as merits.（‌毫无疑问，‌锻炼有优点也有缺点。‌）‌ 2.‌表达观点或看法‌‌ In essence, the book explores the complexities of human nature.（‌本质上，‌这本书探讨了人性的复杂性。‌）‌ It goes without saying that a healthy diet is essential for maintaining good health.（‌不言而喻，‌健康的饮食对于维持良好的健康至关重要。‌）‌ 3.‌表达对比或转折‌‌ On the one hand, technology has brought us great convenience; on the other hand, it has also caused many problems.（‌一方面，‌科技给我们带来了极大的便利；‌另一方面，‌它也引发了许多问题。‌）‌ Despite the availability of technology, many people still prefer traditional methods of communication.（‌尽管有技术可用，‌但许多人仍然更喜欢传统的沟通方式。‌）‌ 4.‌表达建议或解决方案‌‌ Here are some suggestions for handling the problem of pollution.（‌这是处理污染问题的一些建议。‌）‌ The best way to solve the troubles is to communicate openly and honestly.（‌解决这些麻烦的最好办法是坦诚地沟通。‌）‌ 5.‌表达复杂情感或态度‌‌ I feel sorry for you, but you have to face the reality.（‌我为你感到遗憾，‌但你必须面对现实。‌）‌ I am not entirely convinced by your argument, but I see your point.（‌我并不是完全被你的论点说服，‌但我能理解你的意思。‌）‌ ▲判断一个表达是否属于高级表达所涉及的层面‌ ‌词汇的选择‌：‌高级表达往往使用更为精确、‌具体或不太常见的词汇。‌例如，‌用“vital”或“essential”代替“important”。‌‌ ‌句式的复杂性‌：‌高级表达可能包含更复杂的句式结构，‌如定语从句、‌状语从句或分词结构等，‌这些都能使句子表达更为丰富和多样。‌‌ ‌表达的地道性‌：‌高级表达更贴近英语母语者的表达方式，‌可能包含特定的习惯用语或表达方式，‌使句子听起来更为自然和流畅。‌‌ ‌思想的深度‌：‌高级表达不仅仅是语言形式上的高级，‌更重要的是它所表达的思想的深度和广度。‌一个真正的高级表达能够深刻、‌准确地传达复杂的思想或情感。‌‌ ▲培养英语高级表达能力可采用的方法‌ ‌打好语言基础‌：‌掌握足够的词汇、‌正确的语法以及流利的发音，‌这是提高口语表达能力的基石。‌‌ ‌培养英语思维‌：‌尝试使用英语的习惯和表达方式，‌而不是先想到中文再翻译成英文，‌这有助于提高口语表达的自然度和准确性。‌‌ ‌多与他人交流‌：‌实践是提高口语表达能力的最好方法。‌多与英语母语人士交流，‌参加英语角、‌语言交换活动等，‌能够提供真实的语言环境。‌‌ ‌不断反思和修正‌：‌通过录音或视频记录自己的口语练习，‌找出问题并针对性地加以改进。‌‌ ‌持续学习和探索‌：‌英语口语表达能力是一个长期积累的过程，‌需要我们持续不断地学习和探索。‌‌‌‌‌‌ 写作话题素材：环境保护 1. As we all know, the amount of fresh water which is suitable to drink is less and less.   众所周知, 适合饮用的淡水的数量越来越少了。 2. We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthily in the future. 为了将来能够过上更加美好以及健康的生活, 我们应该多种树木。  3. We should do as much as we can to prevent people from putting waste water into rivers. 我们应该尽我们最大的努力去阻止人们往河里排放废水。  4. As an old saying goes, “Actions speak louder than words”. 正如俗话所说: “行动胜于雄辩。”  5. Don’t let our tears be the last drop of water in the world.   不要让我们的眼泪成为世界上最后一滴水。 6. I believe even the simplest action can make a big difference on the environment. 我相信即使是最简单的行动也能对环境产生重要的影响。  7. Let’s work together to make the world a better place to live in!   让我们共同努力, 让世界变成一个更好的居住地! 8. In addition, I suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. 另外, 我建议使用手帕来代替纸巾, 这样我们就能防止更多的树木被砍伐。  9. It is some people’s great responsibility that makes our future become better and better.   正是一些人的责任感让我们的未来变得越来越好。 10. What we should do is to start out small.   我们应该做的就是从小事做起。 【基础训练】 根据汉语意思和英文提示, 完成句子。 1. 如何保护环境已经成为世界最大难题之一。(one of the biggest problems) ______________________________________________ 2. 我们会发现垃圾不仅污染环境而且损害人们的身体健康。 (not only. . . but also. . . ) ______________________________________________ 3. 我们只有一个地球。我们必须尽力保护她, 使我们的家园更加美好。 (try one’s best) ______________________________________________ 4. 砍伐太多的树木对环境有害。 (cut down) ______________________________________________ 5. 我们最好在离开房间时关灯以便节约大量能源。(so that) ______________________________________________ 6. 依我看来, 如果每个人尽最大的努力保护环境, 我们的城市就会变得越来越漂亮。 (try one’s best) ______________________________________________ 写作必备类型：演讲稿 　　学校是个大家庭,这里充满了欢声笑语、爱与温暖。你们学校即将举办以“School Is a Big Family”为题的英语演讲比赛。请根据下列要求,从结构图的三个方面写一篇英文演讲稿。 参考词汇:be patient (with), care about, encourage, share, help, understand, love, have fun,... 要求:1.可选择使用参考词汇,亦可适当发挥; 2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整; 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等); 4.词数:不少于70词。 【写作示例】 第一步　读题审题 1.定人称:第一人称为主　　2.定时态:一般现在时为主 3.定要点:(1)老师对我 ;(2)同学对我;(3)我对他人。 4.定思路:首先,先表达写作主题,用词如big, warm等;其次,根据结构图以及参考词汇,从老师、同学以及自身三个角度展开描写,最后总结全文,回扣主题。 第二步　谋篇架构 框架 要点 升格/扩写 开头 引出话题 综述学校 School is a warm place to me. 扩写周围人对我的态度: School is a warm place to me. Many ______________________________________________ 主体 分述态度 老师对我 My teachers are strict but patient to me. 用具体事例提升:My teachers are strict but patient to me. ______________________________________________ 同学对我 My classmates are the friendliest. 用具体事例提升:My classmates are the friendliest. ______________________________________________ 我对他人 Also, I am good with others. 用具体事例提升:______________________________________________, I am good with others. I often ______________________________________________. 结尾 总结全文 询问对方意见 We all need to be kind to each other. 用固定搭配提升:I believe we all need to be kind to each other. ______________________________________________ 第三步　衔接成篇 【提升练习】 1．（23-24七年级上·吉林长春·期中）下周的主题班会将以“My friend and I”为主题，组织一次演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，介绍一下你和你升入初中以来的一个新朋友。 要求：可整合所学内容并适当发挥；不少于60词；不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（22-23七年级上·辽宁沈阳·期末）假定你是李华，参加学校组织的“英语周”演讲活动。请你以“My favourite city”为题，写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1.城市名称及所在位置； 2.城市基本情况（天气、美食、购物、娱乐等）； 3.你的愿望。 注意：1.词数60-80。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My favourite city There are many cities in China.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（20-21七年级上·广东珠海·期中）每个家庭都有不同的故事。假如你是李华，本周五你的班级将举行一次英语口语比赛，主题为"我的全家福"， 请你根据自己的全家福，用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容包括： 1. 你的名字及年龄； 2. 你的家庭成员，并介绍其中两个家庭成员的工作和爱好； 3. 表达你对家人的爱。 要求：1. 要点齐全，句子通顺； 2. 不要出现真实的人名和校名，60 词左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Good afternoon everyone! _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening! 4．（24-25七年级上·全国·单元测试）地球是我们人类共同的家园。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代的主题。目前，我市英语学会准备面向全市学生开展以“Save Our Earth”为主题的英文演讲征文活动。假如你是李华，现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写一篇80词左右的演讲稿。 要点：（1）重要性：只有一个地球 （2）主要问题：污染、灾难、疾病 （3）措施：停止污染、保护环境 参考词：disaster n. 灾难 注意：可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 Dear friends, My name is Li Hua. I’m glad to be here. I think it’s our duty to save our Earth. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（21-22七年级上·广东深圳·期中）假设学校要举办一个以环保为主题的演讲比赛，请你根据要点提示，写一篇英文演讲稿。 要点： 1. 谈及城市的环境问题，汽车多，树木多； 2. 谈论绿色城市的好处，植物可以净化空气；花草树木可以美化环境； 3. 你的建议：种植更多的花草树木；不要乱扔垃圾；尽量选择公共交通出行。 提示词：净化clean   美化make...beautiful A Green City Hello, everyone! I am going to talk about “A Green City”. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（21-22七年级上·广东深圳·期中）假如你是初一学生李华，要在学校英语文化节上围绕Air pollution这个主题进行演讲。请你根据下面的图片及文字提示， 写一篇发言稿，并谈一谈作为中学生应该如何防止空气污染。 要求： 1. 包含所有的提示信息，可适当发挥，使内容更丰富； 2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，书写工整； 3. 不少于70词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Air pollution is one of the most serious problems in the world. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s take action and try our best to make the air fresh and clean. 7．（2022·福建泉州·模拟预测）假如你是李华，是一名学生。为大力推进生态文明建设，你所在的城市正开展以“绿色生活，美丽家园”为主题的宣传月活动。请你根据以下提示以“共建美丽家园”为主题，写一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁大家爱护环境、保护生态，建设美丽家园。 1.要点： 主题 Build green and beautiful hometown together 具体做法 绿色出行，避免交通拥堵，减少空气污染； 不乱扔垃圾，让家园变得干净舒适； 植树造林，美化家园，保护环境。 你的建议 …… 2.要求：文章必须包含所给的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不要出现所在学校的名称和师生姓名； 4.词数100左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：垃圾箱dustbin；交通拥堵 traffic jams     Hello, everyone!     I’m Li Hua, a student from No.1 High School. Today I’d like to share my opinions on “Build green and beautiful hometown together”. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（24-25七年级上·全国·课后作业）初中生活丰富多彩，每天都是充实、美好的。你们学校将举办“最美中学生”评选活动，要求参加者用英文介绍自己。你想参加本次活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇70词左右的演讲稿（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 提示： 1.年龄、班级、外貌等； 2.个人穿着和兴趣爱好； 3.最喜欢的……及原因。 要求：短文必须包含提示中的信息，可以适当发挥。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（24-25七年级上·全国·单元测试）学校是个大家庭，这里充满了欢声笑语、爱与温暖。你们学校即将举办以“School Is a Big Family”为题的英语演讲比赛。请根据结构图写一篇英文演讲稿。不少于60词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： be patient (有耐心的) (with), care about, help, understand... School Is a Big Family Good afternoon, everyone! I am glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “School Is a Big Family”. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your time! 10．（24-25七年级上·全国·单元测试）为进一步丰富学生的课后生活，我校在周末开设了各种各样的俱乐部。假设你是我校学生会的主席，请根据表格提示写一篇英语演讲稿，向同学们介绍本学期学校的俱乐部，呼吁大家加入。 要求：70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Welcome to join us Saturday the Art Club (9 am—11 am); the Sports Club (2 pm—4 pm) Sunday  the Photography Club (9 am—11 am) Hello, everyone! To make our after-school life colorful, our school provides different clubs for us at weekends. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening. 京）股份有限公司 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 12.高级表达+环境保护+演讲稿 写作语言基础：高级表达 ▲初中英语写作‌运用高级表达的建议‌ ‌使用多样化的句型‌：‌尝试使用复合句、‌并列句等复杂句型，‌使句子结构更加丰富多变。‌例如，‌With the rapid development of economy, more and more foreign tourists travel to China.（‌伴随着经济的迅速发展，‌中国迎来越来越多的游客。‌）‌就是一个很好的复合句例子。‌‌ ‌运用高级词汇和短语‌：‌使用如remarkable improvement（‌显著提高）‌、‌advanced science and technology（‌先进的科学技术）‌等高级词汇和短语，‌可以使表达更加精准和生动。‌‌ ‌采用三段式结构‌：‌一篇好的英语作文，‌其结构必须清晰。‌可以采用三段式结构，‌即第一段开门见山，‌直接亮出主题；‌第二段详细论述第一段的主题；‌第三段总结全文。‌这种结构不仅适用于中考，‌对于日后的写作也是非常有帮助的。 ▲练习使用高级表达的方法‌ ‌细化描写，‌避免笼统表达‌：‌尽量使用具体、‌形象的词汇来替代笼统、‌概括性的词汇，‌以使表达更加出彩。‌例如，‌用instructive替代wonderful来描述一部电影。‌ ‌多用高级词汇和短语‌：‌在文章中恰当地使用贴切、‌地道的高级词汇和短语，‌可以充分展现自己的语言功底。‌比如使用enable sb. to do sth.来表达…‌…‌使…‌…‌能够…‌…‌。‌ ‌掌握并运用高级句型‌：‌学习和掌握一些高级句型，‌如the most + 形容词 + 名词 + that + 主词 + have ever + seen等，‌可以使句子结构更加丰富多变。‌ ‌模仿和练习‌：‌阅读并分析高分作文或经典文学作品中的高级表达，‌然后尝试模仿并在自己的写作中运用这些表达。‌通过不断的练习，‌可以逐渐提高自己的语言表达能力。 ▲英语写作常用高级表达举例‌ 1.‌表达重要性‌‌ It is imperative that we take immediate action to address climate change.（‌我们必须立即采取行动来应对气候变化。‌）‌ There is no doubt that exercise has its drawbacks as well as merits.（‌毫无疑问，‌锻炼有优点也有缺点。‌）‌ 2.‌表达观点或看法‌‌ In essence, the book explores the complexities of human nature.（‌本质上，‌这本书探讨了人性的复杂性。‌）‌ It goes without saying that a healthy diet is essential for maintaining good health.（‌不言而喻，‌健康的饮食对于维持良好的健康至关重要。‌）‌ 3.‌表达对比或转折‌‌ On the one hand, technology has brought us great convenience; on the other hand, it has also caused many problems.（‌一方面，‌科技给我们带来了极大的便利；‌另一方面，‌它也引发了许多问题。‌）‌ Despite the availability of technology, many people still prefer traditional methods of communication.（‌尽管有技术可用，‌但许多人仍然更喜欢传统的沟通方式。‌）‌ 4.‌表达建议或解决方案‌‌ Here are some suggestions for handling the problem of pollution.（‌这是处理污染问题的一些建议。‌）‌ The best way to solve the troubles is to communicate openly and honestly.（‌解决这些麻烦的最好办法是坦诚地沟通。‌）‌ 5.‌表达复杂情感或态度‌‌ I feel sorry for you, but you have to face the reality.（‌我为你感到遗憾，‌但你必须面对现实。‌）‌ I am not entirely convinced by your argument, but I see your point.（‌我并不是完全被你的论点说服，‌但我能理解你的意思。‌）‌ ▲判断一个表达是否属于高级表达所涉及的层面‌ ‌词汇的选择‌：‌高级表达往往使用更为精确、‌具体或不太常见的词汇。‌例如，‌用“vital”或“essential”代替“important”。‌‌ ‌句式的复杂性‌：‌高级表达可能包含更复杂的句式结构，‌如定语从句、‌状语从句或分词结构等，‌这些都能使句子表达更为丰富和多样。‌‌ ‌表达的地道性‌：‌高级表达更贴近英语母语者的表达方式，‌可能包含特定的习惯用语或表达方式，‌使句子听起来更为自然和流畅。‌‌ ‌思想的深度‌：‌高级表达不仅仅是语言形式上的高级，‌更重要的是它所表达的思想的深度和广度。‌一个真正的高级表达能够深刻、‌准确地传达复杂的思想或情感。‌‌ ▲培养英语高级表达能力可采用的方法‌ ‌打好语言基础‌：‌掌握足够的词汇、‌正确的语法以及流利的发音，‌这是提高口语表达能力的基石。‌‌ ‌培养英语思维‌：‌尝试使用英语的习惯和表达方式，‌而不是先想到中文再翻译成英文，‌这有助于提高口语表达的自然度和准确性。‌‌ ‌多与他人交流‌：‌实践是提高口语表达能力的最好方法。‌多与英语母语人士交流，‌参加英语角、‌语言交换活动等，‌能够提供真实的语言环境。‌‌ ‌不断反思和修正‌：‌通过录音或视频记录自己的口语练习，‌找出问题并针对性地加以改进。‌‌ ‌持续学习和探索‌：‌英语口语表达能力是一个长期积累的过程，‌需要我们持续不断地学习和探索。‌‌‌‌‌‌ 写作话题素材：环境保护 1. As we all know, the amount of fresh water which is suitable to drink is less and less.   众所周知, 适合饮用的淡水的数量越来越少了。 2. We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthily in the future. 为了将来能够过上更加美好以及健康的生活, 我们应该多种树木。  3. We should do as much as we can to prevent people from putting waste water into rivers. 我们应该尽我们最大的努力去阻止人们往河里排放废水。  4. As an old saying goes, “Actions speak louder than words”. 正如俗话所说: “行动胜于雄辩。”  5. Don’t let our tears be the last drop of water in the world.   不要让我们的眼泪成为世界上最后一滴水。 6. I believe even the simplest action can make a big difference on the environment. 我相信即使是最简单的行动也能对环境产生重要的影响。  7. Let’s work together to make the world a better place to live in!   让我们共同努力, 让世界变成一个更好的居住地! 8. In addition, I suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. 另外, 我建议使用手帕来代替纸巾, 这样我们就能防止更多的树木被砍伐。  9. It is some people’s great responsibility that makes our future become better and better.   正是一些人的责任感让我们的未来变得越来越好。 10. What we should do is to start out small.   我们应该做的就是从小事做起。 【基础训练】 根据汉语意思和英文提示, 完成句子。 1. 如何保护环境已经成为世界最大难题之一。(one of the biggest problems) How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world.   2. 我们会发现垃圾不仅污染环境而且损害人们的身体健康。 (not only. . . but also. . . ) We can find the rubbish not only pollutes our environment but also harms people’s health.   3. 我们只有一个地球。我们必须尽力保护她, 使我们的家园更加美好。 (try one’s best) We have only one earth. We must try our best to protect her and make our home more beautiful.   4. 砍伐太多的树木对环境有害。 (cut down) Cutting down too many trees is bad for/is harmful to the environment.   5. 我们最好在离开房间时关灯以便节约大量能源。(so that) We’d better turn off the lights when leaving a room so that we can save a lot of energy.   6. 依我看来, 如果每个人尽最大的努力保护环境, 我们的城市就会变得越来越漂亮。 (try one’s best) In my opinion, if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, our city will become more and more beautiful.   写作必备类型：演讲稿 　　学校是个大家庭,这里充满了欢声笑语、爱与温暖。你们学校即将举办以“School Is a Big Family”为题的英语演讲比赛。请根据下列要求,从结构图的三个方面写一篇英文演讲稿。 参考词汇:be patient (with), care about, encourage, share, help, understand, love, have fun,... 要求:1.可选择使用参考词汇,亦可适当发挥; 2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整; 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等); 4.词数:不少于70词。 【写作示例】 第一步　读题审题 1.定人称:第一人称为主　　2.定时态:一般现在时为主 3.定要点:(1)老师对我 ;(2)同学对我;(3)我对他人。 4.定思路:首先,先表达写作主题,用词如big, warm等;其次,根据结构图以及参考词汇,从老师、同学以及自身三个角度展开描写,最后总结全文,回扣主题。 第二步　谋篇架构 框架 要点 升格/扩写 开头 引出话题 综述学校 School is a warm place to me. 扩写周围人对我的态度: School is a warm place to me. Many people around me are kind and friendly to me. 主体 分述态度 老师对我 My teachers are strict but patient to me. 用具体事例提升:My teachers are strict but patient to me. Whenever I meet difficulties in my study, they are always there to help me. 同学对我 My classmates are the friendliest. 用具体事例提升:My classmates are the friendliest. Last year I broke my arm. They all took turns to buy lunch for me. 我对他人 Also, I am good with others. 用具体事例提升:In return, I am good with others. I often help my classmates clean the classroom. 结尾 总结全文 询问对方意见 We all need to be kind to each other. 用固定搭配提升:I believe we all need to be kind to each other. Everyone plays a part in keeping our school clean and warm. 第三步　衔接成篇 [参考范文] Good afternoon, everyone! I am glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “School Is a Big Family”. School is a warm place to me. Many people around me are kind and friendly to me. For example, my teachers are strict but patient to me. Whenever I meet difficulties in my study, they are always there to help me. Then, my classmates are the friendliest. Last year I broke my arm. They all took turns to buy lunch for me. I was so moved. In return, I am good with others. I often help my classmates clean the classroom. I believe we all need to be kind to each other.Everyone plays a part in keeping our school clean and warm. ①句子 “School is a warm place to me.” 起到总领全文的作用。 ②短语for example用于举例,使用恰当。 ③always一词起突出强调作用,一个乐于助人的群体,活灵活现。 ④列举去年摔断胳膊的例子,增强文章说服力。 ⑤结尾表达自己的观点,积极向上 【提升练习】 1．（23-24七年级上·吉林长春·期中）下周的主题班会将以“My friend and I”为主题，组织一次演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，介绍一下你和你升入初中以来的一个新朋友。 要求：可整合所学内容并适当发挥；不少于60词；不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（22-23七年级上·辽宁沈阳·期末）假定你是李华，参加学校组织的“英语周”演讲活动。请你以“My favourite city”为题，写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1.城市名称及所在位置； 2.城市基本情况（天气、美食、购物、娱乐等）； 3.你的愿望。 注意：1.词数60-80。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My favourite city There are many cities in China.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（20-21七年级上·广东珠海·期中）每个家庭都有不同的故事。假如你是李华，本周五你的班级将举行一次英语口语比赛，主题为"我的全家福"， 请你根据自己的全家福，用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容包括： 1. 你的名字及年龄； 2. 你的家庭成员，并介绍其中两个家庭成员的工作和爱好； 3. 表达你对家人的爱。 要求：1. 要点齐全，句子通顺； 2. 不要出现真实的人名和校名，60 词左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Good afternoon everyone! _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening! 4．（24-25七年级上·全国·单元测试）地球是我们人类共同的家园。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代的主题。目前，我市英语学会准备面向全市学生开展以“Save Our Earth”为主题的英文演讲征文活动。假如你是李华，现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写一篇80词左右的演讲稿。 要点：（1）重要性：只有一个地球 （2）主要问题：污染、灾难、疾病 （3）措施：停止污染、保护环境 参考词：disaster n. 灾难 注意：可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 Dear friends, My name is Li Hua. I’m glad to be here. I think it’s our duty to save our Earth. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（21-22七年级上·广东深圳·期中）假设学校要举办一个以环保为主题的演讲比赛，请你根据要点提示，写一篇英文演讲稿。 要点： 1. 谈及城市的环境问题，汽车多，树木多； 2. 谈论绿色城市的好处，植物可以净化空气；花草树木可以美化环境； 3. 你的建议：种植更多的花草树木；不要乱扔垃圾；尽量选择公共交通出行。 提示词：净化clean   美化make...beautiful A Green City Hello, everyone! I am going to talk about “A Green City”. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（21-22七年级上·广东深圳·期中）假如你是初一学生李华，要在学校英语文化节上围绕Air pollution这个主题进行演讲。请你根据下面的图片及文字提示， 写一篇发言稿，并谈一谈作为中学生应该如何防止空气污染。 要求： 1. 包含所有的提示信息，可适当发挥，使内容更丰富； 2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，书写工整； 3. 不少于70词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Air pollution is one of the most serious problems in the world. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s take action and try our best to make the air fresh and clean. 7．（2022·福建泉州·模拟预测）假如你是李华，是一名学生。为大力推进生态文明建设，你所在的城市正开展以“绿色生活，美丽家园”为主题的宣传月活动。请你根据以下提示以“共建美丽家园”为主题，写一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁大家爱护环境、保护生态，建设美丽家园。 1.要点： 主题 Build green and beautiful hometown together 具体做法 绿色出行，避免交通拥堵，减少空气污染； 不乱扔垃圾，让家园变得干净舒适； 植树造林，美化家园，保护环境。 你的建议 …… 2.要求：文章必须包含所给的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不要出现所在学校的名称和师生姓名； 4.词数100左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：垃圾箱dustbin；交通拥堵 traffic jams     Hello, everyone!     I’m Li Hua, a student from No.1 High School. Today I’d like to share my opinions on “Build green and beautiful hometown together”. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（24-25七年级上·全国·课后作业）初中生活丰富多彩，每天都是充实、美好的。你们学校将举办“最美中学生”评选活动，要求参加者用英文介绍自己。你想参加本次活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇70词左右的演讲稿（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 提示： 1.年龄、班级、外貌等； 2.个人穿着和兴趣爱好； 3.最喜欢的……及原因。 要求：短文必须包含提示中的信息，可以适当发挥。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（24-25七年级上·全国·单元测试）学校是个大家庭，这里充满了欢声笑语、爱与温暖。你们学校即将举办以“School Is a Big Family”为题的英语演讲比赛。请根据结构图写一篇英文演讲稿。不少于60词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： be patient (有耐心的) (with), care about, help, understand... School Is a Big Family Good afternoon, everyone! I am glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “School Is a Big Family”. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your time! 10．（24-25七年级上·全国·单元测试）为进一步丰富学生的课后生活，我校在周末开设了各种各样的俱乐部。假设你是我校学生会的主席，请根据表格提示写一篇英语演讲稿，向同学们介绍本学期学校的俱乐部，呼吁大家加入。 要求：70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Welcome to join us Saturday the Art Club (9 am—11 am); the Sports Club (2 pm—4 pm) Sunday  the Photography Club (9 am—11 am) Hello, everyone! To make our after-school life colorful, our school provides different clubs for us at weekends. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening. 参考答案 1．【参考范文】 My friend and I Lucy and I are good friends. I’m 13 years old. She is one year older than me. I’m very outgoing. But she’s quiet. I like running and playing basketball. She likes taking photos and traveling. I exercise every day. She eats a lot of fruits and vegetables every day. Last week we went to the park to play basketball. We had a good time. I hope to make more friends. She hopes to keep healthy and study hard. I hope our dreams can come true. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主，“一般过去时”为辅； ③提示：根据所给主题介绍“你”和“你的朋友”，不要遗漏要点。注意保持主谓一致，使用正确的时态进行描述。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的好朋友是谁； 第二步，介绍自己和好朋友的不同之处； 第三步，表达美好愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①like doing sth.喜爱做某事 ②make friends交朋友 [高分句型] ①She is one year older than me.（形容词比较级句型） ②She likes taking photos and traveling.（动名词作宾语） 2．【参考范文】： My favourite city There are many cities in China. My favourite city is Dalian. It’s in the northeast of China. Dalian is on the coast and it’s especially famous for its sea food. There, the weather is fine. It’s not hot in summer and not cold in winter. Of course, Dalian is a good place to have a holiday. And it has got many interesting places, such as Laohutan Ocean Park, Bangchui Island and Dalian Modern Museum. Besides, Dalian has many big supermarkets where you can buy anything you want. Dalian is a beautiful city and I hope to live there one day. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文； ②时态：时态是“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。给出最喜爱的城市名称和位置； 第二步，具体阐述内容。从“天气、美食、景点等”几个方面分别阐述； 第三步，书写结语。给到城市的总体评价和期望。 [亮点词汇] ①on the coast 在海岸边 ②such as 例如 [高分句型] ①Dalian is on the coast and it’s especially famous for its sea food.（be famous for 因……有名） ②Of course, Dalian is a good place to have a holiday. （a good place to do 做某事的好地方） 3．【参考范文】： Good afternoon,everyone! I am Li Hua. I’m twelve years old. I study in No.1 middle school. I am in Class One, Grade Seven. I live in Zhuhai with my family. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and I. My father is a doctor and my mother works as a teacher. They often go to work early and go back home late. They work very hard. After work, my father likes running and my mother is keen on playing badminton. On weekends, my parents always take my sister and me to the park. We have a good time every time. This is my happy family. Thanks for your listening! 1. 题干解读：文章属于话题作文，主要是介绍自己的全家福，内容可以根据自身情况自行发挥，但要包含题目中的写作要点。写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，人称用第一人称和第三人称相结合的形式展开详细介绍。描述自己的基本情况以及家庭成员的介绍以及父母的工作等情况。语言比较简单易懂，文章结构完整，词语简单，意思通俗易懂。 4．【参考范文】 Dear friends, My name is Li Hua. I’m glad to be here. I think it’s our duty to save our Earth. We all live on Earth. The Earth is our home. We have only one Earth. We must take care of it. If we pollute it, it will be angry. There are three main problems on our Earth—pollution, disasters and illnesses. It is important for us to stop polluting our Earth and protect our environment. For example, we can plant more trees and flowers to make our environment clean and tidy. If everyone starts to do a small thing, our Earth will be more beautiful. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写篇以“Save Our Earth”为主题的英文演讲征文活动。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的基本信息； 第二步，具体阐述地球现在面临的主要问题，以及保护地球的措施； 第三步，呼吁大家保护地球。 [亮点词汇] ①take care of照顾 ②For example例如 ③start to do开始做某事 [高分句型] ①If we pollute it, it will be angry.（“if”引导的条件状语从句） ②It is important for us to stop polluting our Earth and protect our environment.（“It”固定句型） 5．【参考范文】： A Green City Hello, everyone! I am going to talk about “A Green City”. Nowadays, our cities are facing many problems. We have too many cars in the city. But there are only a few trees. As a result, the environment around us is getting dirtier and dirtier. It’s urgent for us to build a green city together. On the one hand, plants can clean the air. In this way, we can breathe fresh air. On the other hand, plants can also make our city beautiful. In order to build a green city, we should take some measures. We should plant more trees and flowers. What’s more, we mustn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. Last but not least, it’s necessary for us to go outside by bus or by underground. To sum up, if you can follow my advice above, I’m sure that our cities will be more and more beautiful. That’s all. Thank all. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍城市的环境问题。 第二步，谈论绿色城市的好处。 第三步，表达自己的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①As a result结果 ②On the one hand…On the other hand…一方面……另一方面…… ③Last but not least最后但同样重要的是 [高分句型] ①It’s urgent for us to build a green city together. (it作形式主语) ②if you can follow my advice above, I’m sure that our cities will be more and more beautiful (if引导条件状语从句) 6．【参考范文】 Air pollution is one of the most serious problems in the world. People burn coal, plastic, and other rubbish and that pollutes the air. Smoke from cars and factories pollutes the air, too. The polluted air is not only bad for the environment but also harmful for our health. As middle school students, we should do something to stop air pollution. For example, we should take a bus or ride a bike more often. And, we should do more tree planting activities. Trees help keep the air clean. Also, we should study hard so that we will be able to help find new energy and new ways to deal with rubbish. Let’s take action and try our best to make the air fresh and clean. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：文章为第一人称，介绍空气污染产生的原因及防止空气污染的建议，图片内容描述完整，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题； 第二步，具体介绍空气污染产生的原因； 第三步，介绍作为中学生，如何防止空气污染； 第四步，呼吁大家积极行动起来保护环境。 [亮点词汇] ① be bad for对……有害 ② be harmful for对……有害 ③ For example例如 ④ be able to能 ⑤ deal with解决 ⑥ not only but also不仅……而且 [高分句型] ①Also, we should study hard so that we will be able to help find new energy and new ways to deal with rubbish.（so that目的状语从句） ②As middle school students, we should do something to stop air pollution. （动词不定式表目的） 7．【参考范文】 Hello, everyone!       I’m Li Hua, a student from No.1 High School. Today I’d like to share my opinions on “Build green and beautiful hometown together”. As middle school students, it’s our duty to help build a green and beautiful hometown. First, we can ride bikes or walk to school if it’s not far away from our homes. The more people choose the public transportation, the fewer traffic jams there will be and the cleaner the air will be. Second, we mustn’t throw rubbish here and there. We must throw them into the dustbin. If so, our hometown will be clean and tidy. We will feel more comforable, too. Third, plant more trees. Trees are important to the environment. They can make the air much fresher. We should do everything we can to protect the environment. 1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。根据表格要点提示，以“共建美丽家园”为主题写一篇作文呼吁大家爱护环境、保护生态，建设美丽家园。 2.写作指导：本文时态采用以一般现在时；人称以第一人称为主。写作时除了包含具体的做法，还需要把自己的建议表达出来。文章行文要做到语句通顺，无单词语法错误。 8．【参考范文】 Good afternoon, teachers and friends! Glad to be here with you. My name is Han Lei. I am twelve years old. I am in Class One, Grade Seven. I have long black hair. I have a round face and big eyes. I like wearing black a lot. I like playing ping-pong. My favorite teacher is Miss Gao. Her class is very interesting. She often tells us some stories in her class. She is very kind to us, too. We all love her. That’s all. Thanks for listening. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是演讲稿； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。通过自我介绍来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——个人基本信息、穿着、性格和喜好等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写演讲结语。 [亮点词汇] ①like … a lot很喜欢 ②be kind to对……厚道 ③thanks for doing sth.感谢做了某事 [高分句型] ①I like wearing black a lot. I like playing ping-pong. (like doing sth.结构） 9．【参考范文】 School Is a Big Family Good afternoon, everyone! I am glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “School Is a Big Family”. First, my maths teacher is patient with me. She helps me to study maths. Second, my classmates help me a lot. I’m not good at sports. My friend Li Yun often helps me with running and I can run fast now. Also, I care about my teachers and classmates. One day, my English teacher had a cold and I told her to drink hot water. She felt warm and thanked me. I believe if we understand and help each other, our school will be a better place. Thank you for your time! [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括思维导图所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一、三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，打招呼；开门见山：引出话题； 第二步，依据思维导图从三个方面进行陈述； 第三步，表达祝愿与感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①be patient with对……有耐心 ②care about关心，在意 [高分句型] ①My friend Li Yun often helps me with running and I can run fast now. (含and并列复合句) ②I believe if we understand and help each other, our school will be a better place. (宾语从句、if引导条件状语从句) 10．【参考范文】 Hello, everyone! To make our after-school life colorful, our school provides different clubs for us at weekends. Now let me tell you something about the clubs. The Art Club and the Sports Club are on Saturday. The Art Club is from 9 am to 11 am. You can draw pictures here. It’s a good way to relax. Also, you can enjoy the beauty of arts. If you want to play ball games, you can choose the Sports Club. It’s open from 2 pm to 4 pm. Playing ball games will make your body stronger and help you make more friends. On Sunday, the Photography Club is from 9 am to 11 am. The club will teach you how to take good pictures. In a word, your life will be more colorful if you take part in these after-school activities. So I hope all of you can join us. Thank you for listening. [总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：文章应该包括表格所列信息要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，介绍开设多种俱乐部的目的，从而引出话题：介绍俱乐部情况； 第二步，介绍星期六俱乐部安排情况； 第三步，介绍星期天俱乐部安排情况； 第四步，表达自己的观点，呼吁大家加入俱乐部。 第五步，感谢大家。 ［亮点词汇］ ① from … to… 从……到…… ② in a word 总而言之 ［高分句型］ ① So I hope all of you can join us. (宾语从句) ② Playing ball games will make your body stronger and help you make more friends. (动名词作主语) 京）股份有限公司 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$