09 Unit2话题写作12篇-2024-2025学年英语八年级上册单元冲刺满分题型训练(人教版)

09 Unit2 话题写作12篇 1．假如你叫杰克，下面是你及你同班同学的体育活动情况。请根据表格信息写一篇短文，不少于 80个词。 Name Favorite sport How often Favorite player Dream Jack football often Ronaldo scientist Steve swimming twice a week Sun Yang great swimmer Mary tennis every day Li Na dancer _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I am Jack. My favorite sport is football. I often play football with my friends. I like Ronaldo very much. I want to be a scientist in the future. This is my dream. Steve is my classmate. He is good at swimming. He goes swimming twice a week. His favorite player is Sun Yang. His dream job is to be a great swimmer. What about Mary? Tennis is her favorite sport. She plays tennis every day. Her favorite player is Li Na. But her dream is to be a dancer. Exercise is very important because it can help us keep healthy. We should do more exercise. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意表格给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据表格中的要点，介绍自己的体育活动情况； 第二步，根据表格中的要点，详细描述同学Steve和Mary的体育活动情况； 第三步，点评运动的好处，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①play…with和……一起玩 ②in the future在将来 [高分句型] ①Exercise is very important because it can help us keep healthy.（because引导的原因状语从句） 2. 假如今天英语课上你们就“habits”这个话题进行了讨论，课后老师要求你们写自己的习惯。 写作提示： （1）你的好习惯和坏习惯有哪些？ （2）你对于自己的好习惯和坏习惯的看法。 写作要求： 语句连贯，注意分段，80词左右。 谋篇布局： 理清文章要素，构建文章结构。 遣词造句： 就结构图中的提示写出句子。 （2）我经常帮忙做家务。 （3）我总是独立完成作业。 （4）我每天吃水果和蔬菜。 (5) 我从不读书。 (6)．我经常使用互联网到深夜。 deep into the night. (7)．我一周吃垃圾食品三到五次。 (8)．我几乎从不运动。 (9)．连句成篇： Everyone has his or her own habits. Here are my good habits and bad habits. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】2．I often help with housework. 3. I always finish my homework by myself. 4. I eat fruit and vegetables every day. 5. I never do any reading. 6. I often use the Internet 7. I eat junk food three to five times a week. 8. I hardly ever exercise/play sports. 去9．例文 Everyone has his or her own habits. Here are my good habits and bad habits. I have a lot of good habits. I often help with housework and I always finish my homework by myself. I eat fruit and vegetables every day. Also, I go to the dentist for teeth cleaning twice a year. I never arrive late for school. Good habits will benefit people forever. However, I have some bad habits, too. I never do any reading. I often use the Internet deep into the night. And I eat junk food three to five times a week. Also, I hardly ever exercise. Bad habits are bad for my health, so I’ll start changing before it’s too late! 【解析】2．我：I；经常：often；帮忙做家务：help with housework。句子采用一般现在时，主语为I，谓语动词用原形。故填I often help with housework. 3．我：I；总是：always；独立完成作业：finish my homework by myself。句子采用一般现在时，主语为I，谓语动词用原形。故填I always finish my homework by myself. 4．我：I；吃水果和蔬菜：eat fruit and vegetables；每天：every day。句子采用一般现在时，主语为I，谓语动词用原形。故填I eat fruit and vegetables every day. 5．我：I；从不读书：never do any reading。句子采用一般现在时，主语为I，谓语动词用原形。故填I never do any reading. 6．我：I；经常：often；使用互联网：use the Internet。句子采用一般现在时，主语为I，谓语动词用原形。故填I often use the Internet。 7．我：I；吃垃圾食品：eat junk food；一周三到五次：three to five times a week。句子采用一般现在时，主语为I，谓语动词用原形。故填I eat junk food three to five times a week. 8．我：I；几乎从不运动：hardly ever exercise/play sports。句子采用一般现在时，主语为I，谓语动词用原形。故填I hardly ever exercise/play sports. 9．[总体分析] ①题材：本文属于材料作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题； 第二步，根据要点提示介绍好习惯和坏习惯有哪些，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，发表你对自己的好习惯和坏习惯的看法并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①help with housework帮忙做家务 ②arrive late for school上学迟到 [高分句型] ①Bad habits are bad for my health, so I’ll start changing before it’s too late!（so连接两个并列分句，第二个并列分句中含有before引导的时间状语从句） 3．“双减”政策实施后，你学校的课余活动有什么变化吗？下面是八年级(3)班学生的课余活动调查(survey)结果，假如你是该班的一名学生，请你根据图表信息，用两段话写一篇英语短文。 内容包括：简要说明图表内容；从图表中选一项活动，结合自己的经历，谈谈你的看法。 要求：1. 不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Recently, students of Class 3, Grade 8 took part in a survey about school activities. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Recently, students of Class 3, Grade 8 took part in a survey about school activities. Here are the results. Playing sports is the most popular activity. Forty­-five percent of the students take part in it. Watching TV ranks second. Thirty-­five percent of the students like it. Besides, twenty percent of the students like surfing the Internet after class. As for me, I like playing sports best. I still remember when I was in the seventh grade, I didn’t like playing sports. When my P. E. teacher knew about my problem, she encouraged me to try to play sports. From then on, I played basketball every day. Finally, our team got first place in the basketball game two months later. Now I play basketball very well and I am very healthy. During the process, I not only improve my health but also enjoy myself. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意要结合自身经历，根据具体情况采用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引入话题。说明做了关于学生课余活动的调查，以引出调查结果； 第二步，从“活动内容、占比、排名”等方面说明调查结果； 第三步，结合自己的经历，谈谈自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②besides除此之外 ③as for至于 ④encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事 [高分句型] When my P. E. teacher knew about my problem, she encouraged me to try to play sports.（时间状语从句） 4．每个人都有各种各样的习惯，有些习惯能够助你成长，有些习惯会妨碍你进步。请结合个人实际情况，以“My Habits”为题，写一篇短文。 要点提示： 1.你有什么好习惯，请举例说明该习惯使你得到了哪些益处； 2.你有什么不良习惯，该习惯对你有什么影响,你应当如何改进。 写作要求： 1.词数80左右； 2.根据要点提示，适当发挥； 3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Habits 　　Everybody has both good habits and bad ones. So do I. 　　I have many good habits. I always read English books after supper and often help my parents with housework. I also have bad habits. I usually eat junk food and I hardly exercise. To be in good health, I decide to change my bad habits. First, I try to eat more vegetables and fruit. Second, I will do sports more than three times a week. In a word, I should give up the bad habits and make my life better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据所给内容要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明写作主题； 第二步，介绍好习惯和不良习惯； 第三步，介绍自己的做法。 [亮点词汇] ①both ...and... ……和…… ②hardly几乎不 ③In a word总之 [高分句型] ①So do I.（倒装句） ②To be in good health, I decide to change my bad habits.（动词不定式作目的状语） 5．假设Kate是你的英国笔友，她会唱歌跳舞，爱好广泛，喜欢各种活动，并且是个做事有计划的人。根据下面表格中的内容，写一篇短文在英语课上向你的同学介绍Kate和她的周末计划。 Time Things Saturday... read books... Sunday... play ping-pong... 要求： 1.包含表格里所给提示，并可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺、语意连贯、书写工整； 3.80词左右，不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息。 Hello, everyone! Today I want to introduce my pen friend. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Hello, everyone! Today I want to introduce my pen friend. Her name is Kate. She can sing and dance and has a wide range of hobbies. She likes all kinds of activities, and she is a person with a plan. On Saturday morning, she often goes to the bookshop, and reads some books there. Then, in the afternoon, she helps her mom do some homework. On Sunday, she often plays ping-pong with her friends. Then, in the afternoon, they do homework together and share happy things. What about you? What’s your plan? 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，写一篇短文在英语课上向同学介绍Kate和她的周末计划。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时为主。写作首先点题，介绍一下Kate的基本信息；其次详细描述她周六和周日分别做什么；最后则可以向同学们发出一个询问，大家的周末计划是什么。注意主谓一致，时态正确。 6．下面是对一个班的学生就几个方面所做的一个调查，请就表格内容写一篇调查报告。开头已给出。 Activity    Survey Activities Every day Once or twice a week Three or four times a week Do homework 90% 0% 10% Exercise 15% 55% 30% Here are the results of the students activity survey. We found that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Here are the results of the students activity survey. We found that only fifteen percent of the students exercise every day. Fifty-five percent exercise once or twice a week. Thirty percent exercise three or four times a week. We all know that our students must do homework, but we were surprised that ninety percent of the students do homework every day. The other ten percent do it three or four times a week. None do homework once or twice a week. 【详解】题干解读：题目要求根据表格内容写一篇调查报告，要求包含表格中的信息。 写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时。可采取2段落格式，第一段：主要介绍锻炼的调查结果；第二段：主要介绍做家庭作业的调查结果。 7．繁重的课业负担不利于学生的身心健康与全面发展，为树立健康第一的教育理念，你校建议学生每天课后采取适当方式放松自己。假设你是八（1）班的一名学生，最近你对班上同学课后放松方式进行调查。请根据以下表格提供的信息和要求，用英文写一篇短文。 对象 八（1）班 放松方式 1. 看电视（20人） 2. 玩电脑游戏或上网聊天（25人） 3. 阅读各种书籍（15人） 4. 进行体育锻炼（10人） 5. 没有时间放松（11人） 你的观点 哪一种（些）放松方式是适当的？为什么？ 写作要求： 1）文章必须包括表格中所有内容要点，可适当发挥以使行文连贯； 2）词数：100词左右；（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数） 3）文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。 参考词汇：聊天chat I’m a student of Class 1, Grade 8. Recently, I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文：               I’m a student of Class 1, Grade 8. Recently, I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class. Different students have different ways to relax after class. Among them, twenty students like watching TV, twenty-five students often play computer games or chat online, fifteen students like reading all kinds of books, ten students often do sports and eleven students don’t have time to relax. I think reading and doing sports are good for us, because we can improve ourselves by reading. What’s more, taking exercise is the best way to relax because it can rest our brains and eyes. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“表格提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引入写作主题； 第二步，依据表格提示，介绍同学的放松方式； 第三步，最后表达你的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①like doing喜欢做 ②chat online网上聊天 ③all kinds of各种各样的 [高分句型] taking exercise is the best way to relax because it can rest our brains and eyes.（动名词短语作主语和状语从句） 8．假设David 是你的好朋友，他的生活方式很健康，请向你的同学介绍他的生活方式，不少于80个单词。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Possible version: David is my good friend. He is 14 years old, and he has a healthy lifestyle. He gets up at 6:00 every morning. He exercises five times a week. He goes to school by bike every day. He does his homework every evening. He is busy with his studies, so he watches TV only twice a week. He hardly ever eats junk food because he thinks it is bad for his health. He drinks milk for breakfast every day and sleeps for at least eight hours every night. 【详解】1.题干解读：阅读题干可知，要求介绍好朋友David 的健康生活方式。写作可以从起床、锻炼、学习、娱乐、饮食等方面着手来写。写作前，可以列举出可能需要用到的单词、短语与句型；写作时，要注意写作手法要符合英语的表达方式；写作后，注意检查。 2.写作指导：这是一篇介绍类作文，时态应该以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主，所以要注意谓语动词的三单形式。特别需要注意的是，这里要求写的是健康的生活方式，例如早起、多运动、少吃垃圾食品、喝牛奶等。 9．请根据本单元所学内容，写一篇描述自己生活方式的短文，词数80左右。 提示：你叫刘涛，是一名中学生。你身体好，每天锻炼身体，早晨跑步半小时，然后骑车上学。你爱运动，每周和朋友打两次篮球，一到周末，你就到操场踢足球。你喜欢吃各种食物，尤其是蔬菜。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My lifestyle I think a healthy lifestyle is very important for us. I have a healthy lifestyle, so I am healthy. My name is Liutao. I am a middle school student. I run for half an hour every morning ,then ride a bike to school. I like playing sports,too. I play basketball twice a week with my friends. At weekends,I go to play football on the playground. I like to eat all kinds of food,especially vegetables,but I never eat junk food.If you want to be healthy, you should have a healthy lifestyle first. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应注意要包括提示的内容：人物介绍、锻炼、运动和饮食。 2.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一人称叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时，叙述完整，条例清晰。 3.高分亮点： 短语：a healthy lifestyle；half an hour；like playing sports；twice a week；all kinds of；junk food。 句型：if引导的条件状语从句。 10．良好的生活与学习习惯对我们的成长是非常重要的。请以“My good habits”为题，从以下的习惯中选择一个你以前做得不够好，但现在已具备的好习惯，谈一谈你养成这个习惯的过程及它的益处。 要求：1. 不使用真实的校名、人名等相关信息；2. 内容完整，书写整齐；3. 不少于80词。 Good habits →sleeping habits →eating habits →learning habits ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 My good habit Early to bed and early to rise is my good habit. One year ago，when I was a Grade 7 student，I liked reading books in bed. Every day after I finished my homework，I stayed up to read books until midnight. The next day I couldn't get up on time. I used to be late for school，and I felt tired in class. It was too bad. With the help of my teacher and my parents，I gave up the bad habit. Now I go to bed early and get up early. I never go to school late again. As a result，I'm much stronger and doing better in my studies now. 【详解】1.题干解读：本题目属于记叙文写作，写作时注意题干要求是现在已具备的好习惯，描述自己养成这个好习惯的过程以及这个习惯给自己带来的好处。可以从睡觉习惯，吃饭习惯和学习习惯几方面进行考虑。 2.例文点评：例文采用一段式，直接进行描写。时态一般过去时和一般现在时，一般过去时描述自己改变习惯的过程，一般现在时描述该好习惯给自己带来的益处。例文主要描述了睡眠习惯，之前会熬夜，导致第二天无法早起，上课犯困。改变习惯之后，我身体更加强壮，学习也更好了。 3.高分亮点： 短语：like doing sth；stay up；used to do；be late for；with the help of；give up；as a result。 句型：when引导的时间状语从句；With的复合结构。 11．Mary给Linda写了一封信，向她询问如何保持身体健康。请你以Linda的名义并参照要点提示给Mary回信。可适当发挥。词数不少于60。 要点提示：①每天坚持锻炼。②多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃垃圾食品。③保证每天睡眠至少8小时。④少看电视。 Dear Mary, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Linda 【答案】Dear Mary, I’m glad to hear from you. In your letter, you asked me about how to keep healthy. I think it’s not difficult to keep in good health. First, you may exercise every day. If your home is not very far from school, you may walk to school. You know walking is very good for your body. Second, you should eat a lot of vegetables and fruit. Do not eat junk food too much. Third, you should have at least 8 hours’ sleep every night. In addition, don’t watch TV too much. I wish you good health. Yours, Linda 【分析】写作分析：这篇写作的写作目的是给Mary的回信，主要告诉她如何保持身体健康，具体要点已经给出来了，①每天坚持锻炼。②多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃垃圾食品。③保证每天睡眠至少8小时。④少看电视。写作的时候要注意正确使用短语的英文表达，注意要有适当的补充，使得信件结构完整，内容充实。 【详解】写作亮点：首先确定这是一封信件，要注意信件的格式，使用的比较好的句型有I’m glad to hear from you.（我很高兴收到你的来信），然后要简单说一下写回信的原因you asked me about how to keep healthy.（你问了我关于如何保持健康的问题），接下来另起一段来阐述保持健康的要点，相关的短语有exercise every day每天锻炼，walk to school步行去学校，eat a lot of vegetables and fruit吃大量的蔬菜和水果，eat junk food吃垃圾食品，watch TV看电视，In addition另外。最后一段是结尾段I wish you good health.（我祝愿你能健康），总体来说分了三段，每个段落写作目的明确，短语运用准确，完成了既定的写作任务。 12． 假如你是吉娜,以下是你的英国笔友鲍勃发来的电子邮件。请你根据邮件内容给他回复邮件。 Hey, Gina! How are you? I'm very happy to be your pen pal. I want to know more about you. So can you tell me something about your habits? Yours, Bob 要求:80词左右。电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Bob, Glad to hear from you! You asked me about my habits in your last e mail. Now let me tell you something about them. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Gina 【答案】Dear Bob, Glad to hear from you! You asked me about my habits in your last e mail. Now let me tell you something about them. I have quite a lot of good habits. I do morning exercise every day. I hardly ever eat junk food such as ice -cream and hamburgers. Also, I read a book every month. However, I have some bad habits, too. I like going online and I spend more than an hour playing computer games every day. I don't often clean my room, maybe once a week. My parents say I'm a little lazy. But I'm trying to change. Yours, Gina 【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如hear from，let me do，tell sb. something，a lot of good habits，do morning exercise，every day，junk food，such as，like doing，go online，spend time doing，more than，play computer games，once a week，try to do等。而I like going online and I spend more than an hour playing computer games every day.等并列句和宾语从句My parents say I'm a little lazy.的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。 【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。 ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$