应用文写作 第6讲 人物描写&日记(word教师用书)-【正禾一本通】2025年高考英语高三一轮总复习高效讲义（外研版2019）

第六讲　人物描写&日记 文体(一)　人物描写 人物描写属于记叙文的写作范畴，写作时要围绕人物组织材料，内容一般包括人物生平、性格特点、主要成就及影响等。具体写作架构为： 1．出彩亮点首段句 ①There are many respectable people around us. And the person I respect most is my physics teacher, who is so patient with each student that we all like her. ②As we all know, Dr. Yuan Longping is considered a great scientist in agriculture. 学生用书第513页 2．吸引眼球中段句 ① He is always willing to help others in trouble, thus becoming popular among us. ②It’s her friendliness and the sense of responsibility that make me admire her. ③She teaches us not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person. 3．画龙点睛末段句 ①Having set a great example to us students, she fully deserves my respect. ②Her spirit inspires me and millions of other girls to live an independent life and be responsible for our own decisions. 1．...was born into a... family in... ……出生在……的一个……家庭。 2．... is a tall and slender man with piercing blue eyes. ……身材修长，有着一双锐利的蓝眼睛。 3．Born into a... family in... he showed great interest in... from an early age. 他出生在……的一个……家庭，他从小就对……表现出极大的兴趣。 4．When at college, he majored in... 在大学时，他主修…… 5．Having broken the world record and got the gold medal，...became the idol of the youth. 打破世界纪录并获得金牌后，……成了年轻人的偶像。 6．He is one of the scientists who made great contributions to society. 他是对社会有重大贡献的科学家之一。 (2023·全国甲卷改编)你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1．人物简介及事迹； 2．意义或启示。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．题目已为你写好。 The Historical Figure in China ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 The Historical Figure in China Among the Chinese historical figures, Fan Zhongyan is the most influential in my opinion. Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty, Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he made great contributions to society. He spared no effort to carry out a series of reforms to make his country prosperous. Besides, he proposed the establishment of a national school system. What impresses me most is his famous philosophy of life：“Be the first to worry about the troubles across the land, the last to enjoy universal happiness.”Fan Zhongyan is such a role model that he always encourages me to be a man of noble character. 文体(二)　日记 日记是用来记录一天中所发生的有意义的、值得记录的事件。在日记中，人们会对事件发表评论，阐述自己的态度或体会。日记有特定的格式，一般左上角标明日期(日、月、年)、星期和天气状况等，描述以第一人称为主。具体写作架构为： 1．出彩亮点首段句 ①This morning, when I was walking on the street, I saw that two travelers were reading a map, looking puzzled. ②It is Sunday today. This morning, we had a voluntary activity. 2．吸引眼球中段句 ①Today I successfully got rid of my phone and I felt it amazing. ②It offered me an opportunity to get close to nature and have a good chat with my friends instead of chatting online. ③I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take No.20 Bus, which could take them there directly. ④Seeing them on the bus, I felt a kind of satisfaction. 3．画龙点睛末段句 ①A thrilling as well as meaningful day has ended, but I still remained excited for quite a long time. 学生用书第514页 ②What happened today has left a deep impression in my memory. ③What an unforgettable experience! 1．Everyone may have experienced something unforgettable, good or bad. I will never forget the thing that... 每个人都可能经历过难忘的事情，或好或坏。我永远不会忘记的事情是…… 2．It was a cold Monday morning. On the way to school, I found... 这是一个寒冷的星期一早晨。在去学校的路上，我看到…… 3．I went upward and knew that...I thought I could... 我走上前去并且发现……我以为我可以…… 4．However, to my surprise, I... 但令我惊讶的是，我…… 5．At last I had to... 最后我只能…… 6．This is only a small thing, but only at that moment did I know... 这只是一件小事，但只有在那一刻我才知道…… 假定你是李华，昨天你参加了学校举办的以“我最喜欢的一本书”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语日记，要点如下： 1．描述当时比赛的情况； 2．你的表现和感受。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Saturday 4 June ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Saturday 4 June This afternoon I attended the English speech contest held by my school, whose topic was“The book I like best”． When I knew that the first five candidates performed very well, I felt a little worried. At the thought of the words“I can do it”，I became calm a lot. Soon it was my turn. I talked about the book I like best, Three Days to See by Helen Keller. From this book, I learned that it would be an excellent rule to live happily each day as if we should die tomorrow. Finally I won the first prize. Be happy every day and try my best to do everything. I’ll keep it in mind and make it come true. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$