专题03 应用文之建议信 -【高频·热点】2025年高考英语话题写作通关必备攻略

专题03应用文--建议信 -----三段式满分作文速成 ( 近三年考情分析 ) 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2024 新高考I&II卷 分享公园美术课的感想 邮件 全国甲卷 看图作文中国交通运输业的发展 发言稿 浙江卷月 向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿 投稿 2023 新高考I&II卷 给外教写邮件，告诉学生随机分组练口语的建议 建议信 全国甲卷 “用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动 提纲类 全国乙卷 用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及中获得的体验和感受。 提纲类 浙江卷1月 为校报写上周校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动的报道 报道 北京卷 学校生活之社团活动给出建议 建议信 2022 新高考I&II卷 校广播站“Talk and Talk”节目的负责人给外写邮件邀请做访谈 邀请信 全国甲卷 世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛 提纲类 全国乙卷 英语学习方式的调查 提纲类 北京卷 邀请英国好友Jim参加关于英语写作的线上经验交流。 提纲类 天津卷 用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频 提纲类 浙江卷6月 校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，邀请外国留学生一同体验。 提纲类 浙江卷1月 给爱尔兰朋友Chris写一封邮件回忆活动经历并分享个人收获 提纲类 2019 天津卷 讲座内容和话题 建议信 ( 写作方法指导 ) 首段：①简明扼要地介绍自己（1句话-短句） ②点明写作目的，即我为什么写信给您（1-2短句话/1长句） 段中：①提出具体建议，简明扼要（1-2句） ②提出自己建议的优点，边提优点边说明其理由（1-2句话/长句） 段尾：①总结采纳建议的好处； ②表达期盼。 ( 万能写作模板1 ) Dear_________(称呼)， l have received your letter saying that you have difficulty in困难/问题).Therefore, I am writing this letter with the intention of giving your some suggestions about how to_________________(引出对方需要建议的主题). First of all, it is highly suggested that you should_________________.(建议一) so that you can(理由). Additionally,as is known to all,( )is of great importance. Thus,it is necessary that you should_________________(建议二). What's more, aiming to_________________(理由), it is essential that you(建议三). Eventually, It is high time that you got should (建议四), which helps_________________(理由四). l hope that you will take my suggestions into serious account / consideration.am looking forward to your reply_________________（表达愿望）. Yours Sincerely, ( 万能写作模板2 )Li Hua Dear ___________ (建议对象) You have asked me for my advice on how to ________________________（对方的寻求建议内容）. I’d like to offer some suggestions for you. First of all, it is of great importance to ____________________________（建议1）， as you can _________________________________（理由1）. Then, it also helps to ____________________________（理由2）. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________________________（建议2），because by doing sth _____________________________（理由3）. You can also ________________________（建议1）. I’m convinced ___________________________（预测可能的结果）. Please take my proposals into consideration. I hope you will find them useful. Yours sincerely, _________（写信人） ( 词汇积累 ) ( 4 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ ( 3 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 take...into account/consideration考虑 in addition to除...之外 ask for sb.’s advice征求某人的建议 give sb. advice/ suggestions on…在…方面给某人建议 make/offer some suggestions/advice提出一些建议 adopt/accept/follow/take up my advice/suggestions接受我的建议 as far as I’m concerned/personally在我看来 be beneficial/be of benefit to sb.对某人有益 find my suggestions/advice helpful/practical觉得我的建议有益/实用 develop good habits培养好的习惯 lift one’s spirits振奋某人的精神 an effective way一个有效的方式 raise/improve working efficiency 提高工作效率 reduce harmful behaviors 减少有害行为 have positive effects on 对……有积极的影响 needless to say ... 不必说…… It's a good idea to do sth 做某事是个好主意 ( 句式积累 ) 首段常用语 1.I’m more than glad to receive your letter asking for my suggestions about how to learn English well. 很高兴收到你的来信，询问我如何很好地学好英语。 2.I am sorry you are having difficulty with your physics classes. 很遗憾你在物理学习方面有困难。 3.I have learned that you have some trouble in learning physics and I would like to offer you the following tips 我知道你在英语学习方面有困难，因此我想给你如下一些建议。 4.You have asked for my advice about...and I will try to make some useful suggestions here. 你向我征求意见，在此，我尽量提出一些有用的建议。 5. When it comes to/As for..., the following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows. 当涉及/关于……，我的建议如下。 6. I'm writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand. 我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。 7. I'm extremely delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. 很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。 段中常用语 1.Only when students are not trying hard is a teacher forced to take action. 只有当学生学习不努力的时候，老师才会被迫采取措施。 2.As far as I am concerned,the Great Wall should be protected. 依我看，长城应该得到保护。 3.It is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success. 这真是一个好主意而且每个人都希望它能成功。 4.It is a good way to broaden your mind, through which you can learn different cultures of the world. 它能开阔视野，通过旅游，你可以了解世界上不同的文化。 5.In terms of advice, remember to be yourself. 在建议方面，请记住要做你自己。 6.You have a unique set of skills and experiences, so don’t be afraid to showcase them. 你有一套独特的技能和经验，所以不要害怕展示它们。 7. The reason why I recommend this book is that it emphasizes the importance of good habits. 我推荐这本书的原因是它强调好习惯的重要性。 8.It is a good way to broaden your mind, through which you can learn different cultures of the world. 这是一个很好的可以拓宽视野的方式。通过这种方式，你可以了解到世界上的不同文化。 9.A bird in the hand is worth than two in the bush.一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。 尾段常用语 1. If you need further information, don’t hesitate to contact me. 如果你需要更多信息，请立刻联系我。 2. I do hope you will consider my tips/suggestions 真心希望你能考虑我的建议。 3.I hope you will find these tips helpful/useful. 我希望这些建议对你来说有帮/有用。 4.If you need further information, don't hesitate to contact me. 如果你需要更多信息，请联系我。 5.I'll be more than happy if you can take my recommendation/ideas into consideration. 如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会非常高兴。 6.I hope you will find my suggestions/advice helpful/useful/ practical/beneficial. 我希望你认为我的建议有帮助/有用/实用/有益的。 ( 高考真题精讲 ) 1.（2023年新高考I卷）  假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意：   1. 写作词数应为80个左右；   2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 2．（2023年北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)活动形式； (2)活动内容。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jim, Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”. Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：suggestion→tip 提供：offer→provide 开展：carry out→conduct 主题：theme→topic 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. 拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 3．（2019年天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:   ⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）； ⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容； ⑶希望从中有何收获。 注意： ⑴词数不少于100； ⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； ⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。 Dear Chris, I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your time. Yours, Li Jin 【答案】 Dear Chris,   I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.It’s our great pleasure to have you visit our school and give a lecture on western art during the coming summer vacation. When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic. Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice, and I hope that I can gain more knowledge through the lecture. Looking forward to your early reply. Thank you for your time. Yours, Li Jin 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出意见。 【详解】1.词汇积累 做演讲：give a lecture→make a speech 提供：provide sb. with sth.→refer sb. sth. 机会：opportunity→chance 采纳建议：take one’s advice→follow one’s advice 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. 拓展句：Western music，which is served as a bridge ，provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. 【点睛】【高分句型1】When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句） ( 名校模拟提升 ) 1．（2024·广东深圳·三模）假定你是李华，你校交换生Mike准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China) 短视频大赛，特发邮件向你征询视频创意。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．提出建议； 2．阐明理由。 注意： 1．写作词数应为 80 左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Mike, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mike, Learning you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you. If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China’s smart agriculture. Nowadays, you can see modern farmers using cutting-edge technologies and devices for agricultural production, monitoring and management. Thanks to this, the efficiency is greatly improved and the country’s grain security is guaranteed. Therefore, I’m convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers. May your entry stand out in the competition! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China) 短视频大赛的交换生Mike回一封邮件，就视频创意提出建议并阐明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 想法：idea →opinion 安全：security →safety 因此：therefore →thus 确信：convinced →sure 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Learning you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you. 拓展句：Because I learn you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you. 【点睛】【高分句型1】If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China’s smart agriculture.（运用了虚拟语气） 【高分句型2】Therefore, I’m convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和动名词短语作主语） 2．（2024·江苏·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国交换生同学Alex给你发来了一张海报，询问该项目是否值得一去。请你写一封回信给出你的意见，内容包括： 1. 给出建议：2.说明理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Alex, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Alex, I’ve seen the poster you shared with me about the Yangtze River Journey. As a local, I would highly recommend you go on the trip. The journey will offer breathtaking views of stunning landscape and diverse wildlife. You will also be blessed with the chance to explore vibrant local culture and savor the unique cuisine. Additionally, cruising along the river provides a relaxing and memorable experience you will cherish for a lifetime.     Be sure to check whether the travel agency is trustworthy before signing up. Wish you a fantastic trip! Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求根据英国交换生同学 Alex 发来的海报，给出关于该项目是否值得去的建议及理由。 【详解】词汇积累 强烈推荐：highly recommend→ strongly suggest 有机会做某事：be blessed with the chance to→ have the opportunity to 难忘的：memorable→ unforgettable 检查：check→ examine 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：You will also be blessed with the chance to explore vibrant local culture and savor the unique cuisine. 拓展句：You will also be blessed with the chance to explore vibrant local culture and savor the unique cuisine, which you will never forget. 【点睛】【高分句型 1】I’ve seen the poster you shared with me about the Yangtze River Journey.（使用了省略引导词that的定语从句，先行词为poster） 【高分句型 2】Cruising along the river provides a relaxing and memorable experience you will cherish for a lifetime.（使用了动名词作主语和省略引导词that的定语从句，先行词为experience） 3．（23-24高三下·广东佛山·阶段练习）假设你是高中生李华，你曾参加面试成功获得一份暑期工。现在你英国好友 Henry 准备去一家公司面试应聘暑期工，他给你来信请你给他一些面试的建议，请用英语写一封回信。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Henry, I hope this letter finds you well and excited about your upcoming interview for the summer job. I remember how nervous yet thrilled I was before my own interview last year, so I thought I’d share some tips that might help you ace yours. Firstly, research the company thoroughly. Knowing their mission, values, and recent projects will show your genuine interest and preparation. Secondly, practice answering common interview questions. This can boost your confidence and help you articulate your thoughts clearly. Besides, Don’t forget to prepare questions to ask the interviewer—it demonstrates your engagement and curiosity. Dress appropriately for the role you’re applying for, as first impressions matter. Be punctual and remember to be polite to everyone you meet, not just the interviewer. Lastly, relax and be yourself. Your unique personality and experiences are what make you a strong candidate. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友 Henry写信，关于他去一家公司面试应聘暑期工给出一些建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 非常兴奋的：thrilled→overjoyed 此外：besides → what’s more 好奇：curiosity→inquisitiveness 对……有礼貌：be polite to→show respect to 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Knowing their mission, values, and recent projects will show your genuine interest and preparation. 拓展句：Know their mission, values, and recent projects, which will show your genuine interest and preparation. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 I remember how nervous yet thrilled I was before my own interview last year, so I thought I’d share some tips that might help you ace yours. (运用了how引导的宾语从句，that引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】Your unique personality and experiences are what make you a strong candidate. (运用了what引导的表语从句) 4．（2024·广东江门·模拟预测）假定你是李华，最近收到好友 Ben 的来信，信中说他因为使用人工智能完成作业而受到老师的批评，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 你对使用人工智能完成作业的看法；2. 你的建议 注意：1. 词数80词左右；2. 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。     Dear Ben, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Ben, I’m sorry to learn about your current trouble regarding the use of AI tools for your assignment. I can fully relate to your situation as I once faced similar temptations to manage heavy academic workloads. However, AI should never replace our own intellectual efforts. As a scientist once said, “Our intelligence is what makes us human, and AI is an extension of that quality.” While AI can assist in certain areas, over reliance on it undermines the essence of learning and compromise academic integrity. Therefore, I suggest you improve your work without solely depending on AI tools and have an open conversation with your teacher, clarifying your intentions and demonstrating your commitment to genuine learning. Learning is not just about completing tasks but also about the process of acquiring knowledge. Wish you all the best. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给因为使用人工智能完成作业而受到老师批评的好友Ben写一封回信，阐述对使用人工智能完成作业的看法并提出建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 理解：relate to→ understand 代替；取代：replace→take the place of 因此：therefore→thus 建议：suggest→advise 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：However, AI should never replace our own intellectual efforts. 拓展句：However, it is our own intellectual efforts that AI should never replace. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I can fully relate to your situation as I once faced similar temptations to manage heavy academic workloads. (运用了as引导的原因状语从句) 【高分句型2】While AI can assist in certain areas, over reliance on it undermines the essence of learning and compromise academic integrity. (运用了while引导的让步状语从句) 5．（2024·安徽芜湖·模拟预测）假如你是一名高中生，名叫李华，你的美国同龄朋友Charles一家对中国文化很感兴趣，也与你家结成了友好家庭。最近，他们要搬入一个新房子，Charles也有了自己的房间。应他的请求，请你给他写一封信，给他一些关于房间设计的建议。 要点：1. 你的建议； 2. 你的祝福。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Charles, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Charles, How delighted I am to hear about your new removal! Given your enthusiasm for Chinese culture, I suggest the design and decoration of your room embracing Chinese style with elegance. From my perspective, not only can you hang a Chinese painting or calligraphy to add a cultural atmosphere, but also you may furnish the room with wooden pieces, their simplicity and dignity relieving the pressure of daily life. Additionally, use colors of red, gold and black, associated with Chinese culture, their richness enhancing the warmth of your space. There is no denying that a porcelain vase can add a unique and cultural touch to your space. Were it possible, you could combine these elements to create a room reflecting your personal taste. I am sure your creation will be a masterpiece, a perfect blend of China and the foreign countries. Eager to see the fruit of your endeavor! Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国同龄朋友Charles写一封信，给他一些关于房间设计的建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：delighted→joyful 热情：enthusiasm→passion 优雅：elegance→grace 此外：additionally→what’s more 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：How delighted I am to hear about your new removal! 拓展句：How delighted I am when I hear about your new removal! 【点睛】【高分句型1】From my perspective, not only can you hang a Chinese painting or calligraphy to add a cultural atmosphere, but also you may furnish the room with wooden pieces, their simplicity and dignity relieving the pressure of daily life. (运用了not only位于句首的倒装句式和独立主格结构) 【高分句型2】There is no denying that a porcelain vase can add a unique and cultural touch to your space. (运用了that引导的同位语从句) 6．（2024·山东·三模）假定你是李华。你校即将开设英语角，校英文报现面向全体学生征集建议。请你写一封信，内容包括： 1. 提供建议(如时间、地点、主题等)； 2. 表达期待。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Editor, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Editor, Learning that an English corner will be open in our school, I’m writing to give some advice. First of all, the English corner can be arranged every Friday in our language lab so that we will be offered a chance to practice our oral English using multimedia devices. What’s more, the theme of the English corner should be about improving our language competence, in particular, spoken English, various topics included. I hope my advice is worth taking and the first session will arrive on time! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校即将要开设英语角这一事写一封建议信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：advice→suggestion 机会：chance→opportunity 提高，加强：improve→strengthen 各种的：various→ a variety of 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：What’s more, the theme of the English corner should be about improving our language competence, in particular, spoken English, various topics included. 拓展句：What’s more, the English corner should include various topics, the theme of which is about improving our language competence, in particular, spoken English. 【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, the English corner can be arranged every Friday in our language lab so that we will be offered a chance to practice our oral English using multimedia devices.（运用了so that引导的状语从句和现在分词作状语） 【高分句型2】What’s more, the theme of the English corner should be about improving our language competence, in particular, spoken English, various topics included.（运用了独立主格结构） 7．（2024·安徽黄山·二模）假定你是李华，你校外教Christine正在筹办校英语书法大赛，要求学生线上提交作品，你认为该形式存在问题。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括： （1）说明问题； （2）提出建议。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Christine, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Christine, I am writing to express my concern about the upcoming English handwriting competition. As scheduled, our submissions are required to be handed in online. This, however, is very likely to cause problems such as cheating, which may reduce the effectiveness of the competition. I consider it a better alternative for all participants to complete and submit their works at a given time and in a specific location, such as our library, in order to ensure fairness and transparency. I’d appreciate it if you can take my suggestion into account. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Christine写封邮件，说明正在筹办校英语书法大赛，要求学生线上提交作品存在的问题。 【详解】1.词汇积累 要求：require→ request 可能：likely→ probably 减少：reduce→ decrease 考虑：take … into account→ take … into consideration 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I consider it a better alternative for all participants to complete and submit their works at a given time and in a specific location, such as our library, in order to ensure fairness and transparency. 拓展句：I consider it a better alternative that all participants should complete and submit their works at a given time and in a specific location, such as our library, in order to ensure fairness and transparency. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 I consider it a better alternative for all participants to complete and submit their works at a given time and in a specific location, such as our library, in order to ensure fairness and transparency.（不定式作宾语） 【高分句型2】This, however, is very likely to cause problems such as cheating, which may reduce the effectiveness of the competition.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 8．（2024·江苏盐城·模拟预测）假定你是李华，外教Smith准备让学生每周进行一次写作训练，但不得使用网络，你认为这样的做法存在问题。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Smith, I’m Li Hua from Class 1. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Smith, I’m Li Hua from Class 1. I really appreciate your planning to have us practice writing weekly. However, it’s unwise to stop us from turning to the Internet. My reasons are as follows. The Internet is an inseparable part of our life. Firstly, we can have quick access to abundant information, enriching our relevant knowledge. Secondly, online innovative ways of writing are there for our taking. We shouldn’t give up eating for fear of choking. Above all, students can resolve doubts in real time whenever in trouble. My suggestion is to use it wisely and responsibly. Only in this way can our writing be facilitated. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给外教Smith写一封邮件，向他反映每周进行一次写作训练，但不得使用网络的做法的问题，并给出个人的建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 不明智的：unwise→inadvisable, ill-considered 阻止某人做某事：stop sb from doing→prevent sb from doing, keep sb from doing 放弃：give up→quit, abandon 解决：resolve→work out, solve 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：My suggestion is to use it wisely and responsibly. 拓展句：I suggest that we should use it wisely and responsibly. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, we can have quick access to abundant information, enriching our relevant knowledge. (运用了现在分词短语作状语) [高分句型2] Only in this way can our writing be facilitated. (运用了“only+介词短语”置于句首引起的部分倒装) 9．（2024·浙江绍兴·三模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友John 来信说他们学校要组织中英文化交流项目，他要负责策划学校举办的中国文化节，但不知道如何将文化节办好，请你给他回信提一些建议，内容包括： 1.活动项目和意义；2.你给对方的鼓励。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear John, Hearing that you are in charge of holding the Chinese Culture Festival at school, I’m writing to give you some advice. To begin with, it’s highly recommended that the festival should consist of paper-cutting, calligraphy and Chinese art paintings, which indicate Chinese traditional culture and convey the beauty of Chinese art. Additionally, some Chinese activities, Lion Dancing for example, can be included to motivate students’ love for Chinese culture. To sum up, the programme not only gives your peers deep ins ight into Chinese culture but builds up interaction between British and Chinese people. I hope my ad vice will be of help to you and I’m looking forward to your good news. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是应用文。要求考生给英国朋友John回信，给出关于如何策划中国文化节的建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 首先：To begin with→Firstly 表达，传递：convey→express 此外：Additionally→Moreover 总之：To sum up→In a word 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Additionally, some Chinese activities, Lion Dancing for example, can be included to motivate students’ love for Chinese culture. 拓展句：Additionally, what motivates students’ love for Chinese culture, Lion Dancing for example, should be taken into account. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing that you are in charge of holding the Chinese Culture Festival at school, I’m writing to give you some advice.（运用了现在分词Hearing作原因状语以及that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】To begin with, it’s highly recommended that the festival should consist of paper-cutting, calligraphy and Chinese art paintings, which indicate Chinese traditional culture and convey the beauty of Chinese art. （运用了固定句型it’s highly recommended that...以及which引导的非限制性定语从句） 10．（2024·江西南昌·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的外教Peter最近布置的英语任务assignment较多，你认为这影响了你其他学科的学习。请你给Peter写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear Peter, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Peter, I’ve noticed a substantial increase in the assignment for our English class. While I understand the intention to solidify our understanding, I’m concerned it might affect our abilities to balance English and the other subjects. Could I suggest an adjustment in the quantity or the frequency of our assignments? It would help maintain a more balanced academic workload, improving both the depth of knowledge in our subject and a comprehensive learning experience across all subjects. Thank you for considering my suggestion. Your guidance and support would be greatly appreciated. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Peter写一封邮件，说明布置作业过多的问题并提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 担心的：concerned→worried 影响：affect→influence 建议：suggest→recommend 考虑：consider→take…into consideration 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：It would help maintain a more balanced academic workload, improving both the depth of knowledge in our subject and a comprehensive learning experience across all subjects. 拓展句：It would help maintain a more balanced academic workload, which can improve both the depth of knowledge in our subject and a comprehensive learning experience across all subjects. 【点睛】【高分句型1】While I understand the intention to solidify our understanding, I’m concerned it might affect our abilities to balance English and the other subjects.（运用了while引导的让步状语从句） 【高分句型2】It would help maintain a more balanced academic workload, improving both the depth of knowledge in our subject and a comprehensive learning experience across all subjects.（运用了非谓语动词作状语） $$ 专题03应用文--建议信 -----三段式满分作文速成 ( 近三年考情分析 ) 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2024 新高考I&II卷 分享公园美术课的感想 邮件 全国甲卷 看图作文中国交通运输业的发展 发言稿 浙江卷月 向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿 投稿 2023 新高考I&II卷 给外教写邮件，告诉学生随机分组练口语的建议 建议信 全国甲卷 “用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动 提纲类 全国乙卷 用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及中获得的体验和感受。 提纲类 浙江卷1月 为校报写上周校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动的报道 报道 北京卷 学校生活之社团活动给出建议 建议信 2022 新高考I&II卷 校广播站“Talk and Talk”节目的负责人给外写邮件邀请做访谈 邀请信 全国甲卷 世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛 提纲类 全国乙卷 英语学习方式的调查 提纲类 北京卷 邀请英国好友Jim参加关于英语写作的线上经验交流。 提纲类 天津卷 用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频 提纲类 浙江卷6月 校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，邀请外国留学生一同体验。 提纲类 浙江卷1月 给爱尔兰朋友Chris写一封邮件回忆活动经历并分享个人收获 提纲类 2019 天津卷 讲座内容和话题 建议信 ( 写作方法指导 ) 首段：①简明扼要地介绍自己（1句话-短句） ②点明写作目的，即我为什么写信给您（1-2短句话/1长句） 段中：①提出具体建议，简明扼要（1-2句） ②提出自己建议的优点，边提优点边说明其理由（1-2句话/长句） 段尾：①总结采纳建议的好处； ②表达期盼。 ( 万能写作模板1 ) Dear_________(称呼)， l have received your letter saying that you have difficulty in困难/问题).Therefore, I am writing this letter with the intention of giving your some suggestions about how to_________________(引出对方需要建议的主题). First of all, it is highly suggested that you should_________________.(建议一) so that you can(理由). Additionally,as is known to all,( )is of great importance. Thus,it is necessary that you should_________________(建议二). What's more, aiming to_________________(理由), it is essential that you(建议三). Eventually, It is high time that you got should (建议四), which helps_________________(理由四). l hope that you will take my suggestions into serious account / consideration.am looking forward to your reply_________________（表达愿望）. Yours Sincerely, ( 万能写作模板2 )Li Hua Dear ___________ (建议对象) You have asked me for my advice on how to ________________________（对方的寻求建议内容）. I’d like to offer some suggestions for you. First of all, it is of great importance to ____________________________（建议1）， as you can _________________________________（理由1）. Then, it also helps to ____________________________（理由2）. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________________________（建议2），because by doing sth _____________________________（理由3）. You can also ________________________（建议1）. I’m convinced ___________________________（预测可能的结果）. Please take my proposals into consideration. I hope you will find them useful. Yours sincerely, _________（写信人） ( 词汇积累 ) ( 4 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ ( 3 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 考虑______________________ 除...之外______________________ 征求某人的建议______________________ 在…方面给某人建议______________________ 提出一些建议______________________ 接受我的建议______________________ 在我看来______________________ 对某人有益______________________ 觉得我的建议有益/实用______________________ 培养好的习惯______________________ 振奋某人的精神______________________ 一个有效的方式______________________ 提高工作效率______________________ 减少有害行为______________________ 对……有积极的影响______________________ 不必说______________________…… 做某事是个好主意______________________ ( 句式积累 ) 首段常用语 1.I’m more than glad to receive your letter asking for my suggestions about how to learn English well. 很高兴收到你的来信，询问我如何很好地学好英语。 2.I am sorry you are having difficulty with your physics classes. 很遗憾你在物理学习方面有困难。 3.I have learned that you have some trouble in learning physics and I would like to offer you the following tips 我知道你在英语学习方面有困难，因此我想给你如下一些建议。 4.You have asked for my advice about...and I will try to make some useful suggestions here. 你向我征求意见，在此，我尽量提出一些有用的建议。 5. When it comes to/As for..., the following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows. 当涉及/关于……，我的建议如下。 6. I'm writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand. 我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。 7. I'm extremely delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. 很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。 段中常用语 1.Only when students are not trying hard is a teacher forced to take action. 只有当学生学习不努力的时候，老师才会被迫采取措施。 2.As far as I am concerned,the Great Wall should be protected. 依我看，长城应该得到保护。 3.It is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success. 这真是一个好主意而且每个人都希望它能成功。 4.It is a good way to broaden your mind, through which you can learn different cultures of the world. 它能开阔视野，通过旅游，你可以了解世界上不同的文化。 5.In terms of advice, remember to be yourself. 在建议方面，请记住要做你自己。 6.You have a unique set of skills and experiences, so don’t be afraid to showcase them. 你有一套独特的技能和经验，所以不要害怕展示它们。 7. The reason why I recommend this book is that it emphasizes the importance of good habits. 我推荐这本书的原因是它强调好习惯的重要性。 8.It is a good way to broaden your mind, through which you can learn different cultures of the world. 这是一个很好的可以拓宽视野的方式。通过这种方式，你可以了解到世界上的不同文化。 9.A bird in the hand is worth than two in the bush.一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。 尾段常用语 1. If you need further information, don’t hesitate to contact me. 如果你需要更多信息，请立刻联系我。 2. I do hope you will consider my tips/suggestions 真心希望你能考虑我的建议。 3.I hope you will find these tips helpful/useful. 我希望这些建议对你来说有帮/有用。 4.If you need further information, don't hesitate to contact me. 如果你需要更多信息，请联系我。 5.I'll be more than happy if you can take my recommendation/ideas into consideration. 如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会非常高兴。 6.I hope you will find my suggestions/advice helpful/useful/ practical/beneficial. 我希望你认为我的建议有帮助/有用/实用/有益的。 ( 高考真题精讲 ) 1.（2023年新高考I卷）  假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意：   1. 写作词数应为80个左右；   2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 2．（2023年北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)活动形式； (2)活动内容。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 3．（2019年天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:   ⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）； ⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容； ⑶希望从中有何收获。 注意： ⑴词数不少于100； ⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； ⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。 Dear Chris, I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your time. Yours, Li Jin ( 名校模拟提升 ) 1．（2024·广东深圳·三模）假定你是李华，你校交换生Mike准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China) 短视频大赛，特发邮件向你征询视频创意。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．提出建议； 2．阐明理由。 注意： 1．写作词数应为 80 左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Mike, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2．（2024·江苏·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国交换生同学Alex给你发来了一张海报，询问该项目是否值得一去。请你写一封回信给出你的意见，内容包括： 1. 给出建议：2.说明理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Alex, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 3．（23-24高三下·广东佛山·阶段练习）假设你是高中生李华，你曾参加面试成功获得一份暑期工。现在你英国好友 Henry 准备去一家公司面试应聘暑期工，他给你来信请你给他一些面试的建议，请用英语写一封回信。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·广东江门·模拟预测）假定你是李华，最近收到好友 Ben 的来信，信中说他因为使用人工智能完成作业而受到老师的批评，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 你对使用人工智能完成作业的看法；2. 你的建议 注意：1. 词数80词左右；2. 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。     Dear Ben, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5．（2024·安徽芜湖·模拟预测）假如你是一名高中生，名叫李华，你的美国同龄朋友Charles一家对中国文化很感兴趣，也与你家结成了友好家庭。最近，他们要搬入一个新房子，Charles也有了自己的房间。应他的请求，请你给他写一封信，给他一些关于房间设计的建议。 要点：1. 你的建议； 2. 你的祝福。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Charles, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 6．（2024·山东·三模）假定你是李华。你校即将开设英语角，校英文报现面向全体学生征集建议。请你写一封信，内容包括： 1. 提供建议(如时间、地点、主题等)； 2. 表达期待。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Editor, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 7．（2024·安徽黄山·二模）假定你是李华，你校外教Christine正在筹办校英语书法大赛，要求学生线上提交作品，你认为该形式存在问题。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括： （1）说明问题； （2）提出建议。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Christine, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 8．（2024·江苏盐城·模拟预测）假定你是李华，外教Smith准备让学生每周进行一次写作训练，但不得使用网络，你认为这样的做法存在问题。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Smith, I’m Li Hua from Class 1. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 9．（2024·浙江绍兴·三模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友John 来信说他们学校要组织中英文化交流项目，他要负责策划学校举办的中国文化节，但不知道如何将文化节办好，请你给他回信提一些建议，内容包括： 1.活动项目和意义；2.你给对方的鼓励。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·江西南昌·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的外教Peter最近布置的英语任务assignment较多，你认为这影响了你其他学科的学习。请你给Peter写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear Peter, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua $$