08.说明介绍+家乡之美+说明文-2024-2025学年七年级英语上学期写作万能模板与题型通关(新教材通用版)

08.说明介绍+家乡之美+演讲稿 写作语言基础：说明介绍 初中英语说明介绍类写作常采用提示或图表的形式, 让学生介绍某种活动、某种动物或名胜等; 要求学生能够将活动、任务、地点等进行清楚而准确地描述; 主要考查任务说明文、事物说明文和方式方法说明文等。在初中英语写作中，‌用于说明和介绍的词句是构建文章框架和传达信息的关键。‌以下是一些常用的说明介绍类词句，‌适用于初中英语写作：‌ 1.‌开头引入‌‌ Let me introduce...（‌让我来介绍...）‌ I would like to talk about...（‌我想谈谈...）‌ This is...（‌这是...）‌ 2.‌描述特征‌‌ It has...（‌它有...）‌ One of its main features is...（‌它的主要特征之一是...）‌ It is characterized by...（‌它的特点是...）‌ 3.‌说明功能或用途‌‌ It is used for...（‌它被用于...）‌ The purpose of... is to...（‌...的目的是...）‌ You can use it to...（‌你可以用它来...）‌ 4.‌给出例子‌‌ For example,...（‌例如，‌...）‌ Such as...（‌比如...）‌ Like...（‌像...）‌ 5.‌进行对比或比较‌‌ Compared to..., it is...（‌与...相比，‌它是...）‌ While... is..., ... is...（‌虽然...是...，‌但...是...）‌ On the other hand,...（‌另一方面，‌...）‌ 6.‌总结或结束‌‌ In summary,...（‌总之，‌...）‌ To conclude,...（‌最后，‌...）‌ That's all about...（‌这就是关于...的全部内容）‌ 7.‌过渡词句‌‌ First/Secondly/Finally,...（‌首先/其次/最后，‌...）‌ Moving on to...（‌接下来是...）‌ Another important aspect is...（‌另一个重要方面是...）‌‌ 写作话题素材：家乡之美 【常用句式】 1. With the help of the government, my hometown will become more and more beautiful.   在政府的帮助之下, 我的家乡将变得越来越美。 2. My hometown has changed so much that I could hardly believe my eyes. I hope it’ll change for the better for ever. 我的家乡变化如此大, 以至于我几乎不敢相信我的眼睛。我希望它永远朝着更好的方向发展。  3. To my joy, more and more people have moved into the new flats.   令我惊喜的是, 越来越多的人已经搬进新房里。 4. I hope my hometown will be more and more beautiful in the future. 我希望在未来我的家乡会变得越来越美。  5. Shanghai lies in the east of China. 上海位于中国东部。  6. Of all the landmarks, the Oriental Pearl TV Tower is one of the most attractive destinations.   在所有地标性建筑物中, 东方明珠电视塔是最吸引人的目的地之一。 7. No matter where you go, you will be caught by the views. 不论你去哪里, 你都将被那些景色吸引。  【基础训练】 根据汉语意思和英文提示, 完成句子。 1. 我的家乡位于浙江省的东南部。 (lie) ________________________________________________ 2. 我们城市的人口有四百多万。 (the population of) ________________________________________________ 3. 丽水如此美丽以至于每年有数以百万计的游客来参观。(so. . . that) ________________________________________________ 4. 这里天气很棒, 全年既不太冷, 又不太热。(neither. . . nor. . . ) ________________________________________________ 5. 在杭州有许多名胜古迹, 比如西湖(the West Lake)、灵隐寺(LingYin Temple)、九溪十八涧(Nine Creeks and Eighteen Gullies)等。(places of interest) ________________________________________________ 6. 洞庭湖是中国第二大淡水湖。(the second largest; freshwater) ________________________________________________ 写作必备类型：说明文 (2021•通辽中考)我们国家历史悠久, 地大物博。有勤劳善良的人民; 有绿水青山, 美丽的风景; 有独特的美食, 传统的饮食文化。请以“Beautiful China”为题, 写一篇作文, 描写大美中国, 表达我们对祖国的热爱。 要求: 1. 思路清晰, 语句通顺, 书写规范; 2. 文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息; 3. 词数: 80词左右的短文。 Beautiful China Yours, Li Hua 【写作示例】 【审题角度】 1. 审主题: 介绍大美中国。 2. 审人称: 本题要求以“介绍中国”为中心, 以第三人称为主。 3. 审时态: 陈述事实, 以一般现在时为主。 4. 审思路: 首先, 说明中国是个伟大的国家, 运用great, history等词汇; 其次, 介绍中国的风土人情、名胜古迹; 最后发表个人感悟, 升华情感。 【写作分析】 【衔接成篇】 【提升练习】 1．暑期即将来临，如何度过一个丰富多彩又有意义的假期呢？烟台广播发起 “北大清华研学游” 的活动，下面是活动的相关内容。请根据下面的提示，用英语描述一下此次研学活动。 研学地点： 北京 研学时长：5天 研学对象：8-18岁青少年 活动安排 1. 参观北京大学、清华大学； 2. 聆听教授精彩的课程； 3. 与学霸面对面，听他们分享学习经验和成长的故事； 4. 参观博物馆，了解中国历史和文化； 5. 游览圆明园，以史为鉴，奋发图强。 参考词汇：study tour 研学旅行  Peking University 北京大学  Tsinghua University 清华大学  professor 教授  top students 学霸  museum 博物馆  the Old Summer Palace 圆明园 要求: 1. 写作包含以上内容提示，可适当发挥； 2. 意思连贯、通顺，条理清楚； 3. 80词左右，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Join Our Study Tour! Summer Vacation is coming. How to spend a colorful and meaningful holiday? Yantai Broadcasting has launched a study tour activity to Peking University and Tsinghua University. Here are the relevant details (相关细节) of this activity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．书面表达 请根据以下提示，以“Welcome to Beijing”为题写一篇60词左右的英语作文。 提示： 1.北京是中国首都，位于中国东北部 2. 北京有很多名胜，如紫禁城the Forbidden City，颐和园the Summer Palace，天安门Tiananmen Square，北京奥运国家体育场Beijing National Stadium 3.北京有众多知名学府，如北京大学Peking University，清华大学 Tsinghua University，中国人民大学Renmin University of China 4．北京有很多美食，如北京烤鸭Beijing Roast Duck，豆汁Bean Soup，涮羊肉instant-boiled mutton 要求：1.句子通顺，表达准确，可适当增加细节使内容连贯 2.不少于60词 __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ 3．下周学校将举办一场时装秀，请你设计一套服装参加。请以“My Fashion Design”为题，根据下面表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你的设计。 blouse skirt boots Feature smart warm and comfortable light and cool Colour red black grey Material cotton wool leather 要求：1. 词数90左右； 2. 文章内容应包含表格中的所有提示，可适当发挥。 My Fashion Design ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．Bob是你的朋友，这是他的房间的图片。请根据这张图片的内容，用on和under写五个句子，介绍一下他的房间中物品的位置。 要求：字迹工整，表达清楚，语法正确。 注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和老师的真实姓名。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．同学们参加过各种各样的社团，如篮球队、合唱团等。假设你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文给学校英文网站投稿，介绍一个你参加的社团，谈谈这个社团的活动内容以及你的收获。 写作提示： 1. What club do you join? 2. What do you do in the club? 3. What do you learn from the experience? 要求： 1.内容必须包含所给提示信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.不少于70词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．汪曾祺说：“家人闲坐，灯火可亲。”和家人一起叙家常是一件幸福的事。请你以“My Family”为题写一篇70词左右的英文短文，介绍一下你的家人。包括他们的年龄、职业、食物喜好等。 My Family ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如你是来自英国的交换生Sally，请你为学校附近的蓝月亮餐厅写一则广告，介绍它的特色菜。 Blue Moon Restaurant Specials Tomato and egg soup Beef and potatoes Vegetable salad Prices ¥10 ¥22 ¥15 写作要求： （1）短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥； （2）词数：60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 Welcome to Blue Moon Restaurant. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We’re waiting for you! 8．运动不仅可以让我们有强壮的身体，还可以让我们感到愉快和轻松。你最喜欢的体育运动是什么? 请你以“My Favourite Sport”为题，根据下面提示写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的体育运动。 提示： (1) What’s your favourite sport? (2) Why do you like it? 要求： (1)短文须包括提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥。 (2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 (3)词数60个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Doing sports can make us feel fun and healthy. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 京）股份有限公司 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 08.说明介绍+家乡之美+演讲稿 写作语言基础：说明介绍 初中英语说明介绍类写作常采用提示或图表的形式, 让学生介绍某种活动、某种动物或名胜等; 要求学生能够将活动、任务、地点等进行清楚而准确地描述; 主要考查任务说明文、事物说明文和方式方法说明文等。在初中英语写作中，‌用于说明和介绍的词句是构建文章框架和传达信息的关键。‌以下是一些常用的说明介绍类词句，‌适用于初中英语写作：‌ 1.‌开头引入‌‌ Let me introduce...（‌让我来介绍...）‌ I would like to talk about...（‌我想谈谈...）‌ This is...（‌这是...）‌ 2.‌描述特征‌‌ It has...（‌它有...）‌ One of its main features is...（‌它的主要特征之一是...）‌ It is characterized by...（‌它的特点是...）‌ 3.‌说明功能或用途‌‌ It is used for...（‌它被用于...）‌ The purpose of... is to...（‌...的目的是...）‌ You can use it to...（‌你可以用它来...）‌ 4.‌给出例子‌‌ For example,...（‌例如，‌...）‌ Such as...（‌比如...）‌ Like...（‌像...）‌ 5.‌进行对比或比较‌‌ Compared to..., it is...（‌与...相比，‌它是...）‌ While... is..., ... is...（‌虽然...是...，‌但...是...）‌ On the other hand,...（‌另一方面，‌...）‌ 6.‌总结或结束‌‌ In summary,...（‌总之，‌...）‌ To conclude,...（‌最后，‌...）‌ That's all about...（‌这就是关于...的全部内容）‌ 7.‌过渡词句‌‌ First/Secondly/Finally,...（‌首先/其次/最后，‌...）‌ Moving on to...（‌接下来是...）‌ Another important aspect is...（‌另一个重要方面是...）‌‌ 写作话题素材：家乡之美 【常用句式】 1. With the help of the government, my hometown will become more and more beautiful.   在政府的帮助之下, 我的家乡将变得越来越美。 2. My hometown has changed so much that I could hardly believe my eyes. I hope it’ll change for the better for ever. 我的家乡变化如此大, 以至于我几乎不敢相信我的眼睛。我希望它永远朝着更好的方向发展。  3. To my joy, more and more people have moved into the new flats.   令我惊喜的是, 越来越多的人已经搬进新房里。 4. I hope my hometown will be more and more beautiful in the future. 我希望在未来我的家乡会变得越来越美。  5. Shanghai lies in the east of China. 上海位于中国东部。  6. Of all the landmarks, the Oriental Pearl TV Tower is one of the most attractive destinations.   在所有地标性建筑物中, 东方明珠电视塔是最吸引人的目的地之一。 7. No matter where you go, you will be caught by the views. 不论你去哪里, 你都将被那些景色吸引。  【基础训练】 根据汉语意思和英文提示, 完成句子。 1. 我的家乡位于浙江省的东南部。 (lie) My hometown lies in the southeast of Zhejiang Province.   2. 我们城市的人口有四百多万。 (the population of) The population of our city is over 4 million.   3. 丽水如此美丽以至于每年有数以百万计的游客来参观。(so. . . that) Lishui is so beautiful that millions of tourists come to visit it every year.   4. 这里天气很棒, 全年既不太冷, 又不太热。(neither. . . nor. . . ) The weather here is great. It is neither too cold nor too hot all year round.   5. 在杭州有许多名胜古迹, 比如西湖(the West Lake)、灵隐寺(LingYin Temple)、九溪十八涧(Nine Creeks and Eighteen Gullies)等。(places of interest) There are many places of interest in Hangzhou, such as the West Lake, LingYin Temple and Nine Creeks and Eighteen Gullies and so on.   6. 洞庭湖是中国第二大淡水湖。(the second largest; freshwater) Dongting Lake is the second largest freshwater lake in China.   写作必备类型：说明文 (2021•通辽中考)我们国家历史悠久, 地大物博。有勤劳善良的人民; 有绿水青山, 美丽的风景; 有独特的美食, 传统的饮食文化。请以“Beautiful China”为题, 写一篇作文, 描写大美中国, 表达我们对祖国的热爱。 要求: 1. 思路清晰, 语句通顺, 书写规范; 2. 文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息; 3. 词数: 80词左右的短文。 Beautiful China Yours, Li Hua 【写作示例】 【审题角度】 1. 审主题: 介绍大美中国。 2. 审人称: 本题要求以“介绍中国”为中心, 以第三人称为主。 3. 审时态: 陈述事实, 以一般现在时为主。 4. 审思路: 首先, 说明中国是个伟大的国家, 运用great, history等词汇; 其次, 介绍中国的风土人情、名胜古迹; 最后发表个人感悟, 升华情感。 【写作分析】 【衔接成篇】 【参考范文】 Beautiful China China is a great country with a long history. It lies in the east of Asia. It has the largest population of the world. It is big and has rich natural resources. There are lots of green mountains and clean water. There are many places of interest. It is famous for the Great Wall in the world. The natural scenery is fascinating. Thousands of foreigners come to China for a trip every year. It has its special food, such as Beijing Duck, Sichuan hotpot and so on. They’re very delicious. There are lots of traditional table manners as well. For example, You’re not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. It’s impolite to point at anyone with your chopsticks. The Chinese people are friendly and kind. They’re having a happy life. I love China.   I take pride in our country. I hope our country will become better and stronger in the future.   【技巧点拨】 1.开门见山, 直奔主题。这种写法干脆利落, 入题快捷, 不枝不蔓, 实为表达开篇的首选方法。结尾要像豹尾, 有平衡感, 简洁明了。 2.介绍事物时, 我们可以使用比较法和细节描述法等, 精心构思设计介绍次序, 使短文结构、层次清晰, 更能深刻、完整地表现中心。 3.说明介绍类书面表达的写作目的是介绍客观事物, 这就要求说明的语言应简练精辟、通俗易懂。同时, 措辞必须严谨, 语言必须准确。绝不可言不达意, 有任何笼统、含糊、生硬牵强, 甚至错误的表达出现。 4.尝试使用高级词汇或句型, 彰显我们的语言功底, 以凸显文章的亮点, 给文章增添文采, 给阅卷教师留下深刻印象。 【提升练习】 1．暑期即将来临，如何度过一个丰富多彩又有意义的假期呢？烟台广播发起 “北大清华研学游” 的活动，下面是活动的相关内容。请根据下面的提示，用英语描述一下此次研学活动。 研学地点： 北京 研学时长：5天 研学对象：8-18岁青少年 活动安排 1. 参观北京大学、清华大学； 2. 聆听教授精彩的课程； 3. 与学霸面对面，听他们分享学习经验和成长的故事； 4. 参观博物馆，了解中国历史和文化； 5. 游览圆明园，以史为鉴，奋发图强。 参考词汇：study tour 研学旅行  Peking University 北京大学  Tsinghua University 清华大学  professor 教授  top students 学霸  museum 博物馆  the Old Summer Palace 圆明园 要求: 1. 写作包含以上内容提示，可适当发挥； 2. 意思连贯、通顺，条理清楚； 3. 80词左右，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Join Our Study Tour! Summer Vacation is coming. How to spend a colorful and meaningful holiday? Yantai Broadcasting has launched a study tour activity to Peking University and Tsinghua University. Here are the relevant details (相关细节) of this activity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．书面表达 请根据以下提示，以“Welcome to Beijing”为题写一篇60词左右的英语作文。 提示： 1.北京是中国首都，位于中国东北部 2. 北京有很多名胜，如紫禁城the Forbidden City，颐和园the Summer Palace，天安门Tiananmen Square，北京奥运国家体育场Beijing National Stadium 3.北京有众多知名学府，如北京大学Peking University，清华大学 Tsinghua University，中国人民大学Renmin University of China 4．北京有很多美食，如北京烤鸭Beijing Roast Duck，豆汁Bean Soup，涮羊肉instant-boiled mutton 要求：1.句子通顺，表达准确，可适当增加细节使内容连贯 2.不少于60词 __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ 3．下周学校将举办一场时装秀，请你设计一套服装参加。请以“My Fashion Design”为题，根据下面表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你的设计。 blouse skirt boots Feature smart warm and comfortable light and cool Colour red black grey Material cotton wool leather 要求：1. 词数90左右； 2. 文章内容应包含表格中的所有提示，可适当发挥。 My Fashion Design ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．Bob是你的朋友，这是他的房间的图片。请根据这张图片的内容，用on和under写五个句子，介绍一下他的房间中物品的位置。 要求：字迹工整，表达清楚，语法正确。 注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和老师的真实姓名。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．同学们参加过各种各样的社团，如篮球队、合唱团等。假设你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文给学校英文网站投稿，介绍一个你参加的社团，谈谈这个社团的活动内容以及你的收获。 写作提示： 1. What club do you join? 2. What do you do in the club? 3. What do you learn from the experience? 要求： 1.内容必须包含所给提示信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.不少于70词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．汪曾祺说：“家人闲坐，灯火可亲。”和家人一起叙家常是一件幸福的事。请你以“My Family”为题写一篇70词左右的英文短文，介绍一下你的家人。包括他们的年龄、职业、食物喜好等。 My Family ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如你是来自英国的交换生Sally，请你为学校附近的蓝月亮餐厅写一则广告，介绍它的特色菜。 Blue Moon Restaurant Specials Tomato and egg soup Beef and potatoes Vegetable salad Prices ¥10 ¥22 ¥15 写作要求： （1）短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥； （2）词数：60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 Welcome to Blue Moon Restaurant. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We’re waiting for you! 8．运动不仅可以让我们有强壮的身体，还可以让我们感到愉快和轻松。你最喜欢的体育运动是什么? 请你以“My Favourite Sport”为题，根据下面提示写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的体育运动。 提示： (1) What’s your favourite sport? (2) Why do you like it? 要求： (1)短文须包括提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥。 (2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 (3)词数60个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Doing sports can make us feel fun and healthy. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1．【参考范文】                                                                                    Join Our Study Tour!           Summer Vacation is coming. How to spend a colorful and meaningful holiday? Yantai Broadcasting has launched a study tour activity to Peking University and Tsinghua University. Here are the relevant details (相关细节) of this activity.           Our study tour is for young students aged 8 to 18 and will be held in Beijing for 5 exciting days! You’ll get to visit the famous Peking University and Tsinghua University, where you can listen to brilliant professors teach amazing lessons. You’ll also meet top students who will share their stories of learning and growth.We have planned visits to museums to explore the rich history and culture of China. Plus, we’ll take a trip to the Old Summer Palace to learn from history and be inspired to work hard for a better future.           Come and join us for a holiday full of fun, learning, and adventure! [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，介绍研学活动内容; ②时态：主要是一般现在时和一般将来时; ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意先补全开头，并结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补全开头； 第二步，描述研学活动五天安排； 第三步，呼吁大家来参加研学活动。 [亮点词汇] ①exciting days 令人兴奋的日子 ②brilliant professors 杰出的教授 ③amazing lessons  惊人的课程 ④rich history and culture 丰富的历史和文化 [高分句型] ①Our study tour is for young students aged 8 to 18 and will be held in Beijing for 5 exciting days! (一般将来时的被动语态） ② You'll also meet top students who will share their stories of learning and growth. (who引导的定语从句) ③ We have planned visits to museums to explore the rich history and culture of China. (动词不定式表目的) 2．Welcome to Beijing! Beijing is the capital of China,is also an international modern metropolis,It is in the northeast of China. There are many places of interest. Great Wall is one of the eight wonders of the world,the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games China's national stadium "bird's nest",and Chinese ancient city ruins the Palace Museum,also known as the Forbidden City and so on.Old Beijing famous snacks have Peking roast duck,mutton hotpot,kidney bean,sugar,ears,etc.It is the crystallization of culture of the people in Beijing. 试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。 写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如Old Beijing famous snacks have Peking roast duck,mutton hotpot,kidney bean,sugar,ears,etc.It is the crystallization of culture of the people in Beijing.等等。 考点：考查提纲类作文。 3．范文 My Fashion Design We’ll have a fashion show next week. The teacher asks us to design some clothes and shoes. Here’s my design for a blouse, a skirt and a pair of boots. The blouse is red. It is made of cotton. I think red looks smart. And a red blouse goes well with a black skirt. The skirt is made of wool. I think it looks warm and comfortable. It is very popular with young girls. There is also a pair of boots. They are grey. They’re made of leather. The boots are light and cool. All the students like them. And I will design more modern clothes. I want to be a fashion designer when I grow up. 【总体分析】① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，介绍自己的服装设计； ② 时态：一般现在时； ③ 提示：文章内容要包括给出的全部内容，不得遗漏；人称要以第三人称为主。 【写作步骤】第一步，引出自己要介绍的女士衬衫、裙子和靴子； 第二步，从上到下具体介绍衣服的特征、颜色和材质； 第三步，对自己的设计进行评价和总结。 【亮点词汇】① a fashion show一场时装秀 ② design设计 ③ a pair of一双 ④ be made of由……制成 ⑤ be popular with受到……的欢迎 ⑥ grow up长大 【高分句型】① I think it looks warm and comfortable. (宾语从句) ② I want to be a fashion designer when I grow up. (时间状语从句) 4．【参考范文】： There is a ball under the chair. The books are on the desk. The pencil box is on Bob’s bed. The schoolbag is under the table. The keys are on the table. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇小作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：结合图片的内容，用on和under写五个句子，介绍一下房间中物品的位置，注意语句通顺，逻辑合理。 [写作步骤] 第一步，用on写书、铅笔盒以及钥匙的位置； 第二步，用under写球和书包的位置。 [亮点词汇] ①on the desk在桌子上 ②schoolbag书包 ③pencil box铅笔盒 [高分句型] ①There is a ball under the chair. (There be句型) 5．【参考范文】： I like playing basketball, so I join the basketball club at our school. There are 25 members in the club. We practice playing basketball from Monday to Friday, and on the weekend, we play games with other teams. By practicing, my skill of playing basketball improves a lot. And I also make a lot of friends. Playing basketball not only helps me keep fit, but also helps me understand the importance of teamwork. Playing basketball brings me a lot. I want to keep playing and try to be good at it. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据所给内容要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明社团名称； 第二步，详细介绍在该社团中的活动； 第三步，总结收获并表达期望。 [亮点词汇] ①improve a lot改善很大 ②not only...but also...不仅……而且…… ③the importance of... ……的重要性 [高分句型] ①We practice playing basketball from Monday to Friday, and on the weekend, we play games with other teams. （and连接两个并列句） ②Playing basketball brings me a lot.（动名词作主语） 6．参考【参考范文】： My Family Hello! My name is Wang Liang. I’m 12 years old. I have a happy family. My parents, my sister and I live in Beijing. My father is 40 and my mother is 38. My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. We often have milk, eggs and bread for breakfast. My sister is 5 years old. She doesn’t like eggs, but she likes milk very much. My father and I like eating meat and fish and my mother likes fruit and vegetables. So for dinner, Mum often cooks a big meal for us. After supper, we eat some fruit. We are all very happy. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示；写作话题已给出，考生应注意围绕话题展开介绍，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍我有一个幸福的家庭； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“年龄、职业、食物喜好等”几个方面重点介绍每位家庭成员； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①very much非常 ②like doing喜欢做某事 [高分句型] ①My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. (and连接前后表示并列关系) 7．【参考范文】 Welcome to Blue Moon Restaurant. We have great specials for you. Special 1 is tomato and egg soup. It’s kind of salty and it’s only 10 yuan. Special 2 is beef and potatoes and it’s hot. It’s just 22 yuan. Special 3 is vegetable salad. It’s crispy and tasty. It’s just 15 yuan. We also have many other specials. Please come and enjoy the delicious food. We’re waiting for you! [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为启事类写作； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表示欢迎（已给出）； 第二步，从特色菜的种类和价格来介绍； 第三步，让大家来餐馆吃饭。 [亮点词汇] ① kind of有点 ② many other许多其他的 [高分句型] Please come and enjoy the delicious food.（祈使句） 8．【参考范文】 Doing sports can make us feel fun and healthy. My favourite sport is swimming. My father is a good swimmer. He can swim fast and well. When I was a little boy, he often took me to swim in the swimming pool. Swimming gave me a lot of fun. Now I’m older, and I can do it as well as my father. Thanks to swimming, I have some new friends. Swimming also gives me a strong body. What’s more, swimming makes me feel very relaxed. I love swimming best. [总体分析] 题材：本文为一篇说明文，为材料作文； 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达, 不要遗漏要点。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等, 清楚连贯地表达自己的思想, 进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出“My Favourite Sport”这一话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍最喜爱的运动项目名称、喜欢的原因及进行这项活动的具体情况等； 第三步，书写结语。表达对此运动的喜爱。 [亮点词汇] ①feel relaxed感到放松 ②thanks to多亏了…… ③what’s more另外 [高分句型] ①When I was a little boy, he often took me to swim in the swimming pool.（when引导时间状语从句） 京）股份有限公司 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$