06.过渡衔接+健康安全+建议信-2024-2025学年七年级英语上学期写作万能模板与题型通关(新教材通用版)

06.过渡衔接+健康安全+建议信 写作语言基础：过渡衔接 在初中英语写作中，‌使用过渡衔接词语可以帮助文章更加连贯、‌流畅。‌以下是一些常用的过渡衔接词语：‌ 1.‌表示时间顺序的过渡词‌：‌ first, second, third, finally at first, then, later, finally in the beginning, after that, in the end 2.‌表示空间顺序的过渡词‌：‌ on the left/right, in the middle, at the back/front near to, far from, beside, opposite 3.‌表示因果关系的过渡词‌：‌ because, since, for, as a result due to, because of, thanks to, owing to 4.‌表示转折关系的过渡词‌：‌ but, however, yet, on the other hand despite, in spite of, although, though 5.‌表示递进关系的过渡词‌：‌ not only...but also..., as well as in addition, furthermore, moreover 6.‌表示总结归纳的过渡词‌：‌ in summary, in conclusion, to summarize（总之） all in all, generally speaking, overall 7.‌表示举例的过渡词‌：‌ for example, such as, like for instance, in particular（特别地） 8.‌表示对比比较的过渡词‌：‌ similarly, likewise, in the same way on the contrary, by contrast, in contrast（相反） 9.‌表示强调的过渡词‌：‌ indeed, certainly, surely above all, most importantly 10.‌表示条件的过渡词‌：‌ if, unless, provided that（如果） in case(以防), as long as（只要） 写作话题素材：健康安全 【常用句式】 1. So precious is health that we cannot afford to lose it.   健康如此重要, 以至于我们承受不起失去它的代价。 2. By taking proper exercise, you will be able to keep fit.   通过适当的运动, 你就能保持健康。 3. On no account can we ignore the value of health.   我们决不能忽视健康的价值。 4. All in all, we can come to the conclusion that health is better than wealth.   总之, 我们可以得出结论——健康胜于财富。 5. Recently, the problem of health has aroused people’s great concern.   最近, 健康问题已经引起人们极大的关注。 6. According to the survey, more than 50% of the American teenagers are overweight.   根据调查可知, 超过50%的美国青少年都过胖。 7. Listening to music is a good way to get relaxed and stay healthy. 听音乐是放松和保持健康的好方法。  8. Among various kinds of food, I like pizza best.   在各种食物当中, 我最喜欢比萨饼。 【俗语积累】 1.Health is better than wealth.健康胜于财富。 2.Wealth is nothing without health. 失去健康,空有财产。 3.A long way to life, the first step to safety. 漫漫人生路,安全第一步。 4.Safety is the bedrock of life and the ladder of joy. 安全是生命的基石,安全是快乐的阶梯。 【基础训练】 根据汉语意思和英文提示, 完成句子。 1. 为了保持健康, 我们别无选择, 只有加强锻炼。(no choice but) ________________________________________________ 2. 如果你不锻炼, 你就会变胖。 (do exercise) ________________________________________________ 3. 我们最好不要花费太多时间上网。 (had better not do) ________________________________________________ 4. 吃更多健康的食物和遵守交通规则对我们来说是非常重要的。 (It’s very important for us to. . . ) ________________________________________________ 5. 你头疼的原因是你总是熬夜到很晚。 (stay up) ________________________________________________ 写作必备类型：建议信 　　假如你是李磊, 你的笔友Anna给你发了电子邮件诉说她的烦恼, 请根据邮件内容进行回复。 要求: 1. 逻辑清晰, 内容完整, 书写规范; 2. 词数: 100左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 Dear Li Lei, My sister practices playing the violin in an after-school class, so my parents asked me to go and learn it too. But I’m just not a music girl. You know, I’m interested in sports and I want to choose what I like. Now, I’m so upset. What should I do? Anna Dear Anna, 　　I understand your feeling. Here is what I think. ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 　　I hope what I said is helpful to you. Yours, Li Lei 【写作示例】 【审题角度】 1. 审主题: 针对烦恼, 提出建议。 2. 审人称: 本题要求“回复邮件, 提出建议”, 以第二人称为主。 3. 审时态: 一般现在时和一般将来时为主。 4. 审思路: 首先, 分析造成当前状况的原因, 运用maybe, feel, talk about等词汇; 其次, 提出自己的建议; 最后发表个人观点, 升华情感。 【写作分析】 【衔接成篇】 【提升练习】 1．假设你是Mary，你邀请好友Tom来参加你明天的生日会。他不能参加并发了email来说明原因。请根据邮件内容进行回复，并给出合理化建议。 Dear Mary, Thanks for inviting me to your birthday party. I’d love to come, but I’m very ill. I stayed up late to play computer games last night. Now I have a cold and have a headache and a sore throat. I feel terrible now. Anyway, I want to say “Happy birthday to you!” Yours, Tom 要求： 1. 语句通顺；表达正确；建议合理； 2. 文中不得出现与个人有关的真实信息； 3. 词数：100词左右。文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you are ill. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you’ll get better soon. Yours, Mary 2．假如你是李平，你的朋友西蒙向你咨询打乒乓球应该如何着装，并希望你告诉他运动时的一些注意事项。请你根据表格内容，用英语给他写一封信。 着装建议 (1)白色棉质运动服，因为轻便舒适 (2)穿什么鞋以及原因 注意事项 (1)运动前慢跑五分钟 (2)…… 要求： (1)所写短文必须包括表格提示内容，并作适当发挥； (2)表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； (3)词数不少于70，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Simon, Ping-pong is a good sport, but please wear right clothes and shoes when you play it. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will enjoy the sport. Yours, Li Ping 3．假如你是Lisa，你在美国的好朋友Jenny给你发了邮件向你抱怨自己家的家规。请你给她回信说明自家也有一些家规（根据提示），并表达自己的看法、给出建议。 提示：Must（get up early、go to bed early、practice playing the piano everyday） Can’t（play computer games、watch TV） 要求： 语句通顺、语意连贯，可适当发挥不少于60词（邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Jenny, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lisa 4．假如你是Lisa，你的笔友Peter想要去月球旅行，向你询问应该如何准备行囊，请你根据下列表格提示给他提至少三点建议，并以信件的形式给他回复。可适当发挥，不少于70词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 提示： 建议：多带点厚衣服，带足够的食物和水，…… 原因：月球晚上温度低，月球上没有食物和水，…… Dear Peter, I hear that you are going to travel to the Moon. I’m very happy for you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Lisa 5．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike最近因为学习压力大（stressed out） 而心情不好。他写信向你寻求帮助。请你根据以下信息提示给他写封回信，为他提些建议。 提示： 1.找转移压力的放松方式，如运动、志愿活动、养宠物等； 2.向家长、老师或朋友寻求帮助； 3. …… 要求： 1.70词左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）； 2.包含所给提示内容，可适当发挥； 3.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法准确，书写工整。 Dear Mike, I’m sorry to hear that you are stressed out. Here is some advice for you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 6．假如你是李华，你的外国笔友汤姆的妈妈的生日快要到了，他不知道要买什么礼物给妈妈，希望你能给他一些建议。请你给他回封电子邮件，说一下你的想法。 内容包括： (1)你给汤姆的建议(至少两点)； (2)你的看法。 作文要求： (1)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名。 (2)语句连贯，词数70左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, Everything goes well. Thank you!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________love. Say“Happy Birthday”to your mother for me! And best wishes for you all! Yours, Li Hua 7．假如你叫Mary，前不久收到了笔友李华的邮件，得知不久他要来伦敦学习英语。他想知道如何学好英语。请你用英语给他回一封邮件，介绍一些学习英语的方法，并提出你的建议。 注意: 1.词数70左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2.文中不得出现真实姓名与学校名称。 Dear Li Hua, I’m glad you’ll come to London to learn English._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to see you soon in London. Yours, Mary 8．假如你是李华你的英国笔友Mike因为不健康饮食而经常感到不适，请你用英文写一封电子邮件，谈谈你对一日三餐的一些建议（advice）。 内容要点： 早餐 鸡蛋、牛奶…… 午餐 蔬菜、肉…… 晚餐 少吃肉，多吃水果，不要喝可乐 总结 …… 注意： 1.内容必须包含表格中的所有信息； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不得透露个人信息； 4.词数60左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Mike, I am sorry to know that you are no healthy. I want to give you some advice. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 京）股份有限公司 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 06.过渡衔接+健康安全+建议信 写作语言基础：过渡衔接 在初中英语写作中，‌使用过渡衔接词语可以帮助文章更加连贯、‌流畅。‌以下是一些常用的过渡衔接词语：‌ 1.‌表示时间顺序的过渡词‌：‌ first, second, third, finally at first, then, later, finally in the beginning, after that, in the end 2.‌表示空间顺序的过渡词‌：‌ on the left/right, in the middle, at the back/front near to, far from, beside, opposite 3.‌表示因果关系的过渡词‌：‌ because, since, for, as a result due to, because of, thanks to, owing to 4.‌表示转折关系的过渡词‌：‌ but, however, yet, on the other hand despite, in spite of, although, though 5.‌表示递进关系的过渡词‌：‌ not only...but also..., as well as in addition, furthermore, moreover 6.‌表示总结归纳的过渡词‌：‌ in summary, in conclusion, to summarize（总之） all in all, generally speaking, overall 7.‌表示举例的过渡词‌：‌ for example, such as, like for instance, in particular（特别地） 8.‌表示对比比较的过渡词‌：‌ similarly, likewise, in the same way on the contrary, by contrast, in contrast（相反） 9.‌表示强调的过渡词‌：‌ indeed, certainly, surely above all, most importantly 10.‌表示条件的过渡词‌：‌ if, unless, provided that（如果） in case(以防), as long as（只要） 写作话题素材：健康安全 【常用句式】 1. So precious is health that we cannot afford to lose it.   健康如此重要, 以至于我们承受不起失去它的代价。 2. By taking proper exercise, you will be able to keep fit.   通过适当的运动, 你就能保持健康。 3. On no account can we ignore the value of health.   我们决不能忽视健康的价值。 4. All in all, we can come to the conclusion that health is better than wealth.   总之, 我们可以得出结论——健康胜于财富。 5. Recently, the problem of health has aroused people’s great concern.   最近, 健康问题已经引起人们极大的关注。 6. According to the survey, more than 50% of the American teenagers are overweight.   根据调查可知, 超过50%的美国青少年都过胖。 7. Listening to music is a good way to get relaxed and stay healthy. 听音乐是放松和保持健康的好方法。  8. Among various kinds of food, I like pizza best.   在各种食物当中, 我最喜欢比萨饼。 【俗语积累】 1.Health is better than wealth.健康胜于财富。 2.Wealth is nothing without health. 失去健康,空有财产。 3.A long way to life, the first step to safety. 漫漫人生路,安全第一步。 4.Safety is the bedrock of life and the ladder of joy. 安全是生命的基石,安全是快乐的阶梯。 【基础训练】 根据汉语意思和英文提示, 完成句子。 1. 为了保持健康, 我们别无选择, 只有加强锻炼。(no choice but) To keep healthy, we have no choice but to take exercise.   2. 如果你不锻炼, 你就会变胖。 (do exercise) If you don’t do any exercise, you’ll get fat.   3. 我们最好不要花费太多时间上网。 (had better not do) We’d better not spend too much time surfing the Internet.   4. 吃更多健康的食物和遵守交通规则对我们来说是非常重要的。 (It’s very important for us to. . . ) It’s very important for us to eat more healthy food and obey/follow the traffic rules.   5. 你头疼的原因是你总是熬夜到很晚。 (stay up) The reason why you have a headache is that you always stay up late.   写作必备类型：建议信 　　假如你是李磊, 你的笔友Anna给你发了电子邮件诉说她的烦恼, 请根据邮件内容进行回复。 要求: 1. 逻辑清晰, 内容完整, 书写规范; 2. 词数: 100左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 Dear Li Lei, My sister practices playing the violin in an after-school class, so my parents asked me to go and learn it too. But I’m just not a music girl. You know, I’m interested in sports and I want to choose what I like. Now, I’m so upset. What should I do? Anna Dear Anna, 　　I understand your feeling. Here is what I think. ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 　　I hope what I said is helpful to you. Yours, Li Lei 【写作示例】 【审题角度】 1. 审主题: 针对烦恼, 提出建议。 2. 审人称: 本题要求“回复邮件, 提出建议”, 以第二人称为主。 3. 审时态: 一般现在时和一般将来时为主。 4. 审思路: 首先, 分析造成当前状况的原因, 运用maybe, feel, talk about等词汇; 其次, 提出自己的建议; 最后发表个人观点, 升华情感。 【写作分析】 【衔接成篇】 【参考范文】 Dear Anna, 　　I understand your feeling. Here is what I think. 　　Maybe your parents won’t know how you feel about it. Why not talk with them? You should tell your parents that you don’t want to practice playing the violin because you aren’t interested in music. Meanwhile, you’d better tell them you are old enough to make your own decisions. Further-more, try to get a proper chance to prove that you are talented in sports. Only then will they know you better and let you choose what you love to do. I’m sure your parents will understand you and agree with your ideas.   　　I hope what I said is helpful to you. Yours, Li Lei 【技巧点拨】 1.建议、观点要鲜明、正确; 要有实实在在的内容和充足的理由来支撑建议、观点。 2.在写此类短文时, 把文章的主题句写在最前面, 使读者一目了然; 在短文结尾处, 简要概括前面所说的内容, 文章的中心更加鲜明突出。 3.使用恰当的连词对短文加以润色, 使所写短文思路清晰、文字连贯、语言流畅。以短句为主, 长句搭配, 使短文中的句子富有变化, 会给人以错落有致的美感。如: You should tell your parents that you don’t want to practice playing the violin because you aren’t interested in music. 被动语态、主从复合句的使用, 均能收到很好的效果。 4.运用简洁的语言, 把主题思想明确地表达出来, 升华思想, 或者在全文即将煞尾时, 卒章显志, 使文章中心鲜明突出。 【提升练习】 1．假设你是Mary，你邀请好友Tom来参加你明天的生日会。他不能参加并发了email来说明原因。请根据邮件内容进行回复，并给出合理化建议。 Dear Mary, Thanks for inviting me to your birthday party. I’d love to come, but I’m very ill. I stayed up late to play computer games last night. Now I have a cold and have a headache and a sore throat. I feel terrible now. Anyway, I want to say “Happy birthday to you!” Yours, Tom 要求： 1. 语句通顺；表达正确；建议合理； 2. 文中不得出现与个人有关的真实信息； 3. 词数：100词左右。文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you are ill. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you’ll get better soon. Yours, Mary 2．假如你是李平，你的朋友西蒙向你咨询打乒乓球应该如何着装，并希望你告诉他运动时的一些注意事项。请你根据表格内容，用英语给他写一封信。 着装建议 (1)白色棉质运动服，因为轻便舒适 (2)穿什么鞋以及原因 注意事项 (1)运动前慢跑五分钟 (2)…… 要求： (1)所写短文必须包括表格提示内容，并作适当发挥； (2)表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； (3)词数不少于70，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Simon, Ping-pong is a good sport, but please wear right clothes and shoes when you play it. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will enjoy the sport. Yours, Li Ping 3．假如你是Lisa，你在美国的好朋友Jenny给你发了邮件向你抱怨自己家的家规。请你给她回信说明自家也有一些家规（根据提示），并表达自己的看法、给出建议。 提示：Must（get up early、go to bed early、practice playing the piano everyday） Can’t（play computer games、watch TV） 要求： 语句通顺、语意连贯，可适当发挥不少于60词（邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Jenny, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lisa 4．假如你是Lisa，你的笔友Peter想要去月球旅行，向你询问应该如何准备行囊，请你根据下列表格提示给他提至少三点建议，并以信件的形式给他回复。可适当发挥，不少于70词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 提示： 建议：多带点厚衣服，带足够的食物和水，…… 原因：月球晚上温度低，月球上没有食物和水，…… Dear Peter, I hear that you are going to travel to the Moon. I’m very happy for you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Lisa 5．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike最近因为学习压力大（stressed out） 而心情不好。他写信向你寻求帮助。请你根据以下信息提示给他写封回信，为他提些建议。 提示： 1.找转移压力的放松方式，如运动、志愿活动、养宠物等； 2.向家长、老师或朋友寻求帮助； 3. …… 要求： 1.70词左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）； 2.包含所给提示内容，可适当发挥； 3.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法准确，书写工整。 Dear Mike, I’m sorry to hear that you are stressed out. Here is some advice for you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 6．假如你是李华，你的外国笔友汤姆的妈妈的生日快要到了，他不知道要买什么礼物给妈妈，希望你能给他一些建议。请你给他回封电子邮件，说一下你的想法。 内容包括： (1)你给汤姆的建议(至少两点)； (2)你的看法。 作文要求： (1)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名。 (2)语句连贯，词数70左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, Everything goes well. Thank you!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________love. Say“Happy Birthday”to your mother for me! And best wishes for you all! Yours, Li Hua 7．假如你叫Mary，前不久收到了笔友李华的邮件，得知不久他要来伦敦学习英语。他想知道如何学好英语。请你用英语给他回一封邮件，介绍一些学习英语的方法，并提出你的建议。 注意: 1.词数70左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2.文中不得出现真实姓名与学校名称。 Dear Li Hua, I’m glad you’ll come to London to learn English._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to see you soon in London. Yours, Mary 8．假如你是李华你的英国笔友Mike因为不健康饮食而经常感到不适，请你用英文写一封电子邮件，谈谈你对一日三餐的一些建议（advice）。 内容要点： 早餐 鸡蛋、牛奶…… 午餐 蔬菜、肉…… 晚餐 少吃肉，多吃水果，不要喝可乐 总结 …… 注意： 1.内容必须包含表格中的所有信息； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不得透露个人信息； 4.词数60左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Mike, I am sorry to know that you are no healthy. I want to give you some advice. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 参考答案 1．【参考范文】 Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you are ill. Are you feeling better now? Take some medicine on time, drink enough water and have a good rest, and I think you will get better soon. If you still feel terrible, you should go to a doctor. I’d like to share with you some tips about how to keep healthy. Firstly, no sports, no life. You should take more exercise. Secondly, you can eat more fruit and vegetables. What’s more, to be healthy, you should get enough sleep, so don’t stay up late and keep away from computer games from now on. I hope you’ll get better soon. Yours, Mary [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封回信，属于电子邮件写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：信件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接书信开头，对Tom的身体状况表示关心，并提出看医生吃药的建议； 第二步，就如何保持健康这一话题，给出相应的若干个建议，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，祝愿Tom早日康复并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①share sth with sb和某人分享某物 ②stay up late熬夜 ③keep away from远离 ④from now on从现在起 [高分句型] ①if you still feel terrible, you should go to a doctor. (If引导的条件状语从句) ②What’s more, to be healthy, you should get enough sleep, so don’t stay up late and keep away from computer games from now on. (so连接两个表示因果关系的并列分句） 2．【参考范文】 Dear Simon, Ping-pong is a good sport, but please wear right clothes and shoes when you play it. I think you can wear white cotton sports clothes. The sports clothes are light and comfortable. And white can make you look clean and smart. At the same time, you can wear white or red trainers. They are soft. They also match the white sports clothes well. They are fit for playing sports. Before you play ping-pong, you should jog for five minutes to get ready for it. Take a rest when you are tired. I hope you will enjoy the sport. Yours, Li Ping [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，给对方一些着装建议； 第二步，告诉对方一些注意事项。 [亮点词汇] ① at the same time同时 ② get ready for为……作准备 ③ take a rest休息 [高分句型] ①I think you can wear white cotton sports clothes.（宾语从句） ②Before you play ping-pong, you should jog for five minutes to get ready for it.（时间状语从句） 3．【参考范文】 Dear Jenny, I fully understand your feelings. I also have some family rules. I must get up early and go to bed early. I must practice playing the piano everyday. I can’t play computer games or watch TV on school nights. These rules may be very strict, but they are very beneficial to me. So I think we should seriously abide by them. I hope my advice will be helpful to you. Yours, Lisa [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出作者对朋友的处境表示理解，并引出自家也有一些家规； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。作者讲述自家有哪些家规； 第三步，书写结语。作者表明这些家规的好处，并希望Jenny也能接受家规，从此受益。 [亮点词汇] ①get up early and go to bed early早睡早起 ②practice playing the piano练习弹钢琴 ③be beneficial to对……有益 ④abide by遵守 [高分句型] ①I hope my advice will be helpful to you.（宾语从句） 4．【参考范文】 Dear Peter, I hear that you are going to travel to the Moon. I’m very happy for you. I know something about the Moon. I’m glad to give you some advice. First, you should remember that it’s cold on the Moon at night. Therefore, it is important for you to take some warm clothes. Second, you must take enough water and food for yourself because there is no water or food on the Moon. Third, you need to wear special clothes to protect yourself. The reason is that there is no gravity in space. You will have to exercise each day as your body may become weak without gravity. If you plan to walk on the Moon, be sure to wear a spacesuit to help yourself breathe. Last but not least, remember to take your camera and its batteries. If so, you can take as many photos as you can. If you can share these photos with me, I will be very happy. Have a wonderful trip! Yours sincerely, Lisa [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：主要时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据所给内容要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题； 第二步，提出建议及原因； 第三步，做出总结。 [亮点词汇] ①Therefore所以 ②be sure to一定要 ③Last but not least最后但同样重要的 [高分句型] ①Second, you must take enough water and food for yourself because there is no water or food on the Moon.（because引导时间状语从句） ②The reason is that there is no gravity in space.（that引导表语从句） 5．【参考范文】 Dear Mike, I’m sorry to hear that you are stressed out. Here is some advice for you. First, I think you should find a proper way to relax after studying. For example, you can do sports, do volunteer work, keep pets and so on. If you do this, you will forget about the exams and grades. Secondly, you should ask your parents, teachers or friends for help. Don’t keep worries to yourself. If you talk to them, they may share their experience of solving problems with you and give you some good advice. What’s more, keeping a diary is also a good way. You can write down your problems, dreams, progress or anything you want. You’ll certainly feel better by doing so. I really hope my advice can help you. Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，根据他的问题以及提示信息给他提些建议，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图（已给出）； 第二步，根据提示信息给出具体的建议，并自由发挥补充一点； 第三步，书写结语。表达“希望建议可以帮到他”。 [亮点词汇] ①do sports做运动 ②ask sb for help向某人求助 ③share sth with sb和某人分享某事 ④keep a diary写日记 [高分句型] ①I think you should find a proper way to relax after studying. （宾语从句） ② If you do this, you will forget about the exams and grades. （if引导的条件状语从句） 6．【参考范文】 Dear Tom, Everything goes well. Thank you! For your problem, I have some ideas. First, you can ask your mother what she likes best. If the thing isn’t expensive, you can buy it for her as a present. Next, you can do something helpful for your mother, such as making a cake for her. Then you can make a card or write a letter to her to show your love. I think mothers all will be happy no matter what gifts they get. They don’t care about the presents but our love. Say “Happy Birthday” to your mother for me! And best wishes for you all! Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达感谢，引出话题； 第二步，关于“给妈妈买生日礼物”的话题，具体阐述自己的观点； 第三步，书写结语，表示祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②no matter不管怎样 ③care about在乎 [高分句型] ①If the thing isn’t expensive, you can buy it for her as a present.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②I think mothers all will be happy no matter what gifts they get.（no matter what引导的状语从句） 7．【参考范文】 Dear Li Hua, I’m glad you’ll come to London to learn English. English is an easy language to learn. Don’t worry about it. First, you can read some English books and look up new words in a dictionary. Second, you can watch English movies and listen to English songs, because they can improve your listening. Third, you must speak English every day. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. I hope you can learn English well. Hope to see you soon in London. Yours, Mary [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，属于电子邮件。 ②时态：采用“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求包含所有提示内容，着重英语学习方法和建议。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表示问候； 第二步：阐述自己的建议； 第三步：表示美好祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①worry about担忧 ②look up new words in a dictionary查阅新单词 ③be afraid of害怕 [高分句型] ①Second, you can watch English movies and listen to English songs, because they can improve your listening.（原因状语从句） ②I hope you can learn English well.（宾语从句） 8．【参考范文】 Dear Mike, I am sorry to know that you are not healthy. I want to give you some advice. For breakfast, remember to have an egg and drink some milk. They are good for you. It’s important to eat vegetables, such as cabbages, beans and tomatoes. Eat meat such as pork, beef and chicken for lunch. For dinner, eat less meat. You can have some fruit, but don’t drink any cola. It is bad for your health. Remember to eat well and stay healthy. Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第二人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据表格提示建议对方三餐应该怎么吃； 第二步，最后进行小结。 [亮点词汇] ①remember to do sth记得做某事 ②be good for对……有好处 ③stay healthy保持健康 [高分句型] ①It’s important to eat vegetables, such as cabbages, beans and tomatoes.（动词不定式作主语，such as表示列举） ②Remember to eat well and stay healthy.（祈使句） 京）股份有限公司 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$