题型突破21 英语写作之议论文（核心考点精讲精练）-备战2025年高考英语一轮复习考点帮（上海专用）

考点21 英语写作（2）--议论类作文 【近年真题考点分布】 年份 作文题 话题 分类 文体 2024夏考 你是明启中学的高三学生李明，你们学校英语报开设了一个“排忧解难”专栏，你的校友Lynn发出求助，请根据她的来信写封回信：写信要求： 1. 提出你的建议；2. 说明你的理由 I’m a high school student. I want to do some cooking but my parents don’t allow me to do so. How can I change their mind? 家长不同意cooking 家庭与校园 应用文-信件 2024春考 假如你是李华，外国文学教授，要莅临你校开办文学讲座，教授现要征求两个与文学有关的问题，在讲座上进行回应，应包括以下内容 (1)向教授提出问题: (2)并说明理由: 文学教授的回信 校园 应用文-信件 2023夏考 假设你是明启中学高三学生吴磊，你校英语节即将举行主题为“快乐童年”的展览，邀请每位同学提供一件生活中的物品参展，并撰写展品介绍供参观者阅读。你会提供什么物品？写一篇物品介绍，内容须包括： (1) 对该物品的简要描述； (2) 你选择该物品参展的原因。 物品介绍 校园生活 叙议文 2023春考 你们班的口语课外教 Tom 发现你们班课上互动不积极，委托你了解同学们的想法。经过你对全班同学看法的了解，有些同学表示对课堂上讨论的话题不感兴趣，有些同学害怕犯错，不敢开口。 1. 向 Tom 反映同学的想法； 2. 向 Tom 提出建议并说明理由。 课堂互动 学习 应用文-信件 2022夏考 假设你是高三学生李华，你校计划组织“走进历史”的主题活动，有三项活动可供选择：（1）走访老战士；（2）表演历史剧；（3）制作短视频。现向全校学生征求意见，给组织者写封信，信的内容包括： 1. 你的选择； 2. 你的理由。 走近历史 社会热点 应用文-信件 2022春考 假如你是名启中学的高三学生李明，入冬以来，你们学校组织全校师生进行晨跑，时间在7：30-7：50，休息5分钟之后准备上第一节课。但是有同学反映，晨跑后身体不适。校方委托学生向同学们征集意见，请你向学生会写封邮件。要求 1.提出问题 2.提出改进的建议及理由。 晨跑运动 校园生活 应用文-邮件 2021夏考 假如你是名启中学高三学生李华，收到外国朋友bill的邮件，告诉你他也准备学习汉语，现有两门汉语课程供他选择（课程信息如下表所示），但他对课程选择有些迷茫，想听取你的意见。给bill回邮件，在邮件中你必须： 1.推荐其中一门课程 2.通过比较两门课程的信息，说明你推荐该课程的原因。 课程名称 汉语听说 汉语读写 课程内容 日常会话 故事读写 授课安排 每周一、周四晚7：00-8：00 共8周 每周五晚7：00-8：00 共16周 授课语言 全中文 中英双语 推荐课程 学习 应用文-邮件 2021春考 假如你是明启中学的高三学生王佳，你学校的教师Lucy准备在高中开设关于“信息素养”的课程，课程包含以下四个板块，“网站设计”“大数据处理”“辨别真伪信息”“精确搜索信息”。现在向全体同学征求意见，。请你给他写一份电子邮件，要求： 1.选择两个你感兴趣的板块 2.说明为什么选择这个板块的理由。 课程选择 学习 应用文-邮件 【思维导图】 上海高考历年来，作文类型也多有变化，话题往往不紧跟社会热点，从我们的校园或日常生活中选题，来综合考察考生的语言实际运用能力。但总体上，考察的作文可以分为以下四类： 【知识梳理】 议论文，也称论说文，是就某一观点或概念进行论证并得出合理结论的一种文体，考査学生的语言水平和逻 辑思维能力。 命题的方式主要有： 提纲式（给出汉语提示，要求学生论证）、 图表式（给岀图片或图表，要求学生先描写再分析论证）、 情景式（给出情景，要求学生描述分析）等。 论说文在结构上是由论点、论据和结论组成,通常由引言段、中心段和结论段构成，中心段可以由一至多个推展段组成。引言段（Opening paragraph）说出文中的要点、核心问题—推展段（中心段/正文部分Body paragraphs） 围绕主题开展叙述、讨论—结论段（结尾部分Concluding paragraph）对全文的总结和概括。 论说文的类型通常有：观点对比型、问题解决型、道理/观点论证型、说明利弊型等，各类型的论证方式有相异之处，每一种类型都有相对固定的论证方式及句型。值得注意的是近年试题中经常出现记叙与结论相结合的叙议形式。 · 要点一：观点对比型 此题型是通过就同一事件比较两个不同甚至对立的观点，或就同一问题比较两种不同的选择方法来阐明自 己的观点或选择的方法。 1. 写作结构 引入部分 陈述观点1部分 陈述观点2部分 “我的观点”部分 结论 2. 常用句型 A. 引入部分： . has become a heated topic among people today. Opinions vary from person to person. . Nowadays, people are divided on the question about whether ... . The issue of whether ... or not... has been widely argued/debated currently. . ... is a common occurrence in our daily life, but different people hold different attitudes towards it. B. 陈述观点1部分： . Some people suggest / think / maintain / hold the opinion that... . Some people prefer to think that... . Those who advocate / are in favor of... believe that... . Those who criticize / object to / oppose ... maintain that... C. 陈述观点2部分： . However / Nevertheless / Yet, other people hold a different point of view. They insist that... . On the contrary / In contrast, there are still many people who do not agree, and they claim/argue / believe that... . On the other hand, not everyone shares the opinion. D. “我的观点”部分： . For my part /As to me /As far as 1 am concerned, Fd like to agree to the former / latter opinion. . From my point of view, I am in favor of... /1 am on the side of... . In my opinion, both sides are partly right / there is some truth in both sides. . To me / In case of me, 1 prefer .. . / the former opinion is more attractive in that... D.结论部分 In summary / Consequently / In conclusion / To sum up / All in all / In brief / In short... 词汇表达积累： 1. Recently sb have conducted a survey concerning （调查或研究的主题）... 2. People are divided into two sides on this question as A （观点一）and B （观点二）are both obvious. 3. （正方）Those who advocate the practice argue that A surely has some merits.（列举两个优点）To begin with,... Besides,...（反方）In the meanwhile, those holding the opposite view maintain that B ...（两点反对理由） 4.（个人观点）As to me, I hold that A outweigh B. In the first place, ...To plus,...Last but not least,...（自己的三点原 因） 5. To put in a nutshell, ...（总结概括） · 要点二：问题解决型 此题型是先指出某一问题或现象，然后提出解决方法。此类型的论说文重心在解决问题上，但有时题目中也 要求对问题产生的原因或引起的严重后果做相应的描述，所以审题时，要注意弄清作文段落间的合理比例。 1. 写作结构指导 问题陈述 分析（原因/后果） 问题解决 结论（期望/展望） 2. 常用句型 问题陈述 . Recently/Nowadays,... has become a serious problem we have to face. ....... the phenomenon ...has aroused the public's concern. . There is no denying that... has become a serious concern among people. 分析（原因/后果） . There are several reasons for the problem. . There are a variety of factors contributing to the phenomenon. 问题解决 . People have figured out many ways to solve the problem. . It is high time that we should figure / figured out ways to deal with the problem. 结论（期望/展望） . With the joint efforts, I am confident that... . As long as we we will resolve the problem eventually. 词汇表达积累： 1 .问题描述： 1 Recently/Nowadays,（问题或现象）has become a serious problem we have to face. 2 （问题或现象）the phenomenon ...has aroused the public's concern. 3 There is no denying that （问题或现象）has become a serious concern among people. 3. 问题原因： 1 原因简述：Obviously,（问题或现象）is the result of...（原因） 2 原因详述：There are several reasons for the..../ There are a variety of factors contributing to the ....（罗列原因） 4. 解决措施： 1 From where I stand, I strongly insist that you take following measures to tackle/ solve/ deal with the problem immediately. 2 People have figured out many ways to solve the problem. 3 It is high time that we should figure / figured out ways to deal with the problem. （罗列措施） 结论（期望/展望） 1 With the joint efforts, I am confident that... 2 As long as we we will resolve the problem eventually. （期望对方采取建议解决问题）The residents would appreciate it if you could take the advice above as well as any other effective measures. （期望及时回复）Looking forward to your prompt response. · 要点三：说明利弊型 此题型是要求针对某一事物或现象从正反两面分析其优缺点，然后表明作者对该事物或现象的看法。 1. 写作结构指导 描述某事物或现象 陈述该事物或现象的优缺点 表明我的态度或看法 2. 常用句型 陈述该事物或现象的优点 . There are several advantages in ... The first / biggest advantage is that... . The advantages of ...can be listed as follows. First ...Besides ... .... is playing an increasingly important role in people's life. For one thing,... For another,... 陈述该事物或现象的缺点 . However,... just like anything else, has its negative side as well. . In the meanwhile, we cannot ignore the disadvantages of... . However, the negative aspects of... are also apparent / evident / obvious. To begin with,... To make matters worse,... Worst of all,... . In spite of / Despite the advantages / beneficial sides, it has its comprehensive disadvantages / side effects. 表明个人态度或看法（利大于弊） .As to me, I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ... .As far as I am concerned, I hold that... has more advantages than disadvantages. . Personally, I think what is more important is its positive side. 词汇表达积累： 1. With the increasing popularity of （事物），there are （事物相关的现象） 2. （利）Some people believe that, compared with...（事物）brings us...and helps us... （弊）However, others hold a different attitude towards （事物）They think it will take more risks doing...For example, （举出弊端的事例） As far as I am concerned, （事物）is under construction now. 总结段落（客观看待）：We should take a developing view about （事物） Despite （弊）it is obviously helpful to sb.（利）as ... 2024年上海秋考英语作文 你是明启中学的高三学生李明，你们学校英语报开设了一个“排忧解难”专栏，你的校友Lynn发出求助，请根据她的来信写封回信：写信要求： 1. 提出你的建议；2. 说明你的理由 I’m a high school student. I want to do some cooking but my parents don’t allow me to do so. How can I change their mind? 一、文体 今年高考题延续往年常见的书信体裁，需要学生以书信的格式来对一个话题提出建议和分析原因。书信建议类的开头、结尾句可以派上用场了： 开头：话题+观点 Hearing that…/ I’ve just learned that… I’m writing this letter to share my opinions. I hear that …. I believe that … From my perspective，I strongly recommend that you should… 结尾：总结+期待(盼回复) To summarize，/To sum up,/ To conclude,/ In conclusion, … I genuinely/sincerely hope that my proposals can remove your worries. I hope that my suggestions are helpful and that … Thank you for considering my perspective/suggestions/recommendation. I look forward to seeing positive changes in … I am looking forward to contributing to something. 不同于以往的建议信，这个帮助同学的排忧解难专栏的回信可以更多第运用情态动词can/could或者祈使句，来表达亲切、直接的指导建议。如： you can change their minds with … you could assure them that … explain to them that … show them that … 二、分类 从2015年至今，上海高考最喜欢考察的就是理由型，包括建议理由、选择理由和观点理由三类。我们从上面的表格的统计表中可以清晰的看到，总共18个作文题中，理由型占到了16个，比例高达88.9%！而这次的考题，延续了往年作文类型，要求给出建议理由。只要同学们掌握了理由型作文的写作思路，都能迎刃而解。 三、话题 话题层面：话题从“共享衣服“、“景点不合理收费”、“处理临保食物”等偏社会的主题上，又再一次回归到学校、家庭等贴近学生生活上，更贴近学生的日常生活。这次的话题，我们可以从父母为何不同意cooking入手，针对父母的担忧切入，寻找能够解除父母担忧的建议。 四、写作思路分析 针对Lynn的来信，我们可以按照以下思路来撰写回信，既提出具体的建议，又阐述清楚理由，帮助她理解并尝试说服父母让她学习烹饪。 一）、引言部分 亲切问候：首先用友好的语气向Lynn问好，表达对她困惑的理解。 简述问题：简短回顾Lynn信中提到的问题，即她想学习烹饪但父母不同意。 二）、理解并共鸣 表达理解：表示你理解她想学烹饪的渴望，以及面对父母反对时的无奈。 分享经验（如适用）：如果自己有类似经历，可以简短分享自己是如何处理的，增加信件的共鸣感。 三）、提出建议 建议一：展示烹饪的好处 内容：向父母说明学习烹饪可以培养生活技能、提高独立生活能力、增强家庭责任感等。 理由：解释这些好处对Lynn未来的成长和家庭关系的积极影响。 建议二：提出妥协方案 内容：比如先从简单的菜肴开始学起，保证在安全的环境下进行，或者邀请父母一起参与学习过程。 理由：这样的方案既能让父母看到Lynn的认真态度，也能通过共同参与增进亲子关系。 建议三：制定计划并展示决心 内容：制定一个详细的学习计划，包括学习的时间、内容、目标等，并承诺会遵守安全规则。 理由：展示Lynn的成熟和责任感，让父母看到她对烹饪的认真态度。 四）、进一步沟通的建议 鼓励沟通：建议Lynn找一个合适的时机，心平气和地与父母坐下来谈谈，表达自己的想法和计划。 倾听与反馈：提醒她在沟通过程中也要倾听父母的担忧和意见，并尝试给予合理的回应或调整计划。 五）、结语 鼓励与祝福：鼓励Lynn勇敢表达自己的想法，相信通过努力和沟通，一定能够得到父母的理解和支持。最后，表达对她的美好祝愿。 腹稿大纲： 第一段：表达关切与同情。指出父母不同意的可能原因。点明说服父母的建议。【3句】 第二段：建议一论点句。对建议一论证句：解释+例证（+补充）。【3-4句】 第三段：建议二论点句。对建议二论证句：解释+例证（+补充）。【3-4句】 第四段：总结建议一与建议二。期望对你有帮助。【2句】 手写关键词： 第一段：frustration/ safety/ distract/ right approach 第二段：take safety precautions/ careful/ e.g. safe cooking techniques, kitchen clean, adult supervise 第三段：highlight educational benefits/ life skill + way to learn e.g. nutrition, culture & chemistry/ educational hobby/ complement schoolwork 第四段：address concerns + emphasize benefits/ convince/ hope helpful + enjoy cooking soon 四、参考范文及点评： 【学生练笔】 Dear Lynn， I hope this letter will find you well! I quite understand the cher frustration that comes to you when you are unable to pursue your hobby, and I'd like to ffer some suggestions. Firstly, you can have a heart-to-heart talk with your parents. You need to understand your parents' concerns which incudes the impact of this hobby on your academic performance and the potential safety issues. It would be beneficial to explain to your parents why you wish to cook and how it can be a valuable life skill. Then assure that you will make a balance between leisure and study, and take satety precautions before cooking which can ease their worries. Secondly, you can invite your parents to cook with you, which serves as a dual purposes: guidance and assistance in the kitchen. Aditionally, cooking with your parents will offer a wonderful opportunity for family bonding. What makes this invitation important and necessary is that you'll easily gain your parents approval and supports when they find your dedication. In conclusion, with a bit of patience and effort. you are sure to persuade your parents. I hope you will be delighted on your culinary journey! Yours, Li Ming 【一句一修改后的范文】 Dear Lynn, I trust this letter finds you in good health and spirits! （可以加入更多情感色彩，如“愿这封信带去我满满的祝福，希望你每天都充满活力，健康快乐哦！”这样显得贴心。，当然，也无需修改，保持原样即可。） I fully empathize with the frustration you're experiencing as your passion for cooking remains unfulfilled. （可以稍微调整一下语气，如“我完全能感受到你现在因为烹饪梦想受阻而感到的失落呢，真的超理解你的感受哦~” 这样更加亲近。） Allow me to offer some well-considered suggestions that might help ease the situation. （本来的句子只提出了要给出建议的意图。可以稍微调整一下措辞，如“让我来给你支几招吧，希望能帮你缓解一下现在的情况呢~” 这样听起来更轻松。） Firstly, engage in a sincere and thoughtful conversation with your parents. （原句给出了第一个建议，强调真诚沟通。我们可以加入一些鼓励的话，如“首先，试着和你爸妈来说说你心里的想法。”） ...Acknowledge their genuine concerns about the potential impact of your hobby on your academic pursuits and safety. 原句You need to understand your parents' concerns which includes…是建议理解父母的担忧。修改可以更加具体一些，如“记得要告诉他们，你明白他们担心你的学业和安全，因为这是他们爱你的表现哦~”这样可以缓和语气。） ...Clarify that you understand their perspective and emphasize the merits of cooking as a life-enriching skill.（原句It would be beneficial to explain to your parents why you wish to cook and how it can 仅仅表达理解和强调烹饪的价值。但我们可以建议：“你可以说，虽然你理解他们的想法，但烹饪对你来说不仅仅是个爱好，它还能让你的生活更加丰富多彩呢~”详细地说明烹饪是自己的热爱，可以给自己提供情绪价值。） ...Emphasize how managing your time wisely can ensure a harmonious balance between your culinary endeavors and academic responsibilities. （原句Then assure that you will make a balance…建议合理安排时间。修改后“你可以告诉他们，你会合理安排时间，让学习和烹饪两不误，这样他们就能更放心啦~” ...Furthermore, assure them of your commitment to sticking to all safety protocols in the kitchen, thereby relieving their fears. （原句take safety precautions before cooking which can ease their worries.承诺遵守厨房安全规则。这个句子写的已经很好了。） Secondly, extend an invitation to your parents to join you in the kitchen. （原句写的同样很漂亮。） This not only provides a platform for them to offer guidance and support but also fosters a stronger family bond through shared experiences. （修改后的意思是这样他们不仅能给你指导，还能增进你们之间的感情，真是一举两得呢~”） By involving them directly in your passion, you demonstrate your dedication and commitment, significantly increasing the likelihood of gaining their approval and encouragement. （原句What makes this invitation important and necessary is that you'll easily gain your parents approval and supports when they find your dedication.  使用了主语从句和表语从句及状语从句来强调让父母参与的重要性，我也很喜欢这一句。如修改的话，我们就改为上句。）然后再加上这样做所带来的优点。 Remember, shared activities often lead to deeper understanding and support. 原句In conclusion, with a bit of patience and effort. you are sure to persuade your parents. 是用建议、方法+结果来组成句子，逻辑性很强。如想升级一次词汇，我们不妨改成In conclusion, with a combination of patience, empathy, and a proactive approach, you stand a strong chance of persuading your parents to embrace your culinary aspirations. 原句I hope you will be delighted on your culinary journey! 无需修改，保持原样即可，这句已经很有温度了。当然非要改的话，我们就改成I sincerely hope that your culinary journey brings you immense joy and satisfaction. 给句子加些形容词。 Warmest regards,  Li Ming 【修改后例文】Dear Lynn,    I trust this letter finds you in good health and spirits! I fully empathize with the frustration you're experiencing as your passion for cooking remains unfulfilled. Allow me to offer some well-considered suggestions that might help ease the situation.   Firstly, engage in a sincere and thoughtful conversation with your parents. Acknowledge their genuine concerns about the potential impact of your hobby on your academic pursuits and safety. Clarify that you understand their perspective and emphasize the merits of cooking as a life-enriching skill. Emphasize how managing your time wisely can ensure a harmonious balance between your culinary endeavors and academic responsibilities. Furthermore, assure them of your commitment to adhering to all safety protocols in the kitchen, thereby alleviating their fears.   Secondly, extend an invitation to your parents to join you in the kitchen. This not only provides a platform for them to offer guidance and support but also fosters a stronger familial bond through shared experiences. By involving them directly in your passion, you demonstrate your dedication and commitment, significantly increasing the likelihood of gaining their approval and encouragement. Remember, shared activities often lead to deeper understanding and support.    In conclusion, with a combination of patience, empathy, and a proactive approach, you stand a strong chance of persuading your parents to embrace your culinary aspirations. I sincerely hope that your culinary journey brings you immense joy and satisfaction.                                 Warmest regards,                                 Li Ming 【2023~2024学年上海市复旦大学附属中学高三上学期9月测试】 假设你是明启中学学生李明，最近你校英语报正在开展"The electronic device that I must take while travelling"的征文活动。 你对此话题很感兴趣，写一篇文章，内容须包括： 1）你在旅游途中一定携带的电子设备； 2）你的理由。 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【2024年上海市南洋中学高三英语三模英语试题】 学校大力推进劳动敎育，打算开辟校园农场组织学生进行果蔬花卉种植实践。假设你是校学生会干部李华，负责老师Helen委托你了解同学们对此项活动的看法。经了解，你发现有些同学缺乏种植经验，不敢尝试；有些学生担心种植成果没有实用价值，兴趣不大。请你写封信给Helen 1.反映同学们的想法； 2.提出建议并说明理由。 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【上海交通大学附中2023-2024学年高三上学期摸底考试】 现在心理健康日益成为社会关注话题，尤其是青少年的心理健康问题。请分析青少年产生心理健康问题的原因，并针对如何保持青少年心理健康给出合理建议。 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（2024年奉贤区二模） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 随着中国传统文化的复兴，汉服(Hanfu)作为一种独特的服饰文化，逐渐受到人们的关注和喜爱。假如你是明启中学的学生李华，你校正在向学生们征集新社团的创建意向。作为汉服爱好者，你准备成立汉服社，请给校委会写一封邮件表达你的想法。你的邮件需包含： 1. 成立该社团的目的； 2. 社团拟开展的活动及原因。 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（2024年嘉定区二模） Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你所在的小区附近将新建一个大型游乐场，很多居民表示不满。社区管理处决定征集居民意见并召开专题讨论会，作为居民代表，写一份讨论会发言稿，内容需包括： 1. 你认为新建大型游乐场可能会存在的问题(至少2个)； 2. 你对以上问题的建议和理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2024年金山区二模） Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你在英语一考中取得了118分的成绩，现在你正面临着是否参加6月份二考的选择，请谈谈你的想法。内容需包括： 1）说明你的选择； 2）阐述你的理由。 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（2024年1月·上海高考真题） Guided Writing Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的高三学生李华。你们学校将邀请文学教授Tom Johnson为学生做讲座，你负责与他联系;他给你发了电子邮件(内容如下)，请根据他在电子邮件中提出的要求回一封邮件。 教授给李华的英文邮件： Dear Li Hua, Thank you for inviting me. For my lecture, I'd like to know about what literature interests Chinese students most. Please give me two questions you'd like me to answer and tell me why you choose these two questions. Looking forward to your reply and hoping to see you soon. Yours sincerely, Tom Johnson ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 考点21 英语写作（2）--议论类作文 【近年真题考点分布】 年份 作文题 话题 分类 文体 2024夏考 你是明启中学的高三学生李明，你们学校英语报开设了一个“排忧解难”专栏，你的校友Lynn发出求助，请根据她的来信写封回信：写信要求： 1. 提出你的建议；2. 说明你的理由 I’m a high school student. I want to do some cooking but my parents don’t allow me to do so. How can I change their mind? 家长不同意cooking 家庭与校园 应用文-信件 2024春考 假如你是李华，外国文学教授，要莅临你校开办文学讲座，教授现要征求两个与文学有关的问题，在讲座上进行回应，应包括以下内容 (1)向教授提出问题: (2)并说明理由: 文学教授的回信 校园 应用文-信件 2023夏考 假设你是明启中学高三学生吴磊，你校英语节即将举行主题为“快乐童年”的展览，邀请每位同学提供一件生活中的物品参展，并撰写展品介绍供参观者阅读。你会提供什么物品？写一篇物品介绍，内容须包括： (1) 对该物品的简要描述； (2) 你选择该物品参展的原因。 物品介绍 校园生活 叙议文 2023春考 你们班的口语课外教 Tom 发现你们班课上互动不积极，委托你了解同学们的想法。经过你对全班同学看法的了解，有些同学表示对课堂上讨论的话题不感兴趣，有些同学害怕犯错，不敢开口。 1. 向 Tom 反映同学的想法； 2. 向 Tom 提出建议并说明理由。 课堂互动 学习 应用文-信件 2022夏考 假设你是高三学生李华，你校计划组织“走进历史”的主题活动，有三项活动可供选择：（1）走访老战士；（2）表演历史剧；（3）制作短视频。现向全校学生征求意见，给组织者写封信，信的内容包括： 1. 你的选择； 2. 你的理由。 走近历史 社会热点 应用文-信件 2022春考 假如你是名启中学的高三学生李明，入冬以来，你们学校组织全校师生进行晨跑，时间在7：30-7：50，休息5分钟之后准备上第一节课。但是有同学反映，晨跑后身体不适。校方委托学生向同学们征集意见，请你向学生会写封邮件。要求 1.提出问题 2.提出改进的建议及理由。 晨跑运动 校园生活 应用文-邮件 2021夏考 假如你是名启中学高三学生李华，收到外国朋友bill的邮件，告诉你他也准备学习汉语，现有两门汉语课程供他选择（课程信息如下表所示），但他对课程选择有些迷茫，想听取你的意见。给bill回邮件，在邮件中你必须： 1.推荐其中一门课程 2.通过比较两门课程的信息，说明你推荐该课程的原因。 课程名称 汉语听说 汉语读写 课程内容 日常会话 故事读写 授课安排 每周一、周四晚7：00-8：00 共8周 每周五晚7：00-8：00 共16周 授课语言 全中文 中英双语 推荐课程 学习 应用文-邮件 2021春考 假如你是明启中学的高三学生王佳，你学校的教师Lucy准备在高中开设关于“信息素养”的课程，课程包含以下四个板块，“网站设计”“大数据处理”“辨别真伪信息”“精确搜索信息”。现在向全体同学征求意见，。请你给他写一份电子邮件，要求： 1.选择两个你感兴趣的板块 2.说明为什么选择这个板块的理由。 课程选择 学习 应用文-邮件 【思维导图】 上海高考历年来，作文类型也多有变化，话题往往不紧跟社会热点，从我们的校园或日常生活中选题，来综合考察考生的语言实际运用能力。但总体上，考察的作文可以分为以下四类： 【知识梳理】 议论文，也称论说文，是就某一观点或概念进行论证并得出合理结论的一种文体，考査学生的语言水平和逻 辑思维能力。 命题的方式主要有： 提纲式（给出汉语提示，要求学生论证）、 图表式（给岀图片或图表，要求学生先描写再分析论证）、 情景式（给出情景，要求学生描述分析）等。 论说文在结构上是由论点、论据和结论组成,通常由引言段、中心段和结论段构成，中心段可以由一至多个推展段组成。引言段（Opening paragraph）说出文中的要点、核心问题—推展段（中心段/正文部分Body paragraphs） 围绕主题开展叙述、讨论—结论段（结尾部分Concluding paragraph）对全文的总结和概括。 论说文的类型通常有：观点对比型、问题解决型、道理/观点论证型、说明利弊型等，各类型的论证方式有相异之处，每一种类型都有相对固定的论证方式及句型。值得注意的是近年试题中经常出现记叙与结论相结合的叙议形式。 · 要点一：观点对比型 此题型是通过就同一事件比较两个不同甚至对立的观点，或就同一问题比较两种不同的选择方法来阐明自 己的观点或选择的方法。 1. 写作结构 引入部分 陈述观点1部分 陈述观点2部分 “我的观点”部分 结论 2. 常用句型 A. 引入部分： . has become a heated topic among people today. Opinions vary from person to person. . Nowadays, people are divided on the question about whether ... . The issue of whether ... or not... has been widely argued/debated currently. . ... is a common occurrence in our daily life, but different people hold different attitudes towards it. B. 陈述观点1部分： . Some people suggest / think / maintain / hold the opinion that... . Some people prefer to think that... . Those who advocate / are in favor of... believe that... . Those who criticize / object to / oppose ... maintain that... C. 陈述观点2部分： . However / Nevertheless / Yet, other people hold a different point of view. They insist that... . On the contrary / In contrast, there are still many people who do not agree, and they claim/argue / believe that... . On the other hand, not everyone shares the opinion. D. “我的观点”部分： . For my part /As to me /As far as 1 am concerned, Fd like to agree to the former / latter opinion. . From my point of view, I am in favor of... /1 am on the side of... . In my opinion, both sides are partly right / there is some truth in both sides. . To me / In case of me, 1 prefer .. . / the former opinion is more attractive in that... D.结论部分 In summary / Consequently / In conclusion / To sum up / All in all / In brief / In short... 词汇表达积累： 1. Recently sb have conducted a survey concerning （调查或研究的主题）... 2. People are divided into two sides on this question as A （观点一）and B （观点二）are both obvious. 3. （正方）Those who advocate the practice argue that A surely has some merits.（列举两个优点）To begin with,... Besides,...（反方）In the meanwhile, those holding the opposite view maintain that B ...（两点反对理由） 4.（个人观点）As to me, I hold that A outweigh B. In the first place, ...To plus,...Last but not least,...（自己的三点原 因） 5. To put in a nutshell, ...（总结概括） · 要点二：问题解决型 此题型是先指出某一问题或现象，然后提出解决方法。此类型的论说文重心在解决问题上，但有时题目中也 要求对问题产生的原因或引起的严重后果做相应的描述，所以审题时，要注意弄清作文段落间的合理比例。 1. 写作结构指导 问题陈述 分析（原因/后果） 问题解决 结论（期望/展望） 2. 常用句型 问题陈述 . Recently/Nowadays,... has become a serious problem we have to face. ....... the phenomenon ...has aroused the public's concern. . There is no denying that... has become a serious concern among people. 分析（原因/后果） . There are several reasons for the problem. . There are a variety of factors contributing to the phenomenon. 问题解决 . People have figured out many ways to solve the problem. . It is high time that we should figure / figured out ways to deal with the problem. 结论（期望/展望） . With the joint efforts, I am confident that... . As long as we we will resolve the problem eventually. 词汇表达积累： 1 .问题描述： 1 Recently/Nowadays,（问题或现象）has become a serious problem we have to face. 2 （问题或现象）the phenomenon ...has aroused the public's concern. 3 There is no denying that （问题或现象）has become a serious concern among people. 3. 问题原因： 1 原因简述：Obviously,（问题或现象）is the result of...（原因） 2 原因详述：There are several reasons for the..../ There are a variety of factors contributing to the ....（罗列原因） 4. 解决措施： 1 From where I stand, I strongly insist that you take following measures to tackle/ solve/ deal with the problem immediately. 2 People have figured out many ways to solve the problem. 3 It is high time that we should figure / figured out ways to deal with the problem. （罗列措施） 结论（期望/展望） 1 With the joint efforts, I am confident that... 2 As long as we we will resolve the problem eventually. （期望对方采取建议解决问题）The residents would appreciate it if you could take the advice above as well as any other effective measures. （期望及时回复）Looking forward to your prompt response. · 要点三：说明利弊型 此题型是要求针对某一事物或现象从正反两面分析其优缺点，然后表明作者对该事物或现象的看法。 1. 写作结构指导 描述某事物或现象 陈述该事物或现象的优缺点 表明我的态度或看法 2. 常用句型 陈述该事物或现象的优点 . There are several advantages in ... The first / biggest advantage is that... . The advantages of ...can be listed as follows. First ...Besides ... .... is playing an increasingly important role in people's life. For one thing,... For another,... 陈述该事物或现象的缺点 . However,... just like anything else, has its negative side as well. . In the meanwhile, we cannot ignore the disadvantages of... . However, the negative aspects of... are also apparent / evident / obvious. To begin with,... To make matters worse,... Worst of all,... . In spite of / Despite the advantages / beneficial sides, it has its comprehensive disadvantages / side effects. 表明个人态度或看法（利大于弊） .As to me, I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ... .As far as I am concerned, I hold that... has more advantages than disadvantages. . Personally, I think what is more important is its positive side. 词汇表达积累： 1. With the increasing popularity of （事物），there are （事物相关的现象） 2. （利）Some people believe that, compared with...（事物）brings us...and helps us... （弊）However, others hold a different attitude towards （事物）They think it will take more risks doing...For example, （举出弊端的事例） As far as I am concerned, （事物）is under construction now. 总结段落（客观看待）：We should take a developing view about （事物） Despite （弊）it is obviously helpful to sb.（利）as ... 2024年上海秋考英语作文 你是明启中学的高三学生李明，你们学校英语报开设了一个“排忧解难”专栏，你的校友Lynn发出求助，请根据她的来信写封回信：写信要求： 1. 提出你的建议；2. 说明你的理由 I’m a high school student. I want to do some cooking but my parents don’t allow me to do so. How can I change their mind? 一、文体 今年高考题延续往年常见的书信体裁，需要学生以书信的格式来对一个话题提出建议和分析原因。书信建议类的开头、结尾句可以派上用场了： 开头：话题+观点 Hearing that…/ I’ve just learned that… I’m writing this letter to share my opinions. I hear that …. I believe that … From my perspective，I strongly recommend that you should… 结尾：总结+期待(盼回复) To summarize，/To sum up,/ To conclude,/ In conclusion, … I genuinely/sincerely hope that my proposals can remove your worries. I hope that my suggestions are helpful and that … Thank you for considering my perspective/suggestions/recommendation. I look forward to seeing positive changes in … I am looking forward to contributing to something. 不同于以往的建议信，这个帮助同学的排忧解难专栏的回信可以更多第运用情态动词can/could或者祈使句，来表达亲切、直接的指导建议。如： you can change their minds with … you could assure them that … explain to them that … show them that … 二、分类 从2015年至今，上海高考最喜欢考察的就是理由型，包括建议理由、选择理由和观点理由三类。我们从上面的表格的统计表中可以清晰的看到，总共18个作文题中，理由型占到了16个，比例高达88.9%！而这次的考题，延续了往年作文类型，要求给出建议理由。只要同学们掌握了理由型作文的写作思路，都能迎刃而解。 三、话题 话题层面：话题从“共享衣服“、“景点不合理收费”、“处理临保食物”等偏社会的主题上，又再一次回归到学校、家庭等贴近学生生活上，更贴近学生的日常生活。这次的话题，我们可以从父母为何不同意cooking入手，针对父母的担忧切入，寻找能够解除父母担忧的建议。 四、写作思路分析 针对Lynn的来信，我们可以按照以下思路来撰写回信，既提出具体的建议，又阐述清楚理由，帮助她理解并尝试说服父母让她学习烹饪。 一）、引言部分 亲切问候：首先用友好的语气向Lynn问好，表达对她困惑的理解。 简述问题：简短回顾Lynn信中提到的问题，即她想学习烹饪但父母不同意。 二）、理解并共鸣 表达理解：表示你理解她想学烹饪的渴望，以及面对父母反对时的无奈。 分享经验（如适用）：如果自己有类似经历，可以简短分享自己是如何处理的，增加信件的共鸣感。 三）、提出建议 建议一：展示烹饪的好处 内容：向父母说明学习烹饪可以培养生活技能、提高独立生活能力、增强家庭责任感等。 理由：解释这些好处对Lynn未来的成长和家庭关系的积极影响。 建议二：提出妥协方案 内容：比如先从简单的菜肴开始学起，保证在安全的环境下进行，或者邀请父母一起参与学习过程。 理由：这样的方案既能让父母看到Lynn的认真态度，也能通过共同参与增进亲子关系。 建议三：制定计划并展示决心 内容：制定一个详细的学习计划，包括学习的时间、内容、目标等，并承诺会遵守安全规则。 理由：展示Lynn的成熟和责任感，让父母看到她对烹饪的认真态度。 四）、进一步沟通的建议 鼓励沟通：建议Lynn找一个合适的时机，心平气和地与父母坐下来谈谈，表达自己的想法和计划。 倾听与反馈：提醒她在沟通过程中也要倾听父母的担忧和意见，并尝试给予合理的回应或调整计划。 五）、结语 鼓励与祝福：鼓励Lynn勇敢表达自己的想法，相信通过努力和沟通，一定能够得到父母的理解和支持。最后，表达对她的美好祝愿。 腹稿大纲： 第一段：表达关切与同情。指出父母不同意的可能原因。点明说服父母的建议。【3句】 第二段：建议一论点句。对建议一论证句：解释+例证（+补充）。【3-4句】 第三段：建议二论点句。对建议二论证句：解释+例证（+补充）。【3-4句】 第四段：总结建议一与建议二。期望对你有帮助。【2句】 手写关键词： 第一段：frustration/ safety/ distract/ right approach 第二段：take safety precautions/ careful/ e.g. safe cooking techniques, kitchen clean, adult supervise 第三段：highlight educational benefits/ life skill + way to learn e.g. nutrition, culture & chemistry/ educational hobby/ complement schoolwork 第四段：address concerns + emphasize benefits/ convince/ hope helpful + enjoy cooking soon 四、参考范文及点评： 【学生练笔】 Dear Lynn， I hope this letter will find you well! I quite understand the cher frustration that comes to you when you are unable to pursue your hobby, and I'd like to ffer some suggestions. Firstly, you can have a heart-to-heart talk with your parents. You need to understand your parents' concerns which incudes the impact of this hobby on your academic performance and the potential safety issues. It would be beneficial to explain to your parents why you wish to cook and how it can be a valuable life skill. Then assure that you will make a balance between leisure and study, and take satety precautions before cooking which can ease their worries. Secondly, you can invite your parents to cook with you, which serves as a dual purposes: guidance and assistance in the kitchen. Aditionally, cooking with your parents will offer a wonderful opportunity for family bonding. What makes this invitation important and necessary is that you'll easily gain your parents approval and supports when they find your dedication. In conclusion, with a bit of patience and effort. you are sure to persuade your parents. I hope you will be delighted on your culinary journey! Yours, Li Ming 【一句一修改后的范文】 Dear Lynn, I trust this letter finds you in good health and spirits! （可以加入更多情感色彩，如“愿这封信带去我满满的祝福，希望你每天都充满活力，健康快乐哦！”这样显得贴心。，当然，也无需修改，保持原样即可。） I fully empathize with the frustration you're experiencing as your passion for cooking remains unfulfilled. （可以稍微调整一下语气，如“我完全能感受到你现在因为烹饪梦想受阻而感到的失落呢，真的超理解你的感受哦~” 这样更加亲近。） Allow me to offer some well-considered suggestions that might help ease the situation. （本来的句子只提出了要给出建议的意图。可以稍微调整一下措辞，如“让我来给你支几招吧，希望能帮你缓解一下现在的情况呢~” 这样听起来更轻松。） Firstly, engage in a sincere and thoughtful conversation with your parents. （原句给出了第一个建议，强调真诚沟通。我们可以加入一些鼓励的话，如“首先，试着和你爸妈来说说你心里的想法。”） ...Acknowledge their genuine concerns about the potential impact of your hobby on your academic pursuits and safety. 原句You need to understand your parents' concerns which includes…是建议理解父母的担忧。修改可以更加具体一些，如“记得要告诉他们，你明白他们担心你的学业和安全，因为这是他们爱你的表现哦~”这样可以缓和语气。） ...Clarify that you understand their perspective and emphasize the merits of cooking as a life-enriching skill.（原句It would be beneficial to explain to your parents why you wish to cook and how it can 仅仅表达理解和强调烹饪的价值。但我们可以建议：“你可以说，虽然你理解他们的想法，但烹饪对你来说不仅仅是个爱好，它还能让你的生活更加丰富多彩呢~”详细地说明烹饪是自己的热爱，可以给自己提供情绪价值。） ...Emphasize how managing your time wisely can ensure a harmonious balance between your culinary endeavors and academic responsibilities. （原句Then assure that you will make a balance…建议合理安排时间。修改后“你可以告诉他们，你会合理安排时间，让学习和烹饪两不误，这样他们就能更放心啦~” ...Furthermore, assure them of your commitment to sticking to all safety protocols in the kitchen, thereby relieving their fears. （原句take safety precautions before cooking which can ease their worries.承诺遵守厨房安全规则。这个句子写的已经很好了。） Secondly, extend an invitation to your parents to join you in the kitchen. （原句写的同样很漂亮。） This not only provides a platform for them to offer guidance and support but also fosters a stronger family bond through shared experiences. （修改后的意思是这样他们不仅能给你指导，还能增进你们之间的感情，真是一举两得呢~”） By involving them directly in your passion, you demonstrate your dedication and commitment, significantly increasing the likelihood of gaining their approval and encouragement. （原句What makes this invitation important and necessary is that you'll easily gain your parents approval and supports when they find your dedication.  使用了主语从句和表语从句及状语从句来强调让父母参与的重要性，我也很喜欢这一句。如修改的话，我们就改为上句。）然后再加上这样做所带来的优点。 Remember, shared activities often lead to deeper understanding and support. 原句In conclusion, with a bit of patience and effort. you are sure to persuade your parents. 是用建议、方法+结果来组成句子，逻辑性很强。如想升级一次词汇，我们不妨改成In conclusion, with a combination of patience, empathy, and a proactive approach, you stand a strong chance of persuading your parents to embrace your culinary aspirations. 原句I hope you will be delighted on your culinary journey! 无需修改，保持原样即可，这句已经很有温度了。当然非要改的话，我们就改成I sincerely hope that your culinary journey brings you immense joy and satisfaction. 给句子加些形容词。 Warmest regards,  Li Ming 【修改后例文】Dear Lynn,    I trust this letter finds you in good health and spirits! I fully empathize with the frustration you're experiencing as your passion for cooking remains unfulfilled. Allow me to offer some well-considered suggestions that might help ease the situation.   Firstly, engage in a sincere and thoughtful conversation with your parents. Acknowledge their genuine concerns about the potential impact of your hobby on your academic pursuits and safety. Clarify that you understand their perspective and emphasize the merits of cooking as a life-enriching skill. Emphasize how managing your time wisely can ensure a harmonious balance between your culinary endeavors and academic responsibilities. Furthermore, assure them of your commitment to adhering to all safety protocols in the kitchen, thereby alleviating their fears.   Secondly, extend an invitation to your parents to join you in the kitchen. This not only provides a platform for them to offer guidance and support but also fosters a stronger familial bond through shared experiences. By involving them directly in your passion, you demonstrate your dedication and commitment, significantly increasing the likelihood of gaining their approval and encouragement. Remember, shared activities often lead to deeper understanding and support.    In conclusion, with a combination of patience, empathy, and a proactive approach, you stand a strong chance of persuading your parents to embrace your culinary aspirations. I sincerely hope that your culinary journey brings you immense joy and satisfaction.                                 Warmest regards,                                 Li Ming 【2023~2024学年上海市复旦大学附属中学高三上学期9月测试】 假设你是明启中学学生李明，最近你校英语报正在开展"The electronic device that I must take while travelling"的征文活动。 你对此话题很感兴趣，写一篇文章，内容须包括： 1）你在旅游途中一定携带的电子设备； 2）你的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Nowadays, with the rapid development of electronic technology, our travel journey is becoming more and more colorful. Electronic devices like computers, cellphones, and iPads are filling our time on high-speed trains or planes. Personally, there is another electronic device that I will definitely take with me on the road, and that is power bank. Firstly, power bank is small in size and can be carried around. Today more and more people prefer to take photos with mobile phones instead of cameras because it is important to be lightly equipped when travelling, so power bank can help avoid the embarrassing moment when they want to record good moments but their phones suddenly run out of power. Power bank is clearly a portable and versatile electronic device. Secondly, for long distance travel, power bank can charge my mobile phone in time so as to avoid not replying to messages timely due to the sudden death of the battery. I remember once when I was on the train to Nanjing, my mobile phone was almost out of power when I was about to arrive at the station. Fortunately, the power bank I carried was a timely help, otherwise I might not be able to contact my friend in Nanjing to pick me up. Therefore, power bank is an electronic device that I will carry with me no matter I am traveling or going out. Finally, the security of power bank is trustworthy. The current power bank generally has the functions of charge control, charge protection and discharge protection, so when charging our mobile phones or iPads, we don't need to worry about excessive charging. In addition, the current power bank capacity is high, which means it can charge different electronic devices at the same time. For me, power bank is one of the greatest inventions in the age of science and technology. I feel more secure and convenient when traveling with it. 【解析】 【分析】本篇书面表达属于夹叙夹议文，要求假设你是明启中学学生李明，最近你校英语报正在开展"The electronic device that I must take while travelling"的征文活动。你对此话题很感兴趣，写一篇文章，内容须包括：1）你在旅游途中一定携带的电子设备；2）你的理由。 【详解】词汇积累 有趣的：colorful→interesting 就我个人而言：personally→as far as I’m concerned 避免：avoid→prevent...from... 可靠的：trustworthy→reliable 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Nowadays, with the rapid development of electronic technology, our travel journey is becoming more and more colorful. 拓展句：Now, electronic technology has developed,which makes our travel journey become more and more colorful. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Personally, there is another electronic device that I will definitely take with me on the road, and that is power bank. (运用了that引导的定语从句) [高分句型2] In addition, the current power bank capacity is high, which means it can charge different electronic devices at the same time.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【2024年上海市南洋中学高三英语三模英语试题】 学校大力推进劳动敎育，打算开辟校园农场组织学生进行果蔬花卉种植实践。假设你是校学生会干部李华，负责老师Helen委托你了解同学们对此项活动的看法。经了解，你发现有些同学缺乏种植经验，不敢尝试；有些学生担心种植成果没有实用价值，兴趣不大。请你写封信给Helen 1.反映同学们的想法； 2.提出建议并说明理由。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Helen, As for the practical activity of fruit, vegetable and flower planting organized by the campus farm, after investigation, I found that some students lacked planting experience and dared not try it. Some students are not interested because they are worried that the planting results have no practical value. In view of these phenomena, I would like to put forward some ideas of my own. First of all, we should do a good job in the early publicity and mobilization work. Let students know the meaning and value of this activity. Secondly, let the students know the information of fruits, vegetables and flowers through various channels, and understand the appearance, growing environment and process of the crops. Finally, it is best to use our local plant material. In this way, students can increase their interest, their confidence, and actually learn something. Above are some of my suggestions. I hope our activities will be a success. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，学校大力推进劳动敎育，打算开辟校园农场组织学生进行果蔬花卉种植实践。假设你是校学生会干部李华，负责老师Helen委托你了解同学们对此项活动的看法。经了解，你发现有些同学缺乏种植经验，不敢尝试；有些学生担心种植成果没有实用价值，兴趣不大。请你写封信给Helen，反映同学们的想法；提出建议并说明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 调查：investigation→inquiry 担心的：worried→concerned 了解：know→learn 成功：be a success=be successful 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Finally, it is best to use our local plant material. In this way, students can increase their interest, their confidence, and actually learn something. 拓展句：Finally, it is best to use our local plant material, because in this way, students can increase their interest, their confidence, and actually learn something. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Some students are not interested because they are worried that the planting results have no practical value. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句和that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] I hope our activities will be a success. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句和抽象名词具体化) 【上海交通大学附中2023-2024学年高三上学期摸底考试】 现在心理健康日益成为社会关注话题，尤其是青少年的心理健康问题。请分析青少年产生心理健康问题的原因，并针对如何保持青少年心理健康给出合理建议。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Nowadays more and more people have begun to attach importance to mental healthy, especially the mental health problems of teenagers. For some reasons, many students suffer from mental illness, which seriously influences their study and daily life. The cause of mental health problems often varies a lot from one case to another. A good number of people are suffering from heavy pressure. Others lack support and communication skills. In addition, a lot of people are ignorant of psychological knowledge about how to keep mentally fit. In my opinion, there are a lot of ways for teenagers to deal with mental health problems and keep psychologically healthy. Firstly, find the real cause of your mental health problem and see whether you can do something about it. Secondly, learn to relax yourself and take exercises to release the pressure. Lastly, you may find it helpful to talk to your parents or friends about your problem, or seek support and advice from a psychological consultant. 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放式作文。现在心理健康日益成为社会关注话题，尤其是青少年的心理健康问题。请考生分析青少年产生心理健康问题的原因，并针对如何保持青少年心理健康给出合理建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 越来越多：more and more →an increasing number of 重要性：importance→significance 影响：influence→affect 此外：besides→in addition 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：A good number of people are suffering from heavy pressure 拓展句：There are a good number of people who are suffering from heavy pressure 【点睛】【高分句型1】 For some reasons, many students suffer from mental illness, which seriously influences their study and daily life.（运用了which引导的非限制性从句） 【高分句型2】In my opinion, there are a lot of ways for teenagers to deal with mental health problems and keep psychologically healthy.（运用了不定式作定语） 【高分句型3】Firstly, find the real cause of your mental health problem and see whether you can do something about it.（运用了whether引导宾语从句) （2024年奉贤区二模） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 随着中国传统文化的复兴，汉服(Hanfu)作为一种独特的服饰文化，逐渐受到人们的关注和喜爱。假如你是明启中学的学生李华，你校正在向学生们征集新社团的创建意向。作为汉服爱好者，你准备成立汉服社，请给校委会写一封邮件表达你的想法。你的邮件需包含： 1. 成立该社团的目的； 2. 社团拟开展的活动及原因。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear School Committee, I hope this email finds you well. My name is Li Hua, a student at Mingqi High School, and I am writing to propose the establishment of a Hanfu Club within our school community with the purpose of the revival of Hanfu clothing. The activities that the Hanfu Club plans to undertake are as follows. At first, we will organize workshops to teach interested students about the history of Hanfu, its significance in Chinese culture, and how to wear it correctly. These sessions will be interactive and informative, allowing students to appreciate the beauty and elegance of Hanfu. Besides, the club will host cultural performances showcasing various aspects of traditional Chinese culture, with a focus on Hanfu. By engaging in these activities, we believe that the Hanfu Club can contribute to fostering a greater sense of cultural pride and identity among our student body. Thank you for considering our proposal. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校委会写邮件，提出组建汉服社团的申请。 【详解】1.词汇积累 重要性：significance → importance 得体地：correctly → decently 此外：besides → in addition 各种各样的：various → diverse 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：These sessions will be interactive and informative, allowing students to appreciate the beauty and elegance of Hanfu. 拓展句：These sessions will be interactive and informative, which allows students to appreciate the beauty and elegance of Hanfu. 【点睛】【高分句式1】The activities that the Hanfu Club plans to undertake are as follows.(运用了that引导的定语从句) 【高分句式2】By engaging in these activities, we believe that the Hanfu Club can contribute to fostering a greater sense of cultural pride and identity among our student body.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) （2024年嘉定区二模） Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你所在的小区附近将新建一个大型游乐场，很多居民表示不满。社区管理处决定征集居民意见并召开专题讨论会，作为居民代表，写一份讨论会发言稿，内容需包括： 1. 你认为新建大型游乐场可能会存在的问题(至少2个)； 2. 你对以上问题的建议和理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear neighbors, I am here as a resident representative to voice our concerns about the upcoming large amusement park near our community. While the idea sounds exciting, there are potential issues we must consider. Firstly, noise pollution could become an important problem. The constant hustle and bustle of the amusement park might disturb our peace and quiet. Secondly, traffic congestion is another concern. The influx of visitors is likely to cause major traffic jams, affecting our daily commutes. To address these issues, I propose conducting a thorough noise impact assessment and implementing noise reduction measures. Additionally, we should explore traffic management strategies to minimize congestion. It's crucial for our voices to be heard and considered in this process. Let's work together to find solutions that benefit our community. 【解析】 【导语】这是一篇发言稿。要求考生作为居民代表就你所在的小区附近将新建一个大型游乐场，很多居民表示不满一事，写一份讨论会发言稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 变得：become→ turn into 重要的：important → significant 问题：problem→ issue 合作：work together→ team up 2.句式拓展 同义句改写 原句：Firstly, noise pollution could become an important problem. 拓展句：Initially, the matter of noise pollution emerges as a significant concern. 【点睛】【高分句型1】While the idea sounds exciting, there are potential issues we must consider.（使用了关系代词that引导的定语从句，先行词为issues） 【高分句型2】To address these issues, I propose conducting a thorough noise impact assessment and implementing noise reduction measures.（使用了非谓语动词作状语） （2024年金山区二模） Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你在英语一考中取得了118分的成绩，现在你正面临着是否参加6月份二考的选择，请谈谈你的想法。内容需包括： 1）说明你的选择； 2）阐述你的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 My Decision on the Second English Test I'm Wu Lei, a student from Mingqi High School. I am writing to share my thoughts on whether to participate in the second English test scheduled for June. After careful consideration, I have decided to forego the second test. My primary reason for this decision stems from the encouraging score of 118 I achieved in the first exam. This result indicates that I possess a solid foundation in the language, and I believe that with continued effort and dedication, I can further enhance my proficiency. Additionally, I recognize that my time is valuable, and I wish to utilize it effectively. Participating in the second test might not significantly impact my overall score, but it could potentially detract from my focus on other subjects and extracurricular activities. In conclusion, I am confident in my current English proficiency and believe that my efforts should be directed towards maintaining and improving my performance in other areas. Therefore, I have chosen not to participate in the second English test. 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你在英语一考中取得了118分的成绩，现在你正面临着是否参加6月份二考的选择，请谈谈你的想法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参加：participate in→join in 此外：additionally→besides 提高：enhance→strengthen 总之：in conclusion→in short 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Additionally, I recognize that my time is valuable, and I wish to utilize it effectively. 拓展句：Additionally, after I recognize that my time is valuable, I wish to utilize it effectively. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing to share my thoughts on whether to participate in the second English test scheduled for June.(运用了特殊疑问词+不定式作宾语) [高分句型2] In conclusion I am confident in my current English proficiency and believe that my efforts should be directed towards maintaining and improving my performance in other areas. (运用了that引导宾语从句) （2024年1月·上海高考真题） Guided Writing Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的高三学生李华。你们学校将邀请文学教授Tom Johnson为学生做讲座，你负责与他联系;他给你发了电子邮件(内容如下)，请根据他在电子邮件中提出的要求回一封邮件。 教授给李华的英文邮件： Dear Li Hua, Thank you for inviting me. For my lecture, I'd like to know about what literature interests Chinese students most. Please give me two questions you'd like me to answer and tell me why you choose these two questions. Looking forward to your reply and hoping to see you soon. Yours sincerely, Tom Johnson ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题分析： 1.体裁分类：观点论证类；    话题分类：文学文化类。 2.注意尽量选取符合实际情况、且外国文学教授所熟悉的问题。 3.建议审题分段： 【1】感谢教授前来讲座，引出两个问题 【2】西方文学作品中是如何运用修辞方法的？ 【3】阅读西方文学对跨文化交流有什么作用？ 【4】期待教授前来讲座，点题，总结全文。 【参考范文01】 Dear Tom Johnson, We are delighted and honored to have you as our guest for the upcoming literature lecture at our school . As an avid follower of your work and an enthusiast of foreign literature【以自身强烈兴趣表明写作动机】I am eager to immerse myself into the profound insights from your presence. l have prepared two thought-provoking questions that I believe would inspire a productive discussion during your lecture. As a distinguished scholar in foreign literature, could you share your perspective on the interrelation of literature with other art forms, such as visual or audio art? Many literary works draw inspiration from or are influenced by other forms of art. Exploring the connections between literature and other artistic expressions enriches our understanding of the creative process and contributes to a more profound appreciation of storytelling as a dynamic art. In a rapidly evolving globalized world 【全球化视角，扣题外国文学教授】how do you perceive the role of literature in fostering cross-cultural understanding and empathy? Literature has the unique ability to transcend borders and offer readers a window into diverse cultures, perspectives,and human experiences.Understanding the role of literature in bridging cultural gaps is crucial for navigating our interconnected world and promoting tolerance and appreciation for diversity I believe these questions will not only showcase the depth of your expertise but also provide valuable insights for the audience, comprised of both literature enthusiasts and aspiring writers. Your responses will undoubtedly contribute to a memorable and intellectually weighty event. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【参考范文02】 Dear Professor, Greetings from Mingqi High School! We are delighted and honored to have you coming to our school for a lecture. Your willingness to engage with us prior to your visit is truly appreciated. In response to your inquiry about the topics that interest Chinese students, we have carefully considered and formulated two questions that we believe reflect our collective curiosity: 1. How does literature bridge cultural gaps, and what role can it play in fostering global understanding? We find this question significant because as Chinese students, we are keenly aware of the diverse cultures and perspectives existing worldwide. Understanding how literature serves as a bridge between different cultures will not only enrich our knowledge but also help us appreciate the power of storytelling in fostering unity. 2. In the digital age, how can traditional literary forms adapt to remain relevant, and what impact does technology have on the future of literature? As students growing up in a rapidly evolving technological landscape, we are curious about the intersection of literature and technology. Exploring the ways in which traditional literary forms evolve and endure in the face of digital advancements will provide valuable insights into the future of our literary traditions. We hope these questions align with the themes you plan to discuss during your lecture. We eagerly await your visit and the enlightening insights you will undoubtedly share with us. Best regards, Li Hua 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$