Unit4 Do it yourself 单元主题（自我管理类）满分范文15篇-2024-2025学年八年级英语上册重难点讲练全攻略（牛津译林版）

Unit 4 Do it yourself 单元主题（自我管理类）满分范文15篇 一、书面表达 1．十四岁是青春的第一步，是从少年迈向青年的转折点。在八年级举行的“青春仪式”活动中，同学们畅谈青春之梦，立志发展自己，服务社会，奉献国家。你们学校的English Newsletter正在以“Doing Our Part (从自身做起)”为题举行征文活动，请根据图片提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。 要求：（1）词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文章应包括所给内容要点，可适当增加细节，使文章连贯； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Doing Our Part We have grown up and it’s time for us to do something for our family and society. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．由于父母的溺爱，现在许多孩子不做学习以外的事情，独立生活能力不强。请你根据下面表格中的内容，按要求用英语写一篇短文，谈谈作为中学生，我们应该如何培养自己的独立性。 Ways Things we can do begin with our own things clean our own room,… help with housework do the dishes,… do things actively … learn from heroes … 注意： 1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确； 2.内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥； 3.词数90左右（已给出的文章开头不计入总词数）。 As middle school students, it’s very important for us to be independent. What should we do to make us independent?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．近期你参加了学校组织的题为“What can we do for our city”主题演讲比赛，请根据以下材料写一篇英文演讲稿。 在学校学习时 1.走路或骑车上学，代替家长用小轿车接送 2.尽可能多地再利用使用过的书本 3. …… 在日常生活中 1.购物时使用布袋子(cloth bag)，不使用塑料袋 2.节约用水，保护水源 3.垃圾分类，循环利用 4. …… 要求： 1）必须包括表格中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； 2）词数：100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 What can we do for our city? Dear teachers and students, The topic of my speech is “What can we do for our city?” As we all know, to make the environment of our city better, it’s our duty to do something. As students, we can do something to help.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In our daily life, we can do more. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If we take action, I’m sure our city will become more and more beautiful. That’s all. Thanks for listening. 4．假如你是某国际学校的学生李华，刚刚得知你的英国笔友贝蒂 (Betty) 因经常熬夜，睡眠不足，抵抗力下降而生病住院。请你根据以下内容提示，给她写一封邮件表示关心，并针对其病因给出合理建议。 提示： 1. 不要熬夜，要早睡早起； 2. 不要太逼自己，健康更重要； 3. …… 要求： 1. 邮件须包含提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯； 3. 词数：100左右 (邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Betty, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5．好习惯带来好人生，坏习惯会影响青少年的成长与发展。现某报社专栏“拯救坏习惯”向同学们征集稿件，请你讲述你是如何在身边人的帮助以及自己的努力下，改变坏习惯的经历，并分享你的收获。 要求： 1. 80—120 词； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： It’s necessary for us to break bad habits. Often in the past, I ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 6．下周一晚上，你们班要举办一次主题为“告别不良习惯，倡导健康生活”的活动，请你写一篇发言稿，介绍自己的生活方式。 写作要求： 1.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2.根据要点提示，适当发挥； 3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。 Hello, everyone. I have a healthy lifestyle.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．“吾日三省吾身”是一句出自《礼记·大学》的名言，意思是每天反思自己的言行以完善自己。我们即将进入九年级，请你以“My ways to improve myself”为题结合自身实际情况选择两到三个方面介绍你自我完善的计划以及这样做的理由。 注意： 1.词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。 Life is really a long journey. In my growing up life, I have been looking for ways to improve myself. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．当今社会，人们的环保意识越来越强，DIY也越来越受欢迎。请你根据下表内容，用英语向你的朋友介绍一下DIY并提出你对做DIY的建议。短文应包含所有给出的信息，并适当发挥，词数90左右。 含义 意思是“自己做”，是一种积极的生活方式； 优点 1. 有趣，能从中得到快乐； 2. ……（自拟一条）； 缺点 1. 危险，有时如果粗心可能会伤着自己； 2. 要花费更多的时间； 学习途 径 1. 可以向老师、家长或朋友学习； 2. ……（自拟一条）； 建议 ……（自拟一至两条） I would like to tell you something about DIY. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．初二的你，入团了吗？中国共产主义青年团已经走过了百年历程。作为新时代青年中的一员，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，奋斗的青春更美丽。请以How to Make Myself Better为题，谈谈你塑造更好自己的做法及意义。词数80左右。 How to make myself better healthy lifestyle (n. 生活方式) healthy eating habits, do more exercise, control feelings... good qualities (n. 品质) kind, helpful, polite,... others take part in activities, develop different hobbies… 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 How to Make Myself Better As a teenager, I think I will try my best to make myself better. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m sure I will make myself better and better. 10．你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少进步，比如生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习惯的养成。请以“My Progress”为题，选取上述方面中的一个，结合自身经历，谈谈你是如何取得这一进步的。 要求：100 词以上，不得出现本人真实姓名和学校等信息。 提示词： used to                                                                                              My Progress ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．生活中，我们或多或少都会有闲暇的时光。如何打发闲暇时光，能看出一个人生活的品味、生活的态度。你是如何度过自己闲暇时光的呢？请以“How to spend my free time”为题，写一篇文章。 写作要求:  1)文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3)词数 80 左右。 How to spend my free time _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．你的生活方式如何呢？请你根据你的生活情况写一篇文章。内容包括： 1 简单的自我介绍； 2 你平常都干些什么？有哪些好的和不好的生活习惯； 3 谈谈你对自己的生活方式的看法； 写作要求：1 不能抄袭原文；2 语句连贯，注意分段，80词左右； __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．中学生活繁忙而快乐。你是如何做到把学习和生活安排得井井有条的？请根据以下要求，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的日常活动。 要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 2. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 3. 不少于70词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．我们八年级学生会正在举办主题为“Self-management”的征文活动，向全年级的同学们征求英文稿件。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。短文必须结合你的亲身经历，描述与自我管理这一优秀品质相关的一件事情，并谈谈它给你带来的影响及感受。 提示词：自我管理：self-management (n.) 注意：①词数在80以上；②短文开头仅供选择使用，不计入总词数；③文中不得出现真实的人名。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．“客观认识自我，积极接纳自我”是我们青少年成长节拍中“人贵自知”的重要内容。为此，某校八年级的英语老师们组织了一次活动，以“遇见更好的自己”为主题，对600名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目的统计结果。 假如你是该校的学生，请结合图表信息，以“Meet a Better Myself”为主题，用两段话写一篇短文。 1. 简要说明图表内容； 2. 从图表中选择一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈由此带给你的更加明显的变化。 要求： 1. 词数不少于70词，首句已经给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 Meet a Better Myself Our school did a survey among 600 students on the topic of “Meet a Better Myself”. Here are the results. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 11 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案： 1．例文 Doing Our Part We have grown up and it’s time for us to do something for our family and society. First, we should help parents do the housework at home. They must be tired after a hard day’s work, so we help to let them have a rest. Second, at school, we must study hard and help classmates with their problems. If so, we’ll make our school a better place. Third, in public, we can’t drop litter everywhere. Besides, we’d better use shopping baskets while shopping in order to protect the environment. In a word, if we do our part from now on, we’ll make a difference to the world. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：考生注意需要根据图片内容进行写作，注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，表明“是时候为我们的家庭和社会做些事情了”； 第二步，根据图片，具体介绍我们可以做的事情，主要围绕“在家、在学校和在公共场合可以做的事情”展开； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的展望，即“如果我们从现在开始尽自己的一份力量，我们将会给世界带来改变”。 [亮点词汇] ①have a rest休息 ②help sb with sth在某方面帮助某人 ③in public开公共场合 ④in order to为了 ⑤make a difference对……有影响 ⑥in a word总的来说 [高分句型] ①In a word, if we do our part from now on, we’ll make a difference to the world.（if引导条件状语从句） 2．例文： As middle school students, it’s very important for us to be independent. What should we do to make us independent? First, we can begin with our own things. Why not start with cleaning our own bedrooms? We can also wash and put away our own clothes. And we can help with housework. We can do the dishes after meals or we can learn to cook some dishes. It must be cool to let the whole family enjoy the food cooked by us. It is also important to do things actively. For example, make plans for the next week at weekends. Last but not least, please learn from heroes. Heroes have their own thoughts and ideas. They set good examples for us to follow. I think if we keep on doing these, we’ll become more and more independent. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据表格中的要点提示，谈谈作为中学生该如何培养自己的独立性，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出主题“我们应该做什么使我们独立”； 第二步，根据表格中的内容提示详细介绍培养自己独立性的方法，以及应该怎么做，做些什么； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①begin with以……开始 ②put away放好 ③help with帮助 ④make plans for为……做计划 ⑤learn from向……学习 ⑥set good examples for为……树立好榜样 [高分句型] ①It must be cool to let the whole family enjoy the food cooked by us.（It作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语） ②make plans for the next week at weekends.（祈使句的肯定形式） ③....if we keep on doing these, we’ll become more and more independent.（if引导的条件状语从句） 3．                                                                  What can we do for our city? Dear teachers and students, The topic of my speech is “What can we do for our city?” As we all know, to make the environment of our city better, it’s our duty to do something. As students, we can do something to help. First of all, we should walk or ride to school when we study at school, instead of parents picking us up in cars. Second, we should reuse used books as much as possible. Finally, we must not waste food. In our daily life, we can do more. First, we use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we shop. Second, we must save water and protect water resources. Third, we need to sort and recycle waste. If we take action, I’m sure our city will become more and more beautiful. That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。根据表格提示信息，以“What can we do for our city”为主题，写一篇作文。 2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第一人称。叙述要点时，可使用first，second，third，finally等过渡词连接，使文章通畅。最后检查作文，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。 4．例文： Dear Betty, I’m sorry to hear that you’re ill in hospital. How are you feeling now? I know you often stay up late at night, and you don’t get enough sleep. I don’t think you should do that any more. Go to bed early and get up early. Health is more important than anything else. Stop pushing yourself too hard. Why don’t you go for a walk in your free time or watch a movie on weekends? That will take your mind off school. I hope you’ll get well soon. Please let me know if you need anything. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表示关心； 第二步，针对其病因给出合理建议，这是写作重点； 第三步，表达祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①stay up late熬夜 ②not…any more不再…… ③go for a walk散步 ④push yourself too hard把自己逼得太紧 [高分句型] I know you often stay up late, and you don’t have enough sleep.（宾语从句） 5．例文 It’s necessary for us to break bad habits. Often in the past, I often ate junk food. I also spent much time on my phone. These have caused me to finish my homework very late and I was very overweight. So I failed a 500 meter long run in a physical education class. So, encouraged by my mother, I decided to break these bad habits. Firstly, I make everyday plans . My mother advises me to change my dietary habits. I also hardly eat junk food. At the same time, I constantly tell myself that I can definitely do it. After a year of hard work, I am now very healthy and strong. At the same time, these changes also give me a sense of success. I also know the importance of study. I am very confident now. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己过去的一些坏习惯； 第二步，介绍自己改变坏习惯的经历； 第三步，最后谈谈自己的收获。 [亮点词汇] ① cause sb to do sth促使某人做某事 ② decide to do sth决定做某事 ③ advise sb to do sth建议某人做某事 ④ at the same time同时 [高分句型] At the same time, I constantly tell myself that I can definitely do it.（宾语从句） 6．例文 Hello, everyone! I have a healthy lifestyle. Although I am under lots of study pressure, I try to keep exercising for an hour every day. I like vegetables and fruit so I eat them every day. I drink milk every morning. I think it’s good for my health. But I hardly ever eat junk food. In my free time, I never play computer games. Usually I go to bed early and get up early. I hope that we can exercise every day and have a good lifestyle. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：考生注意根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，问候大家并引出话题； 第二步，具体介绍自己的生活方式，例如每天坚持锻炼、多吃水果和蔬菜、不吃垃圾食品、不玩电脑游戏、早睡早起等； 第三步，表达自己的希望。 [亮点词汇] ①under lots of study pressure 在很大的学习压力下 ②try to do 努力做…… ③keep exercising 坚持锻炼 ④be good for 对……有益 [高分句型] ①Although I am under lots of study pressure, I try to keep exercising for an hour every day.（although引导让步状语从句） ②I hope that we can exercise every day and have a good lifestyle.（that引导宾语从句） 7．例文 My ways to improve myself Life is really a long journey. In my growing up life, I have been looking for ways to improve myself. Now I’d like to share some of the ways with you. First, if I go to visit some places like museums, I will keep quiet and wait in line politely. Whether at home or in some other places, I will behave politely. The politer I am, the more welcome I will be. Second, I will live a green life. It’s better to ride a bicycle instead of taking a car. What’s more, I will save water by taking shorter showers. A green life can help us live healthily. Last but not least, as a student, I should have a good habit of doing sports. Sports can make me stronger and stronger. I hope to be better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，需适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题； 第二步，分点介绍提升自己的方式，需提供实例； 第三步，总结全文，表达决心。 [亮点词汇] ①share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物 ②wait in line排队 ③whether…or…不管是……还是…… ④instead of而不是 ⑤what’s more而且 ⑥last but not least最后但同样重要的 [高分句型] ①if I go to visit some places like museums, I will keep quiet and wait in line politely.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②The politer I am, the more welcome I will be.（“The+比较级..., the+比较级...”句型） 8．One possible version: I would like to tell you something about DIY. DIY stands for “do-it-yourself”. It’s an active way of living. Many people like doing things themselves because it is interesting and they can get fun from it. Also, DIY can help people save money. They don’t need to spend much money buying things they can do or paying someone to do them. DIY also has some problems. It can be dangerous. Sometimes, people may hurt themselves if they are careless. Besides, it usually takes more time. People can learn to do DIY from teachers, parents or friends. They can also buy books about DIY and learn by themselves. They can take a course in DIY, too. I think people should be careful when they do things themselves. Using brain and hands more often is also a good way to help us be more creative. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，说明DIY的含义； 第二步，根据提示要点介绍DIY的优点和缺点，以及其学习途径，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，提出你对做DIY的建议并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①stand for代表 ②spend money doing sth花钱做某事 [高分句型] ①Many people like doing things themselves because it is interesting and they can get fun from it.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②Sometimes, people may hurt themselves if they are careless.（if引导的条件状语从句） ③I think people should be careful when they do things themselves.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句，when引导的时间状语从句） ④Using brain and hands more often is also a good way to help us be more creative.（动名词作主语） 9．例文 How to Make Myself Better As a teenager, I think I will try my best to make myself better. First of all, it’s important to have a healthy lifestyle. I will eat healthily and do more exercise every day in order to keep healthy. It’s also necessary for me to learn how to control my feelings. What’s more, having good qualities is important as well. I should be kind, helpful and polite to other people. Besides, I will take part in more activities and develop different hobbies. It can make me grow as a person and help me learn new skills. What I do can develop myself fully. I’m sure I will make myself better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主旨，会尽最大的努力让自己更好； 第二步，从生活方式，个人品质等方面介绍如何让自己变得更好； 第三步，表达决心。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②in order to为了 ③what’s more而且 ④as well也 ⑤make sb. do sth.使某人做某事 [高分句型] ①It’s also necessary for me to learn how to control my feelings.（it固定句型） ②What I do can develop myself fully.（what引导的主语从句） 10．                                                                        My Progress       I used to be poor at English, especially in reading and writing. I thought I must change myself. The biggest problem was that after reading a passage, I couldn’t understand it. It made me quite upset. To improve myself in reading, I had to keep on reading English articles instead of playing games outside. And I also practiced writing English articles whenever I had a chance. I tried to describe the weather, the animals in the zoo and the nice food in my English compositions. So far, I’ve had twenty English compositions. My English teacher said these compositions were excellent. 　　　       I realize that as long as I face my problems bravely and take useful ways to solve them, I’ll be successful in everything. Don’t wait！Why not improve yourselves at once？ 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：一般过去时； ③提示：以“My Progress” 为题，写一篇介绍自己如何取得进步的短文，并用上提示词“used to”。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍你的弱点或缺点； 第二步：你是如何提高自己或改掉坏习惯的； 第三步：呼吁大家提升自己。 [亮点词汇] ①instead of 代替 ②have to 不得不 ③at once 立刻，马上 [高分句型] ①I realize that as long as I face my problems bravely and take useful ways to solve them, I’ll be successful in everything.   (as long as引导条件状语从句) ② And I also practiced writing English whenever I had a chance.   (whenever引导状语从句) 11．One possible version: How to spend my free time Our free time activities can help us get away from our everyday problems and spend our free time happily. How do you spend your free time? In my free time, I always read books. Reading can not only brings me knowledge, but also teaches me how to get on well with others. Besides, I often help my parents with housework when I am free. As a student, I think it’s our duty to share some housework because we are a member of our families. In addition, doing exercise is also important in our life, I often take exercise when I am free. What’s more, I enjoy playing the piano in my free time, it is a great way to relax myself. All in all, it’s important to make good use of our free time. Better habits, better life. 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图借用“简单介绍空闲时光的活动的好处”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体介绍作者如何度过空闲时间； 第三步，书写结语表达“充分利用休闲时光的重要性”。 [亮点词汇] ① get away from摆脱 ②get on well with与……相处融洽 ③in addition此外 [高分句型] ①Reading can not only brings me knowledge, but also teaches me how to get on well with others.（not only...but also句型） ②As a student, I think it’s our duty to share some housework because we are a member of our families.(because引导的原因状语从句） 12．例文： I’m a 14-year-old middle school student. Let me tell you something about my living habits. I always go to bed early so I am never late for class. I sleep eight hours every night. I do sports at least three times a week. I think the best way to relax is through exercise. I often help my mother with housework. However, I have some bad habits. I eat a lot of junk food and I don’t like vegetables at all. I hardly ever go to the dentist for teeth cleaning. A healthy lifestyle is good for my study and health. So I will change my bad habits and develop a healthy lifestyle. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中生活方式的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简单介绍自己，并引出主题； 第二步，具体介绍自己平常的好的生活习惯和坏的生活习惯； 第三步，表达自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①tell sb about sth告诉某人某事 ②go to bed early早睡 ③be late for迟到 ④help sb with sth帮助某人做某事 ⑤be good for对……有益 [高分句型] I think the best way to relax is through exercise. (宾语从句) 13．范文： Our life is busy but happy. Life and study are both important to me. Here are what I do. As for study, I put it first. I get up early every day, and go to school on time. I work hard at school and listen carefully in class. After school, I finish my homework at once. As for life, I have free time to help my mother do housework. On weekends, I not only do chores, but also do my favourite things like seeing a film. All in all, I have a happy life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题干要求，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“中学生活很忙碌”来引出下文中对学习和生活的安排的描述； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“生活和学习”两方面入手，重点介绍中学生活； ③第三步，书写结语。表达中学生活的快乐。 [亮点词汇] ①as for 至于 ②put it first 把……放在首位 ③get up 起床 ④on time 准时 ⑤at once 立刻 ⑥do chores 做家务 ⑦all in all 总之 [高分句型] ①Here are what I do.（倒装句） 14．例文 Self-management plays an important role in our life. To be honest, I am a person who is self-disciplined. I usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal. After finishing the tasks, I developed the habit of going to bed early and getting up early. At home, I spared no effort to improve myself all the time. I have benefited a lot from self-management. First, I have had many good habits. They make my life easier and healthier. Second, a lot of time has been saved for study so I can get good grades in many subjects. All in all, I hope that everyone can have self-management. And we should try our best to fight for our bright future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”，“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“Self-management”为主题进行写作适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自我管理的重要性； 第二步，介绍关于自我管理的亲身经历； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important role起到重要作用 ②To be honest老实说 ③in advance提前 ④All in all总而言之 [高分句型] ①To be honest, I am a person who is self-disciplined.（who引导的定语从句） ②All in all, I hope that everyone can have self-management.（that引导的宾语从句） 15．例文 Meet a Better Myself Our school did a survey among 600 students on the topic of “Meet a Better Myself”. Here are the results. 20 percent of the students believe they get more outgoing. And 66 percent think they develop better studying habits while 14 percent consider they are more helpful. As for me, I develop better studying habits. When I got into middle school, I was poor in speaking English. Luckily, my English teacher found my problems and she taught me some useful ways. Following her advice, I spent much time listening to English songs and watching movies. Also, I often practiced talking with my friends in English. Slowly, I could speak English better. Now I become more interested in English and get better grades than before. I believe developing better studying habits helps to bring out the best in me all the time. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏图表中的内容，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“调查结果”来引出下文中对自己经历的讲述； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“原来的自己、如何改善自己和现在的状态”三方面入手，重点讲述自己的经历； ③第三步，书写结语。表达完善自己的决心。 [亮点词汇] ①as for 至于 ②spend time (in) doing sth 花费时间做某事 ③become interested in sth 对某事感兴趣 ④bring out 激发，使显现 ⑤all the time 一直 [高分句型] ①20 percent of the students believe they get more outgoing. （宾语从句） ②And 66 percent think they develop better studying habits while 14 percent consider they are more helpful.（宾语从句） ③When I got into middle school, I was poor in speaking English.（when引导的时间状语从句） 14 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 13 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$