读后续写之如何设计故事情节课件--2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

读后续写 如何设计故事情节 CAFE 1 策略指导 01 实例分析 02 灵活运用 03 目录 2 01策略指导 3 01策略指导 C: character A: action F: feeling What is CAFE? Each letter stands for a word, can you guess it? E: environment 4 01策略指导 为了续写出情节逻辑合理、结构完整的故事，可以围绕CAFE提问来设计续写情节。 CAFE 分别指代: C(Characters)指故事里的主人公(人或动物); A(Actions)主人公的动作行为; F(Feelings )主人公的心理感受; E(Environment)故事发生时的环境。 在设计故事情节时，主人公的动作行为、心理感受以及环境可根据情节需要灵活增减。 5 02实例分析 6 02实例分析 It was summer，and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque，a big city in the state of New Mexico. Wereached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul，my dad’s friend，picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos. His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning，UnclePaul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm，” he said. After breakfast，I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens，while my dad went with Uncle Paul totake the sheep out to graze (吃草)．I was impressed to see my dad and UnclePaul riding horses. They looked really cool. In the afternoon，I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride，and he said yes，as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So，my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats，got on our horses，and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper，” Uncle Paul cried，“and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost！”“OK！” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks，the deep green pine trees，and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. 注意:1.续写词数应为 150 左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 7 who when where what how step1 梳理原文 读五要素 I; dad; Uncle Paul; Aunt Tina in summer; in the afternoon In the farm house; in the mountains I went to a farm to enjoy holiday with my father, and took a horse ride I(excited-> relaxed->surprised and frightened ->worried and 02实例分析 8 02实例分析 C(Characters)指故事里的主人公（人或动物） A(Actons)主人公的动作行为 F (Feelings )主人公的心理感受 E(Envirnment)故事发生时的环境 step2 设计故事情节 para1 : Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse my horse I my dad What did _____ do? How did _____ feel? What did they see? How about the weather? time? 9 02实例分析 添加标题 Character Action step2 设计故事情节 para1 : Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse Feeling Environment I my horse my dad What did I do? What did my horse do? What did my dad do? How did I feel? How did my horse feel? How did my dad feel? What did they see? How about the weather? Time?t write down the key words of each question 围绕CAFE提问，设计故事情节 10 02实例分析 step2 设计故事情节 para1 : Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse Sentence character actions feelings environment 第一句 第二句 第三句 第四句 第五句 衔接para1首句 衔接para5首句 11 02实例分析 step2 设计故事情节 para1 : Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse broken rocks deep green trees my horse I my dad ran wildly try to control my horse saw what had happened worried scared and nervous panic 考虑衔接 character action feeling environment 12 02实例分析 step2 设计故事情节 para1 : Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse broken rocks deep green trees my horse I my dad calm down and slow down stopped caught up with me relieved relieved character action feeling environment we sat on our horse para2 : We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. 13 02实例分析 step2 设计故事情节 根据para2的首句，和文本内容，围绕CAFE提问，设计故事情节。 Sentence character actions feelings environment 第六句 第七句 第八句 第九句 第十句 衔接para2首句 结局 升华 What did ... do ? How did...feel ? What did they see? How about the weather? Time? 14 02实例分析 step2 设计故事情节 out of sight my dad I we comfort and encouraged me recalled Uncle Paul’s words sought our track calm nervous calm character action feeling environment Uncle Paul went to look for us para2 : We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. worried 考虑衔接 15 02实例分析 step2 设计故事情节 we went home together action Uncle Paul what an unforgettable experience. para2 : We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. 结局 升华 16 Summary C A 根据段首的提示语确定主人公的顺序 E F 围绕着CAFE提问，设计故事情节 Character Action 描述主人公的行为 Feeling 描述主人公的感受 environment 描述当时的天气、时间等，注意结合前文所交代的故事地点 17 02实例分析 step2 设计故事情节 action para2 : We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. para1 : Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse 18 02实例分析 sample writing action para1 : Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse ① So frightened was my horse that it began to run wildly, which led to my panic. ② I tried to control it but failed. My dad saw what had happened and shouted at me, " Don't worry ! I am with you!" ③ Fortunately, my horse calmed down and slowed down gradually. As it finally stopped, I felt relieved. ④ My dad caught up with me soon and breathed a sigh of relief when he found me safe. ⑤ We sat on our horse, look around, only to find some brown rocks and some deep green pine trees in the distance. 19 02实例分析 sample writing action para1 : Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse ① So frightened was my horse that it began to run wildly, which led to my panic. ② I tried to control it but failed. My dad saw what had happened and shouted at me, " Don't worry ! I am with you!" ③ Fortunately, my horse calmed down and slowed down gradually. As it finally stopped, I felt relieved. ④ My dad caught up with me soon and breathed a sigh of relief when he found me safe. ⑤ We sat on our horse, look around, only to find some brown rocks and some deep green pine trees in the distance. 20 02实例分析 sample writing action ⑥ My father noticed my nervousness, so he patted me on the shoulder gently and comforted me, “Take it easy. We will find our way back.” ⑦Hearing his words, I calmed down and recalled Uncle Paul had told us to keep to the track. Then we sought our track and rode along slowly for a long time. ⑧ However, the farm house was still out of sight and we were at the point of giving up when we heard someone calling us. It was Uncle Paul who came to find us. ⑨Finally, together with Uncle Paul, we went home together safe and sound. ⑩What an unforgettable experience! para2 : We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. 21 02实例分析 sample writing action ⑥ My father noticed my nervousness, so he patted me on the shoulder gently and comforted me, “Take it easy. We will find our way back.” ⑦Hearing his words, I calmed down and recalled Uncle Paul had told us to keep to the track. Then we sought our track and rode along slowly for a long time. ⑧ However, the farm house was still out of sight and we were at the point of giving up when we heard someone calling us. It was Uncle Paul who came to find us. ⑨Finally, together with Uncle Paul, we went home together safe and sound. ⑩What an unforgettable experience! para2 : We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. 22 03灵活运用 23 02实例分析 One very hot morning, Mrs. Carr was occupied in doing houswork in the kitchen, with her two kids Tom Carr and his sister Dot playing in the yard. Tom was nine years old, but Dot was only three, and Tom took very great care of his little sister. Suddenly a man rushed hurriedly into the yard. It was Mr. May who lived at the next station, which is a big farm in Australia. "Fire!" he cried, "Fire ! One of the worst fires I ever saw in my lifearrahis men out, and away they all rode."Stay behind, sweeties!” warned Mrs. Carr from the window of the kitchen, continuing with her work. “ Look there, Dot," said Tom, “the brown calf( 小牛) has got out of the yard!” In the hurry of the men riding off to fight the fire, the gate had not been closed again and the brown calf was running away. Tom ran at once to bring the calf back, and Tom ran after him. About half a mile from the farm yard the open land came to an end, and the bush began. The calf ran among the trees, and the children followed. The trees were not thick at first, and it was very easy to follow the brown calf through the bushes. But soon the calf ran into a very deep valley, where Tom couldn't follow it."Oh, what a pity. Dot, " he said."The calf is lost now;it will get away into the bush. But give me your hand. We must go home!” Tom began to feel very afraid. lf the fire came through the bush and caught them, he and his little sister could be burned to death, He tried to get on faster, but he could not find the way out of the bush, Tom took his little sister on his back. and carried her for a long way, tired and thirsty. 注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为 150左右; 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好 At last he came up to a cave at the edge of the bush. Meanwhile, Mr. Carr got the news from his wife that the children were lost. 24 who when where what how step1 梳理原文 读五要素 Tom; Dot; a calf; Mr. Carr; Mrs. Carr; Mr. May one very hot morning in the bush; in a cave the fire broke out in the farm suddenly, The calf rushed out and Tom wanted to chase after it together with his sister Dot, but they lost in the bush. worried → pitiful→ be afraid→tired and thirsty→ calm→ ... 02灵活运用 25 03灵活运用 step2 设计故事情节 para1 : At last he came up to a cave at the edge of the bush. Sentence character actions feelings environment 第一句 第二句 第三句 第四句 第五句 衔接para1首句 衔接para2首句 What did ... do ? How did...feel ? What did they see? How about the weather? Time? 26 02实例分析 step2 设计故事情节 para2: Meanwhile, Mr. Carr got the news from his wife that the children were lost. Sentence character actions feelings environment 第六句 第七句 第八句 第九句 第十句 衔接para2首句 结局 升华 What did ... do ? How did...feel ? What did they see? How about the weather? Time? 27 02实例分析 step2 设计故事情节 action para2 : Meanwhile, Mr. Carr got the news from his wife that the children were lost. para1 : At last he came up to a cave at the edge of the bush. 28 03灵活运用 sample writing action para1 : At last he came up to a cave at the edge of the bush. ① Cautious and curious, he stood outside and looked into the cave, finding that it was darkand wet. ② Looking around, he found black smoke and fire spreading quickly. Thus, he made a quickdecision and carried his sister into the cave immediately. ③ The moment they came into the cave, Dot, who was still on his back, burst into tears because of the darkness. ④ Tom put down his sister, gathered her into his arms, and patted her on the back gently, comforting her,"Don't worry, Dot. We will be OK. ⑤Gradually, Dot calmed down and stopped crying.They had no choice but to stay there,waiting for rescue. 29 03灵活运用 sample writing action para1 : At last he came up to a cave at the edge of the bush. ① Cautious and curious, he stood outside and looked into the cave, finding that it was darkand wet. ② Looking around, he found black smoke and fire spreading quickly. Thus, he made a quick decision and carried his sister into the cave immediately. ③ The moment they came into the cave, Dot, who was still on his back, burst into tears because of the darkness. ④ Tom put down his sister, gathered her into his arms, and patted her on the back gently, comforting her,"Don't worry, Dot. We will be OK. ⑤Gradually, Dot calmed down and stopped crying. They had no choice but to stay there,waiting for rescue. 30 03灵活运用 sample writing action para2 : Meanwhile, Mr. Carr got the news from his wife that the children were lost. ⑥ So worried were the couple that they set off right away to search for them. They searched anxiously and carefully in the bush, calling their names at the top of their lungs. ⑦All of a sudden, they heard the familiar voices of their sweethearts. Seized by a strong sense of delight, they rushed toward their children, who were running out of the cave with tears in their eyes. ⑧When they all calmed down, Tom told his parents what had happened briefly, and was thought highly of by them. ⑨At that moment, as the black smoke and fire were fading away, the family went back home hand in hand happily. ⑩It was Tom's calmness and brayery that had saved him and his sister 31 03灵活运用 sample writing action para2 : Meanwhile, Mr. Carr got the news from his wife that the children were lost. ⑥ So worried were the couple that they set off right away to search for them. They searched anxiously and carefully in the bush, calling their names at the top of their lungs. ⑦All of a sudden, they heard the familiar voices of their sweethearts. Seized by a strong sense of delight, they rushed toward their children, who were running out of the cave with tears in their eyes. ⑧When they all calmed down, Tom told his parents what had happened briefly, and was thought highly of by them. ⑨At that moment, as the black smoke and fire were fading away, the family went back home hand in hand happily. ⑩It was Tom's calmness and brayery that had saved him and his sister. 32 Thankyou 33 $$