选择性必修第一册Unit 5 Working the Land (正反观点式议论文）-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高二英语单元写作深度指导（人教版2019）

Unit 5 Working the Land (正反观点式议论文）（人教版2019） Write an argumentative essay on farming （正反观点式议论文） 单元话题 真题展示 考情预测 正反观点式议论文 2023年全国卷 “农业耕作”属于课程标准中“人与社会”的主题语境。本单元涉及农业科学家袁隆平以农业科技的重大突破和巨大成就不断造福人类以及世界农业发展状况的话题；我们要学习科学家袁隆平献身科学、顽强拼搏、勇于创新、品德高尚、淡泊名利的精神，并且要关注农业的发展状况以及世界的饥饿问题。 At the end of this section, students will be able to: 1.Sort out the details using contrast, exemplification and definition in the text; 2.Contrast the advantages and disadvantages of chemical and organic farming; Write an argumentative essay on farming （2023高三·全国·专题练习）  假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意：   1. 写作词数应为80个左右；   2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 辩论性文章是就某一话题或热点问题阐述自己的观点和看法。在写作过程中，可以先明确自己的观点，要态度鲜明，不能模棱两可。围绕论点多角度论证，论据要确切、充分，最后进行总结，重申自己的观点和立场。一般采用下面结构：首段：点明自己的观点；中段：多角度论证自己的观点；尾段：重申自己的观点和立场。 段落 内容 句子设计 开头 开门见山，说明自己的看法或观点； 1．We had a discussion about whether students should be allowed to... 2．I'm writing to tell you about a discussion we have had about whether students should be allowed to... 主体 列举支持方的观点及其理由；或列举反对方的观点及其理由； 3．Opinions are divided on this issue./Opinions are mainly divided into two groups. 4．Different people，however，have different opinions on this matter. 5．People who are against the idea think that... 6．Sixty percent of the students think it necessary to...，but forty percent of the students don't think so. 结尾 得出结论或给出自己的观点。 In my opinion/As far as I am concerned 介绍类说明文要求语言准确，按照被说明事物的实际情况，运用生动形象的词句，恰如其分地进行介绍。写好一篇说明文，总体需要做到以下几点： 1．选择适当的说明材料与内容； 2．确定恰当的表达方式； 3．抓住事物自身的特点； 4．安排好事物的说明顺序； 5．采用恰当的说明方法。 【词汇积累】:积累单元话题词汇; 1． n．　　　　　　 优点 2． n. 缺点 3． n. 方面 4． adj. 有利的 5． n. 分析 6． 列举如下 7． 全面考虑 8． 事物都有两面性 【句式积累】: 1．There are different opinions among people as to ...Some people suggest that ... 2．People's opinions about ...vary from person to person.Some people say that ... 3．Everything has two sides and ...is not an exception; it has both advantages and disadvantages. 4．On the contrary, there are some people in favour of ...At the same time, they say ... 5．There are several measures for us to adopt.First ... 6．Faced with ..., we should take a series of effective measures to ...For one thing ...For another ... 7．60% of the students are against ...40% of the students are for the idea of ... 8．As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.I think that ... 9．Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to ... 10．For my part, I think it reasonable to ...Only in this way can you/we ... 11．It is generally believed/accepted/held that ... 【万能写作模板】给出写作模板,便于识记。 I prefer to (观点) not because but because . (理由1), which is very good for . What's more, (理由2), as is often the case . Though perhaps we , we (理由3) because we . We can . As a whole, I think much better than . 一中学班级就生活在城市或乡村的问题进行了辩论。下面是部分辩论记录要点，请确定你的观点，参照该记录要点并发挥想象，写一篇题为I Prefer to Live in the City/the Countryside的短文。词数100左右。 Where do you prefer to live, in the big city or in the quiet countryside？ the city the country The city： so many things to do； make more money The country： too quiet; boring； no jobs VS The city： very noisy; crowded The country: quiet; enjoy so much in nature；grow food on a farm ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [审题谋篇] 第一步　明确要求 该写作属于辩论作文，故要用第 人称来写；文章的主题内容是喜欢住在城市还是乡村，选择其中的一种去写作。时态用 。 第二步　确定段落 本篇作文可以从以下几个方面入手： Para.1　 ； Para.2　 ； Para.3　再次 。 第三步　核心词汇 1． 　对……有益 2． 远离…… 3． 挣钱 4．lead a happy life 过着幸福的生活 第四步　句式升级 1．虽然我不是出生在农村，但是我更喜欢住在农村，因为我喜欢农村生活。 (一般表达)Although I was not born in the countryside, I prefer to live in the countryside because I like the country life. (高级表达) not because I was born in the countryside but because I like the country life I prefer to live in the countryside. 2．乡下远离喧嚣，也不像城市里那样拥挤。 (一般表达) The countryside is far from the noise and not as crowded as in the city. (高级表达) The countryside is far from the noise and not crowded, in the city. [连句成篇] 一、语篇写作 1．（23-24高二上·浙江·单元测试）根据下面的提示为“绿叶”有机蔬菜生产基地写一篇100词左右的介绍性海报。 1.坐落在城西：历经20年已经发展成为占地1000多亩的大农场； 2.配备有现代化的设施；生产过程中不使用任何化肥； 3. 富含营养；产品出口到几十个国家； 4. 联系方式：Tel: 666888123  Email: GreenLeaf @ Green Leaf.com _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24高一下·江苏南京·期末）假定你是李华，最近学习了一些对社会发展有突出贡献的科学家的故事，请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件介绍一位你最喜欢的科学家，内容包括： (1)他(她)的基本信息; (2)对你的影响。 注意： (1)写作词数应为80个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, How is everything going? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 二．书面表达 3．（23-24高一下·江苏连云港·期末）假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Peter给你发来邮件询问你最钦佩的科学家是谁，请你回复一封邮件。内容包括： 1.人物简介; 2.钦佩的原因。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， LiHua 4．（23-24高一下·广东江门·期末）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Johnson来信，让你介绍一位你最崇拜的中国科学家。请你按照以下提示，给他写一份信： 1. 介绍最崇拜科学家的名字及职务； 2. 介绍他的主要经历； 3. 表达自己对他的看法。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Johnson, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 5．（23-24高一下·江苏宿迁·期中）假设你是李华，近日你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以“The scientist I admire most”为题，写一篇参赛演讲稿。内容包括： 1. 介绍你钦佩的科学家； 2. 阐述令你钦佩的原因； 3. 表达你对科学家的钦佩。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头已经给出，不计入字数。 The scientist I admire most The scientist I admire most is... ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   （2023高三·全国·专题练习）  假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意：   1. 写作词数应为80个左右；   2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua （23-24高三下·安徽阜阳·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你班本周Class Report的主题是A Man of Perseverance(毅力)。请你写一篇发言稿。内容包括： 1. 人物事迹简介; 2. 给你的启示。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 5 Working the Land (正反观点式议论文）（人教版2019） Write an argumentative essay on farming （正反观点式议论文） 单元话题 真题展示 考情预测 正反观点式议论文 2023年全国卷 “农业耕作”属于课程标准中“人与社会”的主题语境。本单元涉及农业科学家袁隆平以农业科技的重大突破和巨大成就不断造福人类以及世界农业发展状况的话题；我们要学习科学家袁隆平献身科学、顽强拼搏、勇于创新、品德高尚、淡泊名利的精神，并且要关注农业的发展状况以及世界的饥饿问题。 At the end of this section, students will be able to: 1.Sort out the details using contrast, exemplification and definition in the text; 2.Contrast the advantages and disadvantages of chemical and organic farming; Write an argumentative essay on farming  （2023高三·全国·专题练习）  假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意：   1. 写作词数应为80个左右；   2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 辩论性文章是就某一话题或热点问题阐述自己的观点和看法。在写作过程中，可以先明确自己的观点，要态度鲜明，不能模棱两可。围绕论点多角度论证，论据要确切、充分，最后进行总结，重申自己的观点和立场。一般采用下面结构：首段：点明自己的观点；中段：多角度论证自己的观点；尾段：重申自己的观点和立场。 段落 内容 句子设计 开头 开门见山，说明自己的看法或观点； 1．We had a discussion about whether students should be allowed to... 2．I'm writing to tell you about a discussion we have had about whether students should be allowed to... 主体 列举支持方的观点及其理由；或列举反对方的观点及其理由； 3．Opinions are divided on this issue./Opinions are mainly divided into two groups. 4．Different people，however，have different opinions on this matter. 5．People who are against the idea think that... 6．Sixty percent of the students think it necessary to...，but forty percent of the students don't think so. 结尾 得出结论或给出自己的观点。 In my opinion/As far as I am concerned 介绍类说明文要求语言准确，按照被说明事物的实际情况，运用生动形象的词句，恰如其分地进行介绍。写好一篇说明文，总体需要做到以下几点： 1．选择适当的说明材料与内容； 2．确定恰当的表达方式； 3．抓住事物自身的特点； 4．安排好事物的说明顺序； 5．采用恰当的说明方法。 【词汇积累】:积累单元话题词汇; 1．advantage n．　　　　　　 优点 2．disadvantage n. 缺点 3．aspect n. 方面 4．favourable adj. 有利的 5．analysis n. 分析 6．be listed as follows 列举如下 7．all things considered 全面考虑 8．every coin has two sides 事物都有两面性 【句式积累】: 1．There are different opinions among people as to ...Some people suggest that ... 2．People's opinions about ...vary from person to person.Some people say that ... 3．Everything has two sides and ...is not an exception; it has both advantages and disadvantages. 4．On the contrary, there are some people in favour of ...At the same time, they say ... 5．There are several measures for us to adopt.First ... 6．Faced with ..., we should take a series of effective measures to ...For one thing ...For another ... 7．60% of the students are against ...40% of the students are for the idea of ... 8．As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.I think that ... 9．Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to ... 10．For my part, I think it reasonable to ...Only in this way can you/we ... 11．It is generally believed/accepted/held that ... 【万能写作模板】给出写作模板,便于识记。 I prefer to (观点) not because but because . (理由1), which is very good for . What's more, (理由2), as is often the case . Though perhaps we , we (理由3) because we . We can . As a whole, I think much better than . 一中学班级就生活在城市或乡村的问题进行了辩论。下面是部分辩论记录要点，请确定你的观点，参照该记录要点并发挥想象，写一篇题为I Prefer to Live in the City/the Countryside的短文。词数100左右。 Where do you prefer to live, in the big city or in the quiet countryside？ the city the country The city： so many things to do； make more money The country： too quiet; boring； no jobs VS The city： very noisy; crowded The country: quiet; enjoy so much in nature；grow food on a farm [审题谋篇] 第一步　明确要求 该写作属于辩论作文，故要用第三人称来写；文章的主题内容是喜欢住在城市还是乡村，选择其中的一种去写作。时态用一般现在时。 第二步　确定段落 本篇作文可以从以下几个方面入手： Para.1　开门见山，阐明观点； Para.2　列举理由； Para.3　再次表明观点。 第三步　核心词汇 1．be good for　对……有益 2．far from 远离…… 3．make money 挣钱 4．lead a happy life 过着幸福的生活 第四步　句式升级 1．虽然我不是出生在农村，但是我更喜欢住在农村，因为我喜欢农村生活。 (一般表达)Although I was not born in the countryside, I prefer to live in the countryside because I like the country life. (高级表达)It is not because I was born in the countryside but because I like the country life that I prefer to live in the countryside. 2．乡下远离喧嚣，也不像城市里那样拥挤。 (一般表达) The countryside is far from the noise and not as crowded as in the city. (高级表达) The countryside is far from the noise and not crowded, as is often the case in the city. [连句成篇] [参考范文] I Prefer to Live in the Countryside It is not because I was born in the countryside but because I like the country life that I prefer to live in the countryside. In the country the air is fresher and there is less pollution, which is very good for health. What's more, the countryside is far from the noise and not crowded, as is often the case in the city. Though perhaps we make less money in the countryside, we still lead a happy life because we needn't so much money. We can grow our own food and enjoy “the really green food”. As a whole, I think the country life is much better for people's health than the city life. [亮点点评] 该范文结构完整，作者首先开门见山，提出主题；然后列举理由； 最后再次表明观点。要点齐全，语言规范地道。使用了what's more，as a word 等过渡衔接语，句式上，作者巧妙地使用了定语从句，以及not...but...等高级句式，亮点频出，表达形式多样。总之，该范文是一篇朗朗上口的优秀范文，值得学习。 一、语篇写作 1．（23-24高二上·浙江·单元测试）根据下面的提示为“绿叶”有机蔬菜生产基地写一篇100词左右的介绍性海报。 1.坐落在城西：历经20年已经发展成为占地1000多亩的大农场； 2.配备有现代化的设施；生产过程中不使用任何化肥； 3. 富含营养；产品出口到几十个国家； 4. 联系方式：Tel: 666888123  Email: GreenLeaf @ Green Leaf.com ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Have you ever dreamt of tasting organic vegetables without chemical fertilizer every day? Please go to Green Leaf—an organic vegetable base. Located in the west of the city, it has expanded to a farm covering an area of more than 1,000 mu in the past two decades. And it has been equipped with advanced facilities. What makes it different from others is that the vegetables here are grown without any chemical fertilizer. The rich soil makes these vegetables full of nutrition; as a result, they are exported to many countries in the world. If you are interested, please contact us in the following ways. Tel: 666888123 E-mail: Green Leaf @ Green Leaf. com 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生按照要求为“绿叶”有机蔬菜生产基地写一篇100词左右的介绍性海报。 【详解】1.词汇积累 扩大：expand→ grow 先进的：advanced→ developed 使，让：make→ let 充满：full of→ filled  with 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Located in the west of the city, it has expanded to a farm covering an area of more than 1,000 mu in the past two decades. 拓展句：It has expanded to a farm covering an area of more than 1,000 mu in the past two decades, which is located in the west of the city. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Have you ever dreamt of tasting organic vegetables without chemical fertilizer every day?（运用了动名词tasting作宾语） 【高分句型2】What makes it different from others is that the vegetables here are grown without any chemical fertilizer.（运用了What引导的主语从句、that引导的表语从句） 2．（23-24高一下·江苏南京·期末）假定你是李华，最近学习了一些对社会发展有突出贡献的科学家的故事，请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件介绍一位你最喜欢的科学家，内容包括： (1)他(她)的基本信息; (2)对你的影响。 注意： (1)写作词数应为80个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, How is everything going? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Chris, How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you one of my favourite scientists. Recently I have learnt the stories of some amazing scientists, of whom I admire Tu Youyou best, the first female scientist to be awarded the Nobel Prize in China. Born in a well-educated family in 1930, Tu had access to good education and acquired a good knowledge of traditional Chinese medicine in college. After graduation, she devoted herself to finding a cure for malaria patients, who suffered a lot at that time for lack of effective medicine. After countless failures, she succeeded in discovering qinghaosu. Tu’s spirits inspired me not to give up my dream no matter what difficulty I may encounter. Do you have an idol to share with me? I hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件介绍一位你最喜欢的科学家。 【详解】1.词汇积累 鼓舞：inspire→encourage 治疗方法：cure→medical treatment 遇到：encounter→run into 无数的：countless→numerous 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Born in a well-educated family in 1930, Tu had access to good education and acquired a good knowledge of traditional Chinese medicine in college. 拓展句：Tu, who was born in a well-educated family in 1930, had access to good education and acquired a good knowledge of traditional Chinese medicine in college. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Recently I have learnt the stories of some amazing scientists, of whom I admire Tu Youyou best, the first female scientist to be awarded the Nobel Prize in China. (运用了介词+关系代词结构非限制性定语从句，不定式作定语) [高分句型2] Tu’s spirits inspired me not to give up my dream no matter what difficulty I may encounter. (运用了no matter what引导让步状语从句) 二．书面表达 3．（23-24高一下·江苏连云港·期末）假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Peter给你发来邮件询问你最钦佩的科学家是谁，请你回复一封邮件。内容包括： 1.人物简介; 2.钦佩的原因。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter， _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， LiHua 【答案】Dear Peter, I admire Albert Einstein the most. He was a German-born theoretical physicist who developed the theory of relativity, one of the two pillars of modern physics. His work is also known for its influence on the philosophy of science. What I admire about Einstein is not only his groundbreaking contributions to science but also his character. He was a man of great intellect and creativity, always seeking the truth and pushing the boundaries of knowledge. His life is a testament to the power of curiosity and the importance of perseverance in the pursuit of understanding the universe. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的英国笔友Peter给你发来邮件询问你最钦佩的科学家是谁，要求考生就此内容回复一封邮件。 【详解】1.词汇积累 仰慕：admire→look up to 影响：influence → impact 突破：push→break through 证明：testament→ proof 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I admire Albert Einstein the most. 拓展句：I admire Albert Einstein the most, who is one of the greatest scientists in the world. 【点睛】【高分句型1】He was a German-born theoretical physicist who developed the theory of relativity, one of the two pillars of modern physics. （运用了who引导的限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】He was a man of great intellect and creativity, always seeking the truth and pushing the boundaries of knowledge. （运用了现在分词作状语的结构） 4．（23-24高一下·广东江门·期末）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Johnson来信，让你介绍一位你最崇拜的中国科学家。请你按照以下提示，给他写一份信： 1. 介绍最崇拜科学家的名字及职务； 2. 介绍他的主要经历； 3. 表达自己对他的看法。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Johnson, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Johnson, I’m writing to introduce one of the China’s greatest scientist. The Chinese scientist I admire most is Liang Jianyin, who is the general designer of the Chinese high-speed EMU. Born in 1972, this great scientist came from a normal family. Since she graduated from university in 1995, she has been committing herself to researching into the development of the China high-speed railway. Afterwards, she invented the 300-350km/h high-speed EMU. It is because of her extraordinary contributions to our country that China is playing an essential role in high-speed railways all over the world. As a consequence, she was awarded many times. Apparently, Liang Jianying has set a good example to us. Not only is she the pride of China, but her works also belong to the whole world. Yours, Li hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Johnson写一封回信介绍最崇拜的中国科学家；内容包括最崇拜科学家的名字及职务，主要经历以及自己对他的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 致力于：commit to→ devote to 因为：because of→ due to 卓越的：extraordinary→ distinguished 贡献：contribution→ devotion 2.局式拓展 独立句子变为定语 原句：Apparently, Liang Jianying has set a good example to us. Not only is she the pride of China, but her works also belong to the whole world. 拓展句：Apparently, Liang Jianying, who has set a good example to us is not only the pride of China, but her works also belong to the whole world. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The Chinese scientist I admire most is Liang Jianyin, who is the general designer of the Chinese high-speed EMU.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】It is because of her extraordinary contributions to our country that China is playing an essential role in high-speed railways all over the world.（运用了that引导的强调句型） 5．（23-24高一下·江苏宿迁·期中）假设你是李华，近日你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以“The scientist I admire most”为题，写一篇参赛演讲稿。内容包括： 1. 介绍你钦佩的科学家； 2. 阐述令你钦佩的原因； 3. 表达你对科学家的钦佩。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头已经给出，不计入字数。 The scientist I admire most The scientist I admire most is... ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The scientist I admire most The scientist I admire most is Yuan Longping, an agricultural pioneer of China. It is known that there exists hunger in many countries. To help more people to get enough food, Yuan Longping has devoted himself to improving the output of hybrid rice. Thanks to his research, the output has been doubled. More importantly, Yuan Longping is willing to share his achievement with others, which contributes to ridding the world of starvation. As for me, Yuan Longping is my greatest role model. It is his devotion that makes him successful and his devotion has inspired me a lot. Actually, I have some difficulty in learning English. However, where there is devotion, there is a way. I am firmly convinced that my devotion can pay off and make me expert in English. This is why Yuan Longping is worthy of admiration. 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。近日你校将举办英语演讲比赛，要求考生以“The scientist I admire most”为题，写一篇参赛演讲稿。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 提高：improve→enhance 鼓励：inspire→encourage 困难：difficulty→trouble 钦佩：admiration→adoration 2. 句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：The scientist I admire most is Yuan Longping, an agricultural pioneer of China. 拓展句：The scientist who I admire the most is Yuan Longping, an agricultural pioneer of China, whose groundbreaking work in hybrid rice has had a profound impact on global food security. 【点睛】[高分句型1]It is known that there exists hunger in many countries.(that引导的主语从句) [高分句型2]More importantly, Yuan Longping is willing to share his achievement with others, which contributes to ridding the world of starvation.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)   （2023高三·全国·专题练习）  假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意：   1. 写作词数应为80个左右；   2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows. To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with. My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together. Thank you for considering my suggestion. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 首先：to begin with → first of all 提高：improve → progress 建议：suggestion → advice 选择：choose → select 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. 拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. 【点睛】[高分句型1] This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语） [高分句型2] Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句） （23-24高三下·安徽阜阳·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你班本周Class Report的主题是A Man of Perseverance(毅力)。请你写一篇发言稿。内容包括： 1. 人物事迹简介; 2. 给你的启示。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 A Man of Perseverance Good morning, everyone. Today, I’d like to share a story about a man of perseverance. Thomas Edison, the great inventor, faced numerous failures before his groundbreaking success. He made countless attempts to invent the electric light bulb, experiencing over a thousand failures. However, instead of giving up, he famously said, “I have not failed. I’ve just found 10,000 ways that won’t work.” His tenacity and refusal to accept defeat ultimately led him to success, forever changing the world. This story teaches me a valuable lesson about perseverance. It reminds me that failure is not a reason to quit but an opportunity to learn and grow. Thanks for your listening. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇主题为A Man of Perseverance的发言稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 开创性的：groundbreaking→pathbreaking 宝贵的：valuable→precious 放弃：quit→give up 机会：opportunity→chance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Thomas Edison, the great inventor, faced numerous failures before his groundbreaking success. 拓展句：Thomas Edison, who was the great inventor, faced numerous failures before his groundbreaking success. 【点睛】[高分句型1] He made countless attempts to invent the electric light bulb, experiencing over a thousand failures. (运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2] It reminds me that failure is not a reason to quit but an opportunity to learn and grow. (运用了that引导宾语从句) ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$