2024年人教版中考英语复习写作专题---friends or teachers 课件

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How to improve our compositions？ Beautify Your Compostitions 美化写作 中考英语专题复习 近10年中考真题作文内容 2013 厌学的原因和看法 2014 两代人之间的沟通现状和看法 2015 寝室规则，倡议 2016 鼓励受挫的朋友 2017 毕业晚会活动邀请函 2018 学校郊游日记和感受 2019 安慰受挫朋友并给出建议 2020成为一名优秀的合作伙伴写一篇演讲稿，合作的技巧和意义 2021 最近, 你班召开了一次以“What Are Good Parents Like?”为主题的班会。请你综合以下同学的观点，并发表你自己的看法，写一篇短文，向学校校刊投稿。 2022 新学期来了，学生社团又要招新啦！假如你是社团招新工作负责人，请根据以下内容和要求写一篇短文，为同学们介绍社团的情况（包括名称、活动及目的）。 2023学校英文报正在以"Amazing Hunan"为题开展征文活动。请你结合以下图示, 写一篇短文投稿。 2021 2022 2023 这3年中考作文题目：提示性词语越来越少，给考生发挥的空间越来越大。 考查形式（体裁)多样： 看图（表）写作（为主）、涉及书信、通知、日记、人物等。 2021 2022 2023 课标三级，9年级写作要求 1.根据写作要求,收集、准备素材, 独立起草、修改和完成语篇; 2.为所给图表或自己创作的图片写出简单的说明; 3.围绕相关主题,用所学语言，以书面语篇的形式描述和介绍身边的人和事物，表达情感、态度和观点; 4.在口头和书面表达中使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系,连接 信息,做到意义连贯; 5.在口头和书面表达中进行适当的自我修正,用语得当，沟通与交流 得体、有效。 Search (审) List (列) Connect (连) Beautify (美) Check (查) 介绍身边的人 My Best Friend/ My Favorite Teacher 2021 Somebody looks/ appearance personality /character /special things dream future plan memories advantages hobbies changes My best friend is Judy. She has two ____(short) ears and big smiling eyes. Maybe she is not ________(smart) than me, she is ________________(work hard) girl in Zootopia.(疯狂动物城) To be a good policewoman, she trains hard every day. She looks beautiful in the police uniform. smarter long the most hard-working wonderful/an excellent pretty/charming/handsome app smiling big round short smarter hard-working excellent good-looking big smiling long short clever hard-working excellent good-looking pretty handsome lovely cute tall heavy slim/thin strong be of medium ... kind brave polite humorous generous patient helpful warm-hearted strong-willed cool-minded persistent diligent 坚持不懈的 意志坚定的 勤奋的 冷静的/as cool as a cucumber appearance personality profiles of a friend Name: appearances/looks: personalities: Ms Gao is of medium height; thin long hair, a round face,a small nose beautiful;smiling eyes, friendly, patient, humorous, warm-hearted Ms Gao is of medium height and thin. She has long hair . I like her bright smiling eyes. She has a round face and a small nose. They make her look friendly and pretty. Name: appearances/looks: personality: I I love.../I appreciate...because... What I like most is... feelings _____________ _____________ _____________ _____________ _____________ 轮廓，档案 facts guess who looks personalities? or personalities Jane is friendly . She is very patient. She likes to help others. When I feel bored and unhappy, I often go to her. She will talk to me and tell me interesting things to cheer me up. She often helps me with my math studies. And she is always ready to help others. She always has a smile on her face and never gets angry. humorous examples Tip 1 活用例子，适当扩展 Examples & Explanations She likes reading classics. 她很喜欢阅读经典书籍。 Tip 1 活用例子，适当扩展 Examples & Explanations For example, Robinsin Cursoe. She thinks reading can not only help her to relax but also help to open her eyes (boarden her horizon). 他热爱做志愿活动。 At school, he is willing to help teachers and classmates. On weekends, he takes part in lots of activities, such as cleaning the street and looking after the old in the nursing home. He is a helpful volunteer. best friend/ looks: favorite teacher: personality: _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ topic sentence facts + feelings + examples Writing: Beginning Ending 对独学的检测，让每个学生说出画红线单词含义 1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what's more ，not only…but also, neither…nor,furthermore,at the same time, in the meanwhile;as for 2.表示选择: or, either…or, neither…nor 3.表示转折: but,however,although\though,after all,anyway 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result 5.表示看法: in my opinion, as far as I am concerned 6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way, on the one hand…on the other hand 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth 8.表示顺序: to begin with, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end， 9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact 10.表示结论: all in all, in a word, in short, in general，generally speaking 妙用关联词 Linking words Tip 2 第一 另外 然而 不仅，而且 实际上 至于 一方面，另一方面 结果 first however in fact on the one hand, on the other hand what's more / in addition not only...but also all in all/ as a result actually/ as a matter of fact Which is better？ 她很漂亮，有大大的眼睛，对他人也很友善、有耐心。 A. She is beautiful and she has big eyes. She is patient and friendly. B. She is not only beautiful with big eyes but also patient and friendly. Tip 3 善用高级词汇、句型 sentence patterns A. Jane really likes science and she wants to be a scientist when she grows up. 他觉得他应该尽全力实现他的梦想。 A. He thinks he should try his best to achieve his dream. B. He thinks he should spare no effort to realize his dream. He thinks he should do what he can to achieve our dreams. 1.It is+形容词 for sb. to do   2. … too … to do  3.The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子   4.It is said that + 句子    It is reported that + 句子  5.In my opinion, as far as I'm concerned , 6.There is no doubt that + 句子    7.There is no need to do        8.sb. find it +形容词 to do… 9.had better (not) do  10.how about / what about doing  11.be supposed to/ be expected to 12.I suggest that you should do； I advise you to do... 13.If I were you, I would do…    14.It's best to do     Why not do / why don't you do…?    15.prefer to do A rather than do B  16.try one's best to do=make efforts to do   17.spare no effort to do 做…对某人来说是…的 太… 而不能… … 的原因是… 据说… 据报道… 在我看来 毫无疑问… 没必要做… 某人觉得/发现做… 是…的 最好(不)做… …怎么样? 应该做... 我建议你做… 我要是你的话，我会做… 最好做… 为什么不… 宁愿做A也不愿做B 竭尽全力做… 不遗余力的做… 善用句型 1.定语从句。 2. if、as long as引导条件状语从句。 3.when、before、after、as soon as、 not...until、since引导时间状语从句。 4.so that 引导目的状语从句。 5.so/such...that 引导结果状语从句。 6.though/although 引导让步状语从句。 7.because 引导原因状语从句。 8.(not)as...as 引导比较状语从句。 善用从句 简单句 ------一字千金 （能简单表达的不复杂化， 长短句结合！求稳！求准第一!） 1.有志者事竟成 3.失败是成功之母 4.熟能生巧 2.不劳无获 5.患难见真情。 6.不可以貌取人。 Tip 4 Where there is a will, there is a way. No pains, no gains. Failure is the mother of success Practice makes perfect. A friend in need is a friend indeed.  Don’t judge a book by its cover. 巧用谚语Proverbs/Sayings 加谚语(Sayings) 可用于”beginning”或”ending” 1.交朋友对于每个人来说都是重要的。 It is important for us ___________ (make)friends. As the saying goes, “A life without a friend is a life without a sun.” It is important for students to make good friend. 人若无友，就如生命中没有太阳。 to make 2.我们应该注重性格而不是外貌。 We should ____(paid) attention to personalities rather than looks. As the saying goes, “Don’t judge a man by his looks.” We should pay more attention to personality rather than looks. 不要以貌取人 pay Groupwork Writing 任 务： 1.选择一项任务完成；（可以讨论） 2.各组派代表进行作文板展； 3.依据作文评分标准，进行作文批改和自评； 4.展示。 2023 四川 作文评分标准： A档（13-15分）：能够围绕话题进行表述，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。 B档（10-12分）：能够围绕话题进行表述，语言有少量错误，表达基本连贯、清楚。 C档（7-9分）：能够基本围绕话题进行表述，语言表达有些错误，行文很不连贯，但不影响句意理解。 D档（4-6分）：尚能围绕话题进行表述，语言错误较多，影响意思表达。 E档（0-3分）：只能写出与话题相关的一些单词或一两个句子，只有个别句子可懂。 What did we learn today? Search (审) List (列) Connect (连) Beautify (美) Check (查) 4大写作小技巧 No one is born with skills in English composition. Those skills must have come from somewhere. That somewhere is writing of other writers. ----The Sense of Style The top Chinese scientist Yuan Longping, known for his “Super Rice”, died of illness at the age of 91 on May 22nd, 2021. He is my idol. Yuan Longping 1._______(be) born in Bejing in 1930. He studied very hard when he was young. After graduating from college in 1953, he became a teacher in an agriculture (农业) school. He was very 2.___________(interest) in rice research. For almost 60 years, he had given most of his time and energy to it. So far, the hybrid rice (杂交水稻) he developed 3.__________ ( pull) millions of people out of hunger all over the world. His achievements were so great 4.__________ he was called the “Father of Hybrid Rice” and won the World Food Prize. During his lifetime, he spent 5.________(much) time in the farm field than in his office. He was often seen watching plants closely and thinking of ways 6.____________( improve )them, just as many Chinese farmers do. Yuan once said he had a dream to “enjoy the cool under the rice plants taller than men”. What 7.______ pity it is that he can’t continue his dream now! But 8.______(sure), people believe, his dream will come true in the near future. Many people look 9.______to Yuan Longping because he spent all his life working for people on the earth. Although he is dead, we will never forget him.His spirit always encourages us to try our best to serve our motherland. There is no doubt that Yuan Longping is a great hero in 10._________(us) hearts . was interested has pulled that more to improve a surely up our B Homework 1 Judy, a rabbit, dreamed of 1._______(become) a policewoman. In fact, she really 2.__________(success) in becoming such a policewoman with her effort. But the large animals in Zootopia did not believe in Judy's abilities. Her colleagues in the police always looked down upon her and the director was also unwilling to give Judy any 3._________(meaning)work. Until a coincidence happened, Judy found that there was another missing case that police station didn’t want to hear. In order to prove herself, she took the job and promised that she would resign if she couldn’t finish it in time. Later she met Nick, a fox. After experienced many4._______(thing) together, Judy and Nick became best friends in the end and both of 5.________(they) became the real excellent policemen. Choose to do A or B or both of them A beoming succeeded meaningful things them Thanks! Lavf57.62.100 Packed by Bilibili XCoder v2.0.2 271587.66 Lavf57.62.100 $$